Hey man, I'm usually a lurker but after finding your OC DxD story, I simply had to say you did a great job at making DxD-verse more gritty & realistic which got me hooked.
I enjoyed the way you weaved plotlines and world-building, like the Araneya-Grayfia flashback or how Devil politics/behavior/physiology worked.
Cons: jumping ahead without build-up or making things complicated like Belinda relationship or Nadia.
I enjoyed the way you weaved plotlines and world-building, like the Araneya-Grayfia flashback or how Devil politics/behavior/physiology worked.
Cons: jumping ahead without build-up or making things complicated like Belinda relationship or Nadia.
I'll win her back. Goddamn it!

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