Wwind
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Sure, it only works because it's a SI MC.
If we look from the side and knowing how demons in WoD work, one should be more vary of a helpful Baali, then obvious infernalist.
In general I keep reading the fic and it's okaaay... I guess? though mood is not really WoD. A bit too much modern plucky protag energy.
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Another moment, but more about general WoD. The Mokole were made too... human-ish? They should be much more alien in mindset. Especially with racial memory being a thing. There were some inklings of that in the W20 changing breeds book, but not enough to really weave an interesting story. Like relatively recently awakening from let's say sleeping genetic code in reptiles of the world. Seeing whole human civilization and species as basically a passing fad, a blink of an eye. Basically seeing upcoming Apocalypse more of a cleansing of the place from the annoying mammals then a real issue. Which does hold some sense when we remember that Crocodiles are very resistant to pollution, toxins, radiation, can go a year without food and are nearly bulletproof. When the shit hits the fan in WoD, humanity and garou would be gone long before Mokole.
Would also give some nuance to the general enmity with werewolves, instead of doges getting amgry and other side still salty after many millennia.
One other thing Mokole could easily have had is just paying attention to the fact that they have quite low level combination of gifts where they can give themselves something like INT10-15 and even more for a night. Really plays into "incomprehensible ancient intelligences" angle. XD
It is too complicated a concept XD
To be fair I didn't expect anything different. No big game company in 2025 is gonna have balls to make a proper WoD game. I honestly thought it would come out even worse.
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