Son of Kaos (PJO Chaos Gacha)

[EntropyEnginear]

Of course MC gives Zoe an Apple, I'm guessing she didn't outright refuse it due to knowing that MC doesn't know what that means.

 

[En-men-lu-ana]

That is... certainly a way to read that exchange, I guess...?

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How am I supposed to take him getting turned on by her being a bitch to him, then? Sure, he gets fed up with it every now and then, but those feel like the bare minimum to showcase that he has a spine.

 

[Bakkughan]

him getting turned on by her being a bitch to him, then?

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Please quote where that happens so I can alter it. As far as I know (and I mean, I am the author), he never reacts positively to her acting bitchy against him.

I definitely think you're reading wayyy too much into this.

 

[En-men-lu-ana]

Please quote where that happens so I can alter it. As far as I know (and I mean, I am the author), he never reacts positively to her acting bitchy against him.

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It's the feeling I get off of them, since she is a bitch and hasn't really hid her disdain of men, and he somehow still fucking finds her hot.

This is also your love of "enemies to lovers" seeing the friction as a plus, if someone treated me like Zoe treats the MC and then confessed, the answer is a hard no.

Does not help that I have high empathy, so when she's being a bitch, I'm constantly thinking "how would I react to her" and "how would I act in her position".

I definitely think you're reading wayyy too much into this.

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I simply hate Zoe with a passion.

Fucking loathe her for reminding me of a younger, stupider me.

I may not have had her specific hates, but unlike her, I reflected, and fucking grew up.

Zoe is too fucking old to get to use the excuse of "young and dumb".

 

[LipsusIdeus]

I am of the opinion that Orion in any interpretation of the myth got completely fucked by the gods ,if this fanfiction is one of zeus ordered his death ,it will be entertaining see him trying to stop the retrival of the master bolt ,why because without it like in the greek legends he will have a limited amount of lighting strikes by how many Haephaestus can make. And he could fool around with Artemis without them being noticed because Zeus will be focused on the Percy boy. Also it allows him time to find one way to disguise from the divine to continue frolicking with Artemis in the sheets.But if this is one of Apollo did it or Scorpio did it then either the sun will always watch or his deadly foe will want to take him back to his afterlife

 

[Bakkughan]

I am of the opinion that Orion in any interpretation of the myth got completely fucked by the gods

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Oh yeah, dude has got genuine and completely understandeable beef with the Olympians, it's just that he needs the Ophiotaurus to kill it and Ethan cannot let that happen (for additional reasons revealed in later chapters). Unfortunately, considering his role as a hunter and antagonist, it'll only be at the final confrontation between him and Ethan that I can fully reveal the hurt Orion has been put through (and it's a lot), which adds to the drama and conflict for Ethan. Still, over on Patreon we're at chapter 17 right now and said final confrontation is about two or three chapters away still, so Orion's past will remain a mystery for quite a while still...

 

[TwinstarKegare]

It's the feeling I get off of them, since she is a bitch and hasn't really hid her disdain of men, and he somehow still fucking finds her hot.

This is also your love of "enemies to lovers" seeing the friction as a plus, if someone treated me like Zoe treats the MC and then confessed, the answer is a hard no.

Does not help that I have high empathy, so when she's being a bitch, I'm constantly thinking "how would I react to her" and "how would I act in her position".

I simply hate Zoe with a passion.

Fucking loathe her for reminding me of a younger, stupider me.

I may not have had her specific hates, but unlike her, I reflected, and fucking grew up.

Zoe is too fucking old to get to use the excuse of "young and dumb".

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She is old enough to use the Trauma excuse. Especially if she never got therapy over it, and Artemis seemed to be fanning that flame a bit.

 

[obcorbino2146]

"Very loudly." The Lampad huffed.

A muscle twitched in Zoë's jaw and I decided to intervene before our (overly helpful) source became the first Lampad in history to be strangled with her own torch.

"Go, get out of here. Get out of Chicago entirely if what you've told us is true."

The nymph did not need telling twice. She darted past us, paused long enough beside Arion to glance admiringly at the pickup, then vanished into the nearest patch of shadow with a final whispered promise to tell absolutely nobody about us.

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Damn really I was kind of hoping she'd be around a little bit more I kind of liked her. Would have been funny if the MC started to stay in contact with her just to get more gospel and all that other stuff for new quests. Especially would have been funny if he got a trait that made nymphs find him more attractive and he just wants gospel as she flirts with him would have been funny personally. I don't know I just liked her and hope to see her again.

That is... certainly a way to read that exchange, I guess...?

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I kind of understand what he's going about, she's kind of very cold to him and then he's constantly going on with "oh gorgeous eyes this" "she's gorgeous that" 'she's glaring at me and I can't look at her eyes and makes my stomach shutter" it's doesn't really make sense to me either. It really doesn't make that much sense to me either how you're writing it, she sounds like a bitch but he still talking about nothing more than how hot she is. Eventually gets to a point where someone insults you enough you don't keep thinking they're just hot and ignore it, get annoyed with them and they're attractiveness becomes second to how shitty they are acting.

Like take Game of thrones and cersei for example, yeah she's hot and good looking but most people don't want to just fuck her because they know how fucking insane she is and how much of a bitch she is.
It's kind of the same thing going on here she's been nothing but a bitch and the MC barely talks back to her when she does. And it makes it seem like he gets off to being treated like the way he is, with making all these comments over and over about how pretty she is and how she makes him blush. At some point someone would just be annoyed, they will realize she's still pretty but they get annoyed with their personality, and wouldn't just take it.

I mean you can still have a enemies or frenemies to lovers but I don't think the way you're going about it feels genuine, the guy is already seems obsessed with her, it seems like the only one who's an enemy is her. So I agree with the guy with how the interactions are going it doesn't seem realistic for them to just get into a relationship unless some major changes happen.

 

[Darkatlas]

It's the feeling I get off of them, since she is a bitch and hasn't really hid her disdain of men, and he somehow still fucking finds her hot.

This is also your love of "enemies to lovers" seeing the friction as a plus, if someone treated me like Zoe treats the MC and then confessed, the answer is a hard no.

Does not help that I have high empathy, so when she's being a bitch, I'm constantly thinking "how would I react to her" and "how would I act in her position".

I simply hate Zoe with a passion.

Fucking loathe her for reminding me of a younger, stupider me.

I may not have had her specific hates, but unlike her, I reflected, and fucking grew up.

Zoe is too fucking old to get to use the excuse of "young and dumb".

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I'm gonna be honest I don't see what your seeing. And there's better ways if saying you dislike the dynamic between Zoe and the MC. If you dislike it that much man just read something else then.

 

[Arrowman]

It's the feeling I get off of them, since she is a bitch and hasn't really hid her disdain of men, and he somehow still fucking finds her hot.

This is also your love of "enemies to lovers" seeing the friction as a plus, if someone treated me like Zoe treats the MC and then confessed, the answer is a hard no.

Does not help that I have high empathy, so when she's being a bitch, I'm constantly thinking "how would I react to her" and "how would I act in her position".

I simply hate Zoe with a passion.

Fucking loathe her for reminding me of a younger, stupider me.

I may not have had her specific hates, but unlike her, I reflected, and fucking grew up.

Zoe is too fucking old to get to use the excuse of "young and dumb".

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I agree.
Zoe was wronged by one Man and spent the next 3000 years blaming, hating and slighting literally 50% of everything in the cosmos.
She is arrogant, entitled and disrespectful.
The scene with him seeing her in the Throne Room where literal Goddesses were, including Aphrodite, and blurting out his toughts made me cringe.

I hope there is some level of commeuppance rather than her just admiting that he 'is one of the good ones' or 'not that bad'.

 

[Yohnos]

"We face the Bane of the Twin Archers, the greatest male hunter who has ever lived: the giant Orion."

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Meh considering that our MC is kin with primordial it doesn't seem that impressive in comparison.. "That dude biggest ennemies are a rapist and a bitch! "

 

[Shivanshu]

"You should see what it says about some of the others. Not to mention, it's inaccurate. The Earth Mother is my sister. Or half-sister, I'm guessing." I said blithely.

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Her being your mother or sister aren't mutually exclusive. She can be both.