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With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

3rd October 2010
09:06 GMT -5


I squint at the incoming handegg construct and generate a wicket-keeper's mitten to catch it.

"While this is a… Surprisingly chummy way of spending our lesson, Lantern Jordan…" I focus on his location and throw the construct his way. "I was sort of expecting something else."
An interesting way to practice launching and capturing wild projectiles. I'm guessing they're playing catch over a distance of miles. Although I would have been using a solid object to avoid accidental construct failure. Probably works for Jordan in maintaining construct integrity, though.

His construct image floating over the ring… I think he's raising his eyebrows, though the mask makes it hard to tell. "What happened to 'sir'?"

"I realised that you don't actually outrank me, and time in rank doesn't matter in separate organisations. Unless this is an American-" Construct hands form to catch the ball, then hurl it back towards me. "-etiquette lesson and I'm supposed to call you 'sir' because you're older than me."
Jordan still sticking with simpler constructs, I see. A cricket wicket-keeper's glove is pretty complex a shape by comparison.

"Oh? When did you join the Justice League?"

"The Justice League has no formal authority-" I catch the ball again and because I'm feeling fancy I actually spin around before throwing it back. "-over superhumans generally. And I imagine that the Controllers would rather than I didn't take orders from the Guardians."
I doubt they'd tolerate it even in a joint operation, just because, well, Controllers.

"How would you know? You said-" He catches and returns. "-you never met them."

"Your very loud silence on the subject. There are two possible sources of power rings: Maltus and Qward. If it came from Qward you'd have taken it off me due to them being evil. It's not the Guardians because they've stuck with green for… What, a billion years? It's not Zamaron, because they like violet and because you'd have taken it off me due to them being crazy." Catch and return. "Who does that leave?"
And there aren't that many other Maltusian groups out there, none of which make Power Rings.

"Why assume that no one except Qward can learn to make them?"

"Occam's razor. Power rings are amazing and Green Lanterns have been around for a long time. If it was the sort of thing-" Catches and return. "-that anyone could do, other people would have started it. Qward is hardly the only place that mad super-scientists come from. So if there's someone available who could have made it, they're the best place to look."
Yeah, if any other group could make them and avoid the Guardian's ire, the tech would be everywhere. After all, a multi-function device the size of a Ring, powered by emotion? That is literally the apex tool of any civilisation.

Catch and return.

"Alright, that makes sense. But why do you care what they think? If they did give you your ring, there's a good chance they're the ones who kidnapped you."
See, that's a big assumption to make. Especially since the Controllers are not so monolithically aligned as the guardians are, if only because there's more of them. And we've seen in Paragon timeline that individual Controllers can have their own little projects on the go.

Catch and return.

"Then I'll have it out with them. But they also might be able to send me back, so I'm not going to start by being rude to billion-year-old superbeings."
I can see that. Although we know that CS!OL isn't the lone version out there, he doesn't know or imagine that he could have been 'duplicated' across hundreds of possible worlds.

Catch and return.

"I mean, maybe they think I'm sort of ideal Orange Lantern candidate and they just wanted to make sure I could handle it? That's a big show of trust."
Well, given you haven't gone remotely Larfleeze, it's a good sign.

The construct image nods. "Would you go back?"

"It depends on what the terms of my return are. I'd love to go back, ring and personal lantern intact, and be my Earth's only superhero. Maybe have a look around our galaxy to see if there's anyone else there. But… Unless travel is two-way, Paula obviously wouldn't want to move, and…"
That would be one hell of a commute for dating, though. :p

Catch and return.

"And I don't know what I'd do about that. If it was stay or go with no coming back and no ring, I'd… Probably stay. Hopefully send a message, but it's just… I've got more opportunities to do something with my life here."
Why do I get a funny feeling that one day, there'll be a meta moment with one of the many Pauls making it home and finding an older Mr Zoat waiting for him, like a Grant Morrison meta-plot? I mean, we may get Kid Flash visiting, assuming plans haven't change, but no word on any SI making it.

"And Paula."

Catch and return
.

I find myself smiling, and do my best to clamp down on the feeling as my construct starts to waver.
Careful there, CS!OL.

"That close, huh?"

"This close. I don't really have anything to compare it to, but I have every intention of making it closer. Ah. Are you and Ms. Ferris..?"
Eh, they really aren't the best for each other. She's got too many issues with pilots, and he's got too much baggage of his own.

Catch and return.

"We're not together. Guess the nice thing about having a secret identity is that you have time for things like that."
Not having one, you mean. And, I mean, Carol probably knows who you are anyway. To quote the movie: "You think because I can't see your cheekbones, I wouldn't recognise you?" Man doesn't even change his hairstyle! :p

"If something's important, you make the time."

Catch and return.

"Did you just quote Star Trek at me?"
Hey, steal from the greats. And it's an important message for guys like Kirk or Picard, who didn't made the time.

"Yes, but it's true." Catch and return. "Yes, I could spend forty hours a week plus travel time being an administrative assistant as well as the time I spend being a superhero and trying to have a life in whatever's left, and… Lying to everyone about it. But why?"

Catch and return.
Which would be incredibly difficult if you didn't need to sleep thanks to the Ring, and even then, there'd be days when you'd have to zonk out...

"Not really the same for me."

"Does the Green Lantern Corps not pay you a living wage? Serious question, I've got no idea if you get paid or not."
Always have to wonder how that works when they do? 🤔 How do they pay in a fragmented culture like Earth's? Swiss Bank account?

Catch and return.

"Yeah. I do. Might cause trouble for my family, though."
Most of your villains aren't that crazy. ...In fact, I can't even remember most of Hal's villains on Earth. Hector Hammond, at most, without looking them up and that's only because he was in the movie...

"Sinestro already knows who your family is."

"I know."
And he's not the sort of man to attack someone's family to hurt his foe. Not usually.

"And don't the families of most Green Lanterns plant that.. flag, with the green sigil on it, outside of their houses as a badge of pride?" Catch and return.

"... Yeah."
To be fair, most of those families are on worlds familiar with space stuff. Earth... Earth is not.

"Funny story about M.I.6. They didn't used to employ homosexuals due to the concern that they could be blackmailed about being homosexual. Then someone realised that was stupid and now it's fine as long as they're open about it." Hm. "Are attacks on the families of police officers common in America?"
Honestly, easier to defuse a potential angle of attack than leave it a risk.

Catch and return.

"No, not… Really. Because they know if they tried, every single person involved would die. Police do not take that kinda thing."
'Coming down like a ton of bricks' barely covers it.

"Well, if you want to invite me to a family barbeque I won't say 'no'. I don't think anyone will miss the implication if you're seen with me."

Catch and return.
An interesting way to out oneself.

"Heh. Thanks, I guess." The ball flies towards him, and his dismisses it. "Guess I was kinda… Thinking about it. I'd have to talk to Jack and Jim first." He aims himself in my direction and accelerates, covering the distance in a few seconds.

"And wasn't your Uncle the first Airwave?"
Huh. That's an interesting connection. And maybe a more recent one.

He looks mildly pleased. "You're the first person outside our family who knew that. And yeah, I don't remember Aunt Helen having any trouble over it. I'll.. give it some thought." He looks around. "So if you don't wanna toss a ball around, what do you wanna do?"

I reach into a pouch, and pull out Teth Adom's amulet.

"My investigation skills could do with some work. Perhaps we could look into what this is?"
Hmm... @Darko: I can see the wording of the original post being ambiguous, but it reads like he stole the amulet, then disintegrated Theo. Which means it could definitely be used to empower someone. Perhaps a 'blank' clone?

Looks like this OL will get to discover Teth Adom's tomb, a bit later than the Paragon did. It'll be interesting to see what he does with the amulet, other than handing it to Captain Marvel to take to the Wizard. Though I could see him making a case for arranging a revival or rebirth of some kind. Also some very interesting discussion of secret identities and the lack of them. I can see the case for either side, though...
 
What was the Lord Protector's plan for the Endbringer's. I would assume they would be a priority as they (or more precisely whoever is making and directing them as they are obviously not natural) would clearly be the greatest threat to Thundera. The idea is that whoever is behind the Endbringers could place one on Thundera and start periodically destroying cities on Thundera just as its counterparts do on Earth-Bet. This seems like a far greater threat then single-city gangs and supervillains somehow stumbling on the portal and deciding to go through in search of victims or resources.

Does he just plan to show up and assume that his overpowered Lantern Ring and out of context supernatural abilities will grant him an assured victory?
Based on what little he saw, he's reasonably confident that they can't fit through the portal. That's just an initial assessment and not something he's so far spent much time on. Third Earth just doesn't have the sort of concentrated habitation that makes Endbringer attacks to deadly on Bet.
This talk of other lanterns makes me want to see Suicide Squad's Angel again.
That's not going to happen for a while.
Holy shit this is still ongoing after all these years
See, I think I know what you're talking about, but it's not explicit and it could be interpreted in several ways.
I know we're pretty far from the Reach plotline at the moment, but I've been thinking about what it means that they haven't really gotten desperate yet. It's taking a while to sink in that NEMO is an actual existential threat that really could force an unconditional surrender. They're still moving to wartime footing. And when they do?

Well, the Reach has conquered a rather significant portion of space. As in, you can actually see it on a map of the universe (the universe being only a few galaxies) even if it's a wee, tiny color blot on that map. But still, that's a lot of worlds on which to discover weird, one-off artifacts and creatures. A signed favor from a God of Death to kill a single individual. A murder drone of impossibly advanced technology made by a one-off genius a million years ago they found sitting at the bottom of a well. A gate that spews forth an endless stream of Kryptonian-level monsters from... somewhere... that they managed to put a cap on. I'm just making things up, but you can image it right? No one world might be as strange as Earth, but if you take a million worlds you can probably strain an earth level of weirdness out of them collectively.

So what happens when the Reach opens up their version of the sci-fi closet, all the weird one-off weapons and hazards that they have accumulated and left in storage with "break open in case of doomsday" written on them? It's probably a good thing that Dox is so good with his power ring, because sooner or later he's going to be facing off against some awfully exotic assassination attempts.

Seem plausible?
They might have things like that, but it would be a bit like Robert Clive having a Hindu magician on standby. Culturally, it wouldn't be acceptable.
@Mr Zoat, I beseech thee in humble supplication, let us see OL's daughter Best Girl Mazikeen again!

I've been re-reading the story and I've always loved their interactions, as short and few as they were. Maybe he can even introduce her to the Missus if she's not busy with Darkstars business.
I'll try and remember.
Thank you, corrected.
Foolishly, my immediate assumption upon reading this was 'so you were able to write a whole segment in one hour?'
I wish.
Most of your villains aren't that crazy. ...In fact, I can't even remember most of Hal's villains on Earth. Hector Hammond, at most, without looking them up and that's only because he was in the movie...
How could you forget all-time greats like Yellow Peril?

And also Black Hand. He's a bit more notable.
Maybe they're allowed to trade a certain amount of metals or other things their planet finds worthwhile in order to have money.
I suspect that you're overthinking it. It isn't that hard to fake money in our economy.
Thank you, corrected.
 
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Perhaps, but considerably more ignorant.

Taylor is less than half his age, inexperienced and squishy. While her power isn't anything to scoff at, it doesn't do much that a Lantern can't do.

They would probably try to communicate that eventually.

Thing is, other than not making further requests for reenforcements, Piggot probably wouldn't want to draw attention to the fact that all of Brockton's villains were dead. Not if Lord Protector left promptly, which he did. And even if she did refer it to the Chief Director... Brockton Bay Experiment. And powerful parahumans aren't that strange. Coasta-Brown might like the Protectorate to recruit him, but she's not exactly going to prioritise it right then. Not unless Contessa tells her to.

Which she won't immediately because (as I understand it, correct me if I'm wrong here) being on Third Earth or further away from Earth than the moon puts him out of range and she can't Path him until he comes back. And even if that isn't the case, his armour now includes exotic protections created by Mumm-Rana. She might get something if she asks the right question at the right time, but it's not reliable.

Then he picks a city and does his 'you've got a week' thing. So what? Plenty of would-be heroes have done that before. And Piggot would probably have a quiet word with the local Director, but I doubt much would happen until he actually did it.

This is where Caldron actually gets together and talks about him. Getting a message to him is difficult because he's not staying still, and they don't trust him enough or know enough about him to seriously try to bring him on board. Which leaves beating him, sticking him in a cell and twisting his arm.

Fenja and Menja can become very tough, but they don't have force nullification. Even if they grow before you can kill them, they don't have regeneration by default and you can kill them by shooting them through the eye orbits. Hookwolf would absolutely require heavy ordnance, you're right there.

Oh, you're completely right there.

Ah, no, that was a theoretically version who went to Earth Bet from the start. He lived in Africa and only came to America shortly before Behemoth attacked Brockton.

I'm not even planning on writing this.

Hey, I haven't either! It would really help me... A bit, given that, I will say this again, I'm not going to write this, if you could provide references.

Yes, absolutely. To his mind, the time for careful policing was 10-15 years ago. At this point a ruthless cull is the only way to restore stability. He's not necessarily right and it's certainly not a nice thing to do, but that's how he looks at it.

While it's common knowledge in the setting that supervillains outnumber heroes, I don't think that it's because of the trauma. Similarly, I don't think that a targetted campaign against specific individuals which ends the ongoing campaign of violence that they were carrying out would increase the rate of triggers.

You don't know that.

No Entity has ever encountered a power ring, but shard-based powers rely on parallel universe connections to work. Yes, once she has a connection he'd be in a good deal of trouble. But can she make one? He looks at her, her power... Might register that? Then it tried to form a larger link. His ring could definitely detect that. Could it? Maybe. Lord Protector's lack of a database means that he has no special knowledge of the techniques involved, but subspace manipulation is a basic technique.

And while he isn't knowledgeable about the mechanics involved, Mumm-Rana is. With only one living human left to study she put substantial effort into his armour, and it does contain exotic baffles. Nothing specific -she's never encountered an Entity before either- but general 'block attack' and 'stabilise reality' charms.

But lets assume that doesn't work, and his world is filled with pain and a whispering voice telling him to come to her location. He's enlightened. The pain is extremely unpleasent but he can disassociate from it, and use his ring to control his own pain receptors. Then you've got the issue that it's trivially easy for him to get out of range... Or nuke the location she's just given him because there's no further penalty to seeing her again.

I have no disagreement with any of that.

Yes, but I suspect that's more because Grue's power won rock-paper-scissors than because of anything innate.

Nearly. Trumps are not in any literal sense made to interact with his power ring.

Take Jack Slash's mind reading ability, for example. It only works because it using the pre-rootkitted brain of other parahumans. It doesn't work on normal humans at all. So you've got most powers working on the same system... How many of their interactions are defined by that system and nothing anythinig innate?

Oh yes, if Zion woke up he'd kill Lord Protector very easily. No question at all. And then Third Earth, and everywhere else the liches ever settled. Mumm-Rana could probably create something to fight him eventually, but if that happened she's have a fraction of a second before faccing the Ancient Spirits of Goodness.

Again... True? I'm not saying that he'd win, I'm saying that what he'd try and do. If I wrote it. Which I'm not going to.

Yes. If I somehow haven't been clear until now, he doesn't understand what he's dealing with, and has access only to publically available information.

Ok. It's good that this is acknowledged, and that you know that LP Paul can't just curbstomp the setting with the strategy he's using.

I also agree that his choice makes sense from his perspective, and that if this was just a random world fallen to chaos, he could probably make a good go of it, if triggers weren't the way they were or backed up by the other Agents of the Cycle. (Although if he seriously reduced crime or conflict, Scion would definitely notice him here - the natural response of trigger events to outside influence may actually save him for a while and let him get things done.)

The main remaining note that I want to make is that Trump powers are perfectly capable of dealing with non-shard powers, just as precog powers aren't all number-crunching. Jack Slash is a unique case, because he's using old Admin access - he's really a Parahuman-only trump, and Paul should be able to curbstomp him and the nine just fine (they'd still be better coordinated, because subtle hive mind, but he definitely has the power to slaughter them anyways if Broadcast can't predict him/fuck with him).

But the entities get their powers from their own physiology… and those of the species they've eaten. Like, there was a species of crabs whose tech base came from their ability to make superfluids with their bodies, even ones that alter the way dimensional physics works. Worm powers are not hard sci-fi, and this quote from Ryuugi sums it up best:

The mathematical model/simulation thing is...not made up, per se, in the since that the Entities also have that, but people tend to boil everything they can do down to that, which it's explicitly not the case. From Scion's perspective, he describes it as clairvoyance and precognition:

The entity reaches out with clairvoyance, with precognition, and it views its destination. It communicates, covering vast expanses of space, transmitting signals across channels formed of the very foundation of this universe. These signals are broadcast only across specific realities, so that no aftereffects or lingering transmissions will contact a version of that world that hosts no life at all.

...

Study reveals worlds with dominant belief systems, peaceful worlds, worlds crowded with twelve billion individuals. Worlds with almost none.

The entity pares through these, deciding.

It investigates, and in the doing, it prepares some shards for analysis and understanding of this particular society and culture. Language, culture, patterns of behavior, patterns of society. This is something the counterpart should be emphasizing.

...

Still, the pair have settled on a set of realities.

The entity focuses on one. Enough individuals, natural conflict and confrontation. A balance of physical and emotional stressors. The environment is damaged, but not so much it would inhibit growth.

Hive. The entity communicates the decision.

Agreement. The counterpart grasps it immediately, knows which reality he means.

The focus changes. An interplay of communications, one bouncing off the other, as they designate realities. Each shard needs one, some shards need to cluster and reside across multiple realities. They draw on these worlds for power, for energy, and thus fuel the techniques they have been coded with.

Each shard, in turn, needs a target. The entity's focus expands, designating likely partners. Past mistakes have been accounted for, and the shards will connect in a covert manner. They will reside in other worlds, uninhabited worlds, and they will remain cloaked and concealed in areas this new host species is unlikely to explore.

...

With each statement, they each catalogue the realities. Similar realities are included together, for both the entities and the shards. Too many complications and confusions arise when interacting with worlds that are exceedingly similar. Not an effective form of conflict, when it is the same lessons learned over and over again. It is better to connect them into groupings, limit exposure to each set of worlds. One shard is capable of settling in a grouping of near-identical worlds, drawing energy from all of those worlds at once.

The entity looks to the future to check for danger.

Plague.

All signs point to the shards murdering their hosts.

The hosts must be protected, or this will be disastrous, counter-intuitive. The entity adjusts the innate safeguards, protections to reflect the host species and their tolerances. The bonding process will protect the host, where the host needs protection. Shards that are capable of providing flame at will cannot burn the hosts, now. Shards are reorganized, combined and clustered where necessary, to grant sufficient protection.

Infestation.

Better, but not perfect. The entity refines the process, limits certain abilities, so they will not eradicate too many at a time.

Soft. The broadcast is sent out to the counterpart, along with suggestions and tips on how to refine the shards.

Agreement, the counterpart accepts.

But the entity can still see fallout effects. There are parallels in memory storage. Not many, but there may be glimmers where the subject is capable of perceiving the information stored in the shard as the connections are formed.

For good measure, the entity breaks up one shard cluster, tunes it, then codes the effect into each and every shard. It studies the host species further, refines, attunes.

It takes time, but the entity forms a sufficient safeguard. The host species will forget any significant details.

The broken shard is cast off, joining countless others. It will bond to a host. The entity looks forward, checking.

After the target planet has revolved thirty-three times around its star, this shard will connect to a host.

A male guards his offspring, a female, with his size and bulk. A group of hostile bipeds cluster around them. They call out, making unusual loud sounds, suggesting intoxication. One of the hostile ones gestures, gripping its male parts, pulling them free of their coverings. A sexual gesture follows, waving the organ left and right, thrusting it into the empty air.

Sounds of amusement, laced with hostility.

The male and his offspring retreat as far against the nearest construction as they are able.

The shard connects, attaching to the male.

No. It is ineffective. The female is clearly more distressed.

Prey.

There is a way to maximize exposure to conflict.

The entity taps into its understanding of the bipeds and how they operate, recognizes the signs of distress, the nuances such things can have.

It views the future again, with changes made in the code.

This time, the shard settles in the male, then immediately shifts to the more distressed female.

Insinuation. The shard connects to the host's neural network.

The bond is created.

The shard opens the connection as the stress peaks, and the host doubles over in pain, bewildered, stunned. The shard then forms tendrils that contact each individual in the area. It retains traces of the entity's tampering, of the studies in psychology, awareness and memory, and is quick to adapt. It finds a manner in which it can operate, then alters itself, solidifying into a particular state. The remainder of the functions are discarded, the ones in the shard itself are rendered inert to conserve power, while the ones in the host fall away, are consumed by the shard. The host's neural network changes once more.

The female disappears from the awareness of the hostile ones that surround it.

The entity looks to the future, to see if this is sustainable, efficient.

All seems well.

A view of other bondings suggests this emphasizes younger targets, particularly those in a middle stage of development, between a lesser phase and an adult phase. Emotions are higher at that juncture, and the possibility of conflict increases further.

Everything Scion says on the matter just has him looking at the future, to the point where he uses that to double-check his homework and see how it worked out. This is why I say that the simulation stuff is exaggerated; people repeat it all the time in the fandom, but in Scion's Interlude, he legitimately just goes 'I used my precognition,' 'I looked at the future,' and 'yup, that's honest to goodness time manipulation right there.'

And honestly? Even if it was a mathematical model--

A mathematical model-based on what? He's significantly outside the galaxy cluster and making casual observations on an event thirty-three years in the future of a planet he's never even been to--if that was a simulation, that's some fucking Laplace's Demon bullshit. And this is sort of my issue with a lot of the simulation or clarketech stuff, where people try to dismiss absurd stuff in scifi, no matter how soft that scifi is, as just math or something. Well, if so, it's accurate math from over a hundred million light years away, over thirty years in the past, that he's doing on the fly, as a test case, which is by any possible point of view a way more ridiculous than it just being fucking magic. People can say it's science all they want, but let's be honest with ourselves, just like Rick Sanchez is more of a wizard than any version of Merlin, any version of the Entities where they're just using magic is by far the least ridiculous version of them, because then you can just say it's precognition and clairvoyance, like Scion does, instead of 'yeah, they looked into the void of space and made a (perfectly accurate) model of the universe in their heads to find the precise planet they were looking for, and built a model, also in their heads, of all of human history up to the present, and then built another model of every development in the next thirty fucking years to analyze the emotional state and reactions of specific individuals.'

Keep in mind that Aisha triggers after Leviathan attacked. Who existed because Eden crashed, and also Cauldron exists, and Eidolon, who made him. Scientific Model Scion squeezed that into the calculations for fun, but then forgot about it, I guess.

Meanwhile, in canon, the Warrior Entity just flies through space on a broom and wears a wizard hat.

As God intended.


Which isn't to say the Trumps would win; Paul has a lot more power than the shards are usually allowed to give. But there are plenty of trumps that could drain power ring energy, or fuck with his constructs. Grue's darkness is indeed a winner of Rock paper scissors for Legend (which is the point - low tier capes can still hurt top tier opponents, see Foil and her ilk), because his shard (like most others) is crippled - it can't just grant any power, except that that's exactly what it does if there's another power in its darkness. Either he's hacking the other capes connection, or his shard can recreate complex power structures based on the information it's absorbing and some quantum nonsense - and frankly, it's probably the second one.

(Which would make Parapaul vs 2nd trigger Gru hilarious. Unprepared parahuman steals orange light. Such a good plan. Nothing can go wrong).
 
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Keep in mind that Aisha triggers after Leviathan attacked. Who existed because Eden crashed, and also Cauldron exists, and Eidolon, who made him. Scientific Model Scion squeezed that into the calculations for fun, but then forgot about it, I guess.
There are no actual limitations on Entity precognition, simulation or otherwise, so Zion was able to accurately predict that Eden would use a damaged foresight cluster to plan things out and that through sheer chance one of the blind spots that resulted from the cluster's damage would be the part where Eden needs to start decelerating, resulting in her not starting to decelerate when she needs to and crashing and everything that results from that.

But because that wasn't what Zion was looking at, he wasn't 'consciously' aware of that part, so he wasn't able to warn Eden that she was about to do something stupid.

It's made very clear in Ward that literally all the limitations on Entity precognition are artificial, Zion could actually predict literally everything that happens if he wanted to and was willing to burn the energy required to do so, and the Simurgh very explicitly does predict everything in Worm: Everyone who was like "it's all a Ziz plot" were correct, the story of Worm is all a Ziz plot, specifically Ziz's plot to kill Zion before Zion destroys all the collected data.
 
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Based on what little he saw, he's reasonably confident that they can't fit through the portal. That's just an initial assessment and not something he's so far spent much time on. Third Earth just doesn't have the sort of concentrated habitation that makes Endbringer attacks to deadly on Bet.
Ah, so you're just saying he's wrong about everything.


It's made very clear in Ward that literally all the limitations on Entity precognition are artificial, Zion could actually predict literally everything that happens if he wanted to and was willing to burn the energy required to do so, and the Simurgh very explicitly does predict everything in Worm: Everyone who was like "it's all a Ziz plot" were correct, the story of Worm is all a Ziz plot, specifically Ziz's plot to kill Zion before Zion destroys all the collected data.
The weakness of predictive modeling is that it can't predict what it doesn't know.

Have a human with a power ring show up and blast Scion and he will be surprised, once. Then various shards will record that "power ring can blast" and that information will be added to the predictive model which will change to include "guy with power ring who can blast". From there each new thing "guy with power ring" does will be recorded, and even if the shards don't understand the mechanism of how the power ring is doing what it does, those new things it can do will be added into the predictive model expanding it's accuracy.

An Orange Lantern could theoretically defeat an Entity, but it would require not showing the capability to consume all forms of energy until the moment of direct confrontation.
 
I'll try and remember.
Come to think of it, it's a crying shame that the New Year's plan with her fell through because of the whole Anti-Life business. Would've been a riot having her at the party. Oh El really is a neglectful father though, going from wanting to connect with her to not talking to her for months (unless he's retroactively been doing it offscreen).
 

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