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I Am Ziz [Worm SI!Simurgh]

Discussion in 'Creative Writing' started by TCGM, Feb 5, 2018.

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  1. IsaacTheAutobot1229

    IsaacTheAutobot1229 Not too sore, are you?

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    Well, I have just found something wonderful! I hope you continue this wonderful story in the future.
     
  2. Saltade

    Saltade Verified Salty

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    How about next time you check the dates on the posts?
     
  3. Oniele

    Oniele Not too sore, are you?

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    BEGONE NECROMANCER!
     
  4. Jonn Wolfe

    Jonn Wolfe (Verified Sarcastic) (Not a Wolf)

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    Rules here are a bit different than SB.
    But yeah, not much added except praise. I'd say go into what you liked and why, to help encourage the author for more.
     
  5. TCGM

    TCGM (Unverified God/Space Snek)

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    Genericide has stuck at the heart of our fandoms.

    ...Yeah so this is now canon

    What's more terrifying to a bunch of bullies? Their target suddenly gaining Simurgh-like powers or the actual Simurgh showing up in her defense?

    Uh.... Yeah, no. Me!Ziz is supposed to be an SI of me, and altering other's minds without their consent is solidly only for Death Eaters, Voldemort, or Hitler-level people. Even then only as a just punishment after trial versus something like execution.

    There's literally no reason to not, after all.

    Ah, but what's more effective? A self-fulfilling prophecy that makes humans run around like a kicked anthill, or precog manipulation? My money's on the former for causing chaos.

    Everyone's female at some point in their lives. Some of us just wake the hell up later to the fact emotions even exist.

    Step 1 of any unknown situation; observe surroundings, not yourself. Whatever the state of yourself is far less important than whatever dangers your new environment might pose.

    That said I'm totally a Green or a Blue

    Let the waifu tournament begin!

    Thank you! I try, but free time to write is quite scarce for me atm.

    How about next time, when the author has a sporadic update schedule and doesn't care about 'necros', cooling your jets?

    But necromancers are a staple of every fantasy setting!

    Encouragement is appreciated but the major stopgap to my writing is having any free time. Moreover, there comes a point about a week after posting a chapter where I just end up not replying to the thread anymore because I feel guilty about anyone seeing the alert and thinking I've posted something when it's just commentary. :(
     
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  6. wayne82444

    wayne82444 Experienced.

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    Some advice to help with that: keep your posts under 500 words. As long as it is shorter than that you will only give a normal alert, not the author updated alert that actually gives people hope. Decent chance of people not even realizing that it was the author who set off the alert even, I know I never bother looking at who posted at least.
     
  7. TCGM

    TCGM (Unverified God/Space Snek)

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    Thanks for informing me. But what if there's a whole bunch of posts to reply to? Is it better to spam replies or collate them?
     
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  8. wayne82444

    wayne82444 Experienced.

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    If you want to avoid getting peoples hopes up probably spam replies. I mean having them all in one post looks neater, but I'm sure people would forgive the author for not wanting to make people think it was an update.
     
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  9. IsaacTheAutobot1229

    IsaacTheAutobot1229 Not too sore, are you?

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    That said I'm totally a Green or a Blue

    I'm probably an orange or indigo for a likely ring color. Kind of a toss up between yellow or red for secondary vorps.
     
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  10. TCGM

    TCGM (Unverified God/Space Snek)

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    Very well. Thanks!
     
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  11. TCGM

    TCGM (Unverified God/Space Snek)

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    Greed and Compassion? That's an interesting combo o_O
     
  12. Butter Flies

    Butter Flies Versed in the lewd.

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    It depends on what they're greedy for, but point taken.
     
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  13. IsaacTheAutobot1229

    IsaacTheAutobot1229 Not too sore, are you?

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    I like helping people so indigo compassion and I am a frugal bastard who will haggle whenever possible to get more for less. If you asked me a few years ago it would have been yellow for my damn worrying and paranoia instead of greed.
     
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  14. Jonn Wolfe

    Jonn Wolfe (Verified Sarcastic) (Not a Wolf)

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    I thought the Indigo Tribe was for those people who needed to learn compassion? (in other words, punishment duty) Or am I remembering that completely wrong? If I'm wrong, I'd be indigo or blue.
     
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  15. RichardWhereat

    RichardWhereat Aia airëa Fëanáro.

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    Nah, greed and compassion works well. I want a fucking lot of shit, and I also want people to be cared for, safe, and able to grow. So they can give me lots of shit.

    Indigo Tribe isn't just for them, people with lots of compassion can use the rings.
     
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  16. Jonn Wolfe

    Jonn Wolfe (Verified Sarcastic) (Not a Wolf)

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    I laughed way to hard at that.:p
    Then I'd definitely be Indigo. I couldn't be a bad guy if I tried. Hell, in SWTOR, I play lightsider Sith, because I feel bad if I pick the dark side bad option. lol:rolleyes:
     
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  17. Nihilo

    Nihilo Versed in the lewd.

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    Have you considered the use of laxatives to increase you system's efficiency?
     
  18. Saltade

    Saltade Verified Salty

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    How about not taking my post so seriously :(
     
  19. TCGM

    TCGM (Unverified God/Space Snek)

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    Sorry, I assumed you were planting a leg down the bumper's throat and attempted to respond in kind, if less severe. If not, :hugs:
     
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  20. Zeushobbit

    Zeushobbit I use my mind and yours doesn't matter.

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    Hmm, personally I have to say Orange. I'm a lazy bastard, anything I can get for the least amount of effort.

    Hope the muse comes back to this story soon.
     
  21. CrunchySharpie

    CrunchySharpie A wild Bowsette appeared!

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    I'm fairly certain quotes and spoilers do not count towards word count in a post, so no need to spam post anything.

    EDIT:
    This story has actually motivated me to write a few chapters for a story of my own. Might see that on here at some point, dunno. let's see how the muse pans out.
     
  22. Zeushobbit

    Zeushobbit I use my mind and yours doesn't matter.

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    If it's the one I think then I will be very happy. Mum!Ziz is fun!Ziz.
     
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  23. AramilOniasha

    AramilOniasha Anti-HealBot

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    Just a note, Ziz is way smaller than that. She is only about 15 feet tall.
     
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  24. RichardWhereat

    RichardWhereat Aia airëa Fëanáro.

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    Ziz, Freya, Manpower threesome?
     
  25. Jonn Wolfe

    Jonn Wolfe (Verified Sarcastic) (Not a Wolf)

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    Just get Turkeyslap in there.

    I just read that intro, and about died laughing over the dude 'turkeyslapping' all three Endbringers to the point that they automatically target the guy. Personally, I think the author wanted to see if it was feasible to get the Simurgh Pregnant. :rolleyes::p
     
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  26. jo demon

    jo demon Undertale, Yay

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    I need clarification.
     
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  27. Jonn Wolfe

    Jonn Wolfe (Verified Sarcastic) (Not a Wolf)

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  28. TCGM

    TCGM (Unverified God/Space Snek)

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    Ah sweet, I was getting concerned about the spam I'd need to do.

    We've been over this.

    This is the SFW section :p

    ...Never change, QQ xD
     
  29. Gindjurra

    Gindjurra Versed in the lewd.

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    Um, what? That makes absolutely no sense. You obviously didn't even read my comment and the one I replied to before posting.
     
  30. RinKaihou

    RinKaihou Lolice Officer

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    Greed and compassion is me. My lifelong dream is to get so rich that when friends ask to borrow money I'd just give it to then and act like magnanimous rich kid.
     
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