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Fair enough.Hopefully keep my mouth shut, because I suck when I complain. I know what I like, and the Dallon siblings being happy are important to it.
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Fair enough.Hopefully keep my mouth shut, because I suck when I complain. I know what I like, and the Dallon siblings being happy are important to it.
Not entirely sure how I felt about this one. It wasn't bad or anything but it didn't really feel like it did anything for the story either. Like some Kayden angst followed by a rehash of a couple chapters ago but from a different POV.
It wasn't bad but it honestly wasn't the continuation of the Simurgh!Interrupt I'm sure everyone was hoping for.
Still as a chapter made to get back into the writing groove after being away for health problems it was perfectly fine.
On a separate note I'm glad your back and hope your health stays on the positive!
The strange thing is, Anakin is actually much worse than Kayden, but even while writing it, I dislike her more, and from some readers' reactions, I feel that they do it too... I suppose that says something about society, that racism, at least fictional racism, feels worse than torture, mind control and genocide.
Although... I guess the cool factor helps...
I specially liked the chapter because of this. I could have been even more fearmongering since people in worm should be terrified of Endbringers.Well, it was mostly Endbringer building, showing what they seem like from someone who isn't Anakin
I think the self delusion is also part of it. Kayden justifies doing horrible things in ways everyone else knows is bullshit, even Max, while Anakin hates everyone and himself enough that he just didn't care that he was doing horrible shit kinda making it less personal.The strange thing is, Anakin is actually much worse than Kayden, but even while writing it, I dislike her more, and from some readers' reactions, I feel that they do it too