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With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

Discussion in 'Creative Writing' started by Mr Zoat, Jan 27, 2019.

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  1. gattsuru

    gattsuru Getting out there.

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    Kinda surprised he can’t find at least the occasional volunteer for more outre work. Just in the furry fandom, not every furry wants to genuinely be their fursona, and some of those who do probably don’t meet The Doctor’s aesthetic sense or comply with the laws of physics, but there’s still a pretty sizable number who’d be all over becoming chimeric abominations of science, and consider situations like Stalking Cat less a cautionary tale and more the limitations of the available technology.
     
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    Mr Zoat

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    21st January 2006
    11:28 GMT -5


    Mr. Logan shakes his head in bewilderment.

    "But, I mean, how does that even happen?"

    I stop walking. The other Titans also stop walking, except Koriand'r who keeps flying for a few moments before realising that she's left everyone else behind.

    "In Europe, we joke about American sex education, but I always-"

    He's blushing purple.

    "-assumed that it was just a j-."

    "No! I know how it works. My parents were naturalists. But you're different species!"

    I gesture to Miss Roth with both hands.

    "This is Raven." I generate a construct image of her mother. "This is Angela Roth, her mother. The hundred metre-tall four-eyed demon we all saw last week was her father. How did you think that worked?"

    "I dunno." He blinks, his gaze growing distant and his head tilting to the left. "And honestly? I kinda wish I wasn't trying to picture it right now."

    Miss Roth squeezes her eyes shut. "Magic. It was magic."

    "I dunno." Mr. Stone shrugs. "Ah mean, he could change his size-."

    Miss Roth opens her eyes just enough to glare at him. "It. Was. Magic."

    Koriand'r frowns, looking genuinely concerned.

    "Friends, do you not understand the mechanisms of sexual intercourse?"

    "Ah…"

    "On Tamaran we are far more open about such things. I can explain the functions of men and women in great detail if you would like?"

    I dismiss the construct and walk up the front steps of the manor house Komand'r and I recently purchased. We won't be moving in properly for a while due to all of the work needed to get it up to super vigilante specifications, but she wanted-.

    She's in nesting mode. Do Tamaraneans do that?

    I reach into my right front pocket to pull out my key, but the door bursts open and Komand'r flies out, hitting me in the chest and lifting me off the ground into the sky as she embraces me!

    "Isn't it wonderful! I sat outside this morning and it was like there was no one else on the entire planet!"

    Out of the corner of my eye I see Mr. Stone look confusedly between Koriand'r and Komand'r, then blink, then stare at Mr. Grayson with his eyebrows raised. It takes Mr. Grayson a moment to spot where Mr. Stone's gaze has ended up, but his frantic head-shaking does put a smile on my face.

    I pull Komand'r close and kiss her, for a moment wishing that my ring was of any use for anything medical. I mean, I vaguely remember from the comics that Nightstar was perfectly healthy, but I haven't bothered making the sorts of contacts I'd need to cope with medical problems. Komand'r isn't vulnerable to human diseases and is very hard to hurt. The few time's she's been injured she's either ignored it or stuck a bandage over the cut for a few days.

    "Komand'r, I've found-."

    "Sister!"

    Komand'r flies into Koriand'r, embracing her warmly. Koriand'r doesn't appear even slightly put off by that, even though their relationship since Komand'r arrived on Earth two and a half years ago might charitably be described as 'tense'.



    Komand'r is the woman I love, but even inside my head 'one-sided bitchathon' feels more honest. She never got to the stage of siccing alien bounty hunters on her again, but I don't think she's spoken a civil word to her in the entire time.

    "I am so happy to see you!"

    "I am so happy to see you!"

    Miss Roth sighs quietly. "Now there's two of them. Great."

    "I have a tiny hat for you!"

    Koriand'r reaches up and puts a top hat about the size of an egg cup on Komand'r's head. Komand'r goes cross eyed trying to see it, then reaches up with both hands to feel it instead.

    She gasps.

    "I love it! But-. Wait. This is-."

    Koriand'r nods, grins, and offers Komand'r a… Small cake dripping with green… Something or other.

    A bumble bee flies close to it, folds up and crashes to the ground in a fairly typical Earth reaction to Tamaranean food.

    Komand'r blinks, turns her head away and then fires a blast from her eyes which freezes a small bush in an ice crystal.

    She turns my way.

    "How did this happen?!"

    21st October 2005
    10:23 GMT -5


    "Why do you always put those things on?"

    I frown inquisitively, and she rolls her eyes.

    "Do you really think that because we're both humanoid you can get me pregnant? Because that's not how biology works."

    "In medieval France there was a male religious order that got a group of female elementals pregnant. A being made of air and magic gave birth to a child. So yes, I think there's definitely a possibility."

    She rolls her eyes harder.

    "Even if that was true, that's magic and your ring just does blood." She pulls the packet out of my hand and tosses it aside. "So don't bother. I want to feel you finish this time."

    "If… If you're sure..?"

    21st January 2006
    11:31 GMT -5


    "Yes, but I didn't think you were serious!"

    "Um. I was."

    Komand'r looks… Shocked and a little scared.

    "Ah..?"

    I float closer and put my hands on her shoulders.

    "Komand'r, I love you. We are financially secure and have no living enemies. This is as good a time as any."

    And just like that the moment of hesitation never happened.

    "Okay. We're having a kid." Her right hand darts out, grabs the cake Koriand'r offered her and shoves it into her mouth. "Wph aw?"

    "Does X'Hal do weddings?"
     
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  3. Idkusername

    Idkusername Versed in the lewd.

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  4. Darko

    Darko Well worn.

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    Well if two people love each other, or are drunk, or crazy or any other number of things, they have sex and a baby is made.

    In the voice of God from darkmatter2525:

    "Magic".

    Or Trigon has a micro-penis.

    'growing distant'

    And I feel how Beast Boy feels.

    Called it.

    Sweet upjumped elementals, she has changed.

    This is a new description of what Komand'r does and is.

    It is also a completely accurate one.

    Look on the bright side Raven.

    There's one less Komand'r, at least until she gives birth.

    Ahh, a native of a comic universe being ignorant of how biology works in a comic universe.

    And condoms don't just serve to prevent pregnancy.

    They also help prevent STD's, and seeing as Raul has been traveling through space he may have picked something that can be sexually transmitted and his ring can't get rid of it.

    Foolish girl, red rings are magic.

    Please answer these questions.

    Have they met X'hal?

    If so, how did it happen?

    Or was he just asking about Tamaranean marriage ceremonies, and they haven't met X'hal?
     
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  5. Pinklestia

    Pinklestia Experienced.

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    Well, this is going to be fun.
     
  6. moralrelativity

    moralrelativity Recovering pendant.

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    in -> into (maybe?)
     
  7. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    Thank you, corrected.
    Are you suggesting that he's been sleeping around?
    No.
    N/A
    Yes.
    No, the ice crystal surrounds the bush.
     
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  8. Stsword

    Stsword I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    Huh, when Zoat made Blaze, in comics canon a half human half demon child of the wizard Shazam a 100% biological human woman with a 100% soul made out of demonic energy, well I thought that was going to be the norm for cambions in this fic.

    Being a manifestation of Zoat knowing what species are while apparently DC writers don't. Or just don't care.

    So the indication that Raven is actually half demon biologically here surprises me.
     
  9. Darko

    Darko Well worn.

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    No, I wasn't suggesting he slept around.

    I was suggesting he picked up a disease in a different way and said disease can be transmitted by sexual activity.

    Like how a person can be infected with HIV from a blood transfusion, but then infect someone else by having unprotected sex with them.

    Trigon isn't exactly a normal demon, so maybe that's why Raven is different.

    Or hell, she may not be so different from Blaze, and is also a biological human who has demon magic for a soul.
     
  10. Handlewithcare

    Handlewithcare I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    Please tell me Komand'r keeps the tiny hat and wears it into battle?

    If nothing else it would serve marvelously to distract earth villains.
     
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  11. Lord Ernest

    Lord Ernest At the End...

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    First, I'm shedding a blood tear for our good friend Red Lantern, who has overcome his "always angry" phase. I wish he was like this when he encountered the others, that way the final attack/collaboration would have been between the 3 main "evil" Lantern colors and their respective enlightened wielders! And I think he's the first Paul to have a biological kid, instead of adopted in some way.

    Second, are we flipping a coin on the child and their characteristics? Not that I think they would be relative to the story as a character, because it would take a long time for that, but I'm curious if how or who they are has been decided. Male, female, powers, no-powers, do they get affected by their father having a deeper connection to the Red Light?

    Third, it's so interesting to think how this would affect Red Lantern and Komand'r. One is now a Senior Lantern, so he doesn't necessarily need to be the "sector Lantern", does he get an apprentice to teach the ropes in 2814? Does Atrocitus give him some leave to take care of his nascent family? Obviously he has bigger responsibilities with the Red Corps now, but we don't know much of how they operate besides being violent dispensers of justice a.k.a "We are the Red Vengeance".

    Oh, and I'm curious how Komand'r will adapt to being pregnant. I don't see her taking it easy, while Red Lantern would be more worried since he can't use his ring for medical reasons and I don't think he would just take what he remembers from Nightstar as gospel that the baby would be ok without some care. It is the first hybrid of its kind in this universe. Or maybe Komand'r overcompensates and decides to dedicate herself wholeheartedly to her baby because she wants to be a great mother (specially with how her personality is right now) and continues freaking everyone out by being so mellow and happy; while in the back of her head thinking that shed will definitely train her child to be some intergalactic badass that she will found an empire or something? This is so interesting!
     
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  12. FreeGod

    FreeGod If you see a God on the road fuck it!

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    Demons aren't exactly a different species. The are often humans that have gone through some transformations.
     
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  13. Chojin Patriarch

    Chojin Patriarch Veteran Lurker

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    Well, Garfield, when a man and a woman, or in this case a dimensionally-displaced formerly-soulless human and a cosmic-energy-augmented Tamaranean love each other very much... The White Light Entity goes to great lengths to bring new life into the universe!

    Oh, come on. :p Garfield's family were scientists in biological fields... As if he wouldn't pick things up... Never mind what might happen to him when he takes an animal form with a female of similar species nearby.

    For a second, I wanted to make a joke about them walking around nude, but that's Naturists... Ah, if only Raul could explain about the White Light Entity and its' unique effects on Earth lifeforms... But that's probably a trade secret...

    ...And now I'm thinking of the 'Hot Skitty on Wailord Action' trope... I mean, yes, magic, but without that, I dread to imagine the mechanics of it... Then again, I'm also reminded of the Tribeswomen of Kooshkoosh island from Gold Digger - Giant women, normal sized men, fully compatible because the ladies were.. x3 normal-sized.. downstairs...

    Because now she's picturing it, and the last thing she wants to think of is her parents having <shudder> Sex.

    "Now can we move on, please?" Yeah, I think Raven's had enough of the discussion of her parentage...

    Ah, Kori, you delightful innocent... Who can fly through a battleship without noticing...

    Cue horrified faces from all involved. Seriously, Tamaranean everything is weird enough, I don't want to hear about their reproductive processes...

    Evidently so? I mean, it would kind of make sense for a race as combat-focused as Tamaraneans to have a pregnancy-induced Kindness switch-instinct-thing. If only to stop them injuring themselves or their mates during the duration. Though I suspect the males are in most danger during the delivery...

    "Huh-Honey... Ribs... Cracking..." :D Yeah, I foresee that overcoming his environmental field...

    Yes, Vic, We see what you're suggesting there. Unfortunately, unless Robin can get some physical augmentation, he may be in danger of a gender-flipped 'Man of Steel, Woman of Kleenex' issue... :cool: Let's go with 'The spirit is willing, but the flesh is spongy and easily bruised...' As for Komy's medical issues, perhaps the League might be willing? Or S.T.A.R Labs?

    No, she was hardly misplaced. But I'm sure this will be wonderfully saccharine...

    Well, this Starfire is pretty much the embodiment of 'All-loving hero', crossed with 'Scatter-brained ditz'... Of course she wouldn't hold a grudge to her sister!

    o_O Oh, god... Would it be ironic to have a Violet Ring or at least a Star Sapphire gem turn up, attracted by all the loviedovieness? and then be confused as to which one to choose? :V

    And here it comes... I doubt Komy has actually realised what's happening to her...

    Hey, wait, this is..." :confused: Probably a way of signalling a pregnant woman to Tamaranean warriors during battles... Because what glory and honour would there be in slaying such a one? Hmm... Or maybe Pregnant Tamaraneans are far more dangerous than any normal fighter... :eek: And the hat is a warning sign!

    Hey, don't laugh! :p For all we know, it has a host of essential vitamins for the mother-to-be...

    ...Wait, did you really not notice the freeze-vision earlier, Komy? Did you think you simply had a cold or something?

    Do I really have to repeat my opening? To sum up: White Light Entity shenanigans!

    Good lord, it's a good thing this is on QQ... Would this have really flown on SB or SV?

    It is when Humans are involved, girl. Good lord, is the galaxy at large going to have some surprises coming when people get into space. And start boldly going.

    Yes, the linked person is a real DC character. :confused: DC Earth is weird.

    Well, it's your own fault, Komy. Don't claim innocence here!

    "I'm always serious. And don't call me Shirley."
    "I... I didn't."
    "Good grief, this universe doesn't have the Airplane movies either? What a cultural wasteland..."

    Blame the White Light Entity. The original 'Go forth and be fruitful'...

    Heh... Methinks the lady is a little concerned about the situation. :rolleyes: Ah, young mothers.

    'No living enemies'... Ah, Raul, you smooth talker, you always know just what to say to a Lady of War...x3

    Ah, RL, I really don't think you know what you're opening yourself up for... Can you imagine the typical Tamaranean wedding? I'm picturing something like a gigantic bar-room brawl swirling around the bride and groom making calf-eyes at each other... Now scale that up for a Princess' ceremony!

    Good gravy, I had such a grin on my face reading this whole chapter. Seriously, my cheeks are starting to ache. :oops: Ow... But I get the feeling Raul is going to be such a worrywart during the course of the pregnancy, even as Komy just goes with the flow. I honestly don't see her settling down at all, do you? She'll probably still leap into fights even on the eve of her due date...
     
  14. Darko

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    Assuming he knows it's actually on the Earth.

    I'm now thinking of that scene in American Dad where Roger has sex with an alien and Klaus later describes it as like staring into the ass of God.

    Yeah, I mean can you imagine a super strong woman crushing a man's fingers and blaming him for her pain when she's giving birth.

    I think Kori would be willing to share.

    Kom too, at least as long as her personality is like this.

    I think she was just pleased at the party hat.

    It happened to Ben Tennyson when he was sick.

    Maybe it also happens to Tamaraneans, but during pregnancy they also change their personality.

    She hasn't been innocent in a long time.

    I'm imagining some ritual combat and heartfelt declarations of love.
     
  15. Mquz

    Mquz Versed in the lewd.

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    Might just be Earth that’s like this. Any sentient species can mate with any other sentient species due to the massive life embodiment.
     
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    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    In Blackfire's second episode we see what a Tamaranean wedding looks like.
     
  17. Lord Ernest

    Lord Ernest At the End...

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    I know there are other types of hybrids in comics, between alien species that don't involve humanity. But I like to think that, in fictional universes, humans in general have the reproductive capabilities of Viltrumites from the Invincible comics, i.e. we can fuck and breed any other sapient species we seem to encounter. And I never have any problem with that, maybe because I have been in the internet long enough.
     
  18. Prince Charon

    Prince Charon Just zis guy, you know?

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    Possibly limited to sapient species, rather than sentient species in general, but then again, centaurs exist on at least some of those Earths.
     
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    Xammmy Getting sticky.

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    Reminder that Blackfire had Kids with this Guy
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    Hey, man. Don't kinkshame. There's nothing wrong with the love between a pretty girl and an alien tentacle monster.
     
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    Breadnaught Versed in the lewd.

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    I'd find it implausible that a Red Lantern could avoid making more enemies than he put down in the most peaceful of settings. In a DC universe, with crazies and monsters coming out of the woodwork?
     
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    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    ...

    Just looked for a meme image relating to preventing children seeking revenge for the fate of their parents by killing them too at the same time and man did I see some depressing websites. Fiction, Google! Fiction!
     
  23. Maxx Crowley

    Maxx Crowley I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    Ah yes, the nigh impossible to resist statement.
     
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    Darko Well worn.

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  25. BartlettMagic

    BartlettMagic just GIVE me... the f'n UPDATES

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    the amazing thing about being born and raised in a country founded by puritanical religious fundamentalists is that while this statement makes me uncomfortable, i have no problem expressing my wanton desire to set new hedonistic standards with Beulah Bleak. it's truly mind-bending sometimes.
     
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    Whenever Possible Versed in the lewd.

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    As stupid as that abstinence video linked to in this chapter is, the line "Socks don't protect my heart" is hilarious.
     
  27. Coda

    Coda I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    Either "a definite possibility" or "definitely a possibility".

    Yes, the actual explicit content is off-screen. Remember that tentacle-orgy-Grayven happened pre-QQ.
     
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    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    Thank you, corrected.
     
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    Doccer Not too sore, are you?

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    So I take it that the doctor(or whatever she met on Tamaran) hadn't told her yet?
    Please tell me there is a link?
    I'd want to take the opportunity to make a remark that on any given day I can end up seeing over a hundred different events and things that don't make any kind of logical sense to me since the day I appeared in your crazy universe. Like your "T" Mansion never being so damaged that it loses enough mass to so much as an "I" let alone a standard skyscraper or less. And yet it always returns to a pristine "T" shape with out nary a blemish on the grassy island. Not to mention I've never once seen a repair or construction crew on this whole city save that one time I hired one to build my lair.
    Then hopefully get an explanation.
     
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    ABZB Getting out there.

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    Up to Chapter 42.

    I have to say, having had to deal with setting up accounts for my (USA-based) employer with the tax revenue offices of Canada and some of its provinces *glares at Quebec and Ontario in particular* for the past fourteen months, having to just travel to Ysmault and defeat Senior Lantern Kultonious in single combat in order to successfully submit forms sounds positively delightful.
     
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