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With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

Discussion in 'Creative Writing' started by Mr Zoat, Jan 27, 2019.

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  1. RichardWhereat

    RichardWhereat Aia airëa Fëanáro.

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    Fuck off, I'm seven.
     
  2. Gantradies

    Gantradies Not too sore, are you?

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    a good point on both-
    im a little worried about what "Taul" might try now that he's got the VP free of immediately-hostile forces- and a half-complete device designed for editing multiverse reality- he's implicitly not entirely rational given that his cause is barely short of hopeless to start with- and the temptation of seeking an "easy" route to bring his world/universe out of temporal-loop limbo now that he was cause to HOPE is going to be HUGE...
     
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  3. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    Thank you, corrected.
    This sounds like something I need to look at.
     
  4. moralrelativity

    moralrelativity Know what you're doing yet?

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    Going >> doing
     
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  5. Idkusername

    Idkusername Not too sore, are you?

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    It’s time travel. He doesn’t have to enter his timeline where he exited it, though Clayface would definitely want to.
     
  6. Birdsie

    Birdsie Making the rounds.

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    Imagine the post-event party. All of these Pauls talking to each other, sharing notes... It's gonna be crazy when they come back to their universes.
     
  7. Darko

    Darko Versed in the lewd.

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    Hey Zoat can the Lord Protector see the other emotions, aside from yellow/fear, of people without his ring to help him like paragon can?

    I think you mentioned that ordinary enlightened people can't see the other emotions when not wearing a ring, just get a strong felling for them, but because OL has the heart of an Emotional Entity he can see them even without the ring, but the versions of Paul are anything but ordinary and if he can use magic then he may have a soul, either by generally building it up by absorbing magic, or by getting it from the Spirits of Evil, so maybe it is different from other people and he can have some empathetic powers even without the ring.
     
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  8. Mquz

    Mquz Versed in the lewd.

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    This is gonna be another thing that never happened thanks to Time Trapper. So many possible futures that could be caused by the Paul’s sharing their technologies, so many opportunities... He’s obviously going to cockblock everyone and make it so that they never got abducted in the first place.
     
  9. Dakkan Sall

    Dakkan Sall Getting sticky.

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    Hmmm... I'd cheer along with everyone, but I just can't help this feeling of... waiting for the other shoe to drop. That something is going to happen where something/one will try to take advantage of the setup/situation: Time Trapper seeing a way to get his timeline back and going for it when guards are down post-battle, or the Red Queen with some plan that has been hidden up until now, or possibly Nekron via Black and/or Black Queen, or something. Until the arc ends, I'm just dreading it...

    That momentarily out of the way, though, huzzah after all! Do hope that the Clayface situation gets a happy resolution for the duplicate/extension, and possibly even Annie. TT was right: Hagen just played a key role in saving the multiverse from Krona. Well, hoping for that and to get to see at least some of the various Pauls and Jades back in their home universes after this.
     
  10. DiehardDust

    DiehardDust Squeaky clean, I promise.

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    As enjoyable as this chapter was, i can't help but wonder: what ever happened to that National socialist Supergirl?
    Was it explained in an earlier chapter and i just missed it?
     
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  11. FeepingCreature

    FeepingCreature Know what you're doing yet?

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    Heh.
    He gave it the finger.
     
  12. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    Thank you, corrected.
    I don't remember making a firm decision.
    I promise you that this will not happen.
     
  13. Darko

    Darko Versed in the lewd.

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    Can Lord Protector at least see the other emotions aside from fear when he is not wearing a ring, like OL can, for example when he had sex with Holly and Karon he was able to see her hope and love even when he didn't have the ring?
     
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  14. Prince Charon

    Prince Charon Just zis guy, you know?

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    He might actually have been that discreet, or Zoat might have made an error when he put one of the dates in.
     
  15. Darko

    Darko Versed in the lewd.

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    If time travel is involved then maybe Clayface will come back to his universe after Bats took Peter's ring from him, or maybe Peter hid it better and is not using it because he doesn't find it necessary, or maybe he is worried he will be driven insane by the ring.
     
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  16. RichardWhereat

    RichardWhereat Aia airëa Fëanáro.

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  17. Coda

    Coda Not too sore, are you?

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    I... don't think so? But I've also read Skybreaker's Call, so I can guess.
     
  18. l---erddad---l

    l---erddad---l Wait, google can see this?

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    Thinker powers, right? Super geniuses, precogs, and the like?

    Alternatively, to stifle Artificial Intelligence, maybe?
     
  19. Pinklestia

    Pinklestia Experienced.

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    I am happy for anti-green, he is finally free.
     
  20. RichardWhereat

    RichardWhereat Aia airëa Fëanáro.

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    Yeah, that was a bit of cheerful good news.
     
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  21. Chaoswind

    Chaoswind Lord of nonsense

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    Anti green soul is made of pure raw will glow and raw earth elemental magic, it's no wonder he has become so powerful after more than two years of constant infusions. I would say he is a similar creature to Alan (half will elemental) but it's further along on its development.

    High frequency trading was banned thanks to the recommendations of the Greek minister of economics (the guy that is actually a God), he got it banned because he easily predicted AI, savants and other forms of powers could easily exploit the weaknesses in high frequency trading to swindle absurd amounts of money from the global economy.
     
  22. Darko

    Darko Versed in the lewd.

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    Pretty sure Anti Green has an ordinary soul with no green infusion.
    At least that's whst Zoat said when I asked him a long time ago, don't know if he changed his mind.

    The reason he is so green is because he has been tortured by his ring so long he developed a strong will.
     
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  23. Ace Dreamer

    Ace Dreamer Questioning The Nature of our Realities

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    AGPaul is running on willpower just to stay functioning, I'd say. The earth magic from his daily resurrections, via a Pit. To quote an Englishman, "Poor sod".

    HF Trading is like saying people used this road network with a 60 mph top speed, of course things will work properly when that goes up to a 1000 mph... Without changing any of the traffic laws. But, because you can't see the speeding cars, and the (financial) 'deaths', everyone assumes things are OK...
     
  24. AngelicKnight.

    AngelicKnight. Lewd demon of negotiable affection

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    With all these Paul's most of then are from superhero worlds, admittedly to varying degrees and some worlds require a squint to see it as a super world, but I wondered something today.

    Is there a Paul in the Power Puff Girls world? Does he have a ring? What colour is it?
     
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  25. Pinklestia

    Pinklestia Experienced.

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    There is one in Marvel I think?

    But not in other non DC settings unless you count Renegade FiM cross.
     
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  26. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    Plutos realised that it would cause massive instability in financial markets without actually improving the functioning of the economy, so he worked to create a hostile legislative environment.
     
  27. Darko

    Darko Versed in the lewd.

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    Zoat is Soranik Natu going to show up in the paragon universe again?
     
  28. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    I have no current plans for her to do so, but it's not impossible.
     
  29. Shotiegun11

    Shotiegun11 Getting sticky.

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    Mr Zoat, Do you know when the SI will be actually acting as his role of teacher in the OLC again? Actually interacting with his subordinates? If Dox hasn’t ‘established himself’ as the leader yet then the SI staying off Maltus is just a waste of time for the OLC’s growth/strengthening?

    I feel like the SI is either already a ‘legendary figure’ in the OLC or that only those people from the spar or the ones that came to fight in the silver city know he exists.
     
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  30. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    He interacts with another Orange Lantern in the next episode.
     
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