moralrelativity
Recovering pendant.
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I don't get this bit. Maybe there's a reference I'm missing?If she tries to suggest anything sparkly, this is gonna get awkward because she really, really seems the type.
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I don't get this bit. Maybe there's a reference I'm missing?If she tries to suggest anything sparkly, this is gonna get awkward because she really, really seems the type.
No, just a very bubbly personality.
Mostly being distracted with the self-appointed mission in front of himThis is an interesting start to a story, colored me interested. The whole world setting seems like someone decided to try and one-up battleworld to a degree.
Now that he has a way to recharge, why hasn't seen if he can go into space. It'll be interesting to see if anything stops him.
A fair concern, but I've had this story, or something like it - a proto-story - rolling around in my head for over a year and in truth it's almost cathartic to get it out. The feedback helps, most of my concern over motivation is that when I feel I'm not getting anywhere I tend to get dismayed easily but I don't feel like that all here.
I think I'll hold off adding more until tomorrow though, so I can mull it over and refine it in my head.
we have members who I'm sure will be willing to literally fuck you till story chapters pop out, I don't think you need to worry. . . .much
Why didn't anyone tell me this? I'd have become an author!we have members who I'm sure will be willing to literally fuck you till story chapters pop out, I don't think you need to worry. . . .much
Why didn't anyone tell me this? I'd have become an author!
Also good story Averus, I'm curious about the setting and where things will go.
What does Blue look like though? Tall? Short? Long or short hair? Pale or tanned? Or maybe black?
All I can see a mention of was them being overweight then they fixed that with their ring.
I once read, while browsing the foreword of a book, that a good story shows instead of telling. While I could have Blue stop and self-reflect on how he looks, how often do we really do that? Basically I didn't want to have him standing around doing exposition about himself when there's other, more interesting things in his face. There's also the possibility that Blue might not stay as a guy. Almost everything forming his self-identity has been torn from him and he's starting from scratch, I'm just meandering my way to him actually choosing all that because this is him finding his feet before deciding his whole identity. A little familiarity with the blue light is going a long way to forming his opinions on that.
Oh I don't plan to leave him undefined forever, don't worry. The ambiguity is intentional, right now.Some things have to be told.
Just saying what someone looks like, or casually mentioning physical elements, for example, "he ran his fingers through his black hair" or just have him look in a mirror.
This is a very good start so far. Question though, are all the other groups from real IPs or are they from something you've come up with?
Hahahaha, lovely little note to end on."I am. She's disarming enough that I think she'd give the best first impression possible, while... Please don't take this the wrong way Ren, but you're terrifying."
Ren smiles slowly, all teeth. "Lightsmith, that's the nicest thing any human has ever said to me."
IMO this list seems to be missing the most important item: "no memory". Good to see Lightsmith Ainsley laying down new, happy ones.
And they probably wouldn't be out of place on this world, by the sound of it.That'd be very unnerving to come across this early but frankly the stuff I've seen just in the last day or so has convinced me that I could walk into a cave one day and find it full of clone troopers and a very confused Jedi. I don't think I'd even be surprised by it now.
I won't lie, some people would find that very attractive.I've never wondered what a grizzly bear would look like as a seven foot tall juggernaut of a woman but today I am learning very, very quickly.
There's always that one oddball in any group. Sounds like she's it. At least it will be fun.She blinks. "Well, that's no good. C'mon, I'll take you over and help you decide on one after you work your healing magic." She manages to sound chipper, almost skipping as she heads off towards one of the tents on the other side of camp.
If she tries to suggest anything sparkly, this is gonna get awkward because she really, really seems the type.
Of course, you have to wonder if the groans were of pain or just 'oh no, she's back...'"Here we are! Hi everyone!" There's a general groan of acknowledgement in her direction and a few of the wounded wave lazily at her. "I've brought help. Ta-daaa~!" She's actually making jazz hands at me when I walk into the tent behind her and I can't help but smile a little. Absolutely irrepressible.
I open my eyes and raise my hands in front of me as the threads of light fan out, touching the injured. Pain vanishes. Flesh knits itself together. Behind me Elise gasps as a thread touches her too, fixing scars and an old injury in one ankle she probably broke as a child. Lost limbs are regrown, the bandages dissolving in blue light.
No doubt one or two are happy to take a few minutes break to relax.She makes a hmmm sound to herself, swaying her upper body side to side as she thinks it over. "Well, you did say you'd help our people and so you have." She's waving off the formerly injured soldiers who are trying to get out of their beds. "No, no, stay here. Let the medics double-check you." A few nods and they're back to bed, one or two more resigned than anything else.
Yes, I suspect you're glossing over quite a few things there, hun. Still, no need to burden a new friend with your political history... Yet."Really long. Humans made us, turns out that was super illegal, there was a big thing over it. In the end we founded our own small country and now we're completely independent."
Ah, she is a breath of fresh air.I can't help but smile. It's like dealing with a happy-go-lucky child pretending to be a responsible adult. "Okay, you've convinced me. Lead the way, fuzzbutt."
"Hey! It's fluffy, not fuzzy."
I suspect that kind of thing is only allowed between close friends. In private.After the third time I caught myself having the urge to pet her I began hoping for the ring to suppress that impulse. It's sort of working. Mostly.
Fitting. And notably not the first time the term's been associated with Lanterns. Relic, a post-Flashpoint DC character called them such (and was one himself.) So quite fitting. A good choice."Yeah! You forge things out of light. The ultimate toolmaker, armorer and weaponer all in one. You're a Lightsmith." She nods with a kind of finality. "I have spoken."
"I am. She's disarming enough that I think she'd give the best first impression possible, while... Please don't take this the wrong way Ren, but you're terrifying."
Ren smiles slowly, all teeth. "Lightsmith, that's the nicest thing any human has ever said to me."
Hey, kids have plenty of energy.I'm watching Elise play tag with a small crowd of children who turned out to see the preternaturally energetic ferret-girl. I'm not entirely sure if she's It or if the entire crowd of kids is It because they seem to randomly and without warning change who is chasing who, but the whole lot of them seem to be having a great time and it's doing wonders for putting the townsfolk of Durjak at ease.
I foresee those two becoming the best of friends. Probably not romantically linked, though - too much alike, by the sound of it...Ren herself is currently sitting inside the inn with Mason and the two of them appear to be competing to see which one can get more drunk. After meeting Elise I think Mason was expecting the whole group to be like her. When he met Ren he took it as a diplomatic challenge and the two of them are pretty much alike in the way that career soldiers can be, so that went off without a hitch. Despite the fact that the genkits seriously outgun them, it doesn't seem to bother Mason and the others too much. I'm pretty sure I'm the reason why.
Every hero needs their fortress of solitude. Or in his case, the happy hometown where he can relax, unwind and re-center himself."Only in the sense of having a place I can hang my hat. I plan to travel far and wide looking for things to do. Can't save everyone just hanging out here all day."
Perfect cue for a title sequence. And makes a good ending place for a first episode.
Oh interesting update! A bit more of a look into one of the prisoners, potentially some kind of spirit driven prophesy and cute human/panther person interaction.
Oh interesting update! A bit more of a look into one of the prisoners, potentially some kind of spirit driven prophesy and cute human/panther person interaction.
I find his opinion of her scent especially interesting, does she smell good because she's a girl? Because she would make a good meal? Because of some other reason like he can smell magic and she unknowingly has potentially?
Or does she simply have nice pheromones and the make a part of his brain go mushy?
Awwwwww...Yes
But no in all seriousness, Jufad is a different ethnicity than the others and his nose is very very sensitive. She's fastidious about bathing, more than the others are, so she just tends to smell nicer than them.
EDIT: Sorry, thinking on it I should clarify. Jufad smells nice to him when she doesn't bathe because on average she does it often enough that she still ends up being less offensive to his nose than the ones who only dip into a river or something once a week.
I suppose there's always time.Awwwwww...
I mean that is interesting to know and it makes sense that two day old girl sweat probably is less offensive to a sensitive nose than week old girl sweat but... yeah I was really hoping for some interspersed culture clash filled relationship stuff.
Always fun to see two completely different types of people manage to make it work and reach a healthy happy relationship full of understanding and love.
You are now the Blue Mint. Careful about controlling inflation though!
Not likely, the jobs takenThis is a wonderful way to slowly but easily contact and connect all manner of potential and future trading partners. . . . .Ainsley will probably be declared king or something sooner or later.