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Of Ice and Men (Young Justice. Icicle Junior SI.)

Discussion in 'Creative Writing' started by Flightless Man, Apr 19, 2022.

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Location of Team's base.

Poll closed May 4, 2022.
  1. Missile Silo in Nebraska

    46 vote(s)
    42.2%
  2. Ski Lodge in Colarado

    23 vote(s)
    21.1%
  3. Lighthouse in Hawaii

    28 vote(s)
    25.7%
  4. Ranch in Texas

    19 vote(s)
    17.4%
  5. Summer Camp in Michigin

    12 vote(s)
    11.0%
  6. Junkyard in Washington

    17 vote(s)
    15.6%
  7. Rundown Hotel in North Carolina

    17 vote(s)
    15.6%
Multiple votes are allowed.
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  1. Flightless Man

    Flightless Man Versed in the lewd.

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    Thanks I appreciate this. I just don't know how long it will take.

    I'm really trying to get back to a place where I'm happy enough to continue. But every time I start right now, I end up making the story take a grim turn. I've killed paula, Artemis, Tuppence, and tEd Kord in 4 different versions of the chapter.
     
  2. NightmareWarden

    NightmareWarden Versed in the lewd.

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    If you don’t want to move on to a different story temporarily, try writing some interludes. You don’t have to publish them, just make use of those emotions to reinforce that your protagonist has been teetering on a tightrope with his disruptions. Some have fallen when attempting to balance too much and shattered, others look for moments of vulnerability to knock their targets over completely.

    Heck, you could even take a lesson from With This Ring and write about different universes for a bit.
     
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  3. Akalon3001

    Akalon3001 Getting out there.

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    Found your story yesterday and just finished binge reading it. Well done, it's quite good.

    I hope things get better for you and yours soon. Until then I wish your family and yourself good health and fortunes.
     
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  4. Anjels

    Anjels Know what you're doing yet?

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    It's more to prove a point...Humans are stubborn as fuck so fear the power of our "will".
     
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  5. Anjels

    Anjels Know what you're doing yet?

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    Being immortal is not the same as having infinite respawn ability
     
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