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With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

Discussion in 'Creative Writing' started by Mr Zoat, Jan 27, 2019.

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  1. Chojin Patriarch

    Chojin Patriarch Veteran Lurker

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    Yeah, this whole situation is as trippy as fuck. Battling an abomination of your own making upon a battlefield made of your own dreaming mind alongside a winged Unicorn of night? Prog Rock fans would have that art framed on the wall.

    Can you blame her for thinking of happier times?

    Unfortunately, Grayven is better at Fear than Avarice.

    However, it's not easy to be the kind of person to embody all the elements at once...

    Like I said, she's thinking of happier times.

    Harmony tends to be forgiving, admittedly.

    I'm surprised there was no fear present. Imagine Luna's uncertainty at how her sister would react...

    Given the danger, any gamble is worth the risk.

    That sounds awkward as hell...

    Yeah, that's a popular characterisation in fan-fiction. I can see her feeling uncomfortably inferior to her sister...

    Oh, my. Grayven, you cad. Hmm... Would this qualify as a wet dream?:p

    Oh, dear, it's already starting to spread...

    I hope it was just a polite talk...

    Ouch, that must have stung.

    Huh. That must make for some embarrassing moments sometimes, not knowing what awaits you in someone's dreams...

    Wait for it!

    What.:confused:

    Oh, gods... It makes a perverse sense. Since the danger is locked within Grayven's mind, he's the only one who can really work to fix it...

    Kosh: What do you want?

    Of course. It's only natural she should fear that she could still harbour those feelings, that they might come bubbling back to the surface someday...

    Why else would she have created the Tantabus, after all?

    No way.:eek: Is she on the path to becoming a White Lantern, or is this just symbolic? Surely we'll see soon!

    That kind of approach says "I feel no need to chase you, for you cannot escape me no matter how far or fast you run." Pure slasher movie monster.

    Let the mutual vision quest begin!

    The Tantabus-Anti-life fusion is enjoying this, isn't it?

    Oh, this is going to be good...

    Well, this is going to be an interesting sequence of events. Luna and Grayven going on a shared vision quest through their respective memories for the macguffins to defeat the slow-moving monster? And no doubt those in the real world are panicking.

    Corrections:
    She tosses her mane...
    I can't read pony expressions...
    A pony whose very cutie...
    "We assume that We didst not imagine that?"
     
  2. Flux Casey

    Flux Casey The Colonel

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    JoJo approves.

    Of the verbage, that is. I'm not sure what his position is on horse fucking. Probably something along the lines of "Yare yare daze".
     
  3. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    What exactly was happy about being so miserable that she tried to bring about eternal night?
    ...



    Yes. Forgiving.
    Thank you, corrected.
     
  4. desolatedsabers

    desolatedsabers Know what you're doing yet?

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    welp. this has taken a turn for the neat. and the ship fuel i suppose. also, isn't a pink lantern focusing on obsessive romantic love. what're you getting at zoat?
     
  5. RichardWhereat

    RichardWhereat Aia airëa Fëanáro.

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    We've joked before about how Zoat has clearly enjoyed cumming here, but I think we're about to see some hardcore bestialit- interspecies erotica! The sort we should have seen on Vega.

    Huh. Paul could have been Spider-Man's dad.
     
  6. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    The Renegade and Luna are both ponies.
     
  7. Chojin Patriarch

    Chojin Patriarch Veteran Lurker

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    ...Maybe she was thinking of a time before Nightmare Moon, then?x3

    Effing Hardcore. Uh... Forgiving, when it likes them?

    Admittedly, I haven't seen more than maybe the first whole season and some of the second before I got bored of it, barring stuff like Twilight Vs Tirek... I'm surely missing a lot...

    Well, that's something of a weighty problem, isn't it?:p Picture a Cyldesdale wooing a Shetland...
     
  8. desolatedsabers

    desolatedsabers Know what you're doing yet?

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    plus if they both went through the mirror they'd be the same species mostly. since grayven has basically turned himself into an apocalyptian after being a roided up human. seriously the blockbuster formula, who in their right mind would think that was valuable.
     
  9. RichardWhereat

    RichardWhereat Aia airëa Fëanáro.

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    Maybe if they position the mirror just right?

    ♬ Love. The kind you clean up with a mop and bucket. ♬
     
  10. desolatedsabers

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    Welp, that's just become one of my favourite things i've seen on this website. good job,
     
  11. RichardWhereat

    RichardWhereat Aia airëa Fëanáro.

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    Now picture it playing out for real. Because the mirror opens up into public.

    A tall naked female human with Elentári hair speared on alicorn cock in public. Wonder Woman rocks up to to hear the words "GrAyVeN!"

    I'm thinking Diana just turns around and goes home.
     
  12. desolatedsabers

    desolatedsabers Know what you're doing yet?

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    Diana doesn't get paid enough to deal with that, and aphrodite would probably crow on if she tried to stop it anyway. soooo it's basically a lose lose situation.
     
  13. RichardWhereat

    RichardWhereat Aia airëa Fëanáro.

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    Well, if she gets in on it, on the other side of the mirror, it could be win win.
     
  14. desolatedsabers

    desolatedsabers Know what you're doing yet?

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    i was about to say no but then i remembered that she was descended from the greek pantheon. so she'd probably be fine with that? iunno.
     
  15. RichardWhereat

    RichardWhereat Aia airëa Fëanáro.

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    Is pegging a greek thing?
     
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  16. desolatedsabers

    desolatedsabers Know what you're doing yet?

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    if it's something to do with sex, the greek gods probably did it. that is a rule.
     
  17. RichardWhereat

    RichardWhereat Aia airëa Fëanáro.

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    Apparently it is, with Aphroditos and poems by Herodas.
     
  18. Handlewithcare

    Handlewithcare Versed in the lewd.

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    Ha, his first virtue is Kindness.

    Generosity should be easy for him, Loyalty too, Honesty...eh, his existence is kind of a lie, no? Laughter should be a doozy.

    Honesty is probably the only challenge.
     
  19. dxdragon

    dxdragon Experienced.

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    I see Grayven is a member of the interspecies reviewers.

    I wonder what score he would give her? Or a tamaranean?

    So, Luna will become a white lantern, while Grayven will get all the elements of harmony and become the avatar? :D
     
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  20. WereDragon

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    Grayven became an authority on the mechanics of the harmony-based artefacts when?
    He watched a cartoon. Luna lived the world.

    White Lantern Luna. Not something I was expecting. Should be easy enough to arrange.

    Element Barer Grayven? Rather harder. Basic emotions are part of life and broadly universal. Complex social concepts rather less so. The first three he has but laughter and friendship aren’t really his thing. That said given how easily he got kindness I suspect a certain tree is stacking the odds.

    Sounds like a pokemon.
    ...did a Paul end up in the Pokemon World?
     
  21. Ace Dreamer

    Ace Dreamer Questioning The Nature of our Realities

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    This almost has the feel of Grayven taking on Luna as a student... Or, is that a sort of Conquest thing?

    I do like 'Tantaquation' - it's quite elegant.

    "Become a member of the Herd" - ha! MLP ponies are but one shape that our Transhumanist existence will allow. :)
     
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  22. Caerwen

    Caerwen Know what you're doing yet?

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    You need a power ring to go lantern, white or otherwise. Otherwise it's just enlightenment?
     
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  23. Chaoswind

    Chaoswind Lord of nonsense

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    It's even in the mind scape, so it probably doesn't even count as soul enlightenment like Paul has. Remember soul enlightenment usually requires years of meditation and self reflection, and Paul had to go through a crash course of every orange tinted thought he could have and came off it with inhuman thought processes.

    What Grayven and Luna are doing doesn't even come close to that, if anything they are taking the first few steps to enlightenment at best.
     
  24. Stsword

    Stsword Versed in the lewd.

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    If you mean "go lantern" as in be a member of a lantern corps, yes, if you mean "go lantern" as in manipulate the Glow of the Emotional Spectrum, no, not necessarily.

    Larfleeze was theorized to have undergone a transformation ala Alan's, and that as a greed elemental he didn't need a power battery anymore.

    Justice Lord Stewart controls the Glow as his New God ability.

    The Maltusian factions control the Glow through biology, symbiosis with the Maltusian symbionts.

    Dark Druid controls the Black through magic.

    And Paul worried that the Omac/Amazos would be able to duplicate his orange power ring just as Amazos in other continuities did.
     
  25. Coda

    Coda Versed in the lewd.

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    Well dost thou, punk?

    Ponyback rides!

    shown

    fades

    I can't be too mad about TCB because otherwise I would never have been exposed to MLP fic in the first place. I get the horror aspect of it is... well, horrifying, but that's kind of the point.

    Might be a way to pick up love or friendzoneship...
     
  26. Darko

    Darko Connoisseur.

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    So the renegade is attracted to women he fights like with Kara 50 and now Luna.
    Paul, and some of his counterparts, on the other hand seems to be attracted to bad girls who become better when dating him.
    ... Oh god Zoat has the personality of a girl who likes to "save" the bad boy.
    ... I may have just lost a lot of respect for him.
     
  27. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    Thank you, corrected.
     
  28. Vaermina

    Vaermina Well worn.

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    I mean... That leads to one kind of magic...
     
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  29. Doccer

    Doccer I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    What is Kosh?
     
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  30. Lazurman

    Lazurman That Others May Fap

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    My Little Pony: Pregnancy is Magic!
     
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