dulcineaswife
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I can see the intention but it's still stilted to meWhat if the song is being literally played in the story? As in, the characters are listening to it?
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I can see the intention but it's still stilted to meWhat if the song is being literally played in the story? As in, the characters are listening to it?
I find more annoying if the mc is blatantly OP and butchered through the robots ezpz - but still somehow not be first in points.MHA fics where the they make is so that attacking the zero pointer makes it so that you lose all your point for some bullshit reason because the author needs to find ways to introduce stakes because Izuku is actually competent in their fic. It just feels like such lazy writing.
Stoicism requires the ability to self-regulate your responses to what's happening to and around you. The very premise already fails this. This could be a good thing, I'm one of the few people who actually likes the whole "Issei was traumatized by Raynare" fanfic plot angle, but for some reason the writers appear to actively disregard any emotional response that doesn't lead to more testosterone. Methinks they're confusing "stoic" for "one-dimensional".
"I thought the guy was cute, but he wanted to stick me into a little ball and I'm not into that."
3-4 is the size of most polygynous marriages historically, as I recall. The "harem with huge numbers of women" that most people tend to think of were I understand either essentially status symbols or breeding programs to produce the maximum number of heirs, with little in the way of an actual relationship between husband and wives. So if the character is looking for an actual relationship, it makes sense to stop around there and just provide introductions.Come on. I am planning to write one where SI gets an harem, 4 girls.
Then what he does when other girls come in?
Plays matchmaker for his bros with them.
If you're going to go with a macroharem, you need to start grouping the girls up polycule-style. Adding a fifth girl is a lot easier when she's the first girl's girlfriend, or when the second, third, and fourth girls are all best friends who pass the MC between them like a blunt when they hang out together.And from a narrative point of view the more people there are in a relationship, the harder it's going to be to give them proper characterization time. 4 women is easy enough for that - 1 man, 4 women is about the size range of a typical "hero's party" in fiction after all - but in a fic where the mc just keeps "collecting" more and more, most of them will end up with the characterization of "that girl he slept with 30 chapters ago and hasn't been seen since".
"And together, my harem can combine into a single, GIANT harem girl!"
To be fair knowing that just because you can punch very hard doesn't mean you know how to lead a nation into being prosperous. At most you would be a feudal warlord. But you are right that it would be cool to see people who do decide to build their own nations with their own ideals.Working for the government.
I have a seething loathing for anyone who, upon obtaining super powers, glazes the heck out of the government, and joins up with them. You could be a Batman type, and do your own thing, maybe sort of work with 1 guy in the govt, but to become their bitch beholden to all their rules/laws/regulations? Nah. Like seriously, half of a governments purpose is to provide protection. When you're a walking nuke, you can start your own country. Or, at the very least, aspire to become the leader/a leading figure of said government. All these hero types say they want to "save the world" but are too afraid to do anything meaningful about it, and just go through the motions. I'm a go with the flow kind of guy, but I really despise these spineless wimps that infest fiction. They're just as bad as the idiots who kill everyone at the slightest disagreement.
I've been trying to get back into wuxia recently, and half the stories have guys joining the "Night Patrol" slaying monsters. That's just becoming glorified police!
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Chaos Gacha. It was fun or novel the 2nd or 3rd time, but how is this any different from an MC falling in a cave and getting his lucky encounter? Except the MC is falling into the cave every day, and getting something good or comedic. Personally, I can't stand how much system text these stories abuse you with. 1k words of potential draws every other chapter is a crime against humanity. I hope to God everyone wakes up in a year or two from now, and realizes it's just as lame as WC or outdated slang.
Anyway, there isn't enough hate in this thread, you guys gotta level up~
To be fair knowing that just because you can punch very hard doesn't mean you know how to lead a nation into being prosperous. At most you would be a feudal warlord. But you are right that it would be cool to see people who do decide to build their own nations with their own ideals.
Like in worm fanfics we never see people who are OP just destroy army formations and carve territory and make a new country.
That's why it's better to troll them on how you know
I mean some people might not want to be violent rapists.Any powerful person should be treated like Yujiro Hanma. A walking mass weapon of destruction that entire countries make pacts with.
Taking over a country and ruling it is actually hard work that's not for everyone.
The Wormfic Ignis et Furor would be the exception that proves the rule. Sol Invicta declares the Solar Dominion and fights off the US military and Protectorate to make it stick.Like in worm fanfics we never see people who are OP just destroy army formations and carve territory and make a new country.
Sucks when all they have are statements, but none of the visual confirmation.My most hated trope is when the pairing of the two main characters keep getting shilled, especially if they get called the "world's most wholesome couple".
If I had to pick one?
The whole "forgotten/betrayed Insert main character here" trend, that had these quite mentally strong characters be "super duper innocent and kind" then they'd see their friends talking shit or their girlfriend getting backshots from their best friend or something.
Then they'd immediately do a mental 180 and become a Super Stoic and Totally Badass Edglord™, throwing away all their friends and loved ones without a second thought (50/50 on whether they give them all a beat down or punch someone in the balls on their way out).
The newly debuted Edgelord then goes on a wacky adventure where he picks up and gathers his new harem of all of the authors favorite waifus and he is magically super soft of these specific girls despite him basically castrating every other person that dares even look at him wrong.
If the story gets this far, there will be a scene where the old main girl will beg for forgiveness and say some stuff about how she was "wrong and that she wants him back" our MC will promptly execute a bitchslap and refuse to ever look at her again probably saying something profound like "you will never see these eyes that loved you ever again" she will promptly become obsessed with him and her hijinks will become a running gag.
There's probably more but this is what I can remember of this off of the top of my head.
QQ went through a period of time where everybody wrote fics about this very thing.Yorokobe shonen, you just described "In an Adult Game as a Former Hero".
QQ went through a period of time where everybody wrote fics about this very thing.
The Former Hero fics have entirely died, with the occasional snippet thread that features it.
It is also a description of Ankoman fics.
If I had to pick one?
The whole "forgotten/betrayed Insert main character here" trend, that had these quite mentally strong characters be "super duper innocent and kind" then they'd see their friends talking shit or their girlfriend getting backshots from their best friend or something.
Then they'd immediately do a mental 180 and become a Super Stoic and Totally Badass Edglord™, throwing away all their friends and loved ones without a second thought (50/50 on whether they give them all a beat down or punch someone in the balls on their way out).
The newly debuted Edgelord then goes on a wacky adventure where he picks up and gathers his new harem of all of the authors favorite waifus and he is magically super soft of these specific girls despite him basically castrating every other person that dares even look at him wrong.
If the story gets this far, there will be a scene where the old main girl will beg for forgiveness and say some stuff about how she was "wrong and that she wants him back" our MC will promptly execute a bitchslap and refuse to ever look at her again probably saying something profound like "you will never see these eyes that loved you ever again" she will promptly become obsessed with him and her hijinks will become a running gag.
There's probably more but this is what I can remember of this off of the top of my head.
Also, there's nothing wrong with a harem, but God damn it! Put some fucking testosterone in this bitch and go bro out ffs. Estrogen plot derails are a major reason for slow fic death. I won't name any names, but I don't need 30 chapters straight of repetitive tit fucking and thirty dates back to back with each harem member. Progress the plot, pussies.
I think having a chapter mostly devoted to dating can work, but it should hook into the main plot somehow. Like for example, having thugs attack the protagonist and their love interest on their way back from the date, setting up the next arc villain. Or having the leads stumble on a secret passageway that leads to crucial information that advances the story. Just having the romance be entirely skippable fluff is wasted potential.I feel like dating shit should be relegated to side story content unless it's relevant to the plot or to the character growth. I myself write a harem but I don't think I've ever actually write a chapter where it's just the mc having a date with the heroines.