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Chapter 25 - Virmire New
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Normandy

Engineering


"Addams, there you are. Get me half of the missiles and remove their warheads. We are going to prepare a surprise for that cuttlefish." The order was so sudden that Chief Engineer Addams needed a second to process it.

"Yes, Commander, but what kind of a surprise?"

"Oh, you are going to love it."

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The team had gathered in the meeting room to discuss Virmire since they had no intel other than that it was something bad enough to worry the STG.

"So, we are going in blind, though the chances are Saren's dreadnought will be there, as whatever they had down in Virmire is important enough to be defended against an STG regiment." Salarians were experts at stealth, and if they couldn't get in, sabotage the place, and leave, then they must have faced harsh opposition.

Shepard wasn't done yet. "But I think it has something to do with Krogan."

This had Wrex' attention, and the massive alien perked up. "What do you mean?"

"This galaxy had three crises. First, the Rachni Wars, then the Krogan Rebellions, and finally, the Geth Uprising. Now, Saren has a sizable portion of the Geth working for him, and then he tried to enslave the Rachni and failed, which leaves the Krogan, and knowing just how dangerous the horde was against the whole galaxy, Saren will most likely try to recruit the Krogan en masse."

Saren was trying to recruit an army and had a degree of success, though whether it was to assist the Reapers or use them to facilitate their return wasn't clear. Unless the Conduit was somewhere well defended, which mostly meant the Citadel Space, then Saren did need an army, but if it was not, and that was the most probable outcome seeing as the long-lost Mu Relay was necessary to reach it, then Saren was going to use his army to assist the Reapers. Seeing as Reapers could turn their organic enemies to synthetic cannon fodder, Saren's little army was useless.

A piece of the puzzle was missing, and hopefully, Virmire could shed some light on that.

"Seeing as he is wanted by the Citadel, those idiots at Tuchanka might just join him for one last glorious charge." Wrex shook his head, remembering his attempts to save his race from extinction and how no one gave a single flying pyjack shit about it.

"Let's not have a couple million suicidal Krogan running around with a Spectre looking to bring the end of the galaxy." Garrus had his beliefs about the Krogan, though Wrex had done much to shake them.

He still didn't want them to join Saren, though.

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Sentry Omega

Hoc System

Virmire


Normandy was orbiting the planet Virmire and running scans to get an idea of what the ground team would face upon landing.

Geth had a lot of AA towers stationed on the ground, so Joker dropped Shepard, Tali, and Garrus down on the Mako.

Ordering the pilot to follow the protocols and stay out of the range of the AA towers, Shepard hit the accelerator, driving towards the enemy.

The Geth put up fierce resistance, but as was the case for every single engagement they had, the synthetics were torn apart like wet tissue before Mako's laser turret.

With the grid down, Joker began to approach the Salarian base, while Shepard and the team went ahead to meet them at the camp after clearing out another Geth encampment and opening the gate.

As the Salarian camp appeared on the scanners, Joker informed Shepard that the Normandy was grounded.

Shepard could see Ashley talking to a Salarian as he approached. "Are you the one in charge here?"

"Commander Shepard, a pleasure to meet you. We may have wanted a fleet from the Council, but I am glad they sent you. I am Captain Kirrahe, Third Infiltration Regiment, STG." Kirrahe held out his three-fingered hand, and Shepard reached out.

"Your message wasn't clear, so the Council sent me to check on the situation."

"Which is a repetition of our original task, but since you are here, we can actually do something about Saren's base."

Captain Kirrahe ran Shepard and his team through what the STG had managed to unearth. To Wrex's annoyance, the base did have something to do with Krogan, as Saren was somehow breeding an army down there. Wrex' disbelief was understandable, especially since the STG believed there was a cure for the Genophage inside the base, which seemed unlikely to Shepard.

"I don't think there is a cure; it is most likely a cloning operation with a careful management of hormones to counteract the Genophage. Even if there was a cure, the Council would either release a modified Genophage or simply eradicate the Krogan if they joined Saren. He must be lying, with a show of someone working on Genophage to keep the Krogan in his employ under control."

Wrex growled menacingly, even the slightest hope of a Genophage cure stoking the embers of his desire to save the Krogan. "We should still check."

Shepard shrugged. "Sure, but I doubt we'll find anything."

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The plan was for Shepard and two members of his team to circle behind the enemy lines and take the Geth by surprise while Kirrahe and his men, along with the rest of Shepard's team, staged a frontal assault. Shepard had given the Mako to the team, knowing its laser turret would help immensely.

After Shepard and his team reached the predetermined spot, the base would be destroyed with a twenty-kiloton tactical ordinance rigged from the Salarian vessel's core.

Shepard took Wrex and Tali with him this time, to give the Krogan a chance to see whether there was a cure for the Genophage or not, as well as his laser minigun, and Tali due to her expertise with the Geth.

"Shadow is on the ground. Repeat: Shadow is on the ground." Captain Kirrahe's voice rang over the comms as Shepard and his team engaged the Geth.

"Chief Williams, with the Aeghor team. Mannovai and Jaeto teams, move. Time to get some attention." The Salarians, along with Shepard's team, started their assault.

Wrex, already irate from the mention of a cure for the Genophage and the Salarian's plans to destroy it, moved first, opening fire with his minigun, suppressing and mowing down several Geth units. Shepard followed, picking up the stragglers while Tali targeted the platform up ahead.

A destroyer charged down the ramp at Shepard and was bisected by Tali's shotgun, and with Wrex having destroyed most of them, all that was left to do was for Shepard to shut down the Geth's triangulation tower, but he had a better idea.

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"Why are they dancing now?"

"It's Commander Shepard; he did the same thing back at Eden Prime."

"This will more than take the heat off Mannovai. Chief Williams, assist them with the Mako." Kirrahe sounded vindictive, most likely happy to see the Geth neutralized so easily.

The team moved forward towards the base, but their path was blocked by Geth drones and the occasional Geth trooper. Frontal assault teams were facing sat-strikes, so hopefully he could find the satellite link for a nasty surprise to the Geth.

Which was further ahead on a platform, protected by Geth troopers and a Krogan. Leaving the Geth to his teammates, Shepard biotically charged at the Krogan, causing the alien to stumble, and pulled both triggers, shooting his enemy through the eyes, an instant kill.

Rather than destroy the satellite link, Shepard had a different idea in mind.

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"Sat-strikes on Geth positions? Must be Commander Shepard. At this rate the base will be cleared without the need for the bomb."

With this, Kirrahe and the teams should have a much easier time.

"Aircraft heading to perimeter stations to recharge. Bunker up before they come back." Ashley warned over the comms. They were handling the aircraft well due to their superior weaponry, but the Salarians didn't enjoy the same advantage.

Following the walkways, two Korgan on a circular platform opened fire at them. Wrex in return fired the plasma grenade from his minigun, incinerating both.

A Geth destroyer was waiting for them and turned to open fire before a single laser bolt from Shepard's pistol pierced through its lamp-shaped head.

Following the right path, it took them to a recharge station Geth drones used. Wrex and Shepard took out the drones while Tali handled the fuel tanks, the heat of her laser shotgun setting them on fire and causing violent explosions.

Backtracking on the way they came and taking the other path, the team stood before a wall of barriers on a platform, with Krogan warriors and Geth snipers at the other side, opening fire on them. Since they lacked range, Shepard activated his anti-gravity generator and leaped across the field, a biotic halo gathering in his before he launched it right in the middle of the gathered enemies.

It only left a single Krogan that was taking cover, who opened fire at Shepard before Tali's horizontal laser beam passed through his body, and the Krogan fell down in pieces.

Accessing the security console, Tali quickly made her way through the cyber defenses. "We got access to base security. We can cut the alarms from here. Maybe even trigger alarms on the far side of the base. It'll clear the guards for us, though I guess you don't need it since it might be too much for the Salarians."

Shepard nodded. "Yeah, just deactivate the alarms; we can deal with anything we might find inside."

Interestingly enough, Salarians, members of the Third Infiltration Regiment, opened fire on them, along with the Geth.

Shepard launched a singularity, while Wrex and Tali waylaid them with laser fire, putting down the most likely indoctrinated Salarians.

As they traversed the base, the team came across Salarians locked up in a cell. Shepard approached to talk to one of them. The Salarian was erratic and jittery, and from the way he talked, Shepard guessed Sovereign had gotten to him. Leaving the alien in, who banged his head on the force field and knocked himself out, the team moved on.

Another cell had a crying Salarian so far out of his mind, Shepard didn't even think he was aware of what was happening around him.

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The assault teams were actually pushing the Geth back when a drop ship flew in to bring reinforcements to the enemy.

"Dropship, take cover!" Kirrahe ordered, though Shepard's teammates weren't going to stay idle. From the sound of the explosion and the cheers that followed, they must have taken the dropship down with the laser rifles and the turret.

In the meantime, Shepard, Wrex, and Tali took an elevator down, arriving in a research lab with husks, an Asari scientist, and, perhaps a first for him, a Krogan doctor, screaming about how this was the glorious salvation of his species.

It seems they found the one doing the research on the Genophage.

Wrex charged at the Krogan doctor, knocking him down and pulling the trigger of his weapon, not stopping until he got some of the rage out of his system. Meanwhile, Shepard shot the Asari doctor, and Tali took out the husks, leaving the lab empty.

Hacking a console, Shepard began to quickly view the data on the Genophage, which only included some preliminary research on how the Genophage worked. "There is nothing here, as I said. Just some data on how the Genophage worked. You can take it if you want."

Wrex did take the data with a snarl.

There was also another console with reports on the Geth fleet, which Shepard also took to forward to the Alliance.

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Outside the research lab, some Geth troopers were guarding a place, and after putting down the synthetics, Shepard went in to check it out.

An Asari hiding beneath her desk shouted out. "Don't shoot! Please, I just want to get out of here before it's too late."

"Calm down. Who are you, and what are you doing here?"

"Rana Thanoptis, neurospecialist. But this job isn't worth dying over. Or worse." The Asari was scared, though whether it was of them or Saren remained to be seen. "You think the indoctrination only affects the prisoners? Sooner or later, Saren will want to dissect my brain too."

"I thought this was a breeding facility for a Krogan army?"

"Not this level. We're studying Sovereign's effect on organic minds. At least that's what I assumed. Saren kept us in the dark as much as possible."

"You helped him, and you didn't even know why?" The "are you serious?" tone Tali used perfectly represented what Shepard and Wrex were thinking.

"I didn't have the option of negotiating. This position is a little more… permanent than I expected." She explained her reasons for working under Saren, pausing near the end to find the right word.

"But I can help you. This elevator behind me goes to Saren's private lab. I can get you in."

"There is a good chance you are already indoctrinated, though you may not even be aware of it."

"No, it, it can't be. I haven't been here for that long." The Asari denied it, though Shepard had no intention of leaving it to chance.

Turning to his teammates, Shepard took his helmet off. "Shoot her if she tries anything." At their nods, he approached the Asari. "Meld with me, and keep any questions you might have to yourself."

Rana gulped but did as she was told, and soon enough Shepard found himself standing before Sovereign again.

"You." Huh, it almost sounded like hatred, making him wonder if the ship was even capable of it in the first place.

"Nice try, you overgrown cuttlefish, but it's time for you to leave, again."

"You will be terminated, mortal." Sovereign threatened before the mental backlash from Shepard sent it flying out of the Asari's mind.

Coming back to the real world, Shepard saw Rana Thanoptis swaying on her feet, blue blood coming out of her nose. "What do you know, you were right." She went down like a sack of potatoes, still alive. Moving her to the side, Shepard and the team took the elevator to Saren's lab.

They could retrieve the Asari on their way back.

Inside the lab, they found another Prothean beacon, this one in much better condition than the one on Eden Prime.

"Change of plans. Saren's ship is most likely coming here, and we found another Prothean beacon. Joker, ready those missiles. Ground teams, hold your positions; we are taking this base." Shepard radioed the Normandy and the teams. Laser weapons or not, the value of a Prothean beacon was apparent, and if he was lucky enough, they might even have more information on the Reapers.

"But the Genophage."

"I checked the data; it's just preliminary research on the Genophage's effects."

"Understood, holding position."

Shepard approached the beacon, interfacing with it just like back at Eden Prime, though this time it was voluntary. The beacon levitated him again, blasting visions similar to the ones he had seen before, though this time they were clearer, along with the location of a planet, most likely Saren's next destination.

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Leaving the lab and the still sleeping Asari behind, the comms lit up with chatter, as the Geth were retreating from their positions to stop Shepard, with the assault teams trying to keep them fighting.

Passing his pistols to Tali, Shepard gave the shotgun to Wrex and took the minigun without a word. "Clear out any Geth you see; I am going ahead."

Activating his anti-gravity generator again, Shepard took off, and since the Geth were already weakened from his sabotages, this would be a much simpler job.

Seeing the large number of Geth heading towards Wrex and Tali, Shepard opened fire with the minigun, a heavy rain of laser bolts scrambling the synthetics, who returned fire, though Shepard was too mobile to be shot out of the air. He flew over the base to the other side, clearing out the Geth as he went, and approached the assault teams who were still fighting the Geth left at the wall.

Under fire from the ground and the skies, the already diminished number of synthetics were cleared out, and Shepard touched down to open the gate, ordering the troops to move forward.

Which was when Sovereign showed itself, getting ready to fire at the base. Normandy flew down, with Joker's voice over the comms. "Eat this, you son of a bitch." He fired two missiles, striking the dreadnought right over one of its tentacles.

Sovereign, already aware of the capabilities of the organic vessels, ignored the missiles while Shepard ordered everyone to take cover.

A costly mistake.

The antiproton warheads detonated, knocking the ship out of the air and tearing one of its tentacles off. The shockwave crushed anyone who wasn't behind cover, further reducing the number of Geth.

Thankfully Shepard had designed half of them to be used within close range of any allied forces to avoid friendly fire.

Sovereign, with its horn blaring, slowly rose, wounded but not out of the fight. Normandy circled back to fire again, but the dreadnought blasted off at speeds the frigate couldn't match, running away seeing as it was outpowered.

Cheers rang over the comms.




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"Councillors, how is the research on the beacon going?"

The matter must have frustrated Tevos for her to visibly sigh. "Not good, Commander; research teams couldn't find a way to reactivate the beacon yet."

"Try to have an Asari meld with it. In the meantime, you'll be happy to know I just found another beacon, this one fully intact." Shepard offered his advice, since it seemed too obvious to him to have an Asari interact with the beacon.

Tevos visibly perked up, as did her colleagues. "That is great news, Commander. Where is it?"

"I am bringing it to Citadel before I head after Saren."

"Very well, we'll have a team waiting to receive the beacon. As always, an excellent job, Commander." From the look on Sparatus' face, praising Shepard must have left a sour taste in his mouth.

"I know. Have a nice day, Councillors."




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Virmire


"So?" Shepard asked, as he had been waiting for the STG to go over the data in the labs.

Kirrahe finally stepped away from the computer. "It is as you theorized, Commander; there was nothing about the genophage to cause worry, though we did destroy the cloning lab."

And wasn't that a load off his back?

"Alright, we'll be taking the beacon to the Citadel. What is the status of your captured soldiers?" Shepard had seen the state of the Salarians firsthand and knew the chances of them coming back from whatever happened to them were slim to none.

The Salarian captain shook his head, regret seeping to his face at the state his soldiers had been reduced to. "Not good. Whatever Saren did to them, they seemed to have gone insane."

"It's called indoctrination." Shepard said, explaining how the dreadnought could subvert organic minds.

"That is disconcerting. We'll have to stay away from that limb until it is properly shielded." Naturally, the STG would want to study the remains of the dreadnought, but without creating a massive security breach in the process.

"Yeah, I am also taking the research data on it, and the scientist is working on analyzing it. Anything else you found is yours." Shepard would give STG and other organizations whatever data there was on the servers, but Thanoptis was coming with him until she woke up and he decided what to do with her.

"Thank you, Commander. With the jamming down, we sent a message to request support." Remnants of Saren's forces were already hunted down, so the base was secure, and the STG could afford to wait.

"A pleasure working with you, Captain Kirrahe." Shepard held out his hand, appreciating the captain's efforts and attitude towards his soldiers.

Kirrahe took his hand, happy to work with a legend like Shepard. "The pleasure is all mine, Commander."

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Normandy

Shepard waited in the Comms Room for the Council to answer, which they did very quickly.

Lesson learned, it seems.

"Councillors, how is the research on the beacon going?"

The matter must have frustrated Tevos for her to visibly sigh. "Not good, Commander; research teams couldn't find a way to reactivate the beacon yet."

"Try to have an Asari meld with it. In the meantime, you'll be happy to know I just found another beacon, this one fully intact." Shepard offered his advice, since it seemed too obvious to him to have an Asari interact with the beacon.

Tevos visibly perked up, as did her colleagues. "That is great news, Commander. Where is it?"

"I am bringing it to Citadel before I head after Saren."

"Very well, we'll have a team waiting to receive the beacon. As always, an excellent job, Commander." From the look on Sparatus' face, praising Shepard must have left a sour taste in his mouth.

"I know. Have a nice day, Councillors."

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While in transit, Shepard allowed his crew to celebrate the victory over Saren, allowing a small amount of alcohol to be distributed.

Everyone except Liara had participated, while she was busy trying to interface with the beacon.

"Just meld with it."

"What?"

"Just meld with the beacon. Seeing as Asari can interface with the minds of organics and the beacon does the same, it stands to reason to try."

"I—I am not sure if that is safe." Liara didn't think anyone had ever tried that before, but it kind of made sense.

"You are tougher than you think, Liara, and if anything happens I'll be here." Shepard encouraged the Asari. For all her timidness when it came to social interaction, Liara was actually a resolute person.

Liara nodded after thinking about it for a solid minute, approaching the beacon.

"Embrace Eternity."

The beacon levitated Liara, and the young Asari, first shocked, began to smile in wonder.

"I can see it."

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The Citadel

Shepard, followed by his team members, made their way off the ship, the beacon dragged behind on a hover carrier.

"Shepard." Since they were already acquainted and colleagues, both Spectres saw no reason to be overly formal.

"Vasir."

"Another beacon, huh? You're going to make the rest of us look like amateurs."

"I can start holding back to make things fair for you."

Vasir snorted. "No need; it wouldn't be fun otherwise. We'll take the beacon from here. Your ambassador wants to see you."

Nodding to the engineers to hand over the beacon, Shepard, with Ashley and Kaidan, went to see what Udina wanted.

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"Commander, welcome. Please, take a seat."

Shepard did. "What is this about, ambassador? I need to go and catch Saren." With the beacon's help, he now knew where Saren was heading and wanted to catch him before he hit Ilos and found the Conduit.

"Yes, about that. The Council was wondering if you would consider staying on the Citadel and let them handle Saren." Udina clasped his fingers, avoiding eye contact with Shepard.

"No." Shepard raised an eyebrow and crossed his arms, wondering what the Council was thinking.

Udina raised his hands, knowing he could be exiled to the most remote corner of the Alliance with one word from Shepard. "As you wish, though, I would like you to reconsider. Normandy isn't equipped to fight Saren's ship; well, nothing short of a fleet is."

The Council wanted Udina to find a way to make Shepard stay so they could deal with Saren to clean the stain on their reputation, but both sides knew it was up to Shepard to stay.

And Udina wasn't going to risk his career for the Council, at least not when it came to Shepard.

"The new anti-proton torpedoes did wonderful work and severely damaged the dreadnought. A couple more shots and that ship will be scrapped."

"Oh, I see." Udina didn't know anything more about antimatter weaponry than what an ordinary person would, so he deferred to simply inform Admiral Hackett of the matter.

Shepard rose from his seat. "Anyway, I have work to do."

"Good luck, Commander." Udina knew Shepard wouldn't need it in the first place, but it was better than nothing.

Having visited Anderson before leaving, Shepard ordered a course for Ilos.

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Pangea Expanse

Refuge System

Ilos


"Dreadnought along with the Geth fleet sighted in orbit!" Pressly warned.

There were too many of them for Normandy's small anti-proton torpedoes to take down, and even if all the torpedoes were hits, it would leave them outnumbered against a lot of Geth ships.

So Shepard ordered the Normandy down to Ilos, since stopping Saren took priority in this case.

"Picking up some strange readings from the planet's surface." Pressly reported, and Shepard didn't like the chance that it could have something to do with the Conduit.

"Find me a location to land, now." Shepard wanted to be on the ground yesterday.

Pressly shook his head in the negative. "The closest one is two kliks away."

"We'll never make it in time on foot. Find us something closer." Alenko ordered, searching for a place to land as well.

"There is nowhere closer. I've looked." Pressly said, his voice rising in response to the tough situation they were facing.

If they couldn't land, then they would drop. "Drop us in the Mako."

"You need at least a hundred meters of open terrain to pull off a drop like that. The most I can find near Saren is twenty." Pressly warned, seeing the move as too dangerous, since it wouldn't be Shepard who would pilot the ship.

"Twenty meters? We'll never get in close enough for a drop." Alenko complained, and Shepard closed his eyes to calm himself.

"We have to try." Liara pleaded, as they were running out of time.

"Find another landing zone." Alenko ordered again, as if Pressly didn't do his best.

His XO did shout this time, and Shepard was done with their crap. "There is no other landing zone!"

"Enough!" Shepard's shout silenced the room like an omni-blade cutting through butter. "Stop acting like headless chickens. Joker, drop us in there."

"Aye aye, Commander." Joker nodded after freezing for a second, grinning at the order.

"The descent angle's too steep." Tali warned as a courtesy, as the drop needed a pilot of exceptional skills, who was sitting in his chair right now.

"It's our only option." Liara didn't see any other option, as speed was essential, and they had already lost enough time arguing.

"I can do it." Shepard dismissed the team at Joker's confident reply, leaving to get ready for the drop.

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Shepard, Garrus, and Wrex loaded into the Mako, ready to drop on Ilos and get to the Conduit before Saren.

Joker dropped the Mako right on top of Saren, barely missing the rogue Spectre as the gate in front of him closed, blocking Shepard and his team.

The team got off the Mako to examine the gate and decided to search for a console to open it, since brute force wouldn't be possible here. Turning back from the gate to the narrow passage ahead, the team opened fire as the Geth came pouring out, trying to buy as much time as possible for Saren.

Clearing the initial wave, they found heavier Geth units waiting on the other side. Two Armatures fired their cannons, missing as the team dove into cover.

Shepard activated his anti-gravity generator, leaping to air with his biotics to rain laser bolts on the Armatures, while Wrex offloaded his minigun on the troopers, with Garrus picking up the ones behind cover.

He shot one of the Armatures just as it charged its cannon, causing an explosion that sent the other Armature reeling, before Shepard shot it through the headlight.

Moving downstairs and through the ruins of Ilos overgrown with roots and vegetation, Shepard leaped back as Geth had the passage under fire from two locations to keep them suppressed.

Ordering his team to handle the Geth on lower ground, Shepard charged between the Geth taking cover behind a platform across the passage, effortlessly sailing through the air and sending the synthetics flying, before three laser bolts neutralized them.

Jumping with the anti-gravity generator, Shepard landed right behind the Geth on the ground, catching them in a pincer. He pivoted on his heel, dodging a rocket, and shot the launcher through the barrel, causing an explosion and scrapping the Geth carrying it.

Under fire from the front and behind, the Geth were quickly dispatched, and the team pushed forward.

Several Geth Sappers quickly jumped between pillars, making it hard to aim.

Wrex used his plasma grenade to take them all out at once, the thermal explosion turning the lightly armored synthetics to shrapnel.

Taking down the elevator and running through another passage, they stood before several Geth platforms arrayed ahead, including a Geth Prime, that didn't miss the beat and opened fire, mass-accelerated grains zipping by.

Nodding to his teammates, Shepard launched a dark matter ball that exploded with concussive force, throwing the Geth off their feet, before pulling them all together into a nice and easy target.

At the end of the road, they found a security console inside a bunker, which also contained a degraded message left by the Protheans, which Shepard easily understood thanks to the cypher.

Taking the elevator inside the bunker, which took them up to the plaza before the gates, they made haste to the bunker to catch up to Saren, only for a large number of Geth to cut their way.

Armatures, ground units, and hoppers were working in cohesion, making it very hard for the team to return fire.

Shepard took out a laser grid grenade, throwing it right in the middle of the Geth, and took cover as a laser beam passed through where he was a second ago.

Getting back into the Mako, Shepard hit the gas, speeding through the bunker, which contained what must have been hundreds of inoperational stasis pods, only for the road to be cut by a golden barrier.

Exiting the vehicle with a scowl, Shepard searched for the source of the obstruction, having had enough of these delays keeping him away from Saren.

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Waiting for the space battle to be over, Shepard and co checked the surrounding area to avoid any more surprises.

They weren't expecting the dead Spectre to rise, with crimson energy arcs pouring out of his body, burning away the organic parts and leaving behind a synthetic skeleton of a Turian.

It jumped, screaming with a voice that did not belong to Saren.

"I am Sovereign, and this station is mine!"



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Chapter 27 - Battle of the Citadel New
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Ilos


As they exited the Mako, a door slid open on the right side of the barrier, with an elevator ahead. Seeing no other choice, Shepard and Co. took the elevator to find a way to deactivate the barrier.

But found something much more interesting.

A Prothean VI, with its avatar malfunctioning due to thousands of years of lack of maintenance.

"You are not Prothean, and you are not a machine either. This eventuality was one of many that was anticipated. This is why we sent our warnings through the beacons." The VI spoke, and Shepard crossed his arms, listening.

"Looks like some kind of VI program. Pretty badly damaged." Garrus was sure Liara would like to be here very much.

"I do not see the taint of indoctrination upon any of you, unlike the other that passed recently. Perhaps there is still hope."

Shepard didn't want to dilly-dally anymore and went straight into the matter.

"Alright, I need you to tell me what the Conduit is and deactivate the barrier so I can stop Saren and the Reapers."

"Very well." The VI then launched into explaining how the Citadel was an enormous mass relay, meant to bring the Reapers straight into the heart of the seat of the Galactic Government, a.k.a. the Council, and then the Reapers would shut down all the relays, splintering the galaxy and making it an easy target.

It also spoke of the Protheans' efforts to sleep through the cycle and rise after the Reapers had gone back to the dark space, only to realize there were too few left for them to continue their species, and they chose to sabotage the Citadel to give the next cycle the chance they never had.

Vigil, the VI, gave them a program to corrupt the Citadel's systems to stop the relay from activating, and just as the team was about to leave to pursue Saren, Shepard stopped. "How much power do you have left?" With the trove of information the VI had on the Reapers, and seeing its deteriorating condition, Shepard didn't want the VI to be deactivated.

"Less than one of your months."

Meaning the VI would be gone by the time anyone came to Ilos.

"I got an idea."

Taking three of the fusion cells from Mako, which would cut its power in half, Shepard jury-rigged them to the VI, lengthening its remaining time by at least six months, more than enough time for someone from the Citadel to reach Ilos and set up shop, after Shepard stopped Saren, of course.

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Shepard rerouted the laser cannon's charge to the shields and the engine, driving through the ruins and Geth beyond Mako's maximum speed, ignoring the synthetics and solely focusing on reaching the Conduit, which was a smaller relay meant to catapult them to the Citadel.

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The Mako rolled over as it came into the Citadel, slamming into Geth stationed around the other end of the Conduit.

Crawling out of the now useless vehicle, the team rushed to the elevator, only for Saren to lock it halfway to stop them.

In the skies, the battle between the Geth and the Citadel forces continued, with the defenders on the back foot due to the surprise attack as well as Sovereign literally smashing its way through their defensive line.

"Suit up, we are going on a walk."

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Blasting the glass open, Shepard extended the range of his anti-gravity generator, holding Wrex and Garrus by the back of their armor, and he launched himself upwards, dragging his teammates through the air towards the Citadel Tower.

Not to stay idle, Wrex and Garrus opened fire on the Geth to assist the Citadel forces.

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Shepard lowered Garrus and Wrex on the ground and landed himself last. Raising their weapons, the trio searched for Saren as they approached the console.

Saren showed himself, flying up on his glider as he threw a grenade, which Shepard launched back at the Spectre with his biotic lasso, knocking him out of his glider.

"Nice try, but you have to bring something heavier if you want to kill me, like a nuke or something."

With an animalistic scream, the rogue Spectre pulled the trigger of his pistol, the grain harmlessly hitting Shepard's shields, before a single laser bolt courtesy of Garrus went through his head, and Saren fell like a puppet with its strings cut.

Loading the program into the console, Shepard gained control of the Citadel and opened the arms, and radio chatter poured in.

Destiny Ascension was in a pinch, with the Council aboard, and Joker was waiting in the Andura sector with the entire Arcturus fleet, ready to save them if necessary.

His teammates had differing ideas on what he should do, but with the anti-proton torpedoes, there was nothing to worry about in Shepard's opinion.

"Joker, save the Ascension; use the torpedoes to take out the Sovereign. The Geth should be easy pickings afterwards."

"Aye aye."

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Normandy's small complement of space battle-rated anti-proton torpedoes were a different beast compared to the atmospheric-rated ones, as each one blew apart and melted several Geth ships, cutting the numbers in half by itself, leaving the Alliance to easily pick apart the rest.

Joker saw that the Citadel's arms were opening and readied all the remaining atmospheric torpedoes and released a full salvo on Sovereign.

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Waiting for the space battle to be over, Shepard and co checked the surrounding area to avoid any more surprises.

They weren't expecting the dead Spectre to rise, with crimson energy arcs pouring out of his body, burning away the organic parts and leaving behind a synthetic skeleton of a Turian.

It jumped, screaming with a voice that did not belong to Saren.

"I am Sovereign, and this station is mine!"

Garrus pulled the trigger of his rifle, sending a single bolt at the cyborg zombie's head, which it dodged by jumping. Shepard proceeded to slap it with the biotic halo mid-air, and Wrex launched his plasma grenade, eviscerating the abomination.

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Just as Shepard and his team finished Sovereign possessing Saren's corpse on the ground, Normandy's torpedoes hit the main body, blowing chunks out of it, leaving glowing craters on its body, before one last torpedo hit its mass effect core, causing an explosion that literally blew the fearsome dreadnought apart.

And it sent debris and a shockwave straight on to where Shepard and his teammates stood.

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On Normandy's med bay, two pairs of eyes snapped open.

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"Goddammit, someone find Shepard now!" Anderson shouted as the rescue teams were going across the debris left by Sovereign's destruction. Comms were down, and they couldn't locate his or his teammates' omni-tool signals and had to search manually to find him.

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An hour later, Anderson stood before the Council with Udina, reporting on their progress so far.

Suggestions of something that might have happened to Shepard were raised quickly and crushed even swifter by Anderson.

"What the hell are you lot yapping about now?" Came Shepard's grumpy voice, as he walked up to the Council with a bowl in one hand and chopsticks in the other, eating noodles.

"Shepard? Where the hell have you been?"

"Getting some food; all that chasing made me hungry, though it took a long time to find a place in one piece."

"Maybe you should have let us know, son? Some people"—Anderson "looked at the Council very pointedly, who shuffled on their feet. "thought something might have happened to you."

Shepard rolled his eyes. "Please, that bitch couldn't kill me if it tried for a million years."

"I hate to interrupt you, Commander, but there is a matter we would like to speak about." Valern was already stressed enough from the attack in his advancing age, by Salarian standards, that is, and didn't really want to hear about Shepard's invincibility.

The Council then launched into a nice speech about how grateful they were about the Alliance saving their asses, honoring the sacrifice of the dead Alliance personnel, and thanking Shepard by giving the Alliance a Council seat and letting Shepard choose who would be humanity's Councillor.

"I'll need a minute." Shepard put his arms around Anderson and Udina and stepped away from the Council, bringing both men closer to whisper.

Naturally, his first thought was choosing Anderson, but Shepard wouldn't saddle him with a position he didn't want. "Alright, Anderson, do you want to play politics, or would you rather stay in the navy?"

Anderson didn't expect Shepard to consider him, in lieu of his lack of knowledge when it came to politics, as well as his dislike of it. "Honestly, son, I'll watch your back if you make me the Councillor."

"As will I." Udina intervened, as this was the step in his political career he always wanted to take, and he didn't want it to go to anyone else.

"And while I hate to admit it, Udina's better with politics and backroom deals than I am." He would do his best, but politics was treacherous, and Anderson preferred the hustle and bustle of military life over it.

"As Captain Anderson said, I am better with politics, and I know better than to cross you." Unlike a certain rear admiral in the navy.

"Alright, but remember, Udina, one wrong move towards me, and your next best career move will be to retire." That or Shepard would kill him, but so far Udina was tolerable.

"Message received, Commander."

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In the end, Udina was named Councillor with his endorsement, and Anderson would be his aide.

Shepard's next step was to give a detailed report on Ilos, especially Virgil, and to send research and engineering teams immediately to secure one of the most valuable working pieces of Prothean tech, as well as giving the Council the entire helmet cam footage he gathered while on the hunt for Saren.

The part where the Sovereign took control of Saren's corpse had disturbed the politicians.

Of course, just because he was done with the Council didn't mean he was done altogether.

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"Shepard, good work down there, son. Your torpedoes worked wonders. Any chance…" Admiral Hackett began after shaking Shepard's hand, only for the Commander to hand him a datapad before he could finish his sentence.

"Everything you want is here, Admiral."

"Thank you, Commander. Alliance is already waiting to mass produce the torpedoes and start refitting ships with laser weaponry. With these, we will have a greater chance against the Reapers."

"Yes, sir. If there is nothing else, I promised my team a celebratory dinner."

"Go and enjoy yourself, Commander, and send the bill to the embassy; it's the least we can do."

Shepard would do exactly that.

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Since Citadel was still under lockdown, Shepard had to convince the authorities to let one of the more luxurious restaurants open, as the owner was all too willing to host Shepard and his team.

They ordered a lot, especially Wrex, who ordered every single bottle of alcohol the establishment had for a taste test, and he was sure Udina would have a heart attack upon seeing the bill.

After the literal feast, the team returned to Normandy.

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Matriarch Benezia and Rana Thanoptis had woken up following the Sovereign's destruction with holes in their memories, which was a more severe case in Benezia than in Thanoptis.

Liara, after Shepard had the Council drop the charges against her mother, took her to Illium to rest, promising to send everything her mother remembered regarding the Reapers to Shepard and the Alliance.

Tali left to return to the Migrant Fleet with all the data they had gathered on Geth so far as her Pilgrimage gift.

Garrus returned to his old job at C-Sec, but Shepard made sure to recommend him as a Spectre, with Nihlus considering mentoring the younger Turian.

Wrex decided to save the Krogan again, or at least try, since the galaxy would need the Krogan to meet the ground forces the Reapers would re-purpose from the corpses of organics.

Jenkins, who had fought against Saren's forces on the Citadel valiantly, had been promoted to Sergeant and joined the crew again, with orders for Shepard to go and hunt down the remaining Geth while the Alliance helped secure the Citadel.

Shepard also wrote a recommendation for Ashley, helping her finally break the William's Curse, as she called it.

Since the laser weapons would go into mass production soon, Shepard allowed his teammates to keep the weapons, warning Tali to not disclose it to the Fleet, since it might just goad them into attacking the Geth.

Soon enough Normandy took off, ready to carry out its next mission.

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The Collectors, for he had seen rare footage of them once during a raid in the Terminus systems, kept pouring into the bay, severely outnumbering Shepard.

His anti-gravity generator flared to life once more, and Shepard sent out a wave of biotic flare to confuse enemy sensors, followed by throwing one of his two grenades and launching himself into the air, still taking cover behind the wall.

As soon as the laser grid grenade stopped carving the Collectors to pieces, Shepard launched himself out of cover, overcharging his pistols and firing two microwaves that flash-cooked two dozen Collectors at once, clearing the room.

One of his pistols was out of charge, and the other only had about a quarter left, and since he didn't have a recharge station at hand, Shepard took one of the organic-looking rifles among the ashes of his enemies, strapping it to his back and moving towards the middle of the ship to take over.




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