The Force Always Says Yes [Star Wars]

[gasparr]

Great vignette! Always nice to see an inexplicably lethal janitor droid. Helpful to have around. Hope Mlaki actually got a decent payout from the Republic!

 

[Natalino]

The contrast between his inner thoughts and the people around him are fun, unreliable narrator indeed.

 

[Grimmouse197]

And in regards to the Sith Holocron, it is something of a mystery why the Jedi Order insists on keeping as many Sith Holocrons on-site as they can...

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I strongly suspect that the destruction of sith Holacrons in the past Resulted in plagues and such being released. Other than that I don't see why they don't destroy them.

 

[BC1]

Just finished binging this and quite the amazing story.
Very rare to see anything set in in this era.

Absolutely loved the first scene with the high council I admit it threw me for a loop with Yoda and not being grandmaster, didn't even occur to me that we were that far back in the timeline.
I think you nailed his character though it still him but a younger and more impatient version.

Can't wait to see how this story unravels.

 

[Hyenanon]

Just finished binging this and quite the amazing story.
Very rare to see anything set in in this era.

Absolutely loved the first scene with the high council I admit it threw me for a loop with Yoda and not being grandmaster, didn't even occur to me that we were that far back in the timeline.
I think you nailed his character though it still him but a younger and more impatient version.

Can't wait to see how this story unravels.

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Thank you! It's one of the most gratifying forms of feedback, to know people have binged this story. It feels meaningful to know someone got immersed in it for tens of thousands of words at a time. I'm glad you enjoyed Fae and Yoda! I've really been enjoying the character of Fae Coven, and it's quite a different experience to write a character that actually exists in the lore outside of my fanfiction. Yoda is fun too. Love getting to use his playful side along with his dogmatic tendencies, in comparison and contrast to the other Jedi we know.

I have more in the works! I will actually probably begin posting more shortly. I haven't finished the arc in its entirety yet, but I know where it's going and the narrative points it will hit, and I want to post more before I begin traveling in roughly two weeks. If I don't have too much trouble in the editing stage, you can probably expect ten chapters before the end of the month. This arc is shaping up to be...almost embarrassingly long compared to the first two. I just passed 100,000 words in the story as a whole last night, actually!

I strongly suspect that the destruction of sith Holacrons in the past Resulted in plagues and such being released. Other than that I don't see why they don't destroy them.

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It is a mystery indeed. Curses of some sort or another are often rumored, but that applies to active holocrons too. I'll say this much, in my interpretation of the Order's philosophy, there's a good reason, which will be more or less revealed over time. Fae Coven is quite insistent.

The contrast between his inner thoughts and the people around him are fun, unreliable narrator indeed.

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Nerim picks up on things no one else would, and is oblivious to things everyone else knows. Mostly about himself! This was a trait I wanted him to have from the beginning, and I admit I got kind of frustrated with it at one point because it means I have to leave a lot of things as quite subtle subtext that I wish I could outline more clearly for the readers. Great opportunity for the vignettes. I will have more of them over time, although I'm focusing on the 4th arc for now. The vignettes might not come out in proper order, either.