With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

Chojin Patriarch · 2026-01-22T06:53:01+0000

Mr Zoat said:
18th August 2013
10:19 GMT -5

The four of us appear on the border of the Greyhound Duchy, not… Actually all that far to the north west of our former position. An abbey, burned down during the war and as yet not part of the reconstruction process. A curious choice; I know from the intro sequence that demons here have no difficulty in entering holy sites, but by that token there's no obvious advantage in performing the ritual here. Sareth's horse starts, but I turned my rings' human-to-animal translator back on to warn him before we moved so he swiftly calms down when his rider shows no concern. Xana's demonic steed has presumably been through far worse.

A detail many wouldn't think of, concerning the horse. Too often fantasy novels treat horses as living motor vehicles, never taking into account things like exhaustion or fear responses...

Xana looks at me expectantly. "Well?"

I point to the broken stone pathway leading to the nearest road. Neither appear to have been deliberately destroyed -demons need roads too- but there was a battle here, and the land is blotted with blast craters from offensive magic and trebuchet projectiles.

To be fair, if they've never been here before, they wouldn't recognise the surroundings... And even if they have, it still takes a second to adjust to the sudden shift.

"There?"

"Yes."

One road in not-Europe probably looks much the same as any other. Especially after a war.

Cart design is easy enough. I've seen this sort on Themyscira plenty of times. The tires I can base on the dozens of motorcycle tires I've scanned. Sacks, Themyscira again, gold… Is gold, jewels… I've got their molecular structures stored. Ah… Neither of their horses have harnesses, so include those…

Good catch. Riding harness is very different to hauling harness.

"Shouldn't matter, but the gold and jewels will have an unusually regular structure. No impurities. But I doubt that anyone will notice."

Xana guides her horse over to the cart while Sareth dismounts and walks towards… It looks like an altar, partially concealed by a pile of rubble. He kneels before it, hands clasped at his chest.

Didn't take him for a pious man. I guess the Empire expects a certain amount of devotion, though.

"You worship Elrath?"

"No. But I suspect that my mother's people will expect it."

And the god may find it amusing for a half-demon to be beseeching him.

"I would recommend not lying to gods. They can be remarkably short-tempered."

"I'm not lying. I genuinely do hope that Elrath accepts the soul of your other self."

So they definitely met before. And not as enemies, unless he's very compassionate about his foes.

"You were friends?"

He thinks, then nods slowly. "He gave me counsel at a difficult point in my life."

Huh. Well, never underestimate a few kind words at the right moment, after all.

Xana glances over from where she's rifling through the sacks, looking decidedly unimpressed. "Surely it wasn't that difficult, my love? Still, it was good advice."

I raise my eyebrows. "'Do what thou wilt shall be the whole of the law'?"

I suppose that's the same advice OL would have given if he were in that position.

Xana nods. "That was the core of it. Decide what you want to happen, and then make it happen."

"Xana, you hate Leanna."

The problem with that plan usually comes in when what you want conflicts with what others want.

"She made an excellent distraction. And you were thinking about releasing your father."

"I wanted a place in the world." He stares off into the distance, to where I can just about make out one of the Duchy's towns. "But I think that I'll prefer finding it in a world that isn't on fire."

Yeah, a burning cinder doesn't generally have much to offer.

"You-?" Lushun stares at him, shadows moving around his fingertips. "You are the Dark Messiah Sar-Shazzar wrote of. I seem to remember that prophecy being fairly unambiguous."

Sareth doesn't appear to have noticed Lushun preparing a spell, but from the tension in her wings and lengthening of her talons I see that Xana has. Lushun's eyes move to me and I give my head a small shake to try and discourage him.

Classic 'Son... Just don't.' moment. I half imagine OL also giving him the Tommy Lee Jones look, though it might lose some of the impact without the newspaper.

"If the prophecy was unambiguous, then why did Arantir waste his time in trying to kill me?" He shakes his head, then strolls through the ruined wall into the main courtyard. "If both of them truly come from outside of Ashan, perhaps he could not see them. In any case, the barrier around Sheogh is made whole, though not so perfect as it would have been had Arantir been able to murder an entire city to fuel his ritual."

Sometimes trying to fight a prophecy just leads to it being fulfilled. ironically because the person fighting it isn't operating with all the information needed to. Like Oedipus.

"I see." Lushun dismisses his spell, but still regards Sareth cautiously as we follow him inside. "Excuse me if I take the time to confirm that for myself."

"Be my guest. And if you encounter Arantir's shade, banish it for me."

Somehow I think doing that would greatly improve the future of the world considerably.

"You left Leanna in Har-Heresh?"

"Xana's hatred is mutual, but… I like Leanna. She has an army and a fortress, and she has a portal to flee if she needs to."

Ah, bit of a love triangle going on, and Xana is a fan of the 'murder the hypotenuse' method for resolving them?

"I just thought that you might be trying to pull a Kiril."

He raises his eyebrows. "Kiril? I'm not familiar with the name."

I'm sure there's a history book with the details somewhere.

"Younger son of House Griffin during the War of the Second Eclipse. He was tricked into becoming a demon, and ended up in a long term relationship with a Fallen Angel named Sarah and… A succubus whose name I've forgotten."

Xana glares at me. "You don't need to pretend. There's more than one succubus with the name 'Xana'. I never even met him." She snorts. "Sharing with an angel. She's an embarrassment to succubae everywhere."

~~Or she could have been playing the 'corrupt the angel' angle~~? Edit:

Oh, the angel was already corrupted. Guess she was fine playing equal partner, then...

Sareth shakes his head. "That wouldn't be an option. I doubt that Leanna would ever fall. On the other hand, I'm not a demon."

"Your… Father..?"

Presumably his demonic blood runs very thin for reasons.

"I had wondered if his intent was to leave me as weak as possible until after he was freed. Perhaps even then. Certainly, I never benefited from having demon blood in me."

Xana coughs loudly.

Although I suspect the events of the Dark messiah game helped him gain quite a bit of power, just not purely demonic. then again, I don't know if the game had a levelling system or anything.

"I apologise. His demon blood. Your demon magic was extremely important." She momentarily seems mollified, then he smiles impishly. "Though I must admit that I would like to hear more about this 'Kiril'."

Lushun steps closer to him. "I believe that we have met your requirements?"

Alas, the amusing discourse will have to wait.

"Yes." Sareth nods and takes the Staff of the Netherworld from his back. He regards the skull set into the head for a moment, and then holds it out towards Lushun.

Lushun takes it from him and holds it before himself, going into a slight trance. I assume that he's making sure that it will work as intended. "Yes. Yes." He blinks. "This will work excellently. And the rest?"

You could assume that. I'd still be wary of any sort of betrayal once he thinks he can take you.

Sareth passes him the Ring of the Unrepentant, which he slips onto his left ring finger. The Amulet of Necromancy, which he hangs around his neck. And lastly the Cloak of Death's Shadow, which he pulls over his robes.

And wait for betrayal in three…

There we go! Trust but verify. And I doubt the best magical defences can hold up to Destruction Pulses for long...

"Right." He takes the staff in both hands. "Shall we begin?"

Two…

Also the option of any number of construct energy weapons they've likely never imagined...

"Opening a portal to the void… Takes a good deal of energy, but with this staff it is not complicated." Purple mists swirl around the head of the staff, and then flow out to form a vertical disc in the air. "Surviving passage to Ashan's exterior is difficult… You had best shield yourself."

It's not going to be that easy, is it?

I nod, strengthening my environmental shield as purple mist flows over his robes and is… Drawn into them.

"And lastly, we need some way to track your companions. Without one, all I could try tracing your entry and following your path back to your home-."

Good, not forgetting them at all. If they're even here anyway. For all we know, the whatever-it-was that brought OL here missed them.

"Oh, that's easy. I imbued Mazikeen with a small amount of orange light before we left." I generate a mote of orange light and have it float over to him. "Can you trace that?"

"I don't know." His eyes narrow as the purple mist envelopes it. "I think… I… Yes. Yes, I can!" He turns to me, smiling broadly. "Are you ready?"

~~Presumably done offscreen between the summoning and Angelica levelling the cabin~~. Edit: Oh, right, the whole face-fixing discussion...

No betrayal? Or maybe he's leaving it to later. Either way…

"Yes, I am. Let's not leave them hanging in the wind any longer."

Or languishing in some mystical jail cell somewhere.

Well, hopefully he can bring Angelika and Mazikeen here promptly and then get them gone before their poking gets noticed by something far more powerful than they'd like to deal with. Assuming this is even a real dimension and not some illusion... Although forging a connection back to the DC Multiverse could make their creator goddess interested.

Duke Long · 2026-01-22T08:01:18+0000

Mr Zoat said:
"And lastly, we need some way to track your companions. Without one, all I could try tracing your entry and following your path back to your home-."

'try is'?

Chojin Patriarch said:
Presumably done offscreen between the summoning and Angelica levelling the cabin.

I think it refers to him making a construct of the damaged part of her face.

Mr Zoat · 2026-01-22T08:25:36+0000

CrazyNoVa said:
*Shudders at the thought of a version of Paul who ended up in Bloodborne*

I don't know Bloodborne well, but given the lack of a soul-.

Wait. Doesn't the entirety of Bloodborne take place in a dream or something? In that case, he might just walk into whatever real Yharnam looks like, find out that they can't help him with the whole soul thing, and then leave.

Idkusername · 2026-01-22T08:36:21+0000

Mr Zoat said:
I don't know Bloodborne well, but given the lack of a soul-.

Wait. Doesn't the entirety of Bloodborne take place in a dream or something? In that case, he might just walk into whatever real Yharnam looks like, find out that they can't help him with the whole soul thing, and then leave.

The Dream is intertwined with the real world, with dreams being the method through which or the consequence of Great Ones interacting with/intruding into the mortal world. Paul would still have to deal with beasts and murderous townspeople, and the eldritch madness-inducing secrets of the town just to start with.

Mr Zoat · 2026-01-22T08:43:07+0000

Chojin Patriarch said:
Somehow I think doing that would greatly improve the future of the world considerably.

Canonically? It would have been better if he'd won. Hard to say if it would be in this story. Stonehelm is a large medieval town, but perfecting the barrier and locking down Sheogg permanently would save a lot of people in the long run. Plus, there were a lot of demon cultists in Stonehelm.

Or she could have been playing the 'corrupt the angel' angle?

She didn't corrupt the angel. The angel corrupted herself to try and save the world, something that actually worked. She was the least shitty angel character in ithe story, if only because she expressed remorse about fucking up Kiril's life and fucked up her own at the same time.

Presumably his demonic blood runs very thin for reasons.

Because they don't want your character to be OP from the start. It does kind of suck that literally all the demonic power you get is given to you by Xana, though.

Presumably done offscreen between the summoning and Angelica levelling the cabin.

No, it was when he was talking about repairing her face. I did mention it.

Idkusername said:
The Dream is intertwined with the real world, with dreams being the method through which or the consequence of Great Ones interacting with/intruding into the mortal world. Paul would still have to deal with beasts and murderous townspeople, and the eldritch madness-inducing secrets of the town just to start with.

Or he could just avoid the weird town filled with monsters entirely. The main character of the game goes there because they're sick.

boo600 · 2026-01-22T08:47:01+0000

CrazyNoVa said:
Well, look on the plus side: Sure, this world's version of Paul might be dead, but there are worse fates that could have happened to him.

*Shudders at the thought of a version of Paul who ended up in Bloodborne*

…I'd actually love to be isekai'd to Bloodborne, stupidly enough. Yes, it sucks and it's horrible, but at least I'd get to explore Yharnam without paying 600+ dollars for a PlayStation 4.

Mquz · 2026-01-22T09:19:42+0000

From what I understand while Yharnham is unique in some ways, it's only ONE of the epicenters of the weirdness - they left the potential for a sequel open, since the beast plague is functional outside the city

CTrees · 2026-01-22T11:06:52+0000

boo600 said:
at least I'd get to explore Yharnam without paying 600+ dollars for a PlayStation 4.

$600+? My local used game store has PS4's as low as $135, depending on storage/edition. Even gamestop looks like $150-200 online. Might be worth checking again? Granted this US, so other countries may change things.

BrotherofaStudio · 2026-01-22T12:59:52+0000

I'm guessing that the dead Paul was an alternate who wound up in Ashan? I'd love to hear or see his adventures and how he advised Sareth. Maybe he could be resurrected as a Necropolis hero?

Mr Zoat · 2026-01-22T13:13:46+0000

Mr Zoat said:
Jack blushes slightly, and I decide to spare him further embarrassment. "We could have one built for Bulkhead, too."

Thank me, corrected.

Steelplaza · 2026-01-22T13:20:20+0000

Mr Zoat said:
No betrayal? Or maybe he's leaving it to later. Either way…

Lushun doesn't seem like a good guy, but he does seem like a sensible guy. He's seen OL make deals and honor them twice in a row now, and he's also seen OL demonstrate a lot of power.

I wonder if he's just made the calculation that the risk/reward ratio on betrayal isn't a good number.

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