My brothers Keeper, an SI as the twin brother of Stalin (Reworked)

[Kash]

This made sense for the beginning of the fanfic but cmon bro, he's personally killed entire families, hundreds of soliders, been through warfare, charged first in battles, and he still quakes in his boots like a little bitch, it's simply ridiculous, Stalin ain't that scary he just isn't, your character is pathetic, this attitude should've ended within the first few chapters if not scenes

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Yeah right now Mika is worst than Stalin in the eyes of a lot of peoples so is not Logic that is still afraid or dont have other plan for stalin
And I hope after this chapter is not going to still cry about his wife death and try to kill himself
If Mika really want to save peoples from stalin why doesn't he try and make a Better image for him and stalin, because the only thing he do is kill peoples left and right

 

[Alenco98]

This made sense for the beginning of the fanfic but cmon bro, he's personally killed entire families, hundreds of soliders, been through warfare, charged first in battles, and he still quakes in his boots like a little bitch, it's simply ridiculous, Stalin ain't that scary he just isn't, your character is pathetic, this attitude should've ended within the first few chapters if not scenes

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The road to hell, good intentions. He's definitely built a 6 lane highway by now

 

[OverseerEX]

I think Mika's been 'playing' a role and dissociating; that's why he could kill without mercy, and still be scared. His knowledge of the future gives him the ability to view the world as "false" to an extent.

Also, the whole Stalin is an unfeeling machine of unending ice as deep as Mother Russia is going a bit too far. Or is it just how Mika perceives him?

 

[Kash]

I think Mika's been 'playing' a role and dissociating; that's why he could kill without mercy, and still be scared. His knowledge of the future gives him the ability to view the world as "false" to an extent.

Also, the whole Stalin is an unfeeling machine of unending ice as deep as Mother Russia is going a bit too far. Or is it just how Mika perceives him?

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After what he saw in the illusion ( Maria and his Victims ) in going to change some extent . He can't be the same person after all this