Sup, everyone. Long and short of it is that I had a vague idea for a Fate/Grand Order fic and I didn't want to discuss it in SB's Nasuverse ideas thread. I got the distinct impression that they would rip me a new one. So
BlackHadou recommend I drop the idea here.
So first off, it's at the idea stage so I haven't figured out the nitty gritty.
It would a be a VN Shirou in Chaldea fic.
Well, more like Shirou, Rin, Sakura and Illya in Chaldea fic. The idea I had is that the story would take place after the Fate route of the VN. It would take place close to a year after the 5th Grail War and Illya is pretty damn close to dying and Shirou is at his wits end. By this point he and Rin are also caught on that something is not right with Sakura or her home life. They've been trying to get it out of her, but even Rin who at this point has been bullied by Shirou to mend things can't get her to talk.
In comes Olga, who had managed to figure out quite a bit. She has a deal. She wants the three of them to join the Grand order and in exchange she will use the
vast resources available to at Chaldea to treat Illya's condition.
They say yes.
Do note that the treatments they put Illya through are keeping her alive if uncomfortable. Roman is semi-optimistic that they can save her.
Maybe.
Now one thing that I think is a unique spin on things is that I would not be replacing the MC. I would be using the female Ritsuka Fujimaru. Thing is I, like many others have noticed she looks a lot like Shirou, and I want to do something with that.
Now, it might be a little silly, but I like the idea of playing with a long-lost sibling kind of deal. I want to explore how Shirou would react and deal with an actual connection from before the fire. I also want Ritsuka to meet Kormine Kieri and for her to learn that he was responsible for her family falling apart.
Haven't figured out
where I would have that happen. I'm, still in the Camelot arc on the game but I
think I remember someone mentioning that he shows up somewhere.
Right now I have some vague ideas for the prologue and the first Singularity.
Ok so first I don't want to spend too much time in the prologue. The main story beats I want to cover is that Ritsuka learns that Shirou was caught in the fire, which pretty much confirms who he is. Shirou and Rin having a confrontation with Archer, which while I would have the conversation on screen I might just off screen any fights. Caster Cu would be helping btw. I was thinking he would pull a Medea and buff the two.
I will say that while Shirou has gotten much better at projecting shit, he's not very good with Gae Blog. I remember in the America Singulartiy that Scathach wielding two of the 'thorns was bullshit and that Cu Alter was wielding a thousand and it was actually harming him as he did. I would go with the idea that on top of Shirou having trouble projecting Gae Blog he just couldn't use it without it trying to kill him.
I thought it made sense in the context of the setting and it takes away folks' favorite 'I win' button that wankers like to give Shirou.
Any who while the encounter with Archer is important, I intend the stars of the show to actually be Sakura, Ritsuka and Mash.
First off, I'm thinking of having Sakura save Rider and form a new contract with her. Haven't quite figured out the details just yet but my idea would ultimately be a subversion where Shirou and Rin get to Saber Alter first. I would frame it as a 'Shirou save the day' thing with some call backs to Sparks Liner High.
Only to turn around and have Shirou and Rin
lose. It would be Mash who comes in to save the day and Rider who tips the scales and actually manages to beat Saber using Bellerophon.
I also think I will save Olga because fuck Lev and the horse he rode in on.
I'm not sure I would have Shirou make a contract with Saber Alter. I'm leaning towards no. Then again, I
could do some stuff with it but I'm worried that it's been done before.
I need to think.
Anywho that's what I got for the prologue in the vague sense. I
really want to keep everyone in character as such I will probably re-read the VN to get a better understanding of the characters. Wish there was a good Let's read of it but that's fine. Let me know if there are any fundamental flaws in the concept.
I'm not sure how I want to handle the Servant summoning Gacha thing. Any ideas would be wonderful.