My brothers keeper, an OC/SI as the twin of Stalin

[Alenco98]

Thread deleted by order of the Politburo, proceed to the rewrite: https://forum.questionablequesting....as-the-twin-brother-of-stalin-reworked.34831/

 

[Xodarap]

So who's getting the Axe for the party purge commission?
Lavrently Beria is a good choice to take over the position from

 

[krahe]

Honestly good start, even if a pretty wild premise

 

[Zander12700]

This gonna be good

 

[UndeadLord22]

I want him to make a joke using this:

Strategic Transfer of Equipment to Alternate Location

STEAL

 

[krahe]

Lenin tapped the file. "The State Commissariat for Anti-Bonapartist Security… SCABS?"

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A bit of translated fun with acronyms, if go from SCABS to keep the meaning of funny word play and close to what SCABS mean, it could be translated as КОРА, Комитет Обороны Революционного Авангардизма or Committee for Defense of Revolutionary Vanguardism. Which also a funny nod to KGB, which is Committee for State Security. Speaking of, at the 1917 it wasn't KGB, but VChK, KGB was founded way in the 30s

 

[Memory Dump]

Fucking LMAO, the roles have been reversed!
I am now physically dependent on you continuing to write this!

MORE, I NEED MORE!

 

[Memory Dump]

"I say yo
u're completely insane."

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Small spacing error.

 

[Xodarap]

I freaking am hyped about this story
So much history that I've never taken a indepth look at told in a amazing way.
Mc has a lot of the likeable villain character traits offset by the Psychopathy of humming cheerfully catchy songs all while telling everyone to be scared shitless of him.

 

[Xodarap]

It's kind of fun seeing the band cone together only to remember that all these men have mountains of corpses at their feet

 

[Siryapsalot]

I love everything about this just the summary had me intrigued but especially "Stalin turned toward her slowly, affection and deference showing in the small way he adjusted his posture." the family dynamic and how that has changed Stalin.

 

[Tembu]

Great story. I wish you would use less AI. There's some repetitions where you repeat some scenes especially the trotsky one where you introduce yourself twice. Thanks for the update

 

[Xodarap]

Where the hell is a brothel finding all the horses needed for shipments in the tons of dried meat and soap?
Did they just grab a smugglers hand to bribe the front line soldiers into raiding battlefields for corpses?

 

[Siryapsalot]

Ok there goes my question about how he would deal with the Romanovs.

 

[Xodarap]

Huh so the spies stopped a battle before it ever began if that's not a glowing recommendation for the new internal police then I'm sure Mikheil has a bunch of fat lady's singing somewhere

 

[Alenco98]

Huh so the spies stopped a battle before it ever began if that's not a glowing recommendation for the new internal police then I'm sure Mikheil has a bunch of fat lady's singing somewhere

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It's how it happened historically, though the Bolsheviks didn't have a full blown army behind them. Mikheil basically accelerated the creation of a red army.

 

[NicaEM]

This is fun to read ^^

I like the family dinners, feel very out of place amidst all the revolutionary fervor and war atmospherr, but it really grounds Makarov and Stalin to some extent.

 

[LysanderArgent]

I love the tragicomedy nature of this fic. It wouldn't be half as fun to read without the humour.

 

[Xodarap]

So historians look back on Mikheil as the Gomez adams of Revolution.
Such Chad energy against the serious dour leaders of Revolution.

Does Germany ask for Kiev perhaps St Petersburg?

 

[Alenco98]

So historians look back on Mikheil as the Gomez adams of Revolution.
Such Chad energy against the serious dour leaders of Revolution.

Does Germany ask for Kiev perhaps St Petersburg?

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I was going for a more Hank Scorpio vibe but this is good too

 

[Siryapsalot]

Fellas if any of us were in that room we would be getting a visit from the KGB or Revolutionary Guard for "dissident" laughter.

 

[George Mathew]

Awesome work man. Keep it up.

 

[menace4time678]

I like the story but I feel like not enough old bolsheviks have been integrated into the story. Feels like he talks to the same few characters every chapter, there were a lot of interesting character's in the Bolshevik ranks at this time and it feels underexplored

 

[Xodarap]

Decades later Mikheil will be the one who's life is most documented simply from how much of his true thoughts he says to people

 

[George Mathew]

In a way the guy has officially made himself the bogeyman of the Soviets. I would be interested in reading what other nations think about him.

 

[Arrowman]

The MC is outStaling Stalin!
At this point they will put Joe in power, because he is the tame twin, if not the most reasonable

 

[George Mathew]

Unlikely that the SI would allow for himself to be placed in a position of power. I think he prefers being the background guy too much.

 

[Xodarap]

Wonder how the family is handling Mikheil being extremely honest about the violence crimes and schemes?
His mother thinks them devils
His brother in law is terrified of his bosses
His kids are growing up admiring his cruelty
While his wife both loves him and looks to be horrified at the devious devices he's creating of the world around her.

 

[LysanderArgent]

Sometimes death is mercy.

 

[Xodarap]

I could have gone the rest of my life without know that depth of systemic human cruelty.