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When Life Gives You Aliens - A "Real World" "Hero" + The Omnitrix [CYOA]

Discussion in 'Creative Writing' started by ProfessorP.Hardraad, Jun 4, 2021.

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  1. Extras: The Beginning and The Build
    ProfessorP.Hardraad

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    My First Story On This Site.
    It will be taking place on "Our Earth" which means somethings (That I used for the build) have been removed from pop-culture.

    Here's my the CYOA . It is a bit blurry so if you are having trouble reading it, it was also posted to Reddit here.

    Here's my Build:
    Starting with 20pts.
    Misfortunes & Malfunctions:
    +6 Self-Destruct Mode. Should be fairly obvious, I don't want anyone else getting their hands on this thing. Ultimate Power = Ultimate Paranoia.
    +6 The Name Game. This is the best part of having the Omnitrix! If you don't name your aliens how is anyone going to know you're having fun? (Since I have 12 Aliens at +.5 each)
    +2 Omni-Chan. She's like Siri, but slighty more interesting because she's attached to an alien watch!
    +2 Over the Radar. Because I'm also taking...
    Missions:
    +5 Secure-Contain-Protect. And since I took the above I also net an additional +3 and I get to take an additional mission.
    +5 Doc-lings! Because every hero needs something to protect other than their secret identity.
    +5 Watchbearers Galore! Because as our friendly neighborhood Eidolon can tell us, we need Worthy Foes.
    Aliens:
    -2 Galvan: Synapse. Because everyone needs to take the smart guy along!
    -1 Tetramand: Enkidu. Because everyone needs to have super-strength!
    -1 Thep Khufan: Ozymandias. Was tempted to name him OzySandias, but I'm a grown man, not a child.
    -4 To'kustar: Eitri. For those World-Ending Threats.
    -2 Methanosian: Gloriosa. Named for the Fire Lily, or gloriosa rothschildiana. Also because I need some fire support, and hey puberty's not that bad, right?
    -2 Necrofriggian: Morpho Wight. Because this is another staple of good Ben 10 and it's another fun chapter to write.
    -2 Crystalsapien: Corundum. 2nd Hardest Crystal, Easiest Name to come up with. This guy is one of the best things to happen to Ben 10.
    -2 Anodite (Not Official Image): Professor Sorceror. Because the Mister Doctor Strange joke was the best thing uttered by Baldersnipe Kumquat, also because Magic.
    -.5 Opticoid: Argus. Because I wanted a cheap alien and I like the Cyclops power thing.
    -.5 Revonnahgander: Gandhi. Because infiltration unit is a thing, and the name because their species are peaceful.
    We are now in the Multiverse boys and girls
    -1 Diathim (Not Official Image): Seraphim. The angels from Star Wars that only exist because an 8 year old made cringey flirting at a princess.
    -2 Cybertronian (Protoform): Hardware. Because after looking at my entire list I didn't have any speed, and I wanted a synthetic life-form.
    Time for some good-old fashioned Upgrades:
    -3 Super Scanner: For roster updates immediately!
    -1 Basic Functions: The Watch is actually a watch, imagine that!
    -15 Master Control: Because Mom said it's my turn as the Aliens.
    -7 Ultimatrix: With the Simulator Function but also starting with
    -3 Ultimate Galvan: Because MODOK is a thing.
    -5 Biomnitrix: Because Mix-and-Match is the best thing

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    SO! Universe Changes. In this story, Transformers never rolled out. Star Wars, we got the Original trilogy and George Lucas died in a tragic house fire in 1995, so no Prequels. (Jake Lloyd went on to have a succesful life as a psychologist) Obviously Ben 10 never happened. This is the story of the Omnitrix coming to Earth. Lots of Omnitrixes in fact, about 20 of them. Some will never be found. Some will be found by nascent heroes. Others by criminals. And at least one by a strung-out wage slave who will find he's stumbled into a secret war that's been going on since March 2, 1961.

    The world will never be the same.
     
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