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Exploring PsyQualia (Cardfight!! Vanguard)

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NewName said:
"Dragonic Overlord, burn the Skull Witch to Nemain's ground!"
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Something about this doesn't scan right, I think it needs a second pass.
NewName said:
"Even with Kai not boosting with Grapeshot, " MIwa looked at the unactivated rear guard behind Overlord first, then continued. " Neiman's 3000 base power is too low for that the most likely is—"
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This definitely doesn't scan right - Nemain is misspelled, Miwa has a capital I, and there's missing punctuation in the last sentence, and that's just what I noticed.

Awesome chapter. It really feels like, despite all the changes, despite the appearance that Aichi is still in control, he still fell to the allure of Shadow Paladins and PSYqualia.

…or DID he?
 
GigaVanguard said:
Something about this doesn't scan right, I think it needs a second pass.

This definitely doesn't scan right - Nemain is misspelled, Miwa has a capital I, and there's missing punctuation in the last sentence, and that's just what I noticed.

Awesome chapter. It really feels like, despite all the changes, despite the appearance that Aichi is still in control, he still fell to the allure of Shadow Paladins and PSYqualia.

…or DID he?
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FIxed. I think.

Did he? Time to keep it vague.
 
Aichi gave Kai multiple chances to show him a miracle and Kai 's wall, despite the allure of the shadow guard and PsyQualia .
I like your version better of PsyQualia than anime, noy that wasn't a bad Aichi Sendo centeric season.
Well now, I guess student surpasses the teacher or does have one hail Mary left before the final turn.
Continue on
Cheers!
 
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