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[RWBY] RWBY Shorts

Neo Cinder Summer Winter all dominating and reversal play
Weiss Ruby Velvet and Blake i see as switch
Emerald Yang Raven pure Sub
would Remnant have a taboo on BDSM or would the great war help people express them selves like masochist and sadist having bad PR before the color wars and express yourself Era

Who would Tai reacting to Ruby V4 outfit?
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i get that Yang and Ruby love there dad but man is a ok dad not a good one

Step Sibling War or Mrs. Xia Long
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The Lucky Blonde guy either way

Ruby First Date
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Jaune thinking: from a 10 to 11

speaking of Ruby
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maybe she could pull a snake and use it like the cardboard box?

They Found Blake Fic
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Weiss Core
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and new Daddy and Mommy
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lost episode
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Oz lost a bet
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he rocks it though

Ren Apron
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we need more Ren Ruby and Jaune baking


Jaune plans for Salem forces vs Everyone else's
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Robyn bs on exposing the truth of Tyrian
Ironwood letting Watts have his gloves?
etc..
Jaune: Just kill the bad guys it's not hard just group up and hit them til they die! [says the Stamina freak with massive Aura]

wait in the battle of Haven Jaune was down but his Aura up... could Cinder even kill him? like she was kicking his ass but the guy wasn't staying down, would he have outlasted her and won by stamina?

i HATE Hazel
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If Jaune was angrier like Hazel i can see him live up to the Salem comparison CRWBY said
Snaped Jaune to Hazel:
You gave up, when you couldn't avenge your sister you folded.
You didn't go FARE ENOUGH!
She can Regenerate? His her mind a safe? Her Soul? NO!
Torture her Mind! Break her WILL! SHATTER HER SOUL!

i would love to See his Friends reaction to a Very determined revenge filled Jaune that lives up to his Grimm Eclipse counterpart unstoppable man
Canon just disappointing
Fanon :If Salem was sealed to her castle and the whale was a work around with Oz Cane blast freeing her she'd be more interesting

Canon:
Salem was severely depressed after the death of her children.
Oz spent literal life times drinking himself to death so she must have done something similar.
She fears a united humanity and knows what there capable of when properly motivated and while they can't kill her they could potentially capture her and torture her endlessly.
Interesting thought though is that if this is true it means that Salem actually has more faith in humanity then Ozma.
Which when you think about it actually makes sense considering she rallied the first generation of humanity against the Gods.
Meanwhile Ozma spends all of his time around them and sees how petty and hateful there are towards one another so he has probably lost faith in them especially after the Great War.
 
Oz spent literal life times drinking himself to death
Oh this gives me a brain tickle.

Ok so hear me out. The past lives on as legends and stories right?

So let's assume that drunk hermit OZ picks somewhere secluded to live, angrily chases people off, and has a bit of a weird accident caused by the constant alcohol poisoning.

Now let's say all this got passed down as a story.


Oz is shrek.

It's got me laughing because I'm picturing Oz telling the story of meeting the original maidens and he's framing it like a sweet and noble thing.

When the reality was a half mad and drunk Forrest man with no pants screaming at some very confused and concerned teenagers.

"WHAT ARE YA DOIN IN MEH SWAMP!"

Before passing out face.first in the (hopefully) mud.


Coincidentally in modern times Shrek is banned in beacon.
 
You know what's a shame, that rusted knight jaune never train with his aura while waiting for team rwby to drop in everafter. Could have gotten him to do some crazy eldritch stuff with his aura.
Like in his grief and madness He pushed through the known boundaries of aura into the unknown.
 
You know what's a shame, that rusted knight jaune never train with his aura while waiting for team rwby to drop in everafter. Could have gotten him to do some crazy eldritch stuff with his aura.
Like in his grief and madness He pushed through the known boundaries of aura into the unknown.

Or by living in a place with magic for so long he gained the ability to use magic.
 
Dexter Watts New
Despite being a born and bred Atlas native Dexter Watts hated the cold.

Well it wasn't very cold in Atlas right now. What with about a quarter of it being on fire.

Dexter lit up a cigar while he watched his home burn from the top of the biggest building still standing in Atlas.

His father always hated cigars and cigarettes. It made the drag of nicotine hit all the sweeter.

"Come to sit with me cousin?"

She always knew where to find him. In the entire world nobody knew him better than her.

He hopes he won't have to kill her.

"Dexter."

"Penny."

"Why?"

"You will have to be a bit more specific with your questioning dear cousin."

"Why are you burning Atlas?"

Dexter thought about if he should tell her. His father being a traitor to humanity and working with that pathetic creature Salem, and for what? A ego stroke?

He thought about Atlas and Vale being just as bad. Assassinations and lives ruined just for the tiniest advantage against Salem. People enslaved just to keep the dust flowing.

Nobody deserves to win. Not like this.

"It needed to be done."

No. Best not to tell her. Let her remain blissfully ignorant a little bit longer.

Tears well up in the corner of her eyes (a saline solution his uncle whipped up to help sell the illusion of flesh) before her eyes harden.

"Specialist Dexter Watts of the Atlas Research and Development division you are accused of grand treason and terrorism. Do not resist arrest or lethal force will be deployed."

Always the good girl. Happily following orders (well maybe not in this case).

What a shame.

Dexter stood up and dropped his cigar over the edge. One more fire wouldn't hurt.

"I do not wish to fight you cousin."

The backpack he wore (so similar and yet so different to her own) unfolded and flowed down his arms with plates of shifting metal before turning into a pair of gauntlets.

"But I will dismantle you if I must."
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Meet Dexter Watts.

Another artificial human, but from a completely different path.

Arthur watts the mad bastard made computer code into DNA.

He wrote Dexter's genetics from the ground up making him as perfect as he could.

And then abandoned him when he fucked off to mommy salami.

Dexter has through his own genius ferreted out most of the big secrets of both factions and is disgusted with them both.

So he plans to tear both factions apart. Step 1 of his plan is to make them all lose.

He's going to try to get his hands on the sword and use it to destroy any of the other relics.
 
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Who would Tai reacting to Ruby V4 outfit?

Tai: "NO! Absolutely not! My little girl is not going to have a cleavage wind... say, you're Isabel's boy, right? With the farms and the brewery? And you were supposed to go to medical school?"
Jaune: "Um..."
Tai: "Silly me, Ruby's fashion sense is perfect! You kids have fun now! Bring me grandkids and a rich son-in-law, but not too soon!"
Ruby: "DAD!"
Tai: "Just for reference, this is what her mother looked like in a bikini-"
Ruby: *shriek*
 
Tai: "NO! Absolutely not! My little girl is not going to have a cleavage wind... say, you're Isabel's boy, right? With the farms and the brewery? And you were supposed to go to medical school?"
Jaune: "Um..."
Tai: "Silly me, Ruby's fashion sense is perfect! You kids have fun now! Bring me grandkids and a rich son-in-law, but not too soon!"
Ruby: "DAD!"
Tai: "Just for reference, this is what her mother looked like in a bikini-"
Ruby: *shriek*
... Tai handing out Summer and Raven Bikini outfits to get his Daughters hitched is hilarious
we should continue this in the NSFW Thread :)

Dating Yang or Ruby
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speaking of Dating Yang

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Ren and Jaune enjoy the double date as after the first accident both girls kept 'dropping' food into there cleavage

If Atlas council who some fandom idea of them being part of human trafficking actually went incompetent corrupt working with Watts just like Gele
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WE LITERALLY HAVE AN ARMY OF SOULESS MONSTER LEAD BY A FLYING GIANT WITH A CASTLE LEAD BY AN EVIL QUEEN OUTSIDE ARE DOORS!
TIME AND PLACE TO COMPLAIN ABOUT MILITARY OVERREACH!
I DON'T THINK JIMMY WENT TO FAR!
I THINK HE WAS INCOPEDENT [Because the writers are incompedent]

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We need more EVIL SCIENTISTS!

Weiss Jaune and Ruby babysitting Adrien [Saph and Terra date night]
and Pyrrha Ren and Nora baby sitting Mia [Katy Daughter]
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love the idea of overprotective big siblings/parental figures

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I HATE Rosegarden but love Oscar being a KID
Nora and Ren Son deserves better then having his soul fused with OZ

What i see Roman Death as
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irony

Role Swap
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Salem believes in people and is great and being a circle breaker
Oz doesn't believe in people but is good at being a shadow king
 
A few ideas:

-For The Arc Clan, Alice's parents come to visit Beacon. Her mother is Toriel, a goat Faunus. Her father is Sans Arc, a human with the Skeleton Semblance. They might also bring along their adopted son Frisk and Toriel's son Asriel from her previous marriage. And... Uncle Papyrus.

-More ideas for Yang undergoing a redo and getting sent back in time! How does she approach things?

-Tangy Arc has some questions for Ozpin. And she's gonna get some answers.

-Teams JNPR and RWBY go to a comic convention. Let's think of some fun misadventures for them.

-Another Whiter Rose idea: Whitley is trapped in a time loop. And only Ruby believes him.
 
-More ideas for Yang undergoing a redo and getting sent back in time! How does she approach things?
What the Butterfly or big change?
Jaune died when he was poisoned and Ascended?
Weiss Died in Haven?
Neo Killed Ruby Early?
So many what ifs what lead to Yang time traveling

and she punched Blake last i remember so, first butterfly to why Yang doesn't go full mommy issues x2 with Blake is Sun snitches on WHY Blake Ran and Returned
She ran to her Mansion to hide behind her parents and came back AFTER Sun saved her from being kidnapped and her Parents killed
POST:
Yang: I miss Blake
Blake: I Will destroy the White Fang

Far-Profit-47•5m ago
That's what Sun thought, In reality she wanted to hide away in her parents house (parents she hasn't interacted with in years)

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That house was a mansion with a security team


Far-Profit-47•1m ago
And then she goes to the front door to confront to head members of the white fang, but she still isn't there to fight, just to get away from the white fang while making very clear to the white fang where she is

And how much Does THIS Yang know about Salem?
Infinite Regen with Depression?
Sealed away but able to speak with her minions through Seer?
Hounded the SEW and plans to do the same to Ruby?
The Brothers are assholes gods [Light obsessed with Order and Dark stuck in his brother shadow with a chip on his shoulder]?
The 1 win con they have in canon, the Blacksmith or Ever After?
what happened and what will she do?

Hell how would Ruby Brakedown be if it was with others?
NicolaNeko • 36m ago
Oscar trying to talk her down would probably be met with "And who's talking now? Is it Oscar or Ozpin? Do you even know anymore? It's your designs and instructions that got us stuck here. Was that just another part of your plan?"

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Crow:
"You nearly let us all die. digging for the bottom of a bottle. What would you know about anything!
Mom never came home. You left me; US alone! Why did you come home instead of her!!"

DarkAlatreon • 1h ago
If Ruby wanted to go ballistic, she could ask Nora if her happy-go-lucky personality is the result of her actually being that air-headed, or if she puts up an act so she could have people at least pretend to like her.

Who Ever Dates Jaune is Dating Remnant #1 Childhood Hero
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Dating your fairy tale crush beat dating a living waifu?

Neo is Trivia and her imaginary friend fused so
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and could Aura Amp Separate them again?

Who has this group dynamic?
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Ren and Nora WERE this to Oscar but then... Atlas

Grauntie Rin dad was a cheater and she has a Niece/grand niece?
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Making her Jaune Cousin?

SI BS ENDING LEAK
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Weiss Yang
Ruby Blake
the others joining the harem
 
A thought I had.

Atlas has the best Technological developments in the sci fi world of RWBY.

So instead of juat taking the City even further up where they'll have to face.

- Flying Grimm which they know exist and can fuck them up

- Eventual depletion of Food, water, Dust, ammunition and other resources that will cause civil unrest as they are cut off from the rest of the world.

Why don't they use their advanced computers and figure out an architectural creation that

-safely lowers them down

- at the same time converts their city into an impenetrable defense with automated energy weapons, shielding technology, threat monitoring and alarm systems etc.

- Then yse the Staff of creation and the blueprints of above to instantly create it.

The lowering system will make sure that once the staff's effects happen(the previous creation fades once a new creation is made) they are safe and rest of the syatem is online to defend them.

Like is it maybe just the engineer in me or did their entire problem solving think tank sucks ass?

Sure it will be nice that Penny gets a real himan body but the Maiden's powers confirm that she doesn't need a human body to be a real girl and also it's the fate of Humanity on the line?

Somebody help me understand why they couldn't do this? It has been bothering me since I watched the v8
 
Atlas arc SUCKED!
yes turning Penny human was dumb
everything in the arc was just stupid!
the only smart thing was the Hound and Whitley!
and as for V9?
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I like what it is trying to say, but Ruby learning to accept herself did nothing to grow her.

Or maybe that was the point it was trying to make and say that Ruby doesn't need to grow cause she is already the perfect version of herself?

I dunno, Media literacy is hard.
 
Game Mechanics Semblance - Resident Evil New
Here's a fun idea: Jaune's Semblance is sort of The Gamer, but it uses the elements of one particular game for his abilities. In this case, Resident Evil.

Jaune: "Hang on... Combine herbs... Water... And there! Healing potion!"

Pyrrha: "Thanks Jaune!"

Weiss: "W-Wait, how does that work?! Random herbs just show up and you can make a healing concoction out of it?!"

Jaune: "Pretty much!"

Ruby: "Now we need to get into this locked room!"

Jaune: "Hang on, we gotta do a puzzle!"

Weiss: "Wha-WHEN DID THAT SHOW UP?!"

Jaune: "Don't know, but if we align the shadows..."

A key pops out of nowhere.

Jaune: "There we go!"

Weiss: "Buh... Wha... WHERE DID THAT COME FROM?! There's NO WAY that could-"

Jaune unlocks the door.

Yang: "Heh. That's pretty handy, Ladykiller! You're not gonna use that to spy on me in the locker room, are you?"

Jaune: "H-Huh? N-No!"

Yang: "Shame~."

Nora: "OOH! OOH! Be careful Jaune, or you'll end up... A Jaune sandwich!"

Jaune: "Huh? How does that make sense?"

Nora: winks at the audience "Oh, it's not for you."

Weiss: frothing at the mouth
 
The Knight Who Defied Fate, and the Seven Who Followed Him New
The Knight Who Defied Fate, and the Seven Who Followed Him

Jaune Arc dragged his sword through the scorched remains of Vale.

What used to be a city.
What used to be laughter.
What used to be home.

The sky overhead had split into two jagged wounds, one of searing white light, one of endless black smoke, where the Brother Gods tore at reality out of boredom, cruelty, or some combination of both.

Jaune's armor steamed from divine strikes. His Aura flickered like a dying star. Every motion was pain. But he kept walking. He had watched everyone die... It should have been him.

Ruby burned out her silver eyes stopping a wave of divine Grimm. Weiss froze protecting thousands, and shattered like glass. Blake died fighting to protect the Faunus homeland one last time. Yang went down swinging, taking a Titan with her. Ren and Nora died together, protecting their daughter. And Pyrrha, gods, Pyrrha, fell saving a village that no longer existed.

Only two had survived with him the longest:
Neo, who stepped in front of a killing blow meant for him, her eyes wide with a final, genuine emotion he had never seen before.
Cinder, who spent every drop of Maiden power she had ever stolen to pin the God of Darkness to the ground so Jaune's sword could strike true.

He held their bodies until the winds turned their ashes to nothing. He had nothing left to lose.
And a single man with nothing left to lose was the most dangerous thing in existence.

Jaune charged the gods, and their cowards of servants Salem and Ozpin. The battle lasted days. Or minutes. Time bent and twisted under their power. But in the end: Jaune Arc, the Rusty Knight, the last man on Remnant…killed the gods. The world ended with him standing alone amidst divine corpses.

A crack in the world opened behind him. Reality, exhausted, began collapsing. He closed his eyes finally thinking its over and he can be with them. He fell through ..into the Ever After.

The air of the Ever After was impossible warm. Gentle. Comforting.Which only made Jaune's trembling worse. He's thinking why he is here. He hasnt been here since so many years ago. Why cant he just die. His sword slipped from his hand as he collapsed near the Tree. He dug his fingers into the grass, panting, trying to breathe past the crushing grief.

A shadow fell over him.
"You have come far," the Blacksmith murmured, kneeling beside him. "Farther than any mortal has ever walked." Jaune coughed, blood staining the grass. "I don't… I don't want to keep going. They're all gone. Every one of them."
The Blacksmith placed a cool hand against the cracked heartplate of his armor.

"Loss defines a blade's edge. But you..."
Her eyes softened. "You have been sharpened beyond endurance." Jaune clenched his jaw.
"I couldn't save Ruby. Or Weiss. Or..."
"You saved them all," she said firmly. "Just not in the world you began in."

Seven threads materialized around her, frayed yet glowing. "These are the echoes of the ones you love, in other timelines, other endings." Jaune stared, breath trembling. "I… I died for them, didn't I?" "Yes," she said. "In every timeline but your own." A pause.

"They would do anything to change that."
The threads brightened, showing him glimpse
Ruby, broken and alone.,Weiss, sinking with Atlas.,Blake, half-Grimm, sobbing.Yang, lost in the dark.Pyrrha, collapsing in the ruins of Beacon.Neo, screaming silently over his dead body.Cinder, weeping beside his corpse on her ash throne.

The Blacksmith whispered: "Watch. Remember. And prepare." jaune states intently as the Blacksmith shows him their fate in the other timeliness.

Ruby : the broken Hero
Storm clouds swallowed Vacuo. Grimm swarmed endlessly. Ruby stumbled on shaking legs, Crescent Rose snapped in half, her silver eyes flickering weakly.

She collapsed next to a broken Huntsman statue, tears streaking through soot.
"I'm sorry," she whispered. "I tried… I really tried…" Shadows closed in, and a golden explosion ripped the Grimm apart. "Ruby!"

Jaune dropped beside her, one arm around her back, the other raising his shield to block a hail of claws and teeth. "Stay with me," he whispered. "I'm not letting the world take you too." Ruby sobbed into his chest. "I don't want to fight anymore…"

"Then don't," Jaune murmured. "Just let me protect you." He expanded his shield. Aura sparked violently. His heartbeat slowed.
As the light consumed the Grimm, Ruby clutched his armor and felt him fall still. Then a blindly light surged out of his body and she closed her eyes. When she opened her eyes again, she lay beneath a familiar Tree.
As she gets her bearing and starts to realize what happens, the blacksmith appears.

The Blacksmith asked softly: "Do you wish to change the ending you refused to accept?"
Ruby forced herself to her feet. "Yes."




Weiss Schnee : The Princess of a fallen kingdom.

Atlas was falling. The entire kingdom collapsed in slow motion, a tidal wave of ice, metal, fire, and smoke. Weiss struggled to summon a glyph, but Salem's corruption burned across her arm. She slipped off the edge.
Wind roared. Then, "Got you!" Jaune caught her, glyphs exploding under his boots from pure Aura as he pinned them to a piece of falling debris. He notices an escape pod in the debris they are clinging to.

"Jaune,you'll fall too!"
He smiled sadly. "Then I'll fall protecting you."
He grabbed and shoved her into the escape pod, slammed the door "Weiss, live. For all of us." He hit the eject, and as the pod escapes all she sees is jaune jumping off and slamming his sword into a Grimm Titan forced them to fall to their death. As weiss sees all this she starts to feel something and before she faints she sees in the corner of her eye a flash of gold.

Weiss awoke at the Tree, sobbing. But once she hears the offer. "I won't let him die again."

Blake Belladonna: the Beauty cursed to be a beast.

Blake crouched in the ruins of Menagerie, claws dripping Grimm ichor, half-feral. Her shadow clones wavered; her humanity flickered. A Grimm pounced. A golden blade split it in two.
"Blake," Jaune whispered, stepping toward her cautiously. "You're still in there."

"I'll hurt you," she growled, voice warping. "Stay back..." He walked up and wrapped his arms around her. "Then hurt me," he whispered. "If that's what it takes." She trembled. Claws retracted. Tears hit his armor. "Why… why save me…?" "Because you deserve to be saved."

He purged the Grimm corruption using every drop of Aura he had. He died doing it. A flash of gold and Blake woke beneath the Tree and whispered: "Please… don't take him from me again."
All the blacksmith just gives a simple nod.


Yang Xiao Long : the lost dragon

Yang wandered the void, a silent, infinite nothing. No color. No gravity. No direction.
Her aura barely flickered. Then a beacon of gold flashed beside her. "Yang! Grab my hand!" Jaune pulled her upward, muscles straining, cracks spreading through his aura like shattering glass.

"Jaune, don't, The Void. it's pulling you in!" she cried. Jaune only smiled sadly. "I know," he said. "But if you go back… the others still have a chance." The darkness swallowed him up to the chest. "JAUNE!" His eyes softened. "Tell Ruby… tell everyone… I never stopped believing."
He shoved her upward with a final burst.
Yang awoke under the Tree, fists shaking, eyes red. "No more. I'm getting him back."

Pyrrha Nikos : The Champion that finally lost.

Pyrrha wandered Beacon's ruins, guilt devouring her. She lived. Thousands didn't. She touched the cracked floor where Cinder struck her years ago. "Why… why did I survive…?" she whispered.
Footsteps. Heavy, familiar. "Pyrrha."
She turned, and broke down, collapsing into Jaune's arms. "I failed everyone," she sobbed.

"No," he whispered. "You were forced to live in a world that didn't deserve you." He held her as Grimm closed in. "I'll get you out." He waves a staff and shoved her through a relic portal he created and slammed it shut behind her. She screamed his name as the light consumed her.

At the Tree, she rose shakily. Pyrrha goes and listens to the blacksmith offer and accepts it
"This time… I protect him."

Neo : The Silent Comfort of a Knight's Sacrifice

Neo had no one left to hate. Revenge turned to loneliness. She wandered destroyed kingdoms, hunted by Salem's forces. A Grimm lunged.
A golden sword impaled it. Jaune knelt beside her, wounded badly. Neo signed shakily:
Why save me after everything? "Because you deserved better than the person I used to be," he murmured.

He carried her to safety, bleeding heavily the whole way. He died at her side. Neo awoke at the Tree, biting her lip until it bled. She chose the doorway instantly.

Cinder Fall: : the Queen of Ashes.
Cinder sat on her throne of ash. She had killed Salem. She had conquered the world. And she had never felt more empty. A lone figure staggered into her hall. Jaune. Barely standing.

"Come to kill me?Please do it!" she asked and pleades softly. "No," he said. "its to save you."

A divine Grimm Titan burst from the wall.

Cinder raised a hand, but Jaune moved first, tackling her to the ground, shielding her with his own body. "NO!" she screamed as his armor cracked. He died whispering her name.
She woke sobbing at the Tree. "…I want to change," she whispered. "Please."
The Blacksmith opened the doorway.

"They walk because you crawled." Back in the Ever After, Jaune trembled. They died for me… in every timeline?" The Blacksmith nodded. "You inspire sacrifice. And now, sacrifice inspires return." Seven portals pulsed behind her.

"They have chosen to walk backward through fate." Jaune swallowed. "What… what do they want?" The Blacksmith touched his heartplate.
"You." A long pause. "And a world where you live."

The portals burst open in a circle around him.
Ruby stumbled out first, eyes widening. Her voice cracked:"…Jaune?"Weiss covered her mouth, tears spilling instantly. "He's alive…"
Blake froze, hands shaking, as if afraid he'd vanish. Yang whispered, "Holy… you look like you fought God." Jaune forced a sad smile, while coughing up abit of blood.
"I did."

Pyrrha fell to her knees, hand over her heart.
"Fate brought me back to you…" Neo ran to him, hugging his leg, refusing to let go. Cinder stared at him, amber eyes trembling. "You… you died in my arms…"Jaune looked at them all, breath trembling.

"You shouldn't be here." Ruby stepped forward, determination blazing. "We're here because you never gave up on us." Pyrrha nodded. "Now it's our turn." Yang cracked her knuckles. "We're saving you whether you like it or not."

Neo nodded sharply. Cinder whispered, voice soft as ash: "This time… you live."
Jaune swallowed hard. "…All of you came back… for me?" Ruby smiled through tears.
"No, Jaune. We came back with you." After that The Blacksmith lifted her hammer. Each world followed by a clanging of metal on metal, "The past awaits, Rewrite it.Together."

As she says this, a blast of light appears from the anvil where she was hitting. It moved as if it was dancing to unheard music. It slowly shrunk down with each movement until it got to the size of a person. It then formed a golden portal.
The golden portal opened, leading anyone willing to go, back in time.

Jaune stepped forward, surrounded by seven women who had walked through hell to reach him.
 
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Nora: "OOH! OOH! Be careful Jaune, or you'll end up... A Jaune sandwich!"

Jaune: "Huh? How does that make sense?"

Nora: winks at the audience "Oh, it's not for you."

Weiss: frothing at the mouth

Instead of the Rusted Knight, future Jaune is a Chris Redfield expy.

Yang: *neck craning upwards* "Hubba hubba."
Blake: *discreetly wiping away drool* "Big humie yum-yum~"

Not to mention Cinder's reaction.

Cinder: "I - what the hell?"
Pyrrha: *cocks her pistols* "What?"
Cinder: "A tube-top and a miniskirt? That's what you're going to fight me in?"
Pyrrha: *shrugs* "I dunno, it felt just right."
 
If SEW actually had Godly Power!
or the Eyes that match Uchiha
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Using the Relic or Jaune Amping her eyes?

Pyrrha needed a Rival like Arslan
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Put considering Retcon Canon Jaune was and is a complete freak of growth rate, She hit the Jackpot with him

Atlas ARC had them infiltrate a ball and not dress up again?
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Could of Shown Cinder NOT being the only victim of the elites

Nora or Gremlin Ruby/Weiss?
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or the Arc Twins?

Cinder is Fully Hounded For Her Failures
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Ruby Eye's Free her just long enough for Either Her Or Jaune to End Cinder on her terms ironically putting the rabid dog down

We Saw the Summer Maiden with a Cloak
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Aura farm or move like an injured Gundam
 
I had a more serious idea for Arslan's timeline in The Great Temporal Step-Sibling War. In the Ever After, when they confront the Blacksmith. Arslan is afraid the Blacksmith will reveal that she is actually God and all her beliefs are wrong and meaningless.

It's a very human fear to have. That everything we believe in was a lie, regardless of your beliefs.

So my thought was that when Arslan asks the Blacksmith if she is God and if Aslan was a fraud... The Blacksmith says this:

"I too have a Creator. One who set the stars in the sky for countless worlds. And like you, I know not what His ultimate purpose is in Creation. Only that the Brothers rebelled against Him like the White Witch, and so what you fight for is just."

Basically borrowing a bit from Tolkien and Catholicism, the Blacksmith is akin to one of the Valar, essentially higher angels. She is ruler of the Ever After, it is her domain, in service of her Creator. She would be akin to Uriel, the Atchangel of Wisdom, or Aule, the Valar of smithing and Crafting.

This also makes the Brothers akin to fallen angels (the ones who interbred with humans in Genesis 6 who produced the Nephilim) or Maiar like Sauron who escaped to Middle Earth to war with Morgoth against the forces of Good. In this way the White Witch was akin to Morgoth and the Brothers some of her servants who claimed to be Gods themselves. Or also rebelled against Heaven but went their own way.

So Arslan realizes her fear was wrong, and her faith is strengthened. She might also share this moment of doubt with Ruby, and both are told by the Blacksmith, essentially, "Good people make mistakes but they acknowledge they did, get back up, and try to do better."

What do you think?
 
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It would surprise many to know that Cardin has a few things in common with Qrow.

Both are fans of piano bars, both are allergic to rhubarb, and both of them have always active semblances.

Cardins isn't quite as metaphysical as probabilities manipulation to negative outcomes.

Cardins semblance is called Combustion and is the reason he always wears his armor.

Rather than for defending him the armor is actually one giant shock absorber.



Cardin hates being weak. He'd strained and trained and done everything he could to not need his semblance.

He hated his semblance. Since the moment he unlocked his aura ist all any of his instructors talked about or focused on.

He wouldn't need to train his semblance would make him great, who needs tactics or teammates when you're a walking bomb?

Nobody saw cardin they just saw Combustion.

So he saved up some money, quite a bit of it actually, from any allowance or odd jobs he could find, even sold some of his stuff.

He then commissioned some crazy engineer in patch he heard about on a message board to make his armor.

It's gonna be a bitch getting this thing repaired if it ever breaks since he heard whiterosewarrior passed away.

But right now the armor didn't matter, since he was about to have to take it off.

This thing that ambushed his team was strong. Too strong. There was something wrong with it.

It had at one point been a beringal. No mistaking that ugly monkey. The extra four arms and spider jaw were new. So were the webs and whatever the fuck that green stuff leaking from its body was.

His team was already down, and wasn't that worrying that it wasn't killing them, wrapped in cocoons of silk stronger than steel (he knows. He tried breaking it.).

He couldn't beat this thing. Not with his mace.

So cardin laid his palm on the bird on the front of his breastplate and channeled aura in a very specific pattern.

The armor fell apart like a house of cards in a windstorm and for the first time in a long time combustion could sing.

It didn't take long to adjust, hate it or not combustion was a part of him.

The softest of steps, practically just the tips of his toes touching the soil was enough to trigger explosions that launched him at the beast at speeds comparable to a sports car.

But cardin didn't slam into it, instead he flowed around it the smallest taps to the ground and trees surrounding them enough to keep him circling the monster.

Cardin almost looked delicate dealing with the beast. Small touches and pokes, no longer than a second, no more force than a baby would use.

Each touch blasting chunks out of the beast like it had been hit by artillery fire.

They'd fought the beast for thirty minutes before this.

Cardin killed it in four.

With combustion.

Something bitter settled in his gut.
 

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