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With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

Discussion in 'Creative Writing' started by Mr Zoat, Jan 27, 2019.

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  1. Radix

    Radix I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    Someone actually showed me some panels from older comics, and I think there is enough hints that I could see it if it was handled better. It had the basis of a good story to tell about coming out after that time.

    It should not have been forced out by Teen Jean in that way.
     
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    Idkusername Versed in the lewd.

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    Start from 5:20, I can’t seem to get the Timestamp to work.
     
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  3. Maxx Crowley

    Maxx Crowley I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    Well I get that it's a cover or what not. But I'm struggling to accept that it would either be in Nightcrawler's character, or that Marvel would allow it.

    I'm just saying....given how long Bobby has been around, you were going to get backlash. I can also tell you, as a long time gay reader, that we just roll our eyes over this shit. Like "yeah yeah, I'll be waiting for the retcon."

    Sure, they could have told a good story. But why bother? Pandering! Except we dont' fall for that shit.

    Hell, I think there would be a good story of Jean wanting a gay bestie so much, that she did it accidently. I say accidently, because her doing it on purpose would be a really bad look, and you'd have the whole "gays convertin' muh children!" bullshit I get accused of at least once a month.
     
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    Idkusername Versed in the lewd.

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    The video literally says the writer managed to slip it past Marvel.

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    As for whether that’s in character for Nightcrawler... *shrugs*

    Also Maxx, you shouldn’t be so judgemental, you know. The Pope is all for LGBT rights. :p
     
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  5. Maxx Crowley

    Maxx Crowley I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    Yes, I did catch the part of the video where it was slipped past. But a little eyeball kick is not a true character moment. It IS how fanfiction gets started though.

    Okay, so I've attempted to comment on this 5 times. But when I read it back, its simply far too angry, and has nothing to do with Zoat's chapter so....I'm not gonna bother.

    Just understand that my feelings on the matter would take ALL the Red light available.
     
  6. PDV

    PDV Revelation That Uncertainty Is Itself An Answer

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    It doesn't, though. I mean, has she asked? They haven't known each other that long. Probably if this hadn't come up, he'd contact Stark (or somebody else) about designing something later and get it as a gift. He just got it started sooner because it could defuse a fight and make a point to do that now.
     
  7. Flightless Man

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    My first experiance with Iceman, was Aaron/Sean (stupid look alikes) Ashmore's version. So for me, Iceman was always bi after the whole Rogue/Pyro thing in the movies.

    It seems like Paul never cnosidered the forcefield at first. Gambit was a dick, so Paul realized it was an easy fix. He said hey gambit want to come see if we can do this for her. If gambit said no, he would have gone anyway. He brought gambit because he was present when he realized it, and it will also get Gambit off his back.

    If gambit lies and says paul had no involvement, he's evil. If he tell's the honest truth, it makes both look like good people (Xmen are heroes after all, so maybe we shouldn't be looking for the worst reasons first)

    And Maxx, you are getting so worked up you need to take a step back. This is not the place for an arguement on anything besides the story. LGBTQ rights, while important, was not part of the chapter and has been brought in by the commenters.
     
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  8. Maxx Crowley

    Maxx Crowley I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    I literally said nothing about it. I specifically stated that I wasn't going to.

    So, you know, cram it.

    Seriously, don't be trying to scold me on something I didn't do.
     
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  9. Maxx Crowley

    Maxx Crowley I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    No. There hasn't been a single rant. I haven't even been remotely agitated save for the one thing where I said I wasn't going to get into it.

    You're just doing that internet/youtube thing where you're trying to make me angry.

    I posted twice, because I read Zoat's post, commented, and the read all the comments, and then commented on them.

    So if you're so concerned, hows about you drop it and leave me alone? Because I know what you're trying to do, and I"m not going to play.

    You can sit in the void with Vaermina if you wanna keep going.

    Speaking of the New Sun....

    Didn't they try to pass him off as potentially another Summers brother for a while there? I have a memory of it. But it could be wrong.
     
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  10. Bramble Thorn

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    The reason it is at the top is because the cake had just exploded before the scene started. And PaulX (the Paul with the Xavier School) decided to take the blame for the exploding cake (must have used to much baking soda) and that talk to Gambit privately instead of telling everyone that Gambit had in fact exploited the cake in a fit of jealousy, being a narc an getting Gambit in trouble.

    This isn't a Maxx Rant™. I vaguely remember one of those, and this milquetoast talk we are having now, aint it.
     
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  11. Maxx Crowley

    Maxx Crowley I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    No. I told you, I'm not playing your game. Stop, or I block you.

    He's trying to make me angry, but I'm not going for it.

    Hell, I haven't even BEEN angry, nor have I wanted to become so. Hence why I stated I wasn't going to comment earlier, with me and the other fellow moving on to a PM.

    Edit: I just thought of something.

    Didn't Rogue lose her Ms. Marvel powers a few years back? Then "Permanently" absorb Sunfire's?

    I doubt that stuck, but it just popped in my head.

    That, and I went searching, and I don't think anyone has ever going with trying to get Rogue something like a skintight forcefield.

    I imagine if there was an episode though, there would be a "Moral" about solving your own problems and not relying upon shortcuts. Even though said shortcut would be using a device to overcome what amounts to a serious medical condition.
     
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  12. Radix

    Radix I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    She gained control of her powers mid 00s. Then she absorbed Wonder Man and lost control in Uncanny Avengers around the Avenge the Earth arc. She bad his powers and complete self absorbes as he is an energy being.

    Some time after that she managed to get rid of him, not sure on the how. Currently she uses a modified control collar as a bracelet I believe to have sexy times with her husbans.
     
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  13. Maxx Crowley

    Maxx Crowley I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    I've always really wanted to like Simon, as I find the whole "Ionic" energy thing rather interesting. Especially between him and Atlas/Goliath.

    But its like, they either don't use him, or put him in stupid shit, or just make him look horrible.
     
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  14. Someguy Somewhere

    Someguy Somewhere The Critical Fumbler

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    Well they had time traveling and Sinister showing up for the brain stuff...I THINK that during the same period there was some of Sinister's early plotting of the Summers and Gray Family Trees. There's other examples of time travel stories around that era screwing around with Sinister and Apocalypse making plans generations out. A similar story had the members of Apocalypse's Clan folks show up with a powerset that was a LOT like Blink's (complete with colour and sound effect), back in the ye olden days where the clan folk had to call out their master from his usual naps to deal with Vampire related issues.

    As for being yet another Summers, that might line up with The End story line bit Stsword mentioned. I mean...generic energy powers DO sort of line up with the Summers Family, and they keep finding more of them everywhere, in every time line. Heck New Sun sounds a lot like X-Man's origin story.
     
  15. Maxx Crowley

    Maxx Crowley I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    You know what I always love?

    Like Mr. Sinister is always after that Summers DNA right?

    And Cable and X-man are so monstrously powerful because they have Jean Gray's powers.
     
  16. Someguy Somewhere

    Someguy Somewhere The Critical Fumbler

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    Always saw it as a Synergy sort of explanation.

    Jean's powerset is great, but always needed an external overcharge (big flaming bird) to reach it's potential.

    Scotts powers was nothing But power. Indeed, too much power for him to regulate without the glasses (yeah I know the brain damage story, but thats mostly highlighting what his uncontrolled abilities do reach)

    It's sort of chocolate in your peanutbutter mixing. You have the scope of Jean's telepathic and TK abilities, but their output is increased by the extra energy from Scott's power source.
     
  17. Maxx Crowley

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    I mean maybe. I've just always gotten a laugh out of it.

    Sinister: "I've got to get Cyclops' DNA!"

    Jean Gray: *Literally ripping planets in half with her mind*

    Sinister: "Red beams! He shoots red beams! Think of the potential!
     
  18. Stsword

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    Yes, that's always how I understood it, that the Summers DNA was the nitrous oxide that made the Grey psychic powers go from 0 to 60 at race car speeds.

    The same way that Hyperstorm, Rachel Summers and Franklin Richard's (edited:) son's nigh omnipotent powers come from him tapping hyperspace like his grandmother the Invisible Woman.
     
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  19. Maxx Crowley

    Maxx Crowley I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    I'm...pretty sure Franklin is Sue's son, not grandson.
     
  20. Lord Ernest

    Lord Ernest At the End...

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    Honestly, I understood it that way as well, the only problem I had was that Mr. Sinister only seemed to be focusing his eugenics master plan on only one couple or mutant combination. If I had seen him pursuing different options, combinations or couples I could have taken him more seriously, even been behind his plan. Because Mutants eugenics are really interesting.

    However, when I met Gabriel Summers I thought Marvel had created a character that represented what Mr. Sinister was trying to do, without his involvement, so all his plans and schemes, his scientific pursuit, didn't have an actual meaning when "nature" had already accomplished it.
     
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  21. Lord Ernest

    Lord Ernest At the End...

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    Hyperstorm is Franklin Richards and Rachel Summers' son, so grandson of Sue Storm/Reed Richards and Scott Summers/Jean Grey.
     
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  22. Maxx Crowley

    Maxx Crowley I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    I completely misread that sentence then. It's like 3:20 am, I apologize. I'm kinda zonked out.
     
  23. Bramble Thorn

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    So this is all Mr. Zoats's fault for not posting the new chapter 2 hours ago?
    ...I can agree to that.
     
  24. Stsword

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    I just remembered something.

    The Supersoldier Serum enhances all biological processes- Captain America even got a photographic memory from the treatment, because his brain was rewired for efficiency along with his body.

    Mutant powers are biological processes, therefore a mutant who got the supersoldier serum ought to find their powers enhanced. There's even a case where that was implied to be the case- Captain America of Mutant X. When he freaked out he basically conquered the USA all by himself. It took a Goblyn Force possessed Beyonder to take him out.

    Oh and there's a variation of the supersoldier serum that might be running around a Marvel universe that I imagine Paul would appreciate- The Colonel America formula. It doesn't enhance the body but the mind, it made Trenton Craft strong enough to decimate a city like a nuclear bomb or repair his own body.

    To be fair, I failed to include the word son in that sentence like I meant to. So while I imagine if you were more awake you probably would have gotten it from context, but if I were more awake I'd have typed it correctly in the first place.
     
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  25. Maxx Crowley

    Maxx Crowley I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    From Zoat we emerge, and to Zoat we return.

    All Roads lead to Zoat.
     
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    Amen.
     
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    IIRC there was something along those lines in X-Men Evolution. In that universe Cap and Logan saved a very young Magneto from a ...National Socialist... camp. Later on it's shown that rather then a bomb or rocket dunking Cap in the ocean, he was put on ice because the Serum Didn't work correctly. In that same episode an elderly Magneto uses a duplicate of it on himself, giving himself some level of rejuvenation, with no side effects.

    Later on there is a version of 'secondary mutations' that are triggered in sabertooth and mystique that might be based on Mutant Growth Hormone, or possibly some development of this instead. Don't remember the details of their upgrades too much, other then 'look more like the movie versions'
     
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  29. Threadmarks: Meanwhile, in Universe 534834 (part 4)
    Mr Zoat

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    Earth 534834

    20th November 1992
    11:27 GMT -5


    "…telling you, if you ain't got an appointment then I ain't letting you in."

    Mr. LeBeau reaches into his coat.

    "How's about-?"

    I elbow him. "We commend you on doing your job so diligently. However, we believe that Iron Man has been looking for the owner of this-"

    I take the ring out of subspace and slide it through the slot in the guard station.

    "-for some time, and he may appreciate being told of its location."

    "I can't just phone up Tony Stark and ask him to come down here!"

    "No, but you can phone the head of security and say 'weird ring at the front gate'. And if he tells you to tell us to get lost…" I shrug. "We'll clear off and make an actual appointment."

    The security guard looks into my eyes for a few moments, then sighs and reaches for the booth's phone.

    "Alright, but if Iron Man throws you off the lot with a unibeam, don't blame me."

    "Thank you, wouldn't dream of it."

    I take a step back as he starts dialling, keeping a watchful eye on us both all the while.

    Mr. LeBeau frowns at me.

    "Why didn't you phone ahead?"

    "I don't have his number. And I didn't exactly plan for you to blow up my cake this morning."

    "…guy at the front gate. Says he wants Mister Stark or Iron Man. Got some weird rings-." He frowns, taking a closer look at me. "Ah, yeah? He's-." … "Right away, sir."

    He drops the phone, turns, and dashes out of the booth, sprinting for the main building.



    Oh. Oh, they think-. Shield!

    Mr. LeBeau is already on his marks, staff extended as he watches for where the attack will come from. We both spot the plume of flame from the roof of the Stark Enterprises building at the same time. I respond by reorientating my shield and switching to my armoured costume while Mr. LeBeau steps into the cover of the guard booth.

    "What you do to rile them up?"

    "I think they just had a bit of a miscommunication-"

    The plume of flame vanishes as the armour switches to a dive, heading directly towards us. It's-. Not Iron Man. Dark blue, grey and white. War Machine.

    "-about who we are. You see, the original owner of that ring-" I send construct filaments through the opening in the guard screen and recover it. "-kidnapped Anthony Stark, gave him permanent spinal injuries and used him for slave labour before he escaped."

    "So when they ask, I didn’t come here with you."

    A wave of hot air washes over us as War Machine brakes, switching to an upright position as he points his arm-mounted weapons at me.

    "Drop your weapons."

    I gamely raise my hands. "Strictly speaking, I'm not carrying any weapons."

    "Sure doesn't looks like that to me."

    "A shield is generally considered armour. May I draw your attention to the fact that I'm not green?"

    "If you're not working for the Mandarin, where did you get that ring?"

    I take the finger out of subspace and throw it at him. He actually catches it rather than dodging or shooting, bringing his right hand up to his faceplate to get a closer look.

    "The heck is-?"



    "Is this what I think it is?"

    "If you think it's the Mandarin's finger, yes. That's how I got the ring."

    "And the Mandarin?"

    "Got away, down a finger and a-" I hold the ring up. "-ring. Otherwise I'd have said something before now. Do you think you can..? Lower your guns now?"

    He hesitates for a moment, then lowers his arms and descends to the ground.

    "You want something?"

    "A friend of mine needs a piece of equipment that I'm hoping that Stark Enterprises can develop. I wanted to offer Mister Stark this ring in exchange."

    "And what does your friend hiding behind the booth want?"

    I roll my eyes. "A kick up the arse, probably. Miste-. Gambit?"

    Staff folded away but hands concealed, Mr. LeBeau steps back into view.

    "Gambit?"

    I roll my eyes. "Yes, War Machine?"

    "Question.. withdrawn."

    "Hey, don't feel bad." Mr. LeBeau nods his head in my direction. "This guy picked 'Orange Lantern'."

    "On Maltus, the lantern is the symbol of law enforcement, while the colour refers to-. Never mind. Has Mister Stark agreed to meet us?"

    "Yeah, he'll meet you. His office is on the top floor. You want a lift?"

    "I can fly. Gambit?"

    He shrugs, which is sufficiently unhelpful that I just stick orange greaves around his legs and carry him with us. He schools his expression almost immediately and flashes me a decidedly put-out look as we land on the roof. Mr. Stark appears to have seen us coming and is waiting for us, leaning on his walking stick. A briefcase… Probably containing a low-weight version of his power armour is propped up against the roof exit wall.

    "So! You took the Mandarin's finger! Nice work. Want a job? I could always use two bodyguards."

    "Not at present, but thank you for the offer. I'm trying to improve my skills before returning full-time to the field."

    "Seems to me your skills are pretty good."

    "'Pretty good' would have been getting the rest of him. Listen,-."

    "I was listening. I get the Mandarin's ring, you get whatever it is your friend wants. So what does he want?"

    "A friend of.. mine and Gambit's has a preternatural ability which causes her to drain the vitality out of any animal she touches. She can't turn it off. I was hoping that you'd be able to design some sort of skin tight force field that would deliver tactile feedback, because… As things stand, she can't touch people."

    "Force fields aren't really my strong point, but I could look into it. And I know some people. Show me the ring?"

    I float it over to him, and he snatches it out of my construct before examining it closely.

    "Yeah, I recognize this. And you don't, clearly."

    "I'm sorry?"

    He looks at me like I'm a somewhat slow child.

    "This is the impact beam ring. Your friend could probably make the sort of force field you want just by putting it on." He shrugs as my right palm meets my forehead. "I mean, I'll still take the commission if you want me to..?"

    Mr. LeBeau raises his eyebrows.

    "How long you had dat ring?"

    "A.. while, but I didn't want to risk testing it in case it was dangerous to the user, or… Had some sort of security."

    Mr. Stark shakes his head. "Not as far as I know. If the Mandarin knew how to make them, he'd have them on his toes as well. I think he found them somewhere else and took them. Which means…"

    "No security, or he wouldn't have been able to."

    I sigh.

    "Right! Sorry to have wasted everyone's time. I'll be heading home now to give Rogue the good news."
     
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    But you do have a power ring.

    If this is just his way of speaking then it's fine, but if it isn't then it should be 'did you do'

    Hey, at least his name makes sense, seeing as he wears a war machine, while Gambits name could make people think that he has some kind of luck manipulation powers or is a highly tactical thinker, instead of a guy that can make things blow up.

    Smart, we all know what happened the last time a version of Paul tried to use something he didn't know much about.
     
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