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Ashes of Devotion [ATLA - Azula x OC]

Ashes of Devotion [ATLA - Azula x OC]
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Lin remembers another life, another war, another world. This condition makes her the perfect soldier for her new life.

Reborn in fire and steel, she serves the Fire Nation with unyielding loyalty. When assigned to mentor the young princess Azula, she becomes the only flame Azula cannot master. And somewhere between admiration, rivalry and care, between ashes and fire, lies a hunger that could consume them both.
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Chapter 1 - To battle. New

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The sky was already choked with ash when the first fireball landed. Jian flinched as the heat tore into the front line ahead of him, dirt and flame vomiting into the air, pieces of armor and bodies tossed about like broken toys.

His ears rang from the blast, and through the haze, he could hear the screaming, someone wailing, or the sound of someone else, coughing blood. He didn't know their names, he hadn't been here long enough to learn them.

A week ago, he'd been transporting supplies near Gaoling. Then came the draft orders. "We need spearmen at the front." the officer said. "Just hold the line, the benders will do the hard work."

Now he stood in a line of lancers, his palms slick on the wooden shaft of his spear. He hadn't even stabbed anything with it yet. Another fireball arced overhead and although it didn't land near him, he still flinched as if it had. Sweat and fire stung his cheek. A man beside him was curled into a ball, sobbing.

"Stand up, damn you!" the officer barked from behind. "The next one that breaks ranks will be buried!"

Jian forced himself to look in ahead. He shouldn't be here, he thought. In fact, none of them should; this wasn't a fair fight.

Another burst of flame illuminated his face, and he heard yells from the enemy soldiers. The Fire Nation army began charging them. A man ahead of him was hit square in the chest, and Jian saw him fly backward, crashing into the earth, flames still clinging to what remained of his uniform.

His stomach turned, and he dropped to one knee and vomited into the dirt. The stench of burned flesh mixed with bile in his nose.

"Get up, come on. Just get up." he muttered.

A horn sounded in the distance, signaling Earth Kingdom orders, their line had to move forward. Jian, still dizzy, pushed into the chaos. Fire Nation troops were ahead already engaged with earth benders, dressed in their blood-red armor, pushing through their defenses.

A soldier charged him with a short sword. Jian panicked, thrust his spear, and felt it strike something soft. The Fire Nation soldier's breath hitched; Jian's weapon had pierced clean through his chest.

The soldier crumpled and Jian stood over him, panting. Blood trickled down the shaft of the lance, warm on his knuckles, making his hands shake as his knees buckled.

"I… I killed him." he whispered.

The chaotic sounds of the battlefield dimmed as shock took hold of him, his hands were shaking, and for a moment he didn't have the strength to pull his spear out of the now-dead soldier. Once he managed he tried his best to focus, he needed to clear his mind if he wanted to survive.

The sounds slowly returned and screams and moans filled his head, the clashes of swords and armor as well.

A burst of light flashed to his right, he turned and dodged just in time. He searched for his attacker but instead was met with a confusing and terrifying sight.

A girl, barely older than his little sister, walked through the battlefield as if taking a stroll through a quiet courtyard. Her black armor gleamed, flecked with soot and blood. Both her arms were metal, with spikes on their sides. Her hair made her stand out, as if it had lost color somehow, a mixture between black, white and ashen color.

As she began her attack, her arms lit with fire and her metal limbs glowed red as she took down bender after bender in a terrifying display of power.

Her movements were clean, surgical, and without flair. She didn't throw wild arcs or dance like some of the other firebenders around her.

There were no unnecessary flames being thrown around. She tore through a group of earth benders, with precision and brutality.

With a low kick followed by a quick jab, she killed the closest one to her, the soldier falling to the ground with smoke rising from his body. Then, she followed it up with another burst of flame aimed at the head of the soldier beside his fallen comrade. Jian was only a witness to the carnage she was inflicting as she advanced. And she was getting closer.

Jian stared as she moved closer to him; she wasn't even breathing hard. Her face was unreadable. She wore prosthetics on her hands, smoke rising behind her as if her back was on fire.

"She´s a monster…" he whispered.

His commanding officer screamed for a charge. Jian clutched his spear, pointed it forward, and braced himself. As her gaze found him, fear struck his body like a boulder. For a moment, he thought he saw something human behind those golden eyes, but the moment passed quickly and he knew that she was coming for him as she moved.

Her metal arm swept out, catching his spear mid-thrust and shattering it like dry wood. Before Jian could even gasp, her leg shot upward in a flash of motion, striking his chest and throwing him backward. Pain took hold of him as he landed hard on his ass. As he looked up to plead for his life to the spirits he only saw her fist aimed at him.

A blinding white and yellow flash covered his view quickly followed by darkness. Then there was nothing.





The battlefield was quiet now, smoke curled lazily over broken stone and scorched grass. The fires still crackled, stubbornly clinging to whatever wood or cloth hadn't yet crumbled to ash. The sky remained overcast, streaked with trails of soot drifting up from the wreckage. Lin moved through it like a shadow, her steps steady and her breathing even.

A wounded Earth Kingdom soldier whimpered at her feet, one leg twisted under him, the other burnt black. He looked up at her and tried to speak, but his mouth trembled instead. She stared at him for a moment, then drew her arm back and punched downward. Fire flared and the body stilled, peace in death.

They didn't have the supplies to take prisoners and her orders were clear. She turned and walked on, steam rising faintly from the plating of her limbs. Her arms had gone red again after the continuous fights, glowing faintly near the joints. The heat vents along her spine hissed as she moved, but there was still more to do.

She found one of her own lying face down near a shattered stone outcrop. His armor had been torn open, and blood pooled beneath him. Lin didn't speak; she knew he was still alive. She knelt, slid one arm beneath his back, the other beneath his knees, and lifted him.

Her prosthetics bore the weight easily, even as the blood soaked into her sleeves. She moved without rush, stepping over corpses and shattered spears as she carried him toward the nearest triage tent. A medic looked up in surprise as she approached.

"He's still breathing." she said simply.

The medic nodded and gestured for the cot. Lin laid the soldier down, turned, and walked out without another word. There was no need to rest. The limbs didn't tire, and neither did she. By midday, the battlefield had been cleared of the wounded and the dying.

Most of her company had regrouped near the ridge, counting the dead. The commanding officer had not returned. She was standing alone when the courier arrived.

"Captain Sui was confirmed dead on the southern flank." the young soldier reported, bowing quickly. "You're the highest-ranking officer remaining in Red Company, First Lieutenant."

Lin's gaze didn't shift. "I understand. I will take command." she said.

The soldier hesitated. "Should I… inform the major of your status?"

"Do it."

He nodded and ran off. She stood a moment longer, glancing over the rows of tents, the scattered remains of the camp and the quiet of the aftermath. Then, she turned and walked to her new post.

In the officer's tent, she retrieved a clean scroll and brush from the corner of the desk and sat to write.

Father, I require a trainer. My command has been confirmed over Red Company. Although they were trained to intimidate, the current formation lacks coordination. Send someone efficient, experienced, and loyal. The Fire Nation deserves better soldiers than these.

She signed it with her name and family motto, then rolled the scroll tight and sealed it with wax. A young runner waited outside the tent. She handed him the message and told him where to send it. He bowed and ran without speaking, probably off to find a hawk master.

Lin watched him go, her golden eyes narrowed against the sun still obscured by smoke. She would need to reinforce the flanks tomorrow. Reassign scouts and test discipline levels in the second and third squads. Too many had broken formation under pressure.

She needed better weapons for them, ones that wouldn't melt in the first heat wave of firebending. The fact that her own soldiers couldn't deal with deserters should it come to that, bothered her. She catalogued everything in her mind. Every weakness as well as every opportunity.

When she returned to the center of camp, the soldiers of Red Company straightened as she passed. A few stared, some saluted, yet no one spoke. One of the newer ones, barely older than a recruit, whispered to another.

"That's our new captain? What happened to her hair?"

Lin paused, her eyes flicking toward them. The soldier paled and looked away, so she said nothing and kept walking. There was still so much to do.






Her promotion was a quiet affair. Lin, now captain of the Red Company, an expanded unit with 100 soldiers instead of the regular 80, had improved their chances in the following weeks after the attack. The reinforced company had a few recruits who needed molding.

The tutor sent by her father had shaped the company into an elite unit alright. She wanted to make it the best and deadliest company of the northern assault force, and she had requested a training period where her company wouldn't be assigned missions. It had naturally been approved. The last couple of months had been for grueling training and had given her plenty of time to familiarize herself with the men under her command.

Now they had been called to join the front lines again. She knew everyone was ready for the task. She had made sure to give them their best chances of survival. The briefing tent stank of sweat and burnt parchment.

Three companies had gathered under the command of Major Han, who stood at the center of the map table with his hands behind his back. His armor was polished, but the lacquer on the shoulders was cracked. His voice was clipped, but not calm.

Lin stood in silence at the edge of the room, her arms folded behind her. Her company stood farther back, still and silent. She didn't speak until spoken to.

"The enemy has encamped along the riverbed north of here." Han said, gesturing to a black ink circle on the map. "They've dug in with earthbenders at the front, but their supply lines remain vulnerable. We'll encircle them before noon and break through the southern barricade once the sun is highest."

Lin studied the plan and her first impression was that it looked like a textbook strategy, which would make it predictable for the enemy.

"Major." she said.

Han stopped mid-sentence and turned to her, one brow raised.

"If I may..." she continued, "A forward strike tonight would reduce their morale. A commander dead in his tent creates panic. I have soldiers trained for night operations. No bending or noise. It will give our men a complete advantage."

The other captains looked uneasy. Han's eyes narrowed.

"You would assassinate their leader before battle?" he asked.

"Yes." Lin said.

"And what glory is there in murdering a man while he sleeps?"

She said nothing, not really understanding what he meant. 'Isn't glory won by accomplishing victory?' she thought. Major Han scoffed, shaking his head as he looked back at the table.

"You have no honor, girl. Maybe that's how they train officers in the Renshi household, but here no one under my banner would take part in that. If you want to fight like a bandit, go alone."

Lin gave a single nod. "As you command, Major."

"I don't know what Renshi was thinking, not only making you look like a tool out of a forge but acting like one." Han waved her off with a mutter under his breath, and returned to the map.

She didn't care what he called her. Honor was a word men used when they had time to waste, when their own glory was praised above their own soldiers' lives. Besides, even if no one volunteered to go with her, she did not need help.

That night the moon hung thin and pale above the camp. The wind carried only the scent of smoldering trees and river mud. Lin and two others moved through the underbrush in silence, each step measured and deliberate. The armor over her limbs had been darkened with soot, the metal coated with a thin film of ash and cloth.

The two officers who followed refused to be left behind, and although the major had said to go alone, he hadn't specifically made the order for the rest of the officers to stand down. They just had to move through the camp in silence, doing their best not to grab the attention of the few sentries who would be actually paying attention.

To be honest, Lin knew it would be easy. The Earth Kingdom was used to regular tactics, they knew most Fire Nation officers loved to confront their enemies head on, and would not resort to a night attack unless there was no other choice.

She spotted two guards on the outer perimeter, their torches low. They weren't alert of course, they were just bored. She gave a command with a few hand signals, and they moved quickly.

The first fell without a sound, a strike to the throat, and a blade drawn across. Her officers were trained efficiently, and she could see why, no unnecessary movement from the lieutenant. The second turned just as she stepped behind him, but it was too late.

His mouth opened, but nothing came out before the dagger sliced his neck. Just a whisper of gurgling was heard, not enough to wake anyone. By the time they reached the commander's tent, she had counted three more guards and seven patrols, although it mattered little. They hadn't seen them, so there was no use killing them at all.

The flap was open, and the man inside was asleep. He looked younger than she expected, with his beard not fully grown and his armor beside the bed, unworn. She briefly wondered if he was just a noble posing as a Colonel, there were lots of those in the Fire Nation as well. Most of those never stayed long in field command, and moved to High command in a short time.

She approached without hesitation, her blade was quick. One strike to the neck. One to the chest. Once he was dead, she forced the blade deeper into the neck of the now corpse, with enough effort, the head rolled free. She caught it in one arm, still warm and threw it to one of her officers who smirked back at her.

"I know just what to do with this." He whispered.

By dawn, their work would be discovered, if not earlier. The head sat on a wooden stake in the center of the enemy camp, blood soaking the dirt beneath it.

They returned before morning drums sounded. While the other two officers went to clean themselves and their armor, Lin didn't bother. She wanted Major Han to think it was just her, she didn't want to risk the lieutenants receiving punishment.

As she made her way to the command tent, the soldiers guarding it were shocked to see the small girl covered in dirt and blood. She liked that look on them.






The smell of coffee was the first thing that greeted him when Han woke up, the bitter scent mingling with damp canvas and the lingering smoke from last night's fires. But also something else lingered between those scents, something foul.

His joints ached as he pushed himself up, the cold seeping through his armor as he had fallen asleep with it on accidentally and now he was dreading giving the order to attack today. His eyes were still gritty from restless sleep.

He blinked and saw her there, standing by the tent entrance, silent, hands clasped behind her back, armor still dark with soot and stained with dried blood. Her hair caught a beam of pale dawn light, the scorched white strands stark against the black steel, and her golden eyes watching him without a hint of impatience.

For a moment, he didn't know what to say; she shouldn't have been here this early. He had given her the impossible task of going alone to the enemy camp at night. Surely, evenly if she was successful she would be gone for the morning. It seemed the day gave no such mercies.

Captain Lin stepped forward, saluted him, then set a table in front of him. There she placed a steaming cup of coffee, the liquid rippling from the slight tremor in her metal fingers as she released it. She stepped back without a word, standing straight, waiting.

Han reached for the cup, his eyes never leaving her, taking a slow sip, letting the heat wake him fully before he finally spoke.

"You're here early."

"Yes, Major." she answered, her voice as calm as always.

She didn't elaborate, so he set the cup down, the silence stretching, the sounds of the waking camp outside filling the gaps between them, the clash of weapons, the bark of orders and the shuffle of feet in mud. Finally, she spoke, breaking the silence, her words measured and clear.

"The head of the enemy commander was placed in the center of their camp, their soldiers woke to see it. Scout reports say some fled during the first few sunrays, others were in disarray, their lines will be weakened when you move against them at noon, sir."

Han's hand froze halfway to the cup, his mind catching up with her words, a cold weight settling in his stomach, as he paused to focus on her. Finally, he could identify the foul smell from before to what his eyes were looking at. A bitter metallic scent hung around her, it smelled like copper and something riper, like old sweat soaked into metal.

The blood on her chest plate had dried into a flaking crust, but the smell hadn't faded. It clung to her, a scent of rust, leather, and a faint whiff of butchered meat left too long in the sun. Han had been in a few battlefields already, he knew what that smelled like.

"You… did it."

"Yes."

"Alone." he added.

She didn't correct him, but she didn't confirm it either. He remained silent, watching for a flicker of expression, but there was nothing, only the soft hiss of her breath through the vents in her back, which always unnerved him. With a grim thought, he wondered how a family could experiment with their own child like that?

Han's jaw tightened, he looked down at the table, the black circle on the map where the enemy had camped now meant nothing, it would be red soon, their lines shattered, and it was because of her, because she did what he could never ask of any soldier, something for which he had mocked her for suggesting.

His stomach turned with the memory of his words yesterday, the way he had dismissed her, the way he had accused her of having no honor. His own close officers after she was gone had warned him about doing such a thing again, as there was a rumour that her brother was a highly skilled assassin who was used recently to kill off an entire noble family that had spoken against the firelord's new invasion policies and it all had been made to look like an accident.

If those rumours had reached the front, then they were probably half-truths, but he now had a new fear worse than dying on the battlefield. Dishonored and killed by his own allies was far worse after all.

As he looked at her standing there, the dawn light catching the steam rising from her limbs, he saw the truth of it, she didn't care about honor, and she was both merciless and ruthless towards anyone she considered an enemy. He didn't want to become one of them, even though in appearance she was no more than a weird-looking teenager.

"Good job. Dismissed." he said, voice low, almost a whisper, but she heard him clearly, nodded once, turned sharply and left the tent without a word.

Han sat down heavily, his hands gripping the edges of the table, staring at the map, the ink lines, the small figurines marking positions that no longer mattered. Outside, the camp stirred as soldiers prepared to move, the banners of the Fire Nation catching the morning breeze, red against the gray sky.

He rubbed a hand over his face, feeling the rough stubble on his chin, the exhaustion sinking deeper into his bones as he thought about the reports he would have to submit.

"She's just a girl." he muttered to himself, but even as he said it, he knew it wasn't true.

She was clearly built as a weapon for the Fire Nation, shaped with steel, fire, and discipline, something terrifying. As he stood, he paused, looking at the corner of the tent where the dawn light had already faded, remembering the way she had looked standing there, silently waiting without making a sound.

He hadn't stopped to think now how long she had been staring at him through the night. A chill ran down his spine as he imagined going through the same fate as the enemy she had killed.

"I need to add this to my report to the general. I'm sure he will inform the Fire Lord about it."

The problem was that there was a chance high command would want to reward her instead of making sure she didn't retain command at all. A terrifying notion if she were given more praise instead.

There were already too many officers in the Fire Nation army who were monsters, and the Fire Lord seemed invested in giving them more chances of promotion, like what happened with Captain Zhao after assaulting Jasmine Island. He received a promotion for attacking a neutral island that held no economic value anymore as almost all trade had already halted in the region already and praise for his ruthless methods.

He would have to tread carefully with what he reported.
 
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Chapter 2 - Cruel World New
96 AG

The wind had quieted, but the stench of scorched fabric, charred wood, and blood clung stubbornly to the air. Lin walked across the battlefield with measured steps, her boots sinking into a mixture of ash and upturned soil, surrounded by the low murmur of soldiers moving debris, lifting the wounded, and stabilizing the perimeter.

The work continued as it always did once the fires died down, a pattern rehearsed too many times already, though each repetition still tested the limits of patience. Medics moved swiftly around her, guided by discipline and routine, though more than once she caught glimpses of them tending not to their own, but to men clad in green.

Earth Kingdom soldiers, faces drawn with pain and ash, were being offered water, pressure bandages, and what little salve remained from their supply carts. Lin stopped beside one of them. He was an older man, slumped against a shattered boulder, one eye swollen shut, his ribs shifting with each shallow breath, and she watched without comment as a Fire Nation healer gently examined a gash running from shoulder to hip.

She didn't interrupt, nor did she speak to the medic. She decided to voice her disapproval with complete silence, carefully buried beneath a still expression. These were enemy soldiers who had stood on the other side of the line not two hours ago, launching rock volleys, setting ambushes, and cutting down Fire Nation lives without hesitation.

And now, by Han's orders, they were to be preserved and healed. The major had ordered them to be taken as prisoners and to have them secured. The wounded, regardless of allegiance, were to be treated with the same urgency as their own.

Lin understood orders well enough, and she followed them outwardly because doing otherwise would defy the chain of command and by transitivity the Fire Nation. But the logic behind them grated at her sense of utility.

Every minute spent on enemy survivors was a minute lost in tending to the equipment, replenishing ammunition, or even tending to their own men and preparing for the next inevitable skirmish.

Every ration consumed by an Earth Kingdom prisoner was a meal denied to a loyal soldier still standing. It wasn't sentimentality that irritated her, of course; it was the waste of limited resources. The Fire Nation did not bleed its way through half a continent only to chain itself with unnecessary mercy.

She moved on without further pause, letting her presence drift through the ranks as she made her way to the center of the clearing where her company had already begun erecting tents and reinforcing their position without waiting for instruction.

The Red Company rarely needed spoken orders anymore. They followed her rhythm well, and they had been trained to move with a precision born of discipline and loyalty. Delegating to her lieutenants proved to be quite effective; they already knew what her response would be, and if they needed clarification, they would often ask. Something that was becoming less of an occurrence as the company gained experience in battle.

Beyond the ridge to the east, the landscape still smoldered where Zigan's outposts had crumbled beneath coordinated firebomb strikes. Blackened watchtowers stood like broken teeth along the riverbank, and the faint lines of collapsed walls painted the valley with the memory of the enemy's last stand.

Major Han had stood with her earlier, speaking in measured tones about the campaign's next phase, explaining how Zigan would serve as a central hub for the Fire Nation's new strategy. No longer content to hold the western shores, they would now push eastward in full, forming colonies as they advanced and leaving behind small garrisons to maintain supply lines and secure the countryside.

Lin had said little in response, though her thoughts had been far from still. In theory, the plan appeared sound. Establishing footholds, cutting the land into manageable districts could potentially in the long term produce more resources, but in practice, it meant spreading their forces thin across a vast and volatile region.

Each garrison left behind would be another crack in the armor, another opportunity for rebellion to take root. The Earth Kingdom was not broken yet, even after a hundred years, it had been scattered, but not yet crushed. The true powers of the enemy, Omashu to the south and Ba Sing Se to the east, still stood untouched. They still held an organized army and a capable resistance force.

If they truly meant to win the war, or at least force peace talks, then it was not these scattered villages that demanded their attention but the great bastions that continued to hold the heart of the continent. Han spoke of consolidation and permanence, but Lin saw only delay, the slow grind of bureaucracy pushing forward with the illusion of progress.

She would rather burn straight through to the core, cut the head from the beast before it could learn to grow new limbs. Once these cities fell, the rest of the kingdom would surely surrender to Fire Nation rule, maybe through puppet governments, but they could be slowly brought to fire nation standards.

As she reached the crest of the ridge, she allowed her gaze to drift over the remains of the battlefield. The ground below looked like a canvas of ruin, blackened furrows where fire had swept across formations, shattered weapons half-buried in earth and bodies locked in their final positions. The colors had blurred now, for red and green had long since stopped mattering in death.

From behind her, cutting through the low murmur of the cleanup crews, came a sudden, sharp cry of pain, raw, unmistakably human and far too near. Sighing, she turned without hesitation, already altering her course to move toward the sound.

If they were an enemy soldier, she would put him out of his misery but if it was an ally, she had a duty to try and keep them alive or, at the very least, assure them that their deaths were not in vain and that she would carry their last words to their family members.





She found him near the shattered edge of a supply cart, his blood smeared across the wood in streaks that had begun to dry. His uniform was soaked through at the side, the fabric clinging dark and heavy to a wound that pulsed with each ragged breath.

His hand trembled as he tried to press against it, fingers slipping each time he applied pressure, the pain leaving his face pale beneath streaks of ash. It was one of her soldiers in the end, and although they were trained to endure she could see his wound was severe.

Lin knelt beside him, brushing aside the broken plank that pinned his leg. His eyes met hers for only a moment before closing again, the tension in his jaw clear even as his voice came low, and cracked.

"It's no use… Captain… J-just end it… please. Let me die without…suffering."

She didn't answer as her fingers worked quickly, unfastening the buckles of his armor and peeling it away with care, revealing the torn flesh underneath. The gash ran deep, just beneath the ribs where an earthbender's stone had torn through the plating. It was a kill wound if left alone, but he wasn't dead yet.

"You will not die here, corporal." she said flatly, not as reassurance, but as instruction. "You will return to duty in time, and you will recover to fight another battle. Your name will be recorded in the campaign archives, and your children will say it aloud when they're taught how this war was won."

He only grunted in response, seemingly disappointed that his suffering wouldn't end quickly, perhaps he didn't believe her. It mattered little to her. She was never someone to waste more words explaining. She was convinced her soldier was going to live through this as much as she was convinced the Fire Nation would triumph.

She cut a piece of his cloth armor and bundled it together on one of her hands, with practiced control, she focused her chi, drawing it down into her other metal hand until it burned hot white, illuminating the wound in flickering light. She closed said hand and a fire blade spurred. She moved quickly and secured his body with her knees. The soldier stirred, then tensed as realization dawned.

"Bite on this." she said simply.

"Captain…wai-" the soldier was cut off as the bundle of cloth was placed in his mouth.

She then pressed the fire blade to the wound in a single, decisive motion while holding his shoulder with her other hand. His body arched as the pain flooded through him, the scream caught somewhere in his throat before dissolving into unconsciousness. The wound turned from red to purple to black, quickly cauterizing the wound and stopping the bleeding.

Lin snuffed the blade, shocking the heat from her hand to cool it off. The corporal passing out was not ideal, but she supposed losing a lot of blood and adding more pain to it could do that to any man.

With no hesitation, she pulled him over her shoulders, rising with the full weight of his body across her back. Her boots shifted slightly as she adjusted, then she carried him toward the medical tent without a word.





The scent of sulfur still clung to the valley, even as the winds shifted and carried most of the smoke toward the river. Major Han stood near the command post, reviewing the charcoal-streaked maps spread across the crate that now served as a planning table.

A courier stood nearby, waiting silently, still catching his breath from the sprint between hills. The message he carried confirmed the scattered reports they had received since midday an Earth Kingdom battalion had been spotted falling back toward the eastern cliffs, pushing through the forest in what appeared to be a disorganized retreat. They had not expected such a large group to remain unaccounted for after the last skirmish.

Han dismissed the runner with a nod and took a long breath through his nose, eyes scanning the map once more. The report changed their posture entirely. If those remnants made it across the narrow divide between the northwestern corridor and the interior provinces, the Fire Nation would be forced to fight for this ground all over again in a matter of months.

It wasn't a full army anymore, but it was large enough to reinforce one of the deeper bastions or worse, disappear into the forests and harass their supply lines for the next year. The river crossing had to be cut off before they regrouped.

He turned his gaze toward the Red Company encampment below the ridge. They had moved quickly after the last push, setting up a proper perimeter with the sort of order most field units lacked after such heavy fighting.

Their discipline was not the product of traditional schooling or noble bloodlines, but rather that of the raising Renshi family. It was then forged under the command of the young captain, who now moved steadily across the clearing, a wounded soldier slung across her back, her posture rigid even under the strain.

Han watched her for a moment longer before stepping away from the map and descending the slope toward her camp. By the time he reached the outer tents, she was already returning from the medical line, her hands blackened with soot, and cloth tied around one wrist where blood had soaked through.

"Major." she said, acknowledging his presence with a nod but little else. He had grown used to that.

"You'll be moving east." Han said, not wasting time with preamble.

"Intelligence confirms two broken enemy companies pushing through the woods near the basin. They're trying to reach the river and link up with reinforcements headed for the territories close to Ba Sing Se, and we cannot allow that to happen."

She said nothing, merely shifted her weight to her back leg, with arms behind her.

"You'll move within the hour, track their retreat path, and harass them constantly. Disrupt their movement, deny them water, bleed them out if possible, but don't engage in a full push until you've cut off their retreat. We'll dispatch reinforcements from the western flank once they've resupplied. Until then, your mission is to hold them there so that they don't escape."

The expected reaction of either bravado, irritation, or even complaint at the mission did not come. There was just silent acknowledgement, her eyes already calculating what needed to be done and which way to do it best. Han knew that she had likely already decided how she would execute the mission before he finished speaking.

It was that clarity that made her so effective. And yet, there was something in her that left him unsettled. He had commanded ruthless men before, driven, merciless, even cruel. But Lin was something different altogether.

Her methods were not fueled by ambition or bloodlust, and he could not accuse her of recklessness. She was deliberate in every step, sharp in her planning, and unwavering in execution. It was almost as if you stripped a person of all feeling or empathy, but left everything else untouched.

She did not celebrate victories, nor mourn casualties. She treated prisoners as dead weight and saw honor as a luxury that held no value on a battlefield. And yet, her loyalty to the Fire Nation was undeniable, carved into her with the same precision she expected from her company.

"Understood." She gave him a sharp salute and moved on.

As she turned to carry out his orders, Han caught himself watching her with the same analytical gaze he had once reserved for enemy commanders. He had come to respect her of course, after the few months of constant battles around her, but part of him wondered if she was human at all.

Maybe Agni had a hand in her making; the spirits were famous for not caring about humans at all. Or maybe she was a spirit in disguise, one of those that cared little for lives but craved combat, but that wouldn't explain her loyalty at all.

He was certain that, at the very least, she was half something else, no human could show so little emotion.





The ground vibrated with every impact as another volley of earth crashed against the defensive line, the rock walls fracturing and folding inward like brittle paper, as the firebenders worked tirelessly to repel the flying rocks with their own volley. Zhou ducked instinctively, raising his bracer and lowering his stance; the motion fluid from repetition.

One of the fragments ricocheted close enough to scorch his cheek, but he barely flinched. His focus was ahead, watching the captain. She had not moved in several breaths, standing tall behind the shield wall where the frontline firebenders rotated in tight formation.

Each team lasted barely a minute under the pressure, pushing out waves of flame to counter the rock volleys before retreating to recover their breath and chi. The bombardment from the Earth Kingdom had become rhythmic now, a cycle of precision and exhaustion, and Zhou could feel the tremor of fatigue rippling through their ranks.

At the same time, they had another dedicated team that was in charge of pressing the attack even under constant enemy assaults. The amount of flames and heat around drenched everyone in sweat. As volleys of rock hit their formations, fireballs roared in return to the other side.

Yet the captain remained unshaken, her presence alone anchoring the entire rotation. She was making sure each soldier committed to their assigned task, like a symbol of unyielding and inextinguishable flame.

Zhou had never seen an Earth Kingdom defense this desperate before. The remaining defenders had been backed into a narrow ridge with nowhere left to flee, and it had made them wild with determination.

There was no thought of surrender in them, no signal of retreat or parley. Only the raw certainty that this would be the place they died and that desperation made them dangerous. Their strikes, although uncoordinated and desperate in nature, were fierce and powerful. The type of attack from an army that feared no consequences anymore.

The Red company had matched them volley for volley, but it had been very exhausting. A few steps behind the rotation line, the specialized squad worked tirelessly to intercept incoming boulders, cutting them down with controlled flame jets or redirecting them mid-air with bursts of fire walls. That buffer kept them alive so far.

Zhou wiped the sweat from his brow, his arm trembling slightly from overuse. His squad had already cycled through three times, and he could feel the heavy drag of depleted reserves building behind his ribs. The captain, on the other hand, looked as though she hadn't yet begun.

He turned just in time to see her step forward. He recognized that this was an attack that only she saw, an opportunity on the enemy line that she wanted to exploit. She broke her own lines and pressed forward without giving an order to the rest of the company. Zhou surged after her, fire already sparking at his fingertips.

The captain's flames burst forward in a searing arc, so hot and forceful that the first row of enemy cover dissolved on impact. Wooden barricades melted into smoldering embers, and the stunned Earth Kingdom soldiers behind them had only seconds to react before the second wave of fire swept through.

She did not relent the attack, and flame after flame, the opposition was being dismantled in front of his very eyes. The defenses that the earth kingdom forces had laid out were turning scorching black. Her fire was turning from the usual orange and red to a bright yellow, and her arms had a faint glow of red from the heat.

Zhou had trained under many commanders in his years of service, but none quite like her. She had cunning and a strategic mind that would rival most generals, but at the same time the strength to brute force her way into battle in a deliberate and merciless way. She didn't have the emotional fervor or hatred that fueled most fire nation officers, but she still thrusted into battle without fear and with the same ferocity.

He reached her side just as she switched angles, redirecting her flames to the left flank, where the enemy had begun to regroup. They were trying to rotate in fresh fighters from behind the barricades, still clinging to old tactics and trying to turn back the tide with the same stubbornness that had already doomed them.

The moment the wall cracked under the pressure, she paused and looked back.

"Chaaaaarge!" she screamed, turning around and rushing the enemy, her voice carrying over the din of flame and falling stone. Zhou did not need to hear it twice.

The line surged forward as one. What had been a disciplined formation seconds earlier became a tide of roaring flame and voices, every soldier screaming as they rushed in behind her. Zhou pushed through the collapsing barricades, striking with precision, his chi flaring with renewed fury. Around him, the defenders faltered, some broke into the river, which was easy pickings for later, others threw themselves into a final, hopeless stand.

The captain reached the center of the enemy formation first, cutting through a trio of defenders in a single sweeping motion, her metal gauntlets alight with flame. She moved with the grace of a duelist and the weight of a siege weapon, untouchable and absolute in the chaos. Zhou followed closely, shielding her flank without being told, trusting in her movements completely.

By the time the last earthbender fell, the ridge was silent except for the hiss of settling flames and the wheezing breath of soldiers pulling off their helmets. Some even chanted and cheered for their victory.

Zhou looked back and saw the remnants of the battlefield trailing behind them like the wake of a firestorm. Smoke curled from the broken wood, and the air was thick with ash and heat. He caught the captain's eye for a brief moment.

She gave no nod of recognition, no smile of pride or comment at all. She simply turned away and began the routine inspection of the battlefield, clearing downed enemies, killing the ones that had made a desperate retreat into the water or tending to wounded soldiers.

Zhou, despite the ache in his limbs and the blood on his cheek, followed without hesitation.




The fire was still dying behind them when the orders came. Messengers reached the Red Company not long after the ridge was cleared, bearing the final directive from command. Gaipan still held. The town had been bypassed during the push through the valley, and reports now confirmed that a detachment of Earth Kingdom fighters remained entrenched behind its walls.

The company that had been defeated days earlier had not included Gaipan's full strength. What remained was not enough to mount a major counteroffensive, but it was enough to be a thorn in their side. If the Fire Nation wanted complete domination of the region, taking the city was a must.

Lin received the message and contemplated the implications of urban warfare and how to mount an attack. A defensive position with walls was difficult to target and this one was surely well aware that they were next in line for conquest.

She took a moment to read the commander's seal and scanned the updated map the courier carried, committing the route and terrain to memory before sending the runner back with a nod.

She didn't want to lose any more of her fighting force. Training new recruits would decrease their time at the ready and introduce inexperienced fighters to battle if they couldn't keep up with the following orders.

Her company had been shaped through months of attrition and survival, and every soldier left standing had endured enough trials to be counted among the elite. They were not expendable, no matter what others in command assumed.

Gaipan was well-defended. It had three main gates and high walls. A direct assault would drain them, even if it succeeded. The main gates were still intact, and scouts reported makeshift barricades being reinforced with stone and timber, something which the town had in abundance due to its main trade being that of loggers and woodsmen.

Lin walked the perimeter of their new position in silence, passing between campfires and sentries, noting every supply crate, every resting soldier, and every wounded man who had returned to his feet.

The rain from the night before had darkened the soil, and the air was heavy with moisture. She stopped near the edge of the camp and narrowed her eyes toward the west, where mountain runoff fed into a thick tributary that curved around the base of the hill.

She traced its path mentally, following the slope and terrain until she saw her golden egg. Just past the trees, concealed behind a natural rise, a wooden dam stood at the edge of the ravine. Its structure was broad and weatherworn but intact, built generations ago for farming and now repurposed by the Earth Kingdom to control the water flow around their remaining strongholds.

There was no hesitation in her thoughts. The plan revealed itself fully formed, as though it had been waiting for her to notice it. She would not storm Gaipan; she would threaten to drown it. If they took the dam quickly, then they could send a missive to the town to surrender or everyone would die.

The previous rains made it a very believable threat as well. The defenders would have no choice but to take it seriously or brave the water if they didn't comply. The water could soften the entire town for them, destroying its fortifications and defenses. The old dam was mostly made of timber, and no structure like it could withstand focused firebending. The moment it broke, the water would do the rest.

She returned to the command tent and spread the map out again, adjusting markers and drawing a line toward the slope with a piece of charcoal. Her lieutenants gathered without being summoned, watching quietly as she finalized the placements.

She assigned one unit to move along the ridgeline to intercept any retreat from the city. Another would move into the forest to secure a perimeter around the dam itself. She would take a small detachment with her to deliver the strike if necessary.

There would be a call for parlay and a surrender term or there would be death to the entire town. The objective was to remove the last Earth Kingdom presence in the region with the least risk to her company, and this was the cleanest way to do it.

Once the preparations were underway, she returned to the edge of the camp. The sun had begun to set behind the mountains, casting long shadows through the trees and igniting the clouds in soft orange and red.

She stood alone for several moments, arms behind her back, her gaze steady on the hidden dam in the distance. The forest surrounding the town was quiet, only the hush of wind through the leaves and the distant hiss of campfires burning low.

She loved when plans just fell on her lap. Lin returned to work with a rare smile on her face.


AN: Hello! It is a slow-burn of a story so if you enjoy long stories this is your jam. I'll try to post every Friday or every two at least. I'm open to receiving corrections and critics, my first language is not english so there will be probably a few mistakes here and there, you are welcomed to give me a hand if you want to. Enjoy!
 

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