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Yet Another Dungeon (A Dual Danmachi FI)

Discussion in 'Creative Writing' started by Titanacoracy101, Oct 11, 2019.

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    Titanacoracy101

    Titanacoracy101 Making the rounds.

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    i apologize everyone but due to a rather annoying computer glitch all of my notes for the various stories I have been working on, including a 300k independent novel that’s been in the works for the better part of a decade, have been erased. As such the current iteration of this story is currently dead as I have the memory of a squirrel and am currently exhausted from the sheer fury I just came down from.

    Potentially this story will return but if it does then there will be some slight deviations due to differences between notes drafts.

    (Note: This did not only affect my QQ but also my stories of Fanfic and Space as well)

    I apologize to the people that were enjoying this doc but at the moment I’m going to take some time to relax and potentially salvage whatever I can.


     
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  2. Ryven Razgriz

    Ryven Razgriz Know what you're doing yet?

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    The Dragonborn and the Courier. Pretty interesting, watched and also looking forward to the Deities and Dungon's Dragons react to knowing what the Dragonborn actually is and the Warlord that is the Courier.
     
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  3. Bigreader

    Bigreader Know what you're doing yet?

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    You know without all the weird technology that exists in Fallout to support him once he uses what stuff he has The Courier while a tough hombre is just a bog standard human. At least compared to something like the Dragonborn.
     
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  4. OrionScimatarii

    OrionScimatarii (Confirmed Butter-Bot)

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    Brilliant, keep up the great work.
     
  5. ThedudeManBro

    ThedudeManBro Striving to go by words of The Dude De Ching

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    Nice FIC. Love the backstory of the preparations For writing the chars.
    FYI, people with the dark theme on cant read shit. I only see a pitch black post.

    Still, damn good story so far.
     
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  6. ThedudeManBro

    ThedudeManBro Striving to go by words of The Dude De Ching

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    Kay. I always had the theme on since i made the account, so i'm not have 100% sure but, did you write the chapter somewhere else and then copy pasted the words? I know that i had the same problem before. Honestly, i just went to edit post, highlighted the text, pressed the A button with a line below on the editor and chose the box with an X on it for no custom colour. After that, it was aces.
     
  7. stads

    stads Not too sore, are you?

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    keep up the good work love your story
    yay for hestia will be fun to see your mc walking about in power armor
     
  8. ThedudeManBro

    ThedudeManBro Striving to go by words of The Dude De Ching

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    Nope. Still black on black. Weird.

    Still, it looks like i'm the only one complaining so far, so don't stress out over it...
     
  9. stads

    stads Not too sore, are you?

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    nice chapter thx for writing it
    yay for magic decorating wonder if he got the spell to turn iron into gold ^^
    could also be used to help that alchemist thats in debt
    do hope nathan will get something to shine perhaps tech of some sorts seems he is being outclassed by otto
     
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  10. Bigreader

    Bigreader Know what you're doing yet?

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    So not only did they get the memories and abilities are they again characters but apparently those lives are real and those people are apparently missing from those versions of those worlds. That's a little bit more concerning I wonder if they can learn to world hope with the help of the Daedra?
     
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  11. disagreement

    disagreement Not too sore, are you?

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    It was ok, then you guys joined hestia familia, so I am out.
     
  12. stads

    stads Not too sore, are you?

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    nice chapter thx for writing it
    yay for all the paperwork for nathan :D
    think otto learned his lesson with trowing that at his friend :D
    and as for the people in elder scrolls world going to the dungon think this video should cover the guilds feelings on it
     
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  13. Bigreader

    Bigreader Know what you're doing yet?

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    You know I did think of that that this would be a great way to turn the world of danmachi into a trading Hub between the worlds of Tamriel and the world of Fallout I mean each has something unique that the world of danmachi whatever its actual mortal world name is doesn't have the easly enchanted objects and learn spells of Tamriel as well as the unique Technologies and Sciences of the Fallout Earth.



    assuming they can never form a connection, I mean I would figure that the Wizards could probably open a portal and maybe set something up. I mean even if fall out is kind of a craphole it's still has a lot of weird and interesting technology that would be useful if it could be mass-produced or they got to set up factories and get people to run them.

    So one good thing that could come from The Fallout universe is alternate sources of power since anything that's not primitive physical or mechanical physical power is produced by Magic Stones which apparently only come from the dungeon.
    They probably wouldn't want to use the soul stones for Enchanted objects for thier magic machines and that involves sacrificing someone soul.


    The Technologies from Fallout could reproduce some of their magic Tech with an alternative power source like nuclear power.
     
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  14. stads

    stads Not too sore, are you?

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    nice chapter thx for writing it
    yay for nathen showing off abit do wonder how he is going to get ammo for all the fun toy's he has
     
  15. Bigreader

    Bigreader Know what you're doing yet?

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    Riviera didn't listen very well when Otto said that they use two different systems of magic did she? I also wonder what's going to happen when that portal is finally open between in Tamriel and danmachi world because at that point you're going to have a whole bunch of daedra gods go a whole new world to play with and then you're going to have the gods of done not you who might be curious go through the portal and think that's my promise to see my Powers away apply to this world and then I figure you'll have a bunch of new Godlike beings playing other Skyrim like games in both danmachi and in Tamriel loopholes they're fun.
     
  16. sdarian

    sdarian Know what you're doing yet?

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    It'd be nice if you fixed the text color on all the chapters, not just the last couple.
     
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  17. Mindsieve

    Mindsieve Know what you're doing yet?

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    I'm frankly surprised Nathan hasn't pulled out the teleporter gun and used that to visit Big Empty. It would also be a convenient way to introduce Fallout tech to the new world.
     
  18. stads

    stads Not too sore, are you?

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    nice chapter thx for writing it
    yay for saving lilli nathan could do with some female friends
     
  19. Thorfaxdragonkin

    Thorfaxdragonkin Getting some practice in, huh?

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    Looks very good! Watched
     
  20. stads

    stads Not too sore, are you?

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    nice chapter thx for writing it
    yay for the liberation operation of lili
    will be fun to see her reaction to where her liberators came from
     
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  21. stads

    stads Not too sore, are you?

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    thx for the chapter
    poor lilli having to compete with such people
    am thinking some famalia are going to have a bad time getting ether nathan or otto to join then war never changes after all
     
  22. Bigreader

    Bigreader Know what you're doing yet?

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    You know at this point Nathan might as well not exist for all that he's contributing to the Familia
    I mean to put it simply Otto is like a god emperor of man and and Nathan is a gun otaku.
     
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  23. stads

    stads Not too sore, are you?

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    nice chapter thx for writing it
    nice to see nathen clean out some casino's that should help with the experimental buget
    always nice to see a goddess as a body pillow
     
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  24. Bigreader

    Bigreader Know what you're doing yet?

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    You know if they could ever get the transit portal open and get one open to the Wasteland they would make a lot of money just selling basic meat and vegetables to the wastelanders since food without radiation or toxins of some kind is pretty rare there.
     
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  25. Awkward

    Awkward Getting sticky.

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    Watched - This is increasingly interesting. Keep up the good work!
     
  26. GymratJomar

    GymratJomar Getting some practice in, huh?

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    This deserves more praise.
     
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  27. Ryven Razgriz

    Ryven Razgriz Know what you're doing yet?

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    Ruin that bitch's ass. Thoroughly.
     
  28. EntropyEnginear

    EntropyEnginear Versed in the lewd.

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    You know I do quite wish that Nathan would get to show off his own tinkering skills. There’s quite a few things in fall out lore that’s interesting to see and use. Especially when enchanted later on.
     
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  29. Zerothewarhound

    Zerothewarhound Getting sticky.

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    I wonder what would happen if otto went full out max enchantments on a fatboy with a mirv mod on it would do and what would be cause for using it
     
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  30. EntropyEnginear

    EntropyEnginear Versed in the lewd.

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    Like I would love it if Nathan was still being all bummed out about not having as useful stuff to hand out. Only for him to do some tinkering and making something that’s blatantly OP. Wasn’t there for example a couple of times you could come across a device that blatantly just made energy ex Nihlo or create large scale effects at the flick of a switch? Then there’s the robots. Dwemor styles stuff with Fall out tech strapped to it with the right programming could be cool.
     
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