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Deathknight134
Hello, wanted to ask if Machine King will be continued at some point? I ask because I love both your stories, Machine King and Surging Pegasus. They're pretty damn great, both of them! 😁 You write amazing stories. 👍✨️
DaveyL2013
Is the Worm SI abandoned? I just binged it and enjoyed it enough that I definitely want more
Daimonin
Daimonin
Something between abandoned and hiatus? I'm trying to get back into writing but not sure if I'll continue it or do something new.

It was fun writing it, but the worm-verse is constraining. Inventing new capes, than their zerg strains is... There's a reason Marvel/DC keeps just recycling plot lines and characters.

Thanks for commenting though. It's readers showing they love my writing that makes me motivated!
I would like to start this by saying this is just constructive criticism and everyone is free to ignore this. I would also like to make it known that I like shiros work I just noticed a not great habit, not bad but it does make the stories worse.
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D_kitsune81
It's fine and great when the smut is part of the plot but when it feels forced in it feels like it could be a side stories thing
D_kitsune81
Examples where the smut serves the plot are early parts of supervillain, GMs Mercy one from a recent chapter, gamers guide to necromancy and others.
D_kitsune81
In super villain specifically though the MC was set up to be super villain with some class. Yes he's a perv and villain so he was going to get laid but smut in every chapter stops the story from moving. Like the entire story to like chapter 26 takes place over 2-3 weeks
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