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Celestial Sandstorm

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Did you delete chapters? I remember you saying you would edit them but not erase them first?
 
GeomZii said:
No delete, now I am only posting finalised chapters. And chapters were rewritten and I end up writing new paragraphs in between which turned into chapters. So Now I am only posting finalised chapters.
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So when will the story continue? IIRC the mc was on his fifth or final year
 
GeomZii said:
I will be posting on weekends from now on. So the story is continued as it ended up with many chapters. Kindly reread all 9 chapters to avoid any continuity errors.
Thank You
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I was rereading it and was confused when I didn't see an interlude. How many chapters to the previous point?
 
Nice chapter.

Mc gaining the "Prodigy" Perk boost him greatly.

His Pov isn´t too much different , save for the almost puke part.

Still shows he is struggling to accept reality.

Hiro is going to get them killed.

The sad reality is that even with all the perks and abilities MC has , while he has better chance to survive, everyone else not.

Mido and Hiro are propably gonna get killed like a lot of others in the Ninja wars (The most bloody war is still in the future).

And it puts you into perspective about how many people that weren´t shown in the Anime / Manga were prodigies even , the death toll is quite high.

It would probably a turning point for the Mc.

A thing that striked me is the fact his chakra did not aument (Or wasn´t mentioned in the chapter) exponentially given he now has Yin Chakra and Yang Chakra to Balance.

His Kunai and Shuriken skills due to earth bending is understandable.
 
Well, he'll just have to become important and powerful enough that Sand is willing to devote extra resources for specialized training.. you know, like Leaf village, specializing in fire, did for a couple of it's wind users. Of course, both of them were the sons of Hokages, and one a jinchuriki to boot, but I'm sure our guy is built to impress...
 
AntaeusTheGiant said:
Well, he'll just have to become important and powerful enough that Sand is willing to devote extra resources for specialized training.. you know, like Leaf village, specializing in fire, did for a couple of it's wind users. Of course, both of them were the sons of Hokages, and one a jinchuriki to boot, but I'm sure our guy is built to impress...
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It was talked something like that but the author say it´s too early yet.

Apart from that before the rewrite there was also the teacher report in the survival exercise so maybe.
 
GeomZii said:
The katas of earthbending exercises did not transfer easily to throwing knives and blades.
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Throwing requires a stance, whether it be basketballs or shurikens. Not a combination of specific moves like a kata.
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But Renji-sensei was right. There was something fundamentally incompatible between my earthbending training and weapons work.
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Is this a different Earthbending than the one we've seen in canon? Because this makes no sense.
 
Sceonn said:
Throwing requires a stance, whether it be basketballs or shurikens. Not a combination of specific moves like a kata.

Is this a different Earthbending than the one we've seen in canon? Because this makes no sense.
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Earth bending relies on defensive and waiting, something like neutral jing from Avatar- The last Airbender.

It is to emphasize that knowledge and powers also have their downsides also. It is the concept of pot fully filled and a person will struggle to learn something different from what they have studied for years, ( perk giving years of earth bending knowledge in one instant).
 
Sceonn said:
Throwing requires a stance, whether it be basketballs or shurikens. Not a combination of specific moves like a kata.

Is this a different Earthbending than the one we've seen in canon? Because this makes no sense.
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Throwing weapons is attacking or taking a head start in attacking someone. The earthbending knowledge makes him waiting and focused on defence. ( Philosophy of Jing of ATLA)
 
GeomZii said:
Earth bending relies on defensive and waiting, something like neutral jing from Avatar- The last Airbender.
It is to emphasize that knowledge and powers also have their downsides also. It is the concept of pot fully filled and a person will struggle to learn something different from what they have studied for years, ( perk giving years of earth bending knowledge in one instant).
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Though they can learn otherwise , there other examples of Earth Bending like "Chin the Conqueror" or "Yun" but i get that most of the users use it as a defense.

Still , that show us that he still did not form his "Own" view of Earth Bending and philosophy.

The moment he does that it will be a qualitative change.
 
You know, it's interesting about the propaganda of The Elemental nation of wind and fire. One of them seems to inspire loyalty through Survival and the other does it through love.
 
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