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With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

Discussion in 'Creative Writing' started by Mr Zoat, Jan 27, 2019.

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  1. Sojiko

    Sojiko Getting sticky.

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    That should be "failures".

    That should definitely be "compliment"
     
  2. inglorius

    inglorius Getting sticky.

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    Or you can right-click "Like" button, copy its link and delete "like" from the end. That link works as well.
     
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  3. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    Thank you, corrected.

    You know, it's nice to know that even in my dotage I'll have these corrections to keep my mind alert.
    ...

    Anyone know why the permalink tool doesn't just show that? That's not even complicated.
     
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  4. Pinklestia

    Pinklestia Well worn.

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    Unfortunately Greed Enlightenment doesn't make you good at questioning them about stuff they would care about.

    Then again at least Oh El has not told Mad Science Lex Luthor to make his own power ring.
     
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  5. Rebu

    Rebu hey, little Anna, you're the one

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    I bet his jacket says "FEAR PLAY".
     
  6. Stsword

    Stsword Versed in the lewd.

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    Oh okay, here I was thinking that the problem was something else.

    Kingdom Come Superman was effectively immune to kryptonite, apparently his solar reserve had just gotten large enough that kryptonite doesn't make a difference anymore. Kind of like trying to stop a forest fire with a bucket of water, I suppose.

    I thought that Demon Superman was so full of demon mojo that the same phenomenon was happening there.
     
  7. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    Are you sure that's Kingdom Come Superman? I might well be misremembering, but I don't remember kryptonite featuring in that story.

    Your conclusion was more or less correct. A simple magic shield prevents the radiation touching anything it could harm.
     
  8. Stsword

    Stsword Versed in the lewd.

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    Yes, Lex mentioned in story that Superman evolved past his kryptonite weakness and someone used kryptonite gas only for Superman to stand around unaffected.

    So someone hadn't gotten the memo. Sadly Supes is too dignified to do the Looney Tunes Bugs Bunny faking his death skit. :)
     
  9. Vaermina

    Vaermina Well worn.

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    Or this is another case like with Supergirl where only his specific universe's Kryptonite effects him.
     
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  10. Patrick Holt

    Patrick Holt Getting sticky.

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    Ya, about that.

    Until Supergirl is able to explain where she is getting this meta knowledge I am going to take everything she tells us with a grain of salt so large she can't lift it

    I wouldn't be surprised to learn she is Ambush Bug in a skirt or some other super with forth wall power, (quick look at DC Database Miss America could fit if she is reading the future chapters in Mr Zoat's computer.)
     
  11. Stsword

    Stsword Versed in the lewd.

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    Yes she seems suspicious.

    On the other hand maybe she has 4D vision.
     
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  12. Coda

    Coda Versed in the lewd.

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    Hordes
     
  13. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    Thank you, corrected.
    Good plan.
    [​IMG]
     
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  14. Ngamer11

    Ngamer11 Experienced.

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    Found an old error.
    That should say 'it'.
     
  15. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    Thank you, corrected.
     
  16. nick012000

    nick012000 Gone for Good

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    Honestly, I find both Mr. Terrifics sort of hilarious, in an unintentionally hypocritical way. "Oh, I'm a super-intelligent prodigy at everything! I've become super-wealthy because of the immense privilege I possess! What should my slogan as a superhero be? I know! 'Fair play'!"

    Let's not even discuss how the anti-racist subtext of the second one's slogan gets distorted by the hypocrisy of it.
     
  17. Threadmarks: Krummkreuz (part 20)
    Mr Zoat

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    16th September 2012
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    Pain!

    "Con-tact."

    Hellfire burns around my armour and scorches my body. And inside, I can feel it burn at my metaphysique, my constructs and environmental shield shimmering as it's attacked directly. And I realise that Michael Holt is a lot more intelligent than any demon.

    "Fuel for Him."

    Feed Me.

    Flames burning in the void shimmer orange as I try and ingest whatever he's using to power this.

    "Do you-"

    The pain lessens and my body knits itself back together.

    "-need help?"

    "Not yet, thank-"

    I lash out at the T-Spheres as they form a sphere around me, but they shimmer out of phase with reality before I can hit them. Terrific himself floats back slowly, none of the insane passion every other corrupted human has had visible on his mask-covered face.

    "-you. Engaging Mister Terrific."

    Back on Earth 16, Michael Holt is still building his company and hasn't shown any interest in superheroing. I hope that the Sheeda invasion hasn't butterflied that.

    I form a railgun as Terrific continues to watch me impassively, not reacting as I fire mage slayer and phasic rounds at him. Not even a blur as they pass through the space his image occupies.

    And another wave of fire! The T-Spheres-! A three dimensional pentagram! That's how it's hitting me despite my tattoos!

    I fly down, moving a hundred metres closer to the distant Earth. Terrific keeps pace without making any apparent movement, but the T-Spheres lag behind and lose formation as they accelerate after me. Alright, try phasic and mage slayer rounds at a few of those… Negative impact. Right, fine, but they're interacting with the physical universe somehow or they wouldn't be able to move. Not magnetism, not a self-generated force field otherwise I'd be able to detect the plasma surrounding them.

    So gravity. Which means that if I generate an impeller construct and twist-.

    The T-Spheres jerk, shifting their acceleration from me and towards a central point in their formation. For a second, at which point they go ballistic-

    Shoot them again!

    -with their gravity drives deactivated so that I can no longer interact with them by manipulating their motive system, but.. that doesn't mean that the magic keeping them out of normal space stops working. Can I..? Combine phasing and magic-draining into a single round? Not without a trip to Sephtian.

    "Interesting."

    Nth metal would probably work, but I'm all out. I could in theory make more, but-.

    T-Spheres swirl, forming-move!

    I dart aside as a portal opens between the T-Spheres, some sort of shimmering… Vapour? Gas? Drifts out. I spot the edge of the patch touch one of my gas traps and dissolve it, the gas being frozen by the cold field as the force field breaches before being so totally unmade that I can't even detect radiation that might be given off by a conventional disintegration effect.

    Need to get Terrific himself.

    I try staring into his soul, but he's not actually here. There's nothing to see… But… I'm the focus of his thoughts and desires at the moment. I should be able to-.

    Agh!

    Stabbed! Smaller portals have opened beneath me, dull grey needles jutting out and penetrating my legs! But those-. Portals!

    Mine.

    The wavering area around the edge of the portals turns orange, the T-Spheres trying to back away but being… Stuck, by their own innate magics. The spines retract as I choke the flow of magic… Ow, ow, definitely demon magic but it's working for me.

    The other T-Spheres float closer, one flying by its fellows to try and work out what's wrong with them. Move the portal and stab!

    Dead T-Sphere!

    It fades fully into the material universe and I get a good look at its internals. Spell circuitry of a sort that's… I recognise some things, but demon magic isn't studied much in Atlantis and I've never asked Mammon to share more but if I understand the general design correctly-.

    Orange tendrils grab components and move them around, plugging certain demonic runes into others and dispensing with irrelevant parts-.

    Hah!

    Assimilate that mess so I can sort-of control it, press there and railgun!

    Two more T-Spheres are torn apart, and the rest I can see disappear in a puff of blue flame. The two on the portal appear to be stuck there, which I'll accept.

    "Troublesome."

    I thrust the portal in his direction, and… Connect my bodged anti-T-Sphere to my metaphysique directly. Now extend my tendrils along the spines and

    tell

    them what I want from them.

    Mr. Terrific doesn't move as they approach, settling for watching the stolen portal. Why-? Countermeasures. He's probably given a good deal of thought to the question of how to kill a Green Lantern, but he didn't know that there were other colours, much less the differences in their abilities. Green Lanterns can't do this.

    The spines leap at his image, vanishing as they hit it. I make a point of folding my arms across my chest and repairing my armour. Mr. Terrific waves at something out of shot -probably preparing some sort of Super T-Sphere or something- then falls to the ground as the spines explode from his legs and arms.

    His image vanishes, and I shoot both of the remaining T-Spheres maintaining my stolen portal. Helpful as it might be I don't know enough about that demon or the portals to want to risk it.

    "Mister Terrific has fallen back injured." I look back towards Metropolis. "Please up-?"

    There's a giant Superman shaped blur in the centre of Metropolis smashing apart buildings as if they were of no consideration. Three other blurs dash around it, tiny red lines briefly connecting them to the larger blur. They're all staying close to the ground, which if I had to guess is because Demon Superman doesn't want to risk getting pushed to the outskirts of the thaumosphere.

    "The Kryptonians have engaged. Baron-" Diana only hesitates for an instant. "-Gestapo has fallen back safely and Baroness Blitzkrieg is preparing for the next stage. Are you injured?"

    "Fine fettle and raring to go. What do you need?"

    "Stand by to evacuate our allies if they are injured. Crusader is almost ready-."

    There's a blast wave as Demon Superman backhands Overman, sending him flying through half the city and then heat visioning-.

    Transition!
     
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  18. Ngamer11

    Ngamer11 Experienced.

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    That should say 'Please'.
     
  19. Bud-E

    Bud-E Stand up so I can push you down!

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    What are T-Spheres supposed to do? Are they just generic super-tech or do they have a specific purpose?
     
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  20. Ngamer11

    Ngamer11 Experienced.

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    They're Mister Terrific's all purpose equipment, from bombs to hologram emitters to computer interfaces to fast moving projectiles.
     
  21. Darko

    Darko Connoisseur.

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    Not surprising, seeing as he's usually depicted as one of the smartest characters.

    'of a sort'

    They've served him as everything from communication devices to weapons.
     
  22. moralrelativity

    moralrelativity Recovering pendant.

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    the -> they
     
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  23. Dakkan Sall

    Dakkan Sall Random Encounter

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    Would this be "as the spines" instead?

    And things are moving quite fast now. Have to wonder what the next stumbling block to the assault will be (other than Demon Superman himself, of course).
     
  24. Grek

    Grek (she/her)

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    I'm trying to puzzle out what a "three dimensional pentagram" would look like, and the closest I've got is this thing:

    [​IMG]
     
  25. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    Thank you, corrected.
     
  26. Chojin Patriarch

    Chojin Patriarch Veteran Lurker

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    Yes, that's his true superpower. Third smartest man on Earth with at least 14 PH.Ds (Presumably Lex Luthor is above him.) Everything else? That's pure human achievement, including Olympic medalist-tier fitness, sheer toughness and raw determination that I'm amazed has never earned him a green ring.

    Just be glad Lex Luthor-Hell died in the first minutes of this whole thing. Can you imagine him all cultist-ed up and throwing his brand of crazy science at you?

    Careful, OL. You know demonic energies don't agree with you. Like the world's worst case of lactose intolerance. Only with more Greed.

    If I understand his position, he's in orbit right now. Not sure any of the Nazis cloud help, while the Wonder Women and Kryptonians are needed to fight Demon-Superman.

    The joy of being able to fight remotely, huh? All the danger to the enemy, at no risk to you. And it's probably messing with the compulsions of the control spell.

    Given two of the things that drove him into heroism were the deaths of his mentally handicapped brother (by suicide) and his wife and unborn child (in a car accident,) if either of them died in the invasion...

    So he can basically throw anything he casts at the area inside the pattern, and know it'll hit, since he can see you.

    Amazing little things. Apparently their concept was so good, both the supervillain Roulette and Batman stole the design. Michael was okay with the latter, but a bit salty about the former.

    Oooh, effective! Keep that up!

    The joy of overspecialising your inventory.

    Last time, you nearly created a singularity inside Mount Justice, and needed the full bonding of the ophidian... Let's not go fooling around with it again?

    Oh, that's nasty. Seriously, the super-genius heroes can be really scary when they go bad...

    Like trying to look a drone operator in the eye: Not all that effective.

    Meh, legs are unnecessary. But now you have some T-spheres who are in physical contact with you!

    Ooh, that's gonna be fun squeezing that out later. But now you have some Tang-Spheres. :p

    Progress!

    Good thing you have a little knowledge of what you're doing... Could be bad if you inadvertently create a demonic magical nuke...

    Ah, enemy-controlling skills. Always a bag of fun.

    Gee, yah think, Mikey? :p That's what happens when you try to play Xanatos Speed-chess with an expert.

    Firewall? What firewall? Counter-intrusion software? Pales in the face of a Power Ring...

    :eek: And decisively out of the fight. ...Ow.

    Now, back to the real boss fight...

    If the next stage involves tying him up, I hope the Lasso can expand as much as it needs to...

    If there's one thing he's good at, it's moving fast. :D Just ask Jade... No, wait, bad example.

    Whatever he's frying, it's evidently not something OL wants fried...

    I have the feeling this fight could turn bad any second. Or, if their plan works, it'll be over in minutes. Either way, things will soon be done and over with. Hopefully by super-punching Rakkar right out of Demon-Superman... And then comes the next problem: How to get everyone back to their respective worlds of origin. The Nazi's method was sloppy at best, you can't rely on random portals, and OL never did find out how Truggs was crossing the dimensional barriers, did he?


    Given the context, perhaps 'attacked'?
    I lash out at the T-Spheres...
    He's probably given a good deal of thought to the question...
    There's a giant Superman shaped blur...
     
  27. Mr Zoat

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    Thank you, corrected.
     
  28. Sordid Snake

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    The Smurfs probably has him on the "Do Not Recruit" list: The T-spheres are kind of like a first attempt at a semi-autonomous all-purpose tool/weapon, so they wouldn't like him getting a good look at the most advanced all-purpose tool/weapon in the universe.
     
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  29. Doccer

    Doccer I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    Even if it has you could always bring home some of those T-Spheres to gift him. Get him the chance to bring about the same level of technological wonder for 16?
    Oh come now! You know perfectly well the only reason he's called Flash is to make flash puns!
     
  30. nick012000

    nick012000 Gone for Good

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    It looks like these T-Spheres are using demonic magitech, so giving them to people to reverse-engineer seems like a rather poor idea. That's how you wind up with demons possessing computers and running amok on the Internet or something.
     
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