Zerak
Well worn.
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Is this a crack fic? It reads like a crack fic. Like you physically can't make a dumb CF main character. Even if you do enough perks will change that.
I will give the benefit of the doubt for now, but I really hope you aren't trying to make the MC be dumb. That seems to be a trend authors have been doing lately.
Also how often do you give cp? Because a roll in the first 1k-ish words that gives 150co gives the impression it's 1k or 1.5k words for 150cp. That is way too fast power gain (after the first few perks).
I will give the benefit of the doubt for now, but I really hope you aren't trying to make the MC be dumb. That seems to be a trend authors have been doing lately.
Also how often do you give cp? Because a roll in the first 1k-ish words that gives 150co gives the impression it's 1k or 1.5k words for 150cp. That is way too fast power gain (after the first few perks).
myI was a bit slow on his feet so I was a bit behind the officer who was introducing the two of them to a gate guard.