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Confrontation (Worm fanfic)

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pepperjack said:
What? No! Augh.

/hasn't read the new thing yet
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Ack said:
Changed 'kissed her on the forehead' to 'leaned my forehead against hers'.
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Yea, literally a 5 word edit. If it was something that would have required much more than that, I wouldn't have brought it up after Ack's "nothing else but grammar and citations" post.

Honestly, I'm kinda surprised something so small broke my SoD so much... Then again, I myself am kinda (very) uncomfortable with physical contact; so it takes being really close to someone before I feel comfortable with actions like that (seriously, even a handshake can weird me out sometimes...), so there might have been some projection involved...
 
edale said:
Yea, literally a 5 word edit. If it was something that would have required much more than that, I wouldn't have brought it up after Ack's "nothing else but grammar and citations" post.

Honestly, I'm kinda surprised something so small broke my SoD so much... Then again, I myself am kinda (very) uncomfortable with physical contact; so it takes being really close to someone before I feel comfortable with actions like that (seriously, even a handshake can weird me out sometimes...), so there might have been some projection involved...
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Thinking back to canon, your point is valid. When she was joining the Undersiders, Taylor got into a close physical contact with either Tatts or Bitch, and she thought that things were going to get very awkward there. So you're right; she wouldn't kiss someone like that.
 
The new version is a clear improvement, but now I'm hoping for a sequel.
 
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