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Which faction do you guys want to focus on first and why? Ozpin will be prioritized, of course, but what about after that? Ironwood? Cinder? White Fang? Another group?
2. Who do you guys want to win Jaune's heart first? This is a harem, but obviously they don't all confess at the same time. Readers seem to want Ruby, but maybe Weiss or Blake might be better for plot? Or Pyrrha just to get egg on Team RWBY's face?
3. Do you guys think Ruby is too thirsty? If so, I can tone her down for future chapters.
1. Hmm should be Cinders group as Salem would hear of this at the same time as Ozpin, and would defo send Cinder to investigate.
Next would be Ironwood or even the SDC as they would hear rumours of the new tech there and would be interested.
White Fang would probs be last as they would not put much stock into the rumours initially until there's a lot of it around.
But I Think Bandits would be coming in before the white fang, as they would be shitty enough to attack a prospering village/town. But then again those assholes will be put down by Jaunes defences.
2. Hmm I'd say Pyrrha first as that would be hilarious to see Team RWBYs reaction and cause them to confess sooner XD
3. Nah leave Ruby as she is, it's normal for that level of thirst considering how she is surrounded by awesome weapons created by Jaune and upgrading Crescent Rose. Plus he can make awesome cakes and cookies too, perfect dream guy for Ruby.
Great chapter, looking forward to the next one