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With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

Discussion in 'Creative Writing' started by Mr Zoat, Jan 27, 2019.

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  1. Radiant Knight

    Radiant Knight Phoenix Fire

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    No, our Paul just mentioned knowing about her in Teen Titans, so it's more likely the memory of the setting he's in getting deleted. Our Paul doesn't have cartoon memories of Earth 16, this Paul doesn't remember Teen Titans, etc.
     
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  2. Aeess

    Aeess I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    He probably killed her considering his own occupation, now that I think about it Anit Green Paul probably did as well.
     
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  3. Agent Orange

    Agent Orange Versed in the lewd.

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    Last Anti Green chapter has him Krona snatched alongside local version of Jade so probably not?
     
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  4. Chojin Patriarch

    Chojin Patriarch Veteran Lurker, Rookie Proofreader

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    Still, you are adapting quite quickly to the mindset needed... Joy of being a power ring specialisation build.

    You know, I'm sure between the Jor-El simulacrum and the Dru-Zod one, they should be able to fix that...

    Thank you, Internet time-clock. Interesting that he was able to use affection for Overgirl to access it.

    And she grabs the wrong end of the stick in three... Two...

    Yup. She's just assumed he's hot for her, because Violet Ring... But there's more than one form of love...

    Imagine hearing that snark in your grandmother's voice...

    Time for your true superpower: Common Sense!

    I hope she likes the taste of her boot leather...

    Yes. She is. It's your own fault. How can someone so sensible be so oblivious?

    Let's see: Sibling love, close friendship (such as 'Nakama')... There's also 'Love for fellow men' though that comes dangerously close to straight Compassion...

    "Well, I'm not 'some people'."

    Blunt, but necessary. I hope she can respect that...

    It could be worse, OL, it could be worse.

    Yeah, she's gonna need some girl talk to sort that out...

    I do hope they can be scanned, if only to avoid the messier outcome...

    A sensible practice. Don't want to get hit by flying debris, such as some invulnerable punk getting tossed.

    Yeah, I doubt Raul has had the time or connections to do the uplift thing. Probably as a side-effect of the Rage.

    Oh, don't worry, they sorted that out themselves. Bonding over the flayed skull of an interplanetary tyrant, if I remember it right?

    "When did the Guardians start putting breasts on their robot soldiers?"

    Ah, just the thing to work out some annoyance at her ally's obliviousness.

    Too slow. These Manhunters may be tough, but they're not up to resisting Kryptonians one-on-one.

    ...Okay. Hell of a shift from Doomguy-tier 'Rip and tear! Huge Guts!' to calm consideration for property damage. Wow.

    See, getting the hang of it! Your only real problem now will be charging it...

    So, just below the breasts. Yoink! and a little Giggity.

    Ah, your objective. Business face on, OL.

    Ah, the blasé attitude of someone who's met other versions of himself before.

    Well, your dinner date got busted up. The only thing that can save the evening now is ultra-violence!

    I'm picturing OL's version being all 'yes, yes, nothing special' while Raul is pleasantly interested.

    Yup, it's a Crisis. Of course some manner of tuning fork is involved. Because DC and vibrational frequencies.

    At least you can hope the universe doesn't get retconned into something worse off. Like 'Teen Titans Go!'...

    Now, did he say it 'nuh-goo-yen', 'Nuh-win' or 'Hwin'? Because I doubt Raul has had to learn the difference.:p

    A nice, calm meeting, between Lanterns of the widest end of the Spectrum (technically.) Now, on to collecting the local Jade (if she's still alive.) Then what, I wonder? Comparing notes and realising the whole 'missing local meta-knowledge' thing?
     
  5. DbDRAKE

    DbDRAKE Possibly some sort of Actual Dragon?

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    That's a pretty off hand way of saying "the core of your personality and the way your interact with the world sickens me to the point I could never be with you", my dude.

    Nice/10
     
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  6. Aeess

    Aeess I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    Ah, I think I missed that one.
     
  7. Belenus

    Belenus I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    I think at this point it's more of an accretion disk than a harem.
     
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  8. WereDragon

    WereDragon Bookwyrm

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    You sir have been in comicbook land too long.

    I was given to understand that the Red Ring didn’t come with youth treatment. Isn’t Raul viably older than Paul?
     
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  9. TheEyes

    TheEyes Experienced.

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    He's taking the opportunity to be British at somebody who won't misunderstand him.
     
  10. Handlewithcare

    Handlewithcare I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    Oh I'm looking so forward to Paul talking with himself again.

    ...is not something you write every day.
     
  11. Chaoswind

    Chaoswind Lord of nonsense

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    He is actually the third one, unless Paul is lying.
     
  12. Darko

    Darko Experienced.

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    Hey Zoat I was rereading some of the alternate chapters on SV and after the Bereave part 7 chapter you left a little tidbit that in year 6 two people from Earth are going to be recruited for the Indigo Tribe.

    One a compassionate magic user and another more traditional recruit who doesn't even remember his name because of the brainwashing.

    You also said that one of them, or maybe both, will be from Hellblazer.

    I was wondering which of the two will be from Hellblazer?
     
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  13. Agumentic

    Agumentic Know what you're doing yet?

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    Pretty sure Paul doesn't know that Time Trapper is actually another version of him.
     
  14. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    I'm sure that you were.
     
  15. IndigoAbyss

    IndigoAbyss Isaac of the Abyss

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    It would be hilarious If Red Lantern Paul killed the Jade of earth 32 and is keeping her skull in his trophy room.
     
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  16. TheMidnightRook

    TheMidnightRook I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    He doesn't.

     
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  17. Darko

    Darko Experienced.

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    If that whole Brotherhood of Evil thing happened and he was there he may just have the skulls, or brain cases, of the leaders in his trophy room, not their individual agents.

    Also Zoat, please answer my question of which of the two recruits, or abductee, is from Hellblazer.
     
  18. DrThoth

    DrThoth Not too sore, are you?

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    We actually saw him meet and fight Cheshire just before they were both taken by Krona, and though I don't remember, I'm fairly sure they were both alive.
     
  19. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    It's really not that hard to work out. What characters in Hellblazer are characterised by their great compassion or its total absence?
     
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  20. Darko

    Darko Experienced.

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    For the first one I'm not sure.

    For the second one... where to start.
     
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  21. Rhomanion1

    Rhomanion1 Know what you're doing yet?

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    Now I'm wondering if Raul is going to recognize Overgirl when she introduces herself, then ask "wait, so you're nazi Supergirl?", and we start that whole nazi/national socialist dance all over again.
     
  22. Aeess

    Aeess I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    What eye colour does paragon have at the moment, Pink or Orange?
     
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  23. Awkward

    Awkward Know what you're doing yet?

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    At a guess? Both, since he's orane-lightened and using a violet ring
     
  24. LazySloth13

    LazySloth13 I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    As the Paragon's using a violet ring he obviously has violet iris, orange irises would be the result of him directly tapping into the orange light of avarice which he isn't, and green would mean his natural eye color.

    And as far as Overgirl's presence goes "strange times make for strange bedfellows" and while most Pauls or Jades may take issue with working with a nazi, as most people would, they have bigger issues to deal with.

    Plus Indigo-Paul, of The Boys, work under Voight America who's 'heroes' have done some pretty heinous shit in the name of profit; murder/manslaughter, various acts of sexual assault, experimentation of dangerous chemicals which lead to unsuspecting civilians being exposed and mutated, and recruit an actual nazi.
     
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  25. Aeess

    Aeess I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    His soul is made of orange light and since he received it he had permanently orange eyes even when he wasn't wearing his ring.
     
  26. kinlyki

    kinlyki Making the rounds.

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    Didn't Paul live out a few moments of Red!Paul's life cuz of Ambush Bug?
     
  27. Agent Orange

    Agent Orange Versed in the lewd.

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    Yes. He's heterochromatic obviously. His left eye is orange and his right violet. His hair... now that's a different story entirely...
     
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  28. Karnven

    Karnven Know what you're doing yet?

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    So when is the pony shit ending? I've checked out since the start of march and its still going?
     
  29. Lazurman

    Lazurman Semper Horny

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    Nope, it seems to be over.

    For now, anyway.
     
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  30. Aeess

    Aeess I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    It ended a couple of days ago, currently were int the crisis of infinite Pauls
     
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