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With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

Discussion in 'Creative Writing' started by Mr Zoat, Jan 27, 2019.

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  1. Ngamer11

    Ngamer11 Experienced.

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    The latter. If no one makes it, I may try a hand at it, assuming I have the time.
     
  2. moralrelativity

    moralrelativity Recovering pendant.

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    Love this view of a self-aware and rational Batman. Finally an explanation for (waves hand) all that.
     
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  3. jasonh23761

    jasonh23761 Not too sore, are you?

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    Interesting. I didn't expect the conversation with Bats to go in that direction but it was quite a treat to see how Bats is pretty self aware.
     
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  4. BR549

    BR549 This is filth! FILTH!!

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    I'm pretty sure that's canon. Aggressive invasion will get a full GLC response. But if a planet asks to join the Reach...

    After all, what's a few decades of mind control in the water between friends?
     
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  5. Senevri

    Senevri Not too sore, are you?

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    What Paul said sounded a lot like "This ship cannot sink" to me.
     
  6. Pinklestia

    Pinklestia Well worn.

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    He works with Superman and they don't always agree on things.

    Thing is Bruce more strained relations are with friends, former friends and family. Dick Grayson, Tim Drake, Huntress, Two Face, Superman... Hush, Jason Todd...

    Is why I consider Selina Kyle perfect for him, she does what she does for fun, she likes to enjoy life and she will drag Bruce to have fun too.

    Even the most sane version of the Demon Head daughter was still raised by him so she has different moral values and sees the world a different way.

    Bruce doesn't need someone loyal to him that won't call him out his bullshit, he need a person that thinks a lot like him that is willing to drag him into not always being Batman or the mask he puts as Bruce Wayne.
     
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  7. Bud-E

    Bud-E Stand up so I can push you down!

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    Was this established earlier? And does Paul and by extension the Justice League know about The Light's involvement with The Reach?
     
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  8. Darko

    Darko Connoisseur.

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    Yeah, I think it was during the ZERO episode.

    No, I don't think anyone knows about that.

    They may not even have become involved yet with the Reach, though I'm betting they're the ones that are giving the Free Lancers villain tech.
     
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  9. Ngamer11

    Ngamer11 Experienced.

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    Jason Goldstein, when he was posing as Rip Hunter, told Superman and OL that the Light are the ones who bring Earth to the Reach's attention.
     
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  10. Darko

    Darko Connoisseur.

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    Don't remember this but I'll check it out, thanks.

    Though they may not fully believe him given his actions.
     
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  11. Darko

    Darko Connoisseur.

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    'likes'

    Though they probably hunt down sane people.

    Maybe remove 'the'

    Maybe 'anymore'

    'lengths'

    Checked it out and here's what I found.

     
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  12. Kalem_Lee

    Kalem_Lee Well worn.

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    Be sure to keep in mind that it may be Paul that screws up the relationship.
     
  13. Stsword

    Stsword Versed in the lewd.

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    As for the H Dial being from the future, the OG Dial has Interlac writing on it. At least in the comics.


    Interlac is the lingua franca of the future of the LoSH.

    There was also a storyline in which the Dial is the product of a time loop- Transported to the past 50 thousand years ago where a caveman used it, it survives to the present where Robbie reed transports it to the past where that caveman finds it. Ouroboros, the snake that eats its own tail.
     
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  14. Darko

    Darko Connoisseur.

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    Now I'm wondering if it has any Reach writing on it and if the Reach language is Interlac.

    Seeing as they created a lot of the civilizations of the United Planets in this story, it wouldn't be too difficult to imagine that these civilizations adopted their language and later on it became Interlac.
     
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  15. Someguy Somewhere

    Someguy Somewhere The Critical Fumbler

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    Lobo, when he shows up in the source material, speaks interlac, and uses a translator for the 'locals'. Interlac is already a common language in the current DC universe, it's just not common for humans until after a alien take over or 2.

    Edit for example.
     
  16. transhumansage

    transhumansage Versed in the lewd.

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    could you explain your reasoning?
     
  17. Mastigos2

    Mastigos2 Versed in the lewd.

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  18. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    Thank you, corrected.
    I like stability.
     
  19. Flightless Man

    Flightless Man Versed in the lewd.

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    I'm really enjoying this arc. It feels like a dash of old OL Paul. His interactions felt like how he was with Zatanna and it's making me nostalgic enough for a reread.
     
  20. transhumansage

    transhumansage Versed in the lewd.

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    i think he was saying it would be a side hustle. you seem to have a day job and you update on a regular basis so it would just be extra money.

    also why is paul hesitant to fanboy over the batcave in the last update?
     
  21. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    He wasn't. He was realising that he was effectively comparing the Reach making the H-Dial with Bruce Wayne being Batman.
     
  22. Signaller

    Signaller Know what you're doing yet?

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    Paul doesn't wear his armour full time, right? So how hard would it be to mount an orange LED and button cell battery in a transparent-tipped bullet?
     
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  23. Someguy Somewhere

    Someguy Somewhere The Critical Fumbler

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    Orange Lasers go through shields because the shield is transparent to the colour, orange objects don't as far as we can tell, otherwise he might have his armor or uniform poke out from the inside.

    Shooting orange bullets at him is unlikely to work. I mean, if it did work you could kill him with the Fruit thrown at high enough speed.

    Shooting Yellow objects at Green lanterns worked in the comics because of the yellow impurity. That isn't much of an issue these days with parallax not being contained in the central power battery.
     
  24. Old Knife

    Old Knife Not too sore, are you?

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    ... Time to get him a yellow ring.
     
  25. Someguy Somewhere

    Someguy Somewhere The Critical Fumbler

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    Give him an orange ring, and imaging what horrors he'd inflict on a universe when his utility belt is all subspace pockets.
     
  26. Vaermina

    Vaermina Well worn.

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    It doesn't matter?

    Paragon literally can't die, not even to things that literally unmake his soul from existence.
     
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  27. crazygrox

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    I feel like it was hypothetically possible for that Qwa-matter explosion to unmake his soul, and if he'd not snapped into the Honden he might have been destroyed.
    (BTW, been thinking those temporal dodge devices that eliminations Inc had on their defense guns would be helpful the next time he faces a gigantic explosion or something like those fracture pulse cannons. Unfortunate that he didn’t get the design.)
    Though now that he knows the trick dealing with him requires either magic or some mastery of destructive energies that is sufficient to disallow that technique.

    While it kinda seems like he should be unkillable, every time thus far that something has actually gotten through his defenses enough to kill him it's been something that might have been special enough to keep him down permanently. First the imprisonment of his soul in those virtualisation vessels and the deception of Boss Smiley, and then the supernatural properties of Qwa energy.

    Edit: but yes an orange light emitting bullet shouldn't work.
     
  28. Threadmarks: Past Participant (part 2)
    Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    So this is Britain.

    Amazing how fast things can move when someone in authority wants them to.

    Kryptonian technology isn't something that humans can just make; even now we're centuries behind what they were able to make towards the end. And a lot of the more remote places… I imagine that they're much the same. But here in London, I wouldn't know it was the same country.

    Aside from anything else, the trains run on time. And all the union officials got shot.

    Overman regards me curiously. Which is probably the most open expression I've seen him use in my presence. I suppose that with just the two of us here he doesn't feel the need to play a role quite so much.

    "How does it seem to you?"

    The old parliament building was annihilated during Operation Sea Lion, absolutely levelled in a demonstration that there are some situations where you can't just keep calm and carry on. Once Prince Edward was reinstalled as King Edward VII, and… The immediate occupation ended, the country obviously needed a new centre of government.

    It's… Not the Mother of Parliaments.

    The old building was gothic. And I feel mildly bad for not remembering who designed it, but it came to being after the Great Fire of London destroyed the previous one. And I seem to remember that they celebrated the fire as providing a tremendous opportunity for architecture, so maybe I shouldn't feel quite so bad for forgetting their name. The new thing looks a bit Greek, a bit Roman, and a lot German.

    "Did Adolf Hitler have any actual involvement in the design?"

    "He looked at it once. By that time, he had begun to use amphetamines and his ability to command fine details was weakened."

    "He took more than amphetamines in my timeline."

    "By the end, he took more than amphetamines here as well. Conquering the world is easy when you have overwhelming power. Controlling the world was not so easy."

    Which is why the Kingdom of Britain exists. It actually kept most of its pre-war territory, though the nature of that rule changed somewhat. And the government…

    "Did they actually kill Baden-Powell?"

    "I do not know that name."

    "He was the man who invented the Scouts' Association, what Hitler based the Hitler Youth on. There's a funny story about an exchange the two organisations did before the war, actually. In an attempt to promote peace between Britain and Germany, he arranged for a platoon of ten year old boys from the Scout movement in Britain to go to Germany and stay with the families of Hitler Youth boys. They spent a summer learning about German culture, doing outdoors exercises… Normal youth group stuff. Then the next year the Hitler Youth sent a platoon of boys to Britain. Sixteen and seventeen year old boys who spent the summer bicycling around Britain drawing maps!"

    He gives me an awkward smile.

    "Did that really happen?"

    "I've probably gotten some of the details wrong." I breathe out. "Okay, post war, Britain made a huge effort to attract people from the colonies to come and live in Britain. I'm going to assume that didn't happen here."

    "British colonists returned from places awarded to Germany's allies."

    "Ah, no. I meant black people from British territories in the Caribbean."

    The awkward smile dies.

    "No. That did not happen here."

    I look down at the streets from our balcony on the up of the parliament building. Yeah, no… Non-white people. That wouldn't be too strange somewhere like Leonard Stanley, but immigrant communities in the post-War period generally went to live in major industrial cities. Even today… 'Today', people who can trace their descent from those immigrants are far more common in cities. This is weird for London. I mean, I didn't pick up on it immediately when I visited Eastbourne. The lack of Eastern Europeans would be more obvious there-.

    Yes, that… That wouldn't have happened here either.

    I think that the clothing is more conservative, but this is September in Britain. And it's not as if I knew anything about London fashion before I came here. The cars are all electronic, running quietly along well-ordered roads. No… Swastikas or anything like that, but there are a few touches which suggest… I don't know, that there was a bit of an 'Imperium chic' trend a while ago.

    "What about..? India? I thought that people from that part of the world were officially okay."

    "During the Chinese campaign, Germany was stretched thin due to the manpower required to hold its European territory. The Fuhrer authorised the use of biological weapons. Unfortunately-." He closes his eyes for a moment, takes a deep breath and huffs it out. "No. It was not a matter of fortune. The genetic elements which the organism targeted were shared between the Chinese and the majority of brown-skinned Indians. There are some who were more genetically similar to the people of the Middle East, but a large part of India was depopulated."

    "Who lives there now?"

    "Some people who survived in remote areas. Colonists from Britain, and other places. It is a… I do not remember the word in Englisch. A political entity which manages its internal affairs but is ruled by the King of Britain."

    "Dominion?"

    "If that is the word."

    I suppose that with all of the natives dead, there would be more cultural commonality between Britain and India. The same religion, the same customs, and therefore no particular desire to be… Independent, but… That could be said of the United States of America as well, and look what happened there.

    "Well, it's more advanced, obviously. The people as a whole are different. I imagine that they're taught German in schools?"

    "Yes. Does that not happen in your timeline?"

    "Ich kann nicht Deutsch gesprechen."

    "That is not correct-. Ah, I see."

    "It gets taught, but it's three hours a week from twelve to sixteen. And that's if you don't do French or Spanish instead. Beyond that, I can't really tell you until I've had a chance to experience a little more of modern Britain."

    He nods.

    "I have spoken with the editor of Die Tägliche Welt. He has agreed to sponsor your writing, though the censors are more strict in Germany than they are here. Also, a gift from me, for your birthday."

    He reaches into his pocket and pulls out a watch, offering it to me.

    "It will never run out of battery power, it will work in extreme environments and it emits a sound that will allow me to find you." I take it from him and wrap it around my left wrist. "It also has an alarm function which will allow you to alert me if your life is threatened, though I will ask you to only use that if there is genuine need. Calls on my time are many."

    "Thank you, and I'll try not to end up in peril. You know where I am if you need someone to bounce ideas off."

    "Yes. Have a good day."

    He looks up, and then shoots up into the sky. I watch him go as he gets smaller and smaller before vanishing from my sight, though I know perfectly well that he could still see me. And hear me, of course.

    The official escort who had been hanging back while we spoke begin walking towards me. I get a small flat and a job as a journalist -and apparently as his Jimmy Olsen- and he gets to talk to someone who gets it. I suppose this is as good a life as I can reasonably expect, given the circumstances.

    I shrug, and walk towards the functionaries, singing quietly to myself as I do so.

    "Es gibt ein Haus in Neu-Berlin,
    man nennt es Haus Abendrot.
    Es war der Ruin vieler guter Jungs,
    von mir, mein Gott litt ich Not.
    "
     
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  29. Darko

    Darko Connoisseur.

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    'looked at it'

    'begun'

    'thin'

    'there now'
     
  30. moralrelativity

    moralrelativity Recovering pendant.

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    three -> four
    OR
    sixteen -> fifteen
     
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