RE:ZERO Fanfic Storyboard and ideas, RE:Paradise Lost

[Thegoldenboy58]

Here's a thread for a storyboard for a rezero fanfic I written, I've gotten around a third of it in this doc

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1jgEiZrv4Kp7ij7io6FOL4Lt0pB33QFcLmvLnmK4PC5M/edit?usp=sharing

I've finished up to the point where all my fully fleshed out ideas are done and I just have to think on how to write the rest, its really big.

Hoping to get some feedback.

 

[FireWalkWithMe99]

You ever write this?

 

[Thegoldenboy58]

Wanted to give an update for my Paradise Lost fic, I was hoping to get it out by Christmas or New Years but unfortunately I failed three of my final exams and three classes so that caused some drama.

And also I just burn out really easily so I can end up not writing for like a month.

I did however, finish at least the beginning of what I wanted to write for the first chapter.

I could upload it as a prologue, but I already have an idea of what I want the prologue to be and I don't want to end posting short chapters over long times.

I actually wrote two versions of the beginning.

Here's the draft for the chapter: https://docs.google.com/document/d/...ouid=103699313082040007388&rtpof=true&sd=true

Here's the first version I wrote, While I was writing it I had an idea for Emilia but I think I kinda went too far, especially since Regulus shouldn't be that important: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1s3W9L5CWYonKyQciMI01etBdDHCIA2t9uPYA-g4AApA/edit?usp=sharing

Second version is a more abridged version of the first, cutting away what I think is fat although it still ended being long: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1jOtFWK-cIbT1vzntIbfKp5hj6kTM65wQBrNsXdIwwvQ/edit?usp=sharing