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With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

Discussion in 'Creative Writing' started by Mr Zoat, Jan 27, 2019.

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  1. Vaermina

    Vaermina Well worn.

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    Guess that means it's time to destroy that universe...
     
  2. inglorius

    inglorius Getting sticky.

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    May I sig this, please?
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    Ooh, we got more evil juice Paul. I am sure nothing bad will happen to Artemis.
     
  3. Flightless Man

    Flightless Man Versed in the lewd.

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    I feel the alternates are being used to show us what we whine for, only twisted. Or are being used as hints. Im not so much examining what was said, but why Zoat wrote it. I've always been more interested in behind the scenes and watching things with directors commentary. I like knowing why a decision was made and i'm more interested in discovering why choices are made a certain way. I'm trying to figure out why showing us this now, was important.
     
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  4. RichardWhereat

    RichardWhereat Aia airëa Fëanáro.

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    Me.
     
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  5. moralrelativity

    moralrelativity Recovering pendant.

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    Yeah, no not a fan of that. I posted without knowledge of where this was headed.
     
  6. moralrelativity

    moralrelativity Recovering pendant.

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    Tang is, I assume, from tangerine (a shade of orange).
     
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    I guess that's happens because he is more alternate in his way of thinking that other Pauls. As in even before getting the Serum he tended to think in selfish ways and cost benefits. And he didn't mind losing his sense of touch since he could fake it with his ring.

    This evil Paul was... too stupid besides a perfectionist. Since you have to he a dumbass to think animal testing is enough to test things on yourself. And he also blindly trust his ring to not screw him over.

    When even the Sibarite is smarter, you know you goofed.
     
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  8. Darko

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    Yeah I can see that.

    Tangseid is basically what we get if we want a more ruthless and controlling version of paragon, because a lot of us, hell even me at one point, wanted that kind of version.

    Him being evil wasn't on demand though.
     
  9. Vaermina

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    I wouldn't say this Paul was particularly more stupid then any of the others. It's just that he didn't have the dues ex machina protection the others enjoy that protect them from the downsides of their stupid decisions.

    For example those tattoos Paragon had carved onto his soul? Canonically they have the serious downside of killing a being if they ever go to Hell.
     
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  10. SirKaid

    SirKaid Know what you're doing yet?

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    Tang is an orange coloured powdered drink mix brand. Alternatively, tangerines are fruit with orange peels. Either way, put it together with Darkseid (because this version of Paul is a sick monster like Big D, but orange) and you get Tangseid.
     
  11. Ngamer11

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    He's Tangseid because he's benevolent tyranny. Mr Zoat wrote that this means he is permanently robbing Darkseid of potential power, and the New God of Tyranny doesn't like that. Although he's aware of Tangseid, he hasn't done anything about him yet.
     
  12. Chaoswind

    Chaoswind Lord of nonsense

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    Tangseid origin history is finally canonized. His first appearance was after fhe cross over episode that had all the Pauls fighting the guy that watched the origin of the universe and caused entropy.

    Apparently slowly sauntered towards evil after a super soldier evil potion made him evil (going to guess his weak arcane presence/soul is what is makes the process slow, otherwise the effects of the evil potion would be more readily apparent).

    This is unlikely to be relevant for a while IE the next cross over episode happpens.
     
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    Sugar, spice and everything EVIL!
    The sample was glowing green and if he held if without a ring he would've heard maniacal cackling and gigglesnorts. Sounds like some obscure DC take on Erskine's super soldier serum. Paul turned himself into Red Skull (just ya know, Orange).

    Do we know why he was so desparate for a power up? He had a lantern right? That's why he could afford to mind rape (and then literally rape) everyone and their dog.
     
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  14. Darko

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    The serum could have been purely chemical and not alchemical, kinda like the serum the Red Skull took that increased his sociopathic tendencies.
     
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  15. Darko

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    He may have been worried that he could lose his ring or run out of charge during a fight and become helpless, so wanted to give himself some upgrades.
     
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    Dr Jekyll's formula, or a derivative thereof, showed up in Seven Soldiers: Bulleteer. It was green.

    It's what supposedly turned Sally Sonic into such a psycho. You know, ignoring the years of abuse that could legitimately break someone without such excuses.

    Either the formula was altered or they got lucky.

    The actual Hyde showed up in Xombi. He looked like a furry ogre who survived Jekyll's death like something out of Immortal Hulk.
     
  17. BlueMangoAdea

    BlueMangoAdea Alive. For now.

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    !Want Shinies!, I think. This Paul looks like he's been searching for a power-up for a long time. Maybe it started as a curiosity, but his ring pushed his unenlightened desires towards obsession. And once he had the serum, and he couldn't find anything wrong with it using a power ring, why not?

    What could possibly go wrong?
     
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    Why is it that all of cinematic Hydes look like Hulks recently? Wasn't he smaller than Jekyll in the book? I don't remember anything about him turning into a Hulk.
     
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    Yes, smaller than Jekyll, but in the book Hyde was growing bigger.

    So there is an excuse for that in stories that take place after Jekyll's death in the book like in Xombi or League of Extraordinary Gentlemen.

    Stories that have people immediately hulk out after taking the formula, that's probably cultural osmosis from the Hulk, I figure.

    Or maybe just a case of a visual medium. "Oh no, he's turned into a tiny evil person! The horror! The horror!" doesn't play as well as "Oh no, he's turned into an evil ogre of a man! The horror! The horror!"
     
  20. Agent Orange

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    I guess that shows that using a mind affecting drug while wearing a mind affecting piece of jewellery is less than wise. Who would've thunk. Lesson learned I guess.

    Now I have to wonder if Deathly Hallows would've been more interesting if Harry had more than one horcrux on his person.
     
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    Looks like he took some precautions, but problem with mind alteration is that once your mind has been altered to want different things, why would the new you want to go back? Additionally, you can't force your future changed self back to present baseline with an orange power ring, because your current desire-set would be non-existent by the time your future altered-self's changes are detected by the power ring.
     
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  22. Agent Orange

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    You can preprogram rings to execute commands. It doesn't take a superhuman planning ability to add 'and revert me to baseline/previous benchmark. Ignore any commands to the contrary.'

    Stsword, was this serum actually called Hyde serum? And was the inventor actually called Jekyll? In universe that is? I know Paul has Oh Shiny! problem at this point of story but you'd think knowing the name and backstory behind the superserum would be enough of a hint even for Paul. I mean this early on he still had enough left over genre savvy to act like an actual person which includes basic trope awareness right? It was only post-Ophidian that he went native.
     
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    Do preprograms even work if the current user doesn't want it to work? I mean, all actions by power rings require the emotion for it, don't they?
     
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    He may not know about the name or backstory of this serum, but just found it somewhere and tested it on some animals before using it on himself.
     
  25. Agent Orange

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    Considering that he didn't suffocate while still unconscious at the beginning of the story I'd say that at least some functions don't require user to feel anything in particular. Also, how do you think rings look for new users after the current one croaks.
     
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  26. Darko

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    Good point, though he may be able to overpower some of the rings functions if he wants it enough.

    Just a theory.
     
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    Well, didn't he improve on them?
     
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    I reserve judgement on this Paul until we see more of him. He probably IS going to be evil, but I don’t believe Tangseid was in a version of Earth 16 like Paragon, Renegade, Common Sense and Eros. So this is likely a brand new Paul.
     
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    In addition to having a female Superman clone, they also had something that looked like their version of the Metro Tower from the DCAU. Also, this is the Paul that deleted Wonder Woman's soul and replaced it with one more agreeable to his desires. We last saw him about to rewrite the personality of a hero who realized what Tangseid had done. He has already taken over the Justice League and ensured there will be no war on Earth by strategically controlling key individuals. How can you not call him evil?
     
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    He ain't evil, he's just written that way ;)
     
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