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[RWBY] RWBY Shorts

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View: https://youtu.be/prixTjWbV_8

If you're going to make a Jaune harem fic, taking cues from Tenchi-Muyo is a good approach. All the girls have great characters, they all bounce off one another, Tenchi is more of an everyman but he has a good character and an arc. You can put two Tenchi characters together and know exactly how they'll bounce off eachother. It's simple but well done character writing.

"Remnant needs a new champion! Jaune... Needs some peace and quiet."
 
AndrewJTalon said:

View: https://youtu.be/prixTjWbV_8

If you're going to make a Jaune harem fic, taking cues from Tenchi-Muyo is a good approach. All the girls have great characters, they all bounce off one another, Tenchi is more of an everyman but he has a good character and an arc. You can put two Tenchi characters together and know exactly how they'll bounce off eachother. It's simple but well done character writing.

"Remnant needs a new champion! Jaune... Needs some peace and quiet."
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I was into Kiyone and Mihoshi.....
 
AndrewJTalon said:

View: https://youtu.be/prixTjWbV_8

If you're going to make a Jaune harem fic, taking cues from Tenchi-Muyo is a good approach. All the girls have great characters, they all bounce off one another, Tenchi is more of an everyman but he has a good character and an arc. You can put two Tenchi characters together and know exactly how they'll bounce off eachother. It's simple but well done character writing.

"Remnant needs a new champion! Jaune... Needs some peace and quiet."
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Having Optimus Prime VO your romance and swordfights just raises the bar a couple of notches.
 
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Having Optimus Prime VO your romance and swordfights just raises the bar a couple of notches.
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wait, what?!

AndrewJTalon said:

View: https://youtu.be/prixTjWbV_8

If you're going to make a Jaune harem fic, taking cues from Tenchi-Muyo is a good approach. All the girls have great characters, they all bounce off one another, Tenchi is more of an everyman but he has a good character and an arc. You can put two Tenchi characters together and know exactly how they'll bounce off eachother. It's simple but well done character writing.

"Remnant needs a new champion! Jaune... Needs some peace and quiet."
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how did i not know about this?!!
 
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Bigger question is why isn't SHE more excited Adam and Jaune are rivals who will fight with manly hotbloodedness? Which she can now write yaoi for?
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Because Adam is the one man in the world who she absolutely doesn't want to write yaoi about (other than anyone blood-related to her like her dad, obviously).
 
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Because Adam is the one man in the world who she absolutely doesn't want to write yaoi about (other than anyone blood-related to her like her dad, obviously).
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Blake seeing to men violently fight to the death quoting poetry as they clash ideals and isn't able to make Yaoi from it? This is truly her worse timeline
Don't ask why Pyrrha Yang Ruby and Weiss are unable to take part in the Vytal Festival
Blake coving and forced to join a team with a stable happy couple with no drama and the 1 man she can't yaoi the rivalry of ... she hates it here
So the Jaune trained into a Hunk from the NSFW thread moved over here for a bit how would it go?
Would he be as big or bigger then Hazel and Ghira?
So for Hazel, his semblance stops him from feeling pain so though he was literally impaled through his chest, he didn't actually feel it. Now its never clarified if he never feels pain at all or if his semblance can be turned on or off, but I just assume that unless he suffers an actual fatal or crippling injury he can just keep on fighting.

For Jaune, we know that he can boost aura regeneration like he did for Weiss. I would guess that he can do that for himself as well and that it's unique to him. Aura recovery seems to just happen with time. Jaune is unique however. This scene just shows how he was getting better at using his semblance.
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If his Semblance boosts his aura instead of draining it, then it effectively makes him a perpetual motion machine.

If Remnant is anything like our world where the laws of physics and non-ideal conditions dictate that energy will be lost to the surroundings (most likely heat), thus rendering man-made perpetual motion impossible, then Jaune's aura-semblance system should be a big deal.

Honestly, it sounds more and more like Jaune is a discount isekai protagonist who ends up with a super rare talent that makes him ultra-powerful in the new world of being a huntsman.
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speaking of cool idea bad execution Cinder
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Cindere is hilarious but it's fanon making a flat character interesting
Willow if any one shows her interest and helps her recover [Tai, Ghira and Kali, Any Arc]
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The Ever After is a bad trip
 
Gur40 said:
For Jaune, we know that he can boost aura regeneration like he did for Weiss. I would guess that he can do that for himself as well and that it's unique to him. Aura recovery seems to just happen with time. Jaune is unique however. This scene just shows how he was getting better at using his semblance.

If his Semblance boosts his aura instead of draining it, then it effectively makes him a perpetual motion machine.

If Remnant is anything like our world where the laws of physics and non-ideal conditions dictate that energy will be lost to the surroundings (most likely heat), thus rendering man-made perpetual motion impossible, then Jaune's aura-semblance system should be a big deal.
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This exact moment proves that he can absolutely do this

I think like every other Shonen series,Remnant has a "Field of Magic", in the sense that everything related to its power system is able to bend or bypass the laws of Physics.

So while a Perpetual Motion machine using "normal" means is impossible like irl, a sufficiently capable "magician" can easily bypass it, if not fully than partially.

Unfortunately there is no "partially" breaking of Laws of Thermodynamics, as they are very binary in there nature(something is either permitted, or it is not, no other ways about it)

So, due to the writers' own folly, they accidentally gave him a perpetual motion engine for a "Soul" power. One that can enhance and heal others.

Oh my god somebody send him to tibetean monks that will teach him about, "flow", 'breathe" and "motion" of aura/chi already, he'll be Turbo Charging people like Naruto in KCM by the next day.

I think I have commented on r/fnki already how Aura amp and Adam's moon slice can probably build a magic the gathering infinite damage deck.
 
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So the Jaune trained into a Hunk from the NSFW thread moved over here for a bit how would it go?
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Some funny ideas for the Hunk Jaune consept:

- Jacked Jaune is able to have some relatable conversations with Yang and Blake due to his shoulders being so big and his waist so thin its almost impossible to find any good shirts or similar upper body clothes that don't look like big sacks (Yang has a similar problem due to her Juganauts), and has a hard time finding pants (not like regular fanon Jaune doesn't have that problem anyway due to different reasons) that fit due to his thighs being so muscular (Blake has a similar issue with her bellabooty).
fun fact: the thighs becomming to big for pants due to muscle is actually something I experiance due to biking way to much (including riding to work every day).

- Hunk Jaune is incredibly popular with all the girls in his team and team RWBY, not because he's muscular, but because he wears pants with big pockets while they're all running around looking lke super-models with no pockets whatsoever and he lets them put their stuff in them (Yang is the only one with somekind of space to put things, and while her cleavage is big, there's only so much she can put in there).
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ok, but by that logic we would never have had Rusted Knight Jaune.
now tell me, does that seem worth it to you?

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- Hunk Jaune is incredibly popular with all the girls in his team and team RWBY, not because he's muscular, but because he wears pants with big pockets while they're all running around looking lke super-models with no pockets whatsoever and he lets them put their stuff in them (Yang is the only one with somekind of space to put things, and while her cleavage is big, there's only so much she can put in there).
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men's pockets are to women, what women's handbags are to men.
 
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So a small idea/lore bit. Not super relevant but something I feel Pyrrha and Weiss would know but the others are unaware of.

All big celebrities/performers have their aura unlocked.

They just travel so much that it'd be dumb not to, that and random crazy fans, terrorist, other celebrities....yeah having a shield that is always with you is pretty important.

Notably this does not mean they are combat trained so they still hire hunters for body guards and escorts.
 
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After losing Roman, Ruby gasping and point at Neo as her new Nemesis to Cinder's continued Jealousy

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I really hope this was intetional and CRWBY doesn't actually think that cinder is her nemesis.

Like, props to them, it's pretty good if this was intetional. If it wasn't then It's kinda amazing how they make everyone else a better choice for a nemesis than cinder.

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⠀Let Ruby have her robot wife!
I think it being one sided might be the point?

Like Cinder hates Ruby but Ruby cares more about saving the world than personal vendettas.

Actually now that I think about it, Cinder doesn't seem to have much of a personal grudge against Jaune either despite his grudge against her.

Holy shit is Cinder just in a love triangle but instead of romantic partners it's nemesises (Nemisi? Nems?)
 
Blake wasn't a member of the White Fang. She was more of a mascot. Adam was her minder to keep her out of trouble and out of the bosses hair. He only underestimated what a bored Blake could do once.

No one wanted a repeat of the "World's Largest Yarnball" incident.

Bonus:that incident is how Jaune recognizes Blake… to her horror.
 
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Blake wasn't a member of the White Fang. She was more of a mascot. Adam was her minder to keep her out of trouble and out of the bosses hair. He only underestimated what a bored Blake could do once.

No one wanted a repeat of the "World's Largest Yarnball" incident.

Bonus:that incident is how Jaune recognizes Blake… to her horror.
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This really made me want to find a old meme picture but I can't :(

It's little protester white fang kid Blake holding a sign that says "big dicks only" and hissing at a offscreen man who you can only see the shaking hand of
 
The Arc Clan: Blake's Uncle Cat
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    • Weiss dragged Jaune into RWBY's common room, once again. She points at a dark skinned man in a slick red coat and tasteful white slacks.

    Weiss: "You! This-This is another of your crazy relatives!"

    Man: "This is mine!" Picks up a sock "And this is mine!" Claims a pillow

    Jaune: "What?"

    Weiss: "Whenever someone weird or bizarre shows up, chances are, it's got something to do with you!"

    Jaune: "I have never seen this man in my life!"

    Man: spins around "Who are you?"

    Jaune: "Um, I'm Jaune-"

    Man: "Doesn't matter, you're mine now!" Sprays him in the face.

    Jaune: "BWEH! BLACH! What is this?"

    Man: "You're mine now!"

    Blake charges in with a scowl.

    Blake: "Uncle Cat!"

    Cat: "Oh, hey Blake!"

    Weiss: slow, tense "Your Uncle... Named Cat?"

    Blake: "Yes, he's named Cat!"

    Weiss: "Isn't that stereotypical?"

    Blake: "You don't get to say anything about that-AND HANDS OFF! He's mine!"

    Cat: "Well... I saw him first!"

    Blake: "You didn't! He's mine!"

    Cat: sniff "Well, I didn't want him anyway! His jeans and boots are a terrible combination!"

    Blake: "Get your musk off him!"

    Cat: "You do it! That's how it works!"

    Blake sighs.

    Blake: "He is my fiance!"

    Cat: "How long you been together?"

    Jaune: "Well, how long do you count these things?"

    Cat: "I have a girlfriend for a full twenty minutes once! Great time, got sick of her!"

    Weiss opens her mouth.

    Blake: "Not. A word."

    Cat: "Woo! So far, this has been a great day! I've eaten five times, slept six, and made many things mine! Except for that!" Makes a distasteful look at a pillow, which he tosses away "I don't want it!"

    Yang and Ruby enter and stare at the mess.

    Yang: "Who's this guy?"

    Blake: "My uncle."

    Cat: "This is mine too!" Picks up Crescent Rose.

    Ruby: "No! No, that's mine!"

    Cat: "But I touched it! It's mine!"

    Ruby: "No it isn't!"

    Cat: "Meowr!"

    Ruby: "Give it back!"

    Cat: "Nuh uh! Who you think I am, a dog?"

    Ruby: "Dogs are better!"

    Cat: "Hahaha! How'd you get in, a special needs student scholarship?"

    Jaune has to reach out and pull the furious Ruby back.

    Ruby: "I'm gonna call Zwei to kick your ass!"

    Cat: "HA! That'll be the day!"

    Blake: "We're not calling Zwei!"

    Blake sighs...

    Blake: "Yang? Do you have a... Do you have that..." mumbles

    Yang: "Do I have that what?"

    Blake: "Laser... mumble..."

    Jaune: "Laser pointer?"

    Blake: "JAUNE!"

    Weiss: grins "Ohoho!"

    Blake: "Shut up!"

    Yang: snickers, pulls it out "Yup~!"

    Blake: hiss "You said you got rid of it!"

    Yang: "And aren't you glad I didn't?"

    Blake: "I can't trust you with it!"

    Jaune sighs, and takes the laser pointer. He turns it on and points it at the couch.

    Cat: "Wha-What's that?" He pounces on it "Hey! That's mine now too!"

    Jaune moved the laser dot around the room, Cat chasing it around until he goes right out the door into the hallway.

    Cat: "Hey! Where'd it go?"

    Weiss: "Where indeed~?"

    Cat: "Hmmm... Oh right! I just decided to see how you're doing!"

    Blake: tightly "I'm fine! I'm very happy with my fiance!"

    Cat: "Great! Now, I'm gonna go make more things mine, and see if I can have sex with something!" He slinks off, still looking cool as he does so

    Weiss: smug "... Your uncle huh?"

    Blake: "Still shut up!" Blake sighs and hugs Jaune. She makes a face. "Ugh. His musk is still all over you!"

    Jaune: "I have questions about that."

    Blake: "No. No, you don't."

    Jaune: "Yeah, you're right."

    Blake: "Now you're having a shower. I will go with you to make sure it's all scrubbed away."

    Yang: "Aha. Aha." grabs Jaune's arm "Yeah no. I'm scrubbing him clean."

    Blake: "I am!"

    Ruby: "I AM! He touched my Crescent Rose too!"

    Weiss: rolls her eyes "How about I wash off Jaune? It's not like you all have actual feelings for him."

    Silence. Yang, Blake and Ruby all flush. Jaune flush.

    Weiss: "OH COME ON!"

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    I found a new relative for Blake. Should have been obvious really.


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    • A few ideas here.

    Someone awakens Kali's aura and her semblance is to turn allies into catgirls/boys (temporary or permanent your pick)
    Adam in his overeagerness to hurt humans and huntsmen ends up destroying the beacon supply chain of caffeine and chocolate.

    Everyone is grumpy and the monthlies are coming.

    All of beacon is about to crash out on Adam.

    For a assignment everyone is supposed to write a book draft and see if it's good enough for publication.

    A few students go above and beyond (or accidentally) getting their stuff published.

    (Blake may have been arrested for trying to sneak her book into a shop that isn't for porn.)

    Yang gets expelled for incredible acts of violence so she opens a hair salon.


    The Ruby gang don't fall into the everafter.

    They fall into RWBY chibi.

    The chibi are treating this like a attack on Titan parody.

    Maybe also a King Kong parody depending on if Jaune can catch chibi Pyrrha

    Everyone is sick and tired of Nora forcing every day to be pancake day so they are trying to make her hate pancakes.

    (Could go funny or fucked up. You want fucked up? Look up pancake syndrome. I almost accidentally killed my mom with that.)

    Cinder and Neo get hit with a semblance that makes their thoughts narrated audibly.

    Neo enjoys. Cinder does not.


    Roman Torchwick trying to steal candy from baby Adrian and the universe punishing him for the attempts.
     
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    His backstory is legitimately insane.

    He's the descendant of the cat of the main character who got put in suspended animation for a shit ton of time.

    While he was out his cat had generations upon generations of descendants who evolved like humans did (but from cats instead of monkeys) and passed down the lore of one day going to paradise aka opening up a hotdog stand.

    Then they began fighting over the colors of the hotdog stand in the lore and all killed each other except for Cat and another one who lived just long enough to tell the main character all this then died of old age.
     
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    On Worldbuilding: The History of the Faunus and Mankind
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    • So, after the Moonshatter, the Faunus would most likely have had the physical and sensory advantages over humans. So Faunus empires rising that enslaved humanity would be natural. But over time, the canonical issue of Faunus tribes mixing would arise. To quote:

    As far as everyone's aware, Faunus have been around as long as mankind, if not a little longer. History gets a little fuzzy past a certain point, but we do know that their kind and ours are completely compatible, from a... (slight stuttering) a biological standpoint. Take two wolf Faunus, and you'll get a little wolf cub kiddo. A wolf Faunus and a human also typically means that your little bundle of joy's teething days could get a little dicey. But if you take a wolf Faunus and a bull Faunus, for example, it's a complete roll of the dice. For all you know you could be cleaning up your son's... shedded snake skin. (shudders)
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    This would make it hard to interbreed between Faunus tribes without a lot of confusion over paternity, which has caused civil wars before. As a result, the various Faunus tribes became more insular and divided against eachother, and stagnated in technology due to their physical abilities. As a result, humans had to be more united than Faunus and focused more on developing technology, and this helped contribute to humanity eventually rising and becoming dominant over the Faunus.

    I feel this adds a lot more depth to the world, gives White Fang some rallying points (even if they are, like all calls to ethnonationalism, bullshit), and gives a lot more agency to the Faunus beyond them being perpetual victims. What do you think? What could have various ancient Faunus empires have been like? What are their legacies? Influences? And so on?
     
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