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With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

Discussion in 'Creative Writing' started by Mr Zoat, Jan 27, 2019.

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  1. Lord Ernest

    Lord Ernest At the End...

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    Yeah, I kinda agree that the Amazons wouldn't have been able to conquer the whole world. Unless it's an Elseworlds that bends over backwards to make it so, they don't have the numbers or actual power to do so. Depending on what type of Amazon we are talking here, I don't think they would be able to even conquer the whole Greek area to be honest.

    If it's in ancient times, they aren't the only ones with demigod level individuals, nor are the other pantheons sleeping or whatever it is that they're doing in modern times. From there, keep moving the historical period forward and there's anything from new tactics to new technologies that they haven't faced or encountered, not counting the simple facts of numbers, logistics and other civilizations with their own respective bullshits considering this is a DC universe. There's walls that I don't think they would be able to surpass, from China to Atlantis, from individuals in Africa to Northern Europe. Nah, they would probably be able to establish a new Amazonian kingdom but conquer the world? Are we giving them cheat codes?
     
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    Mr Zoat

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    "Another?"

    Atom Man stares at me through his visor as I carry another stunned cultist to our drop-off point.

    "How many do you think we need?"

    "Two possible answers to that. The first is that, since we don't know, we should try to collect as many as possible, if doing so doesn't cost us anything. The more we capture, the more likely we are to gain useful intelligence."

    "It's been tried. Leatherwing took many of them captive. They told him nothing."

    "I've gotten a bit of a handle on Leatherwing's personality. So correct me if I'm wrong here, but… He beat them, then tortured them with equipment, and then… If there were any left, tried using some sort of experimental destructive mental probe?"

    "I won't comment on the third option, but you're probably right about the other two. You don't do that where you're from?"

    "Physical coercion is seldom efficacious. My preferences are 'persuade', 'telepathy' and 'unnatural mental influence'. Not because I am a 'soft touch', but because they work better."

    "If you have time." He grabs hold of the door to the train storage shed and rips it off the hinges without bothering with the lock. "In the field, you don't always have time."

    "Then you bring a telepath with you. And what's field expediency got to do with killing or stunning your target?"

    "Nothing. I just mean 'generally'."

    The trains have been lifted off their rails and moved to the sides of the shed. Wonder Woman appears to have had that much clarity of thought, at least. The portal space is obvious; part of the train wash has been repurposed.

    "You want to capture that as well?"

    "If there were any magicians on hand to examine it, yes. As it-"

    He's already raising his lasers.

    "-is, you might as well."

    Two fat green beams burn along the train cleaning device, incinerating most of it and reducing the rest to slag.

    "Will that stop it?"

    I fly forwards and wave my rune stone at it.

    "The spell's been ruined, but the local magic concentration is still above background levels."

    "How do we fix that?"

    "With a magician. Or time. Or… Ritual purification?"

    "We need a priest?"

    "You need an extremely devout priest. A saint would be better. But a normal priest, a large group of the devout and time would disperse the accumulated demonic magic more quickly."

    "'Pray the Fae Away' actually works?"

    "Demons aren't fae. That's a separate thing." I scan the area, but I'm not picking up anything that looks particularly cult-y. "But yes. Genuine faith, focusing your mind and soul on something beyond your material existence, tends to weaken demon magic."

    "I will remember that. What was the other answer?"

    "I don't know exactly how things were in this timeline, but in mine, the national socialists originally used soldiers to kill their political opponents."

    "Yes?"

    "Most couldn't handle it. Killing soldiers fighting against you is one thing, but killing civilians kneeling next to a ditch?" I shake my head. "They started coming apart, mentally. That was why your government switched to using gas, and making prison trustees clear the gas chambers out."

    "No one had the stomach for it?"

    "Only the total psychos. My thought was that if you don't argue against an idea or practice -no matter how rational it seems- then it risks becoming what the philosopher Harriet Taylor called a 'dead dogma'. By sparing people you could kill, you gain an understanding of why you don't usually do it."

    "I've never heard of 'Harriet Taylor'."

    "She's probably banned. If you prefer Elizabeth Förster-Nietzsche, perhaps you could take helpless prisoners and slowly murder them for no good reason to help with overcoming your slave morality?"

    "Why would I-?" He glare at me through his visor. "Look, I don't know what you think we are, but I am not a psycho. I don't hurt people for fun; I do it because it is necessary." He steps back, then turns back towards the door. "Fine. Keep the prisoners. I will call in The Bat."

    He pauses.

    "Do you have some plan for dealing with the woman? I do not see her becoming 'helpless'. I respect that, but it's still a problem."

    "There are two places I might be able to get a magician powerful enough to help. But for her, I think it will be better if I take her to this world's version of her country."

    "Where is she from?"

    "Themyscira. It's an island hidden by magic. I should be able to get to it, and they'll be motivated and should be able to get Diana back on her feet."

    "That's her name? Diana?"

    "Ah, yes."

    In my timeline and the original comics, Diana left the island to take part on World War 2. But there were stages where that Wonder Woman was Queen Hippolyta, or Fury, or it just didn't happen. So if something else happened… There's no reason why the Reich would have much information on her.

    "Princess Diana of Themyscira. Probably. I'm working off the history of my own parallel. They're usually pretty isolationist, so there's next to no chance of them taking it as a casus belli."

    "I was wondering if they had wizards. Since they are a primitive, isolated people."

    "The version on my parallel has one, and a few priestesses in semi-regular contact with their gods. I'll ask, but they'll probably say no."

    "You accept that from primitives?"

    "I realise that I sound English, but I'm actually a Themysciran national. They're… Capable of learning, and not completely incurious about the world."

    "Heh. If you want to take your princess back to your people, go ahead. I will stay here to liaise with the local authorities, then return to Wewelsburg. Good journey, Orange Lantern."

    I nod to him, then fly out towards where the owlwing has landed.
     
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  3. Ngamer11

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    I can't see this ending in any other way than a complete disaster. Has Paul thought this through? How will he stop the Amazons of Earth 10 from attacking him on sight, especially when it looks like he has their long lost princess as a prisoner? Although, if he prayed to Eris, she might help him out; but that seems like a 50/50 chance at best, assuming she's a neutral/benevolent version of herself and not an evil version.
     
  4. Mr Zoat

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    Not quite. Herakles raped a significant part of the population after conquering the old city. That's where most of their demigoddesses come from. There were probably a couple of other demigoddesses from before the exile, but Herakles took the city by deceit.
     
  5. Mastigos2

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    The fact that he's bringing her TO them? Or by flying out of their reach and then explaining over a megaphone?

    The real question is, how do the Amazons of Earth 10 differ from the ones he's used to?
     
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    though -> thought
    is -> his
    thing -> things
    Missing a line break.
    Is the "you" after the name superfluous?
     
  7. Darko

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    So he used methods that generally don't work on people that are probably extremely used to pain to the point that flaying them alive may be pleasurable, and then used something to look into an extremely damaged mind that only caused more damage.

    'things were'

    Add a space between these two.

    'understanding'


    'prisoners'

    'through his'

    No, you're just a racist prick that hurts people even when it isn't necessary.

    That may not be fully true.

    They may just kill her due to her demonic corruption as a mercy, or they may not know what to do.

    Also, they may try to kill you.

    They probably already had bad feelings about outsiders before their version of Wonder Woman left, but now that she was killed they may have increased.

    Even if Eris is neutral or benevolent, that's not a full guarantee she'd help him.

    Or at least help him in a useful way.

    She is a goddess of chaos, so she may do something very weird and chaotic which she thinks is helpful, but it's really not.
     
  8. Vaermina

    Vaermina Well worn.

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    Now its time to see if Zoat remembers he had the purple healing ray Nazi woman shack up on Themiscara.
     
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  9. Darko

    Darko Connoisseur.

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    'stay here'
     
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  10. Chojin Patriarch

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    Yeah, looks like the cultists are proving about as effective against these two as a dry sponge being slapped against a brick wall... I doubt they'll have much to say beyond general denouncements, though. Unless OL wants to show another of his cards and Brand them...

    And you never know which ones know what. If you accidentally kill the one guy given the task and knowledge of creating a portal, you're shit out of luck.

    ...Sounds about right. Especially from what we heard about his interrogation of Paul Freeman. I bet he enjoys it, even if he justifies it to himself...

    Yeah, a little avaricious nudge and people are happy to tell you what they want. Getting it for them, on the other hand, that can be awkward.

    Gee, a pity they've had no contact with Mars. Though I suspect the Martians would likely avoid them anyway. :oops: I stand corrected, having been reminded that they have had contact with a Martian, The majority having met with the usual extinction...

    ...Or whoever was in the driver's seat did. And logical enough on the placement. It's reasonably confined, and compact enough to avoid detection from above.

    ...So, the Kryptonians didn't come through. No point keeping it open then. Either they'll wait for the next attempt, or capture Wolf and force him to do it...

    I'm guessing there's runes painted on the walls, or such. Not likely they'd leave the portal sitting open, after all.

    After a quick Google, if you can't picture the scene: imagine an automatic car-wash, only larger and longer. So, lots of burning brushes and melted mechanisms.

    And without any significant knowledge of magic, every other portal site is probably exactly the same. Just as Kreiger planned.

    :p A young priest and an old priest? But seriously, good luck finding that in the modern Germany.

    Heh. I doubt they care much about what's been happening out here. Probably just makes the few people they take even more entertaining...

    Well, that's something a little more difficult for modern Nazis to manage, I suspect. Sure, some might be believers, but I bet the Abrahamic faiths have declined... Besides for the obvious reasons.

    Thoroughly unpleasant all round...

    Sort of a 'how can you see the rights or wrongs of your way if no-one can speak against it?' thing? I suppose that works.

    ...Or other reasons, if you've those sorts of urges...

    Huh. Not as bad a person as we thought he was, it seems. Still, 'it was necessary' can cover for a lot of sins...

    ...Oh, wow, I do not see that going well at all. Assuming the gods even allow you entry.

    Of course, you seem to be assuming it's in the same place in this world, OL. The actual location of Themyscira or Paradise Island, depending on the continuity, has varied considerably over the years...

    :confused: Wow, the history books didn't even bother to record her name? Cold.

    And there are plenty that only left the Island in more recent years. More common post-crisis than before...

    Especially if they learned their Princess died fighting these people...

    Best not mention the fact they're homonormative, or the fact you've aided some in having children. Wonder how they're doing, anyway. Probably precocious little toddlers with lots of doting aunties. x3

    Well, he's going to be busy for the next while, I think.

    What's the bet Herr Fledermaus insist on someone accompanying him to Themyscira? Partly to keep an eye on him, partly to investigate the Amazons. In which case, it'd be a matter of who would go. Someone female, I would expect... Of course, that presumes he'll even be able to get there. The gods of this Earth have no knowledge of him, nor any good reason to give him passage without some very fast talking OL's part...
     
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  11. Ngamer11

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    Overgirl mentioned that there is only one Martian on Earth 10 as all of the others died due to a disease that I think is called H'ronmeer's Curse.
     
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    Actually, Angelika mentioned that the Martians were wiped out by some disease when the people from Earth 10 came there.

    A White Martian did survive and is a member of the Reichsmen.

    Not sure why that'd be a problem.

    I don't think the Nazis had anything against Christianity.

    At least in general.

    The Fae may care since if Demon Earth manages to get through then they're also most likely screwed.

    Judaism is probably dead, though some may worship in secret.

    Islam may have also declined.

    Some forms of Christianity might be gone or at least illegal, but they may still have forms.

    Just because someone isn't as bad as you thought they were that doesn't make them okay.

    Yeah, I think in some comics it was located in the Bermuda Triangle.

    Or the Nazis never knew her actual name so they couldn't record it.

    And if the Allies did know it then they may have potentially destroyed any documents or materials they thought the Nazis could use when they saw which way the war was heading, and documents concerning Wonder Woman were among them.

    Or the documents were destroyed during a Nazi attack.
     
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    Thank you, corrected.
     
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    Xmaster3000 Know what you're doing yet?

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    I think it's "our drop-off point".

    And I think it's "an extremely devout priest".
     
  15. Doccer

    Doccer I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    I've missed the joke?
     
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    Thank you, corrected.
    I'm assuming that it's a Repossessed reference.
     
  17. Sorrow

    Sorrow Getting sticky.

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    Are we sure that this is the Local version of Diana? Why would the local version be helping Demonologists? How would they have captured her and brain washed/controlled her? Or is that what the helmet was? A magical mind control device?
     
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    This isn't the local version of Diana, this is the one from Hell Earth.

    Diana from Earth 10 died in WWII.

    They most likely captured her due her being outnumbered by corrupted metas, and the helmet was used to control her.
     
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    I think it's more of an Exorcist reference or a generic exorcism reference.
     
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    Zoat's amazons are canon for Zoat's story, not for the DCAU and related media. Why does this need to be explained to you? In that setting Hippolyta was ordered by Zeus to have the Gates of Tartarus guarded, take a wild guess where those gates are located.

    So if anyone has an actual argument for why superpowered Amazons who can recruit up to 51% of the population as the DCAU Amazons apparently can

    have the knowledge of magic to grant these superpowers

    And have access to "forbidden lore" super technology as Aresia and her biotoxins and mind control devices show

    Couldn't dominate physically , magically, and technologically inferior nations, please share.
     
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  21. Dur'id the Druid

    Dur'id the Druid Know what you're doing yet?

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    IIRC the Diana of this earth is still alive but very mentally scarred from when Leatherwing captured her for a time. She escaped thanks to the local superman, but is weakened. She has the body of an old woman, even as she has the powers of Wonder Woman, she isn't as healthy as she was before. Also really hates this Superman, even as she respects him as a warrior.

    Also doesn't the USA have a force of low powered green lanterns? I am interested in them meeting with John here, it would be an interesting experience for all.
     
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    What you just described is the Red Son universe, where Superman is a communist.

    This is the Earth where he's a Nazi, or well, former Nazi.

    The only thing they have in common was that it was claimed that Superman is really a man from the future.

    In Red Son that was shown to us.

    In this story that was just propaganda by Hitler, with Overman really being an alien.
     
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    Maybe he's trying to win a coveted [Vaermina Award] for making authoritative statements that have nothing to do with the actual events that happened the the story this thread covers, and then doubling down on the crazy statements when anyone points out what they are saying is BS?
     
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    No, I clearly stated DCAU bends over backwards to make governments as irrelevant and ineffective as possible as to glorify and make hero/vigilante plots "work", thus why I don't really regard anything from the comics medium very highly because the "too many cooks in the Kitchen" problem has made them too convoluted to bother to follow.

    The rest is a misunderstanding of his argument about Pax Amazon ruling over the world because a writer made their entire civilization a Mary sue and how they have been stealing from the Greek mythology to cover for their own deficiencies as writers and this has ended up hyping the Greek mythology and their gods.

    The Greek mythology isn't even the most overpowered mythology we have around just the most well known one. If the Amazons had decided to go out to conquer the earth then by all rights they should have gotten destroyed by the Indu armies, their pantheon and their demigods.


    Then again I don't see what even the point of the tangent was, if Stsword wasn't talking about the Amazons as per this fic then he was derailing for absolutely no reason.
     
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    Wasn't that after they lost the war? why would she be there if she had won?
     
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    Didn't Hitler like Islam more than Christianity?

    Edit: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Religious_views_of_Adolf_Hitler#Hitler_on_Islam
    I have trouble parsing this. The "other answer" to what question?
     
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    Darko made a statement assuming that the Amazons of Nazi world here are the same as the Amazons of WTR earth-16.

    I pointed out that while there are Doylist reasons for believing in that possibility, but on the Watsonian level DC's Amazons aren't all the same between universes, versions generally having innate powers, magic, super-technology, or a combination of two or even all three of those advantages.

    Someone then specifically asked me about the Amazons of the DCAU.

    So I answered the question asked of me.

    Anyway, It's a pity the alt.Paul known as Peter doesn't remember watching the cartoon, because the amazon conversion process could've have been his version of the passing out the Donner formula. Of course, he'd have needed to find something that works on the guys and gals who don't want to become Amazons for religious reasons or whatever, but I think Zoat could have done interesting things with that.
     
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    It's from right at the start of this episode.
     
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    Slipstream scrapes her right foot across the deck plate and examines her right fingernails as Arcee stares at her, fingers twitching and arm blades deployed.

    "Careful." Slipstream stops studying her fingers for a moment and look at Arcee. "If the wind changes your face could get stuck like that."

    Arcee's eyes narrow to slits. "Don’t push me, Con."

    Slipsteam shrugs. "So. Bike alt-mode. How does that work, considering your… You know."

    "My what?"

    "Your mass."

    Bulkhead doors in the side of the room open, revealing Bulkhead with a barrel of energon over his shoulder. "Hey Arcee, where do you want-?"

    Arcee steps aggressively towards Slipstream. "What's wrong with my mass?"

    Bulkhead hesitates for a moment, then steps back and allows the heavy metal door to close in front of him.

    "I was wondering where you keep it. Since I left Cybertron I've had my eyes open for upgrades, and normal T-cogs can't just make mass disappear like that. I-."

    The room's other door opens and Agent Fowler, Nurse Darby and Paul walk out at ground level, followed a few careful low-squish-probability steps behind by Ratchet. Arcee's eyes immediately go to the team's medic, while Slipstream only has eyes for her partner.

    "Aside from a few minor scrapes, Agent Fowler and Nurse Darby appear to be in good health."

    Arcee looks unconvinced. "I thought she shot them with a null-ray."

    "Null-rays impede electrical activity. Since humans are organic, exposure to its effects are far less dangerous to them than they would be to us."

    Slipstream crouches down as Paul approaches her.

    "Did Ratchet give you a clean bill of health?"

    Ratchet shifts awkwardly. "I can't claim to be entirely familiar with Nebulon cyber-organic implan-"

    Paul grins, rolling his eyes incredulously. "Yeah."

    "-ts-. Ch-! Buh-!" Ratchet splutters, though whether he's shocked at the implication or embarrassed at being discovered in a lie isn't entirely clear. He takes a moment to compose himself. "So far as I can determine, Borx effectively bridged the differences between cybertronian technology and human neurology. I have no idea what the long term effects of bonding like-"

    Paul smirks. "Never would have guessed."

    "-this will-." He blinks, spots the jibe as Slipstream's expression mirrors that of her partner, then stares directly at him. "You have a piece of alien technology wired directly into your central nervous system. No one knows what that might do. You have taken a foolish and unnecessary risk with your health."

    "Doctor, going outside is a risk to your health." He walks over to Slipstream and leans against her right leg. "But neither of us are going to stop."

    "Cybertronian technology is considerably easier to repair than human physiology."

    "Earth has about fourteen thousand high-yield fission bombs. How easy to repair are you after getting hit by one of those?"

    "Not very." Ratchet looks bemused. "That quantity seems… Somewhat excessive for a single biosphere. Though as you imply, even one close-proximity detonation would utterly atomise any Cybertronian unfortunate enough to be hit."

    "There you go. Look, the Nebulons have been using this technology for decades. I'm not worried."

    Slipstream nods. "We're not worried." She stands back up to her full height. "Now where's the rest of our payment?"

    The heavily reinforced door slides open again and Bulkhead lumbers in with the barrel of energon. "Here it is, Con." He drops the barrel on the floor in front of her. "You can carry it out on your own."

    "'Con'? Really?" Slipstream shakes her head. "That doesn't matter any more."

    "It matters to me."

    "Megatron used to command an army of billions. Now? He's got the crew of one ship. And most of them don't like him very much. Airachnid and Starscream are actively backstabbing him at every opportunity. And on your side, Prime used to command an army of billions and now he's just.. got.. you. What are you even fighting for?"

    "Mom!"

    A smaller human runs in from behind Bulkhead and embraces Nurse Darby. Slipstream pauses to watch him.

    And then Arcee pointedly steps into her line of sight, blocking her view of him.

    Slipstream smiles menacingly, and Arcee raises her arm blades.

    "To prevent Megatron realising his ambitions."

    Optimus Prime strides in, prompting Arcee to lower her blades slightly. Slipstream affects a nonchalant posture, but Paul can feel the tension in her frame. Optimus Prime is… Bigger than in the images he'd seen so far.

    "Even with a single warship, Megatron could destroy every city on Earth."

    "Unless."

    Slipstream is momentarily surprised by her partner speaking up, and isn't able to stop herself glancing down at him. Mouthing off to Arcee is one thing, but the 'bot who led half of the war that ruined Cybertron and finished it off by ripping out Primus's soul isn't someone she wants to have to fight. Again. But while their bond doesn't let them read each other's minds, she can feel that he's going somewhere with this.

    "Unless you'd used any of the half-dozen times you'd been onboard the Nemesis to plant one of those fourteen thousand fission bombs on board and blown it up." He smiles. "Did I mention that we're for hire?"

    "You did." Optimus Prime actually sounds sad. "But if you truly have no interest in continuing the war, I would strongly suggest that you both leave Earth."

    Paul shakes his head. "Have you got any idea what India will pay for a working thorium reactor design? Besides, we need the energon. And I want to see what happens when Slipstream turns up to an anime convention."

    Chu-tsche.

    Arcee morphs her right hand into its gun configuration, and everyone hesitates. Agent Fowler comes out of it first, ushering the Darbys out of the room. Then Arcee speaks.

    "Are you just treating this as a way to get rich? How dare you not take the war seriously!?"

    Slipstream doesn't change her limb configuration. But she does smile.

    "Why are you taking that so personally?"

    "Decepticons have murdered two of my partners."

    Slipstream feels a pulse of confusion from Paul at the use of the term 'murder' to refer to killing an armed soldier during a war. And she thinks that he has a point.

    "Huh. How about that. Do you know who else has lost partners since this war started?"

    Arcee pauses, perhaps realising that she's escalating too far but unable to restrain herself. "You, I hope."

    Oh, that-!

    "EVERYONE! Literally everyone has lost people close to them! The fact that it happened to you does not make you special, and it doesn't make them special! My whole squad died one after the other starting with the Kaon Uprising and finishing at the Fall of Iacon and I-. How many do you think are still alive today who started the war-?"

    "One in every one thousand one hundred thirty seven." Optimus Prime steps between then, gently pushing Arcee's gun down. "At the last census taken before the launch of the Ark, one in one thousand one hundred thirty seven remained. By now, the figure is likely to be much lower. I imagine that the number on the Decepticon side was similar."

    He takes a step closer.

    "Slipstream, I would gladly stop fighting tomorrow. All the survivors of the war could return to Cybertron and work together to rebuild our civilisation. A new High Council could be formed with Autobot and Decepticon alike, and we could settle our disputes peacefully. I would even abandon my title of Prime if that were necessary. I would gladly stop fighting, if it were not for the fact that I know Megatron will not. Whatever he once believed, he is fully committed to dominating cybertronian society through force. Do you disagree?"

    Slipstream hesitates.

    "Ah-?" … "No."

    "And that is why we fight. Thank you for rescuing our human allies from Knock Out. Now take your payment, and go."
     
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  30. Darko

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    You don't ask women, or giant robots that!

    Smart man.

    Yes, but this is even more risky and stupid.

    Welcome to Earth, bitch.

    Not the safest place in the universe.

    'unfortunate'

    Though the quiet one is ever loyal.

    Nice to see that you have your priorities straight.

    I think this should be 'Knock Out' since that's how you spelled it the first time.

     
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