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With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

Discussion in 'Creative Writing' started by Mr Zoat, Jan 27, 2019.

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  1. Citizen

    Citizen Well worn.

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    I'm going to go out on a limb and say that Grayven's getting Harmony-blasted sooner rather than later.
     
  2. lancelot

    lancelot Grand High Poobah

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    Saw this coming from a hundred miles away... kind of disappointed by how obvious this is.
     
  3. transhumansage

    transhumansage Versed in the lewd.

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    luna you stupid bitch!!!
     
  4. Darko

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    To be fair Luna had no idea what the equation was or did.
     
  5. Vaermina

    Vaermina Well worn.

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    The moral of this story.

    Don't fuck with ponies.
     
  6. RichardWhereat

    RichardWhereat Aia airëa Fëanáro.

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    Until the very end there, I was starting to harbour the idea that Grayven might have been able to conquer the anti-life equation portion and changing it to strengthen him, and slowly turn into a life equation portion.

    Well, that's fucked.
     
  7. lancelot

    lancelot Grand High Poobah

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    No her dumb as fuck self torture device just ate it, so now that piece of the anti-life is aware and reactive. It'll likely leave him to cause more suffering, not sure how much it'll damage/taint his soul first.
     
  8. nick012000

    nick012000 Gone for Good

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    Calling it now: Sunset's going to turn into an alicorn to defeat the Tantabus after it escapes to the real world to turn Equestria into a "land of nightmares" as the wiki put it, or as a side-effect of its defeat.
     
  9. RichardWhereat

    RichardWhereat Aia airëa Fëanáro.

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    Not even close. The moral is when someone wants to be hit with all the elements of friendship, in order to prevent the spread of memetic evil, do so.
     
  10. desolatedsabers

    desolatedsabers Know what you're doing yet?

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    there isn't a life equation so much as a mysticism of life, or something like that. the reason that it's the anti life equation is because apocalypse took the science approach while new genesis took the whole peace and love approach
     
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  11. RichardWhereat

    RichardWhereat Aia airëa Fëanáro.

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    There is a life equation, it's just that it's New 52. So yeah, it doesn't exist.
     
  12. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    It's a total conversion mod with its own maps. Its own division models, be they for ponies, griffins or changelings. The focus trees for minor factions are larger and more branching than the vanilla focus trees. Yes, it's good.

    Stalliongrad is fairly easy to start with. I'm playing the Yale Rectorate at the moment and I've conquered about two fifths of the eastern continent after a couple of false starts.
    Thank you, corrected.
     
  13. Old Knife

    Old Knife Not too sore, are you?

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    Actual moral of this story:EXPLAIN BETTER!@Grayven.

    also. this better be a nightmare.
     
  14. Vaermina

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    Yea but the Pony Magic won, so I reiterate.

    Don't fuck with Ponies.
     
  15. Citizen

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    Not sure if pun?
     
  16. RichardWhereat

    RichardWhereat Aia airëa Fëanáro.

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    Oh. Darn. I was thinking that was clever foreshadowing towards apathy.
     
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  17. RichardWhereat

    RichardWhereat Aia airëa Fëanáro.

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    The Pony Magic didn't win. The Pony Magic simply aided the Darkseid magic which was already winning, with a little extra oomph.

    Don't fuck ponies is a little different to don't fuck with ponies. I'll agree to the first.
     
  18. Darko

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    The life equation was mentioned in pre flashpoint comics but barely and I don't think it was ever shown like anti life.
    In n52 Highfather wanted to use the white light as the life equation and fight Darkseid, which makes sense seeing as white light is life.
     
  19. Handlewithcare

    Handlewithcare Versed in the lewd.

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    Oh Grayven you are so lucky! You wanted them to have a reason to rainbow blast the Anti-Life and now they do! :D

    The only way this could get better is if it ate Discord as well!
     
  20. desolatedsabers

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    but Chaos doesn't = null. it'd be the opposite of null. so everything. in otherwords the discord life equation would rip itself apart trying to defy it's own nature.
     
  21. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    you shut your whore mouth
    Hey, it worked for Black Bolt.
     
  22. RichardWhereat

    RichardWhereat Aia airëa Fëanáro.

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    Black Bolt fucked a pony?
     
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  23. Sockmonkey

    Sockmonkey I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    Yep. I remember the vid where he points out how to tell the difference between the two.
    It's a nightmare. It just remains to be seen if it's also real.
    Yeah, if anything it would make him literally shit bricks with fear because that's a thing he can physically do.
     
  24. Chojin Patriarch

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    Oh, boy. This cannot end well. Just seeing the breakdown of the seal upon the Anti-life Fragment...

    "Nothing important..."

    "It's quite beautiful, if not for what it's holding back..."

    Respect and affirmation that no good, sane being would ever want...

    Yes, she knows that feel, bro.

    "Imagine living through the worst day of your life, over and over again, with no way to change anything for the better. Even trying makes everything worse."

    Whatever it is, no-one wants to see it, because it will mean He has won. And that means everyone else is lost.

    Honestly, he's hanging a lot of hope on something that may not work at all. Who knows how Anti-life will interact with Harmony?

    "It's almost clever in its insidiousness."

    To be honest, it's not entirely within their control...

    Personally, I doubt it will go as she hopes it will...

    So close to the mark. Given that she can play a part in a Harmony Strike, I think there may well be an optional, seventh part of Harmony. Kindness, Generosity, Loyalty, Laughter, Honesty, Friendship, and Courage.

    Oh, dear. Oh this is not good.

    "What is that? What did you do?"

    ...Panic. Panic, now! Mother Box!

    Well, that sounds like a great idea!

    Seriously, why would you do something like that? In what world did anything like that seem like a good idea? This sounds like you created your own little chunk of Anti-life!

    Avarice at its worst. Oh, this cannot end well. Is Grayven going to have to call on the Ophidian to help? Would she respond?

    Containment breach! Everybody out of the Dreamscape! And then the Universe!

    Oh shit.

    Well, it was nice knowing you. All they can do is hope that the Mane 6 can Rainbow Power it into oblivion...

    Introducing... Nightmare Luna II: Electric Boogaloo!

    And a chill runs down the spine of every Equestrian...

    Well, if Darkseid is watching this, then He is smiling in satisfaction that Grayven has exceeded His highest expectations, giving form to the Anti-life... Seriously, this is the definition of "Shit's hit the fan!"

    Correction:
    ...thinking that things were otherwise...
     
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  25. Darko

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    Honestly thought this was going to have a bit more humor before shit hit the fan, but now we just saw a dimestore version of anti life bond with the actual anti life.
     
  26. DAT_NOOB

    DAT_NOOB Accused of writing in a far away land

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    Well, that's not gone well has it?
     
  27. BR549

    BR549 This is filth! FILTH!!

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    You know, I'm getting the feeling that the mention of Grayven meeting Discord in the second episode will involve Discord smacking Grayven like Sisko smacked himQ.

    "I'm all for a little chaos but YOU DON'T JUST COME CHARGING IN HERE AND BREAK MY FAVORITE TOYS, YOU IMBECILIC EXTRADIMENSIONAL SELF-INSERTING PRIMATE!"
     
  28. SirKaid

    SirKaid Know what you're doing yet?

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    Link?
     
  29. Pinklestia

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    They survive brainwashing all the time.
     
  30. Kalem_Lee

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    Welp, they're boned.
     
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