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Question, how much can lift/manipulate per aura unit? Or is it just going to go off of 'however much the plot needs it too'. Not trying to throw shade, just trying to figure out what rule set this is working by… so I can figure out ways the MC might be able to game it.
I'm guiding myself by 1 aura > 1 pound or 2 kilograms. But since I wasn't the most prodigal student in physics class, I may slip up or write illogical stuff sometimes without realizing
 
Couple things
The majority of the chapter was fine, but

This took me out of the story, for no reason. There's no reason to lazily break the fourth wall like this. You could not mention what the food is, like you do with several other characters, or you could take 2 seconds to google a Japanese dish. It's out of place.

Secondly, this is incredibly low for the Aura generation and supposed virality to hit the majority of the main cast. Japan has a population of 124 million, and the main cast pre-canon is distributed all across it.

The thing is, the way I have in mind his online aura generation works is that, the further the people are, the harder it is for the aura to reach him, so the gains get exponentially smaller the further people are, so while big numbers are good, if the people that see him are too far away, the gains will be big but not astronomical. That, and the awe people can feel through a screen is not that big compared to experiencing stuff in real life, so that's another aura lowerer. right there
 
The thing is, the way I have in mind his online aura generation works is that, the further the people are, the harder it is for the aura to reach him, so the gains get exponentially smaller the further people are, so while big numbers are good, if the people that see him are too far away, the gains will be big but not astronomical. That, and the awe people can feel through a screen is not that big compared to experiencing stuff in real life, so that's another aura lowerer. right there
You can justify basically any number of Aura from any number of online views, because you are in full control of the system, but what needs justifying is how many varied people across Japan are getting showed the video, because again, 1 million views is rookie numbers, especially for a notable vigilante being reported as taking a concert hostage.
 

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