Chapter 13 Into the Pit
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Emile hit the ground hard, the impact rattling his bones. He rolled, dust pluming up around him, and came up into a crouch with his palms already coated in grit. Sweat stung his eyes, though the fight hadn't even begun. His heart pounded so hard it drowned out the roar of the crowd above.
Immediately, the golem's head jerked toward him. Not a slow turn, not a lazy mechanical sweep — a snap. Sudden. Precise. Its burning red eyes locked on him like twin searchlights cutting through the dust.
Emile's stomach twisted into knots.
Right. What did Jim say?
His mind scrambled, spitting out fragments of advice like frightened birds bursting from a hedge: Keep moving. Watch the ground. Watch the golem. Don't stop. Don't get caught.
He bolted left, boots slipping on the packed dirt, arms pumping for balance. The golem didn't move. Not its arms, not its legs — but its head tracked him perfectly, turning smooth as oil to follow.
Emile's breath caught. Okay. Weird. But maybe it was slow to start? Maybe it only struck once you closed the gap?
He cut right, zigzagging across the pit, dust spraying from his boots. Still nothing. No swing, no lunge. Just those eyes, glowing like embers in a furnace, following him with eerie calm.
He slowed, blinking sweat out of his eyes.
What the hell is going on?
Jim had said it would charge. Had said to "lead it on a merry dance," tire it out, then leg it for the exit. That had been the plan. But this? This thing was waiting.
He paced sideways, feinting left then back right. The golem's head followed, mist curling lazily from its eyes, but its body stayed rooted. Like a statue. Like bait.
Am I doing something wrong?
He jogged the other way, faster now. Still nothing. No roar, no rush of clay and stone. Just watching. Waiting.
"I'm just… running around like a right twat," Emile muttered under his breath, chest heaving. "Any second now, it's gonna lunge and knock me flat like a sodding cork."
The pit felt smaller with every step, the high stone walls pressing in, the heat from the crowd above pressing down. His lungs burned. The golem hadn't taken a single stride, but Emile could feel it on his skin. The weight of its stare. Heavy. Suffocating.
He slowed again, boots dragging, and locked eyes with it.
It hadn't moved. Not fully. But with its arms hanging loose, its massive shoulders hunched, and that vile mist curling from its face, it didn't look like an opponent anymore. It looked like a trap.
A wall of clay and hate, daring him to make the first mistake.
Then his gaze caught on something. A gap. Small, but real. Between its legs — narrow, low, maybe enough. Just maybe.
His stomach turned over.
Alright. New plan.
He crouched, bouncing slightly on the balls of his feet, trying to summon the courage. Jim's voice echoed in his head: If you go, lad, you don't stop. You don't flinch. You just go.
"Okay… okay," he whispered, teeth clenched. "Fast and low."
He launched forward, boots hammering the dirt in a dead sprint.
The roar of the crowd blurred into silence as his focus tunneled on that narrow space. He dropped low, sliding hard, arms tucked, body angled—
The golem moved.
It came alive with terrifying speed. Not a slow mechanical lurch, but a predator's strike. Its entire frame twisted, red mist pouring from its sockets, and its massive arm swung down in a brutal arc.
"—Oh crap!"
Emile twisted mid-slide, momentum dragging him sideways, dirt and grit tearing at his clothes. The golem's fist smashed into the earth behind him with a sound like thunder, cracking the ground where his spine would've been if he'd been a heartbeat slower.
He rolled, scrambled on hands and knees, and staggered back to his feet. His chest burned, lungs screaming for air, eyes wide with panic.
And out of the corner of his vision, he saw it.
The golem was moving.
Fast. Too fast.
It was already swinging again, faster this time — a low, sweeping strike that could've taken his legs off clean at the knees. Emile leapt backward, boots skidding, his arms flailing for balance. The golem's massive forearm cut through the space where he'd stood a heartbeat ago, and the whoosh of displaced air slapped his skin hard enough to sting.
Shit shit shit, it's faster now!
The golem's torso twisted, runes across its shoulders pulsing crimson, and it swung a third time. Even faster.
The blow missed by inches, but Emile felt the pressure of it. The ground quivered under the weight of its strike, a ripple running through the dirt like an earthquake. Every punch carried enough force to pulp a man where he stood. This wasn't just clay animated by spellwork. No. This thing was angry. Fueled by something darker.
He stumbled back, desperate to create space, lungs dragging ragged air. Jim's voice thundered in his memory: Lead it away. Pull it to the edge, then run for the gap.
"Alright, alright!" Emile wheezed, veering toward the pit's perimeter. He waved his arms wildly, shouting at the top of his lungs.
"Come on, you oversized garden ornament! Over here!"
The golem didn't take the bait.
It didn't lumber after him like Jim said it should. Instead, it simply turned — slow, deliberate — always keeping itself planted between Emile and the exit.
It knows.
The realisation froze his blood. It's not just following me. It's thinking. It's… waiting.
His stomach lurched. He wasn't being tested. He was being hunted.
He staggered, chest heaving, boots grinding dust as he tried to circle again—
Then he heard it.
A heavy thud behind him.
Another figure dropping into the pit.
He spun, blinking sweat and grit from his eyes.
Maizel.
She landed light as a feather, her robes flowing like water, her stride already purposeful. Her face was unreadable — no panic, no hesitation, only that cold precision she carried like armour.
Emile's heart kicked. What is she doing?!
She was closer to the exit, well behind the golem. If it was going to target anyone, it should've been her. Logic demanded it.
But it didn't.
The golem's head snapped away from her, those red eyes blazing brighter, mist spilling like blood from a wound. And then — it charged.
At Emile.
What?!
It moved with terrifying intent, like it had made a choice. Not random. Not blind. A decision.
With a roar of stone grinding on stone, it raised its colossal arm and brought it crashing down.
The blow hit the dirt with the weight of a collapsing tower.
BOOM.
The shockwave blasted outward, a storm of dirt and broken stone that slammed into Emile's chest like a cannon. He was hurled back, flat on his spine, the breath blasted from his lungs. Dust blinded him, clogged his throat. He gagged, gasped, clawed at his face, wiping furiously, blindly.
All he could hear were the footsteps.
Thunderous. Relentless. Getting closer.
Closer.
He blinked. Rubbed. Everything was blur and sting—
And then, through the haze, he saw it.
The golem. Towering above him. Its fist rising again, higher, ready to descend like a guillotine.
Emile scrambled backward on hands and heels — and hit cold stone. The pit wall. Hard. Unyielding.
Nowhere to run.
Nowhere to dodge.
His chest heaved. His arms shot up instinctively, pathetic defence against something that could crush him like glass.
And then—
BOOM.
A blinding flash. A sickening crunch. And sudden, absolute silence.
Dust whipped past him in a sudden blast of wind, hot and choking. The ground trembled again — not from a strike, not from a fist, but from something deeper. A collapse.
Emile blinked through the grit, chest heaving, until the haze thinned enough for him to see.
The golem was down.
Flat on its back.
Its head was gone — blown clean off, shattered chunks of clay still raining down in dull thuds across the arena floor. The torso twitched once, runes flickering like dying coals, then went still.
Smoke curled in the air above the ruin. Not grey. Not black. Purple. A haze that shimmered faintly before thinning into nothing.
Emile turned toward the source.
Maizel.
She stood calm and composed, one hand still outstretched, the last wisps of violet energy curling lazily from her fingers like steam off quenched metal. Her eyes found his through the settling dust. Cool. Unreadable. Razor sharp.
She gave the smallest nod. Barely a dip of her chin.
Then — without a word — she turned on her heel and sprinted straight through the exit, robes snapping behind her.
Emile just stared after her.
Stunned. Filthy. Heart pounding. Still alive.
What the hell just happened?
Slowly, his gaze drifted upward toward the observation platform.
Jim stood there, coat snapping in the wind, his face twisted into raw confusion. Brows knotted, jaw set — a man staring at a puzzle with half the pieces missing.
Then Jim's eyes locked with Emile's. And the confusion vanished, replaced by urgency.
He started mouthing something. Hard, sharp movements of his lips.
Emile squinted, trying to make it out.
Jim repeated it, slower this time, stabbing a finger toward the open gate.
Go through the…
Emile blinked.
Then it clicked.
"Go through the fucking exit!"
He staggered to his feet, groaning with every motion, his body sore and battered but unbroken.
And then he ran.
Immediately, the golem's head jerked toward him. Not a slow turn, not a lazy mechanical sweep — a snap. Sudden. Precise. Its burning red eyes locked on him like twin searchlights cutting through the dust.
Emile's stomach twisted into knots.
Right. What did Jim say?
His mind scrambled, spitting out fragments of advice like frightened birds bursting from a hedge: Keep moving. Watch the ground. Watch the golem. Don't stop. Don't get caught.
He bolted left, boots slipping on the packed dirt, arms pumping for balance. The golem didn't move. Not its arms, not its legs — but its head tracked him perfectly, turning smooth as oil to follow.
Emile's breath caught. Okay. Weird. But maybe it was slow to start? Maybe it only struck once you closed the gap?
He cut right, zigzagging across the pit, dust spraying from his boots. Still nothing. No swing, no lunge. Just those eyes, glowing like embers in a furnace, following him with eerie calm.
He slowed, blinking sweat out of his eyes.
What the hell is going on?
Jim had said it would charge. Had said to "lead it on a merry dance," tire it out, then leg it for the exit. That had been the plan. But this? This thing was waiting.
He paced sideways, feinting left then back right. The golem's head followed, mist curling lazily from its eyes, but its body stayed rooted. Like a statue. Like bait.
Am I doing something wrong?
He jogged the other way, faster now. Still nothing. No roar, no rush of clay and stone. Just watching. Waiting.
"I'm just… running around like a right twat," Emile muttered under his breath, chest heaving. "Any second now, it's gonna lunge and knock me flat like a sodding cork."
The pit felt smaller with every step, the high stone walls pressing in, the heat from the crowd above pressing down. His lungs burned. The golem hadn't taken a single stride, but Emile could feel it on his skin. The weight of its stare. Heavy. Suffocating.
He slowed again, boots dragging, and locked eyes with it.
It hadn't moved. Not fully. But with its arms hanging loose, its massive shoulders hunched, and that vile mist curling from its face, it didn't look like an opponent anymore. It looked like a trap.
A wall of clay and hate, daring him to make the first mistake.
Then his gaze caught on something. A gap. Small, but real. Between its legs — narrow, low, maybe enough. Just maybe.
His stomach turned over.
Alright. New plan.
He crouched, bouncing slightly on the balls of his feet, trying to summon the courage. Jim's voice echoed in his head: If you go, lad, you don't stop. You don't flinch. You just go.
"Okay… okay," he whispered, teeth clenched. "Fast and low."
He launched forward, boots hammering the dirt in a dead sprint.
The roar of the crowd blurred into silence as his focus tunneled on that narrow space. He dropped low, sliding hard, arms tucked, body angled—
The golem moved.
It came alive with terrifying speed. Not a slow mechanical lurch, but a predator's strike. Its entire frame twisted, red mist pouring from its sockets, and its massive arm swung down in a brutal arc.
"—Oh crap!"
Emile twisted mid-slide, momentum dragging him sideways, dirt and grit tearing at his clothes. The golem's fist smashed into the earth behind him with a sound like thunder, cracking the ground where his spine would've been if he'd been a heartbeat slower.
He rolled, scrambled on hands and knees, and staggered back to his feet. His chest burned, lungs screaming for air, eyes wide with panic.
And out of the corner of his vision, he saw it.
The golem was moving.
Fast. Too fast.
It was already swinging again, faster this time — a low, sweeping strike that could've taken his legs off clean at the knees. Emile leapt backward, boots skidding, his arms flailing for balance. The golem's massive forearm cut through the space where he'd stood a heartbeat ago, and the whoosh of displaced air slapped his skin hard enough to sting.
Shit shit shit, it's faster now!
The golem's torso twisted, runes across its shoulders pulsing crimson, and it swung a third time. Even faster.
The blow missed by inches, but Emile felt the pressure of it. The ground quivered under the weight of its strike, a ripple running through the dirt like an earthquake. Every punch carried enough force to pulp a man where he stood. This wasn't just clay animated by spellwork. No. This thing was angry. Fueled by something darker.
He stumbled back, desperate to create space, lungs dragging ragged air. Jim's voice thundered in his memory: Lead it away. Pull it to the edge, then run for the gap.
"Alright, alright!" Emile wheezed, veering toward the pit's perimeter. He waved his arms wildly, shouting at the top of his lungs.
"Come on, you oversized garden ornament! Over here!"
The golem didn't take the bait.
It didn't lumber after him like Jim said it should. Instead, it simply turned — slow, deliberate — always keeping itself planted between Emile and the exit.
It knows.
The realisation froze his blood. It's not just following me. It's thinking. It's… waiting.
His stomach lurched. He wasn't being tested. He was being hunted.
He staggered, chest heaving, boots grinding dust as he tried to circle again—
Then he heard it.
A heavy thud behind him.
Another figure dropping into the pit.
He spun, blinking sweat and grit from his eyes.
Maizel.
She landed light as a feather, her robes flowing like water, her stride already purposeful. Her face was unreadable — no panic, no hesitation, only that cold precision she carried like armour.
Emile's heart kicked. What is she doing?!
She was closer to the exit, well behind the golem. If it was going to target anyone, it should've been her. Logic demanded it.
But it didn't.
The golem's head snapped away from her, those red eyes blazing brighter, mist spilling like blood from a wound. And then — it charged.
At Emile.
What?!
It moved with terrifying intent, like it had made a choice. Not random. Not blind. A decision.
With a roar of stone grinding on stone, it raised its colossal arm and brought it crashing down.
The blow hit the dirt with the weight of a collapsing tower.
BOOM.
The shockwave blasted outward, a storm of dirt and broken stone that slammed into Emile's chest like a cannon. He was hurled back, flat on his spine, the breath blasted from his lungs. Dust blinded him, clogged his throat. He gagged, gasped, clawed at his face, wiping furiously, blindly.
All he could hear were the footsteps.
Thunderous. Relentless. Getting closer.
Closer.
He blinked. Rubbed. Everything was blur and sting—
And then, through the haze, he saw it.
The golem. Towering above him. Its fist rising again, higher, ready to descend like a guillotine.
Emile scrambled backward on hands and heels — and hit cold stone. The pit wall. Hard. Unyielding.
Nowhere to run.
Nowhere to dodge.
His chest heaved. His arms shot up instinctively, pathetic defence against something that could crush him like glass.
And then—
BOOM.
A blinding flash. A sickening crunch. And sudden, absolute silence.
Dust whipped past him in a sudden blast of wind, hot and choking. The ground trembled again — not from a strike, not from a fist, but from something deeper. A collapse.
Emile blinked through the grit, chest heaving, until the haze thinned enough for him to see.
The golem was down.
Flat on its back.
Its head was gone — blown clean off, shattered chunks of clay still raining down in dull thuds across the arena floor. The torso twitched once, runes flickering like dying coals, then went still.
Smoke curled in the air above the ruin. Not grey. Not black. Purple. A haze that shimmered faintly before thinning into nothing.
Emile turned toward the source.
Maizel.
She stood calm and composed, one hand still outstretched, the last wisps of violet energy curling lazily from her fingers like steam off quenched metal. Her eyes found his through the settling dust. Cool. Unreadable. Razor sharp.
She gave the smallest nod. Barely a dip of her chin.
Then — without a word — she turned on her heel and sprinted straight through the exit, robes snapping behind her.
Emile just stared after her.
Stunned. Filthy. Heart pounding. Still alive.
What the hell just happened?
Slowly, his gaze drifted upward toward the observation platform.
Jim stood there, coat snapping in the wind, his face twisted into raw confusion. Brows knotted, jaw set — a man staring at a puzzle with half the pieces missing.
Then Jim's eyes locked with Emile's. And the confusion vanished, replaced by urgency.
He started mouthing something. Hard, sharp movements of his lips.
Emile squinted, trying to make it out.
Jim repeated it, slower this time, stabbing a finger toward the open gate.
Go through the…
Emile blinked.
Then it clicked.
"Go through the fucking exit!"
He staggered to his feet, groaning with every motion, his body sore and battered but unbroken.
And then he ran.