On a Pale Horse (Umamusume/Youjo Senki)

[bucketbot129]

If I'm reading correctly Wrandm is an absolute bastard by having Shiro's first win happen off screen.

 

[Winged One]

If I'm reading correctly Wrandm is an absolute bastard by having Shiro's first win happen off screen.

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I thought her maiden race was onscreen?

 

[Lyrista]

Yep, Shirogane's debut race was a victory for her.

As for her constant second places, Long distance races are going to start showing up on the roster soon, these are probably where most of Shirogane's wins will come from.

 

[bucketbot129]

I thought her maiden race was onscreen?

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I'm joking, I actually like that it's written like this. Shiro is the permanent 2nd placer offhandedly mentioning she actually won some is hilarious

 

[Impstar]

Honestly the most frustrating the Golden Generation, and throwing Shiro into that mix only makes it so much worse. Despite everyone calling her the Silver Collector, I seriously want her to pull out a massive upset and get that sextuple crown, completely shattering the status quo of history.

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While there is no chance she'll win more than one or two of the triple races, I do agree it's a shame there are so many strong racers. The weaker members of the golden generation could have dominated if they weren't racing against their peers.

 

[Winged One]

While there is no chance she'll win more than one or two of the triple races, I do agree it's a shame there are so many strong racers. The weaker members of the golden generation could have dominated if they weren't racing against their peers.

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I don't. Isn't competition half the point of sports?

 

[Impstar]

I don't. Isn't competition half the point of sports?

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I mean... from an entertainment standpoint you are correct. But if you, say, go up to Meisho Doto and say "damn girl, you would have been an absurdly dominant horse by any era's standards if T.M. Opera wasn't around," the only response you can really say it "well gee, thanks I guess." Because 2nd place is just 1st place loser in the horse racing world. You don't get famous for beating everyone but one other horse over and over again (except in a sort of affectionate way).

It's not a shame for us, the viewers, or any of the people in story watching the races that there are so many dominant racers. But it's a shame for Seiun that with Grass and El Condo seemingly going to participate in the classic triple crown that she's not going to win much of note (I would be shocked if she replicated either of her IRL wins if they are participating), and it's a shame for Shiro that a dominant career is just going to be second to her teammates in every distance lower than long (I'm not saying it's impossible for her to win at shorter distances... but she's just a weaker racer than they are at those distances).

 

[WrandmWaffles]

Observation as opposed to accusation, eh? She's aware of it at least.

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At this point Shirogane has accepted that she's weird in comparison to most umamusume.

Also took me a moment to realize Fuji Kiseki and her brother have different moms, which is an interesting dynamic. It's also implied that racing families are a bit wacky with relationships? I'm legit interested to see how you might try to work the horse bloodlines into the story.

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I'll say that I coughed on my drink when I read the name. Having her half-brother be called Fuji Kisuke is genius. Also them being half-siblings makes sense since they have different mothers, which in real life is... the definition, but in the Umaverse, umas only get counted as full siblings if they share a mother.

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Well, if Sunday Silence was also an umamusume...how exactly would she have had so many kids?

Honestly Umamusume is a setting where it's better treated as racehorse Valhalla than a really serious coherent setting, because then you get questions like this that beg for answers.

(Also Fuji's brother is names Saito Kisuke).

It's curious that the first people to mention it with such astonishment are sports commentators rather than any of the other Uma Musume—though I suppose the ones close to her don't mention it simply because they're used to her eccentricities.

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There was some confusion over why she was running so much in an earlier chapter, but it starts to make sense once they learn that Shiro can run for a long time.

The contrast in mid-race thought remains hilarious. Shirogane thinking damn, this is gonna be a bitch to clean while running through the mud at the same time Condor is having all this shonen anime if I can just push a little harder!

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Shiro is still approaching racing like you would approach a job you are positively inclined to rather than a passion like it is for most racers.

So, the odds that Shirogane would be a hidden boss like Almond Eye.

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Given how often Shirogane would show up in other umas' careers, she'd probably become something like the Majima meme or a Wit check.

Looks to me that Steady's trainer, after studying and watching film of Shiro's races (of which there is an abnormally large amount for a Classic year runner) decided to incorporate the same maneuvers into her race strategy. Steady's already familiar with Shiro's preferred style, but unless it happened off-screen, they haven't raced since before Shiro started going to Tracen, right?

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A lot of it is because they trained together when they were younger, and Steady also ran deliveries for Suzukiya over summer break in some cases, so both of them are a lot more comfortable with narrow clearance than they typical racer. Steady is also a relatively difficult front runner to pass at the end, because she's good a managing her stamina to keep up a steady pace through the final stretch instead of gassing out like how front runners usually lose. She can't block others as effectively as Shiro can though.

Shiro is even smaller than her, perhaps the smallest in her year, but we all know that she's not lacking for strength. It'll be more than a little weird for an uma who's never raced her to think that they can just force a small front runner aside, only to find that the tiniest uma is rocking the world's most hidden sleeper build.

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Yeah, Shiro is 145cm so shorter than all of them, even Phalaenopsis, though the tallest is El Condor Pasa at 163cm, so they're not super tall as umas go.

Still, it had to happen this way. The Silver Eagle's moniker must gain more infamy, it is written

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I've noticed that even the race commentators regard Shiro as the eternal silver medalist.

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Well, she has 10 second place finishes. That's already a huge collection of silvers.

If he's mostly been interacting with the level headed Shiro, and sweetie pies Taiki Shuttle and Urara it's not so surprising that the idea isn't as objectionable anymore.

Though, he should perhaps be wary of the sample size here.

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He's still well aware that most umas are pretty excitable, but he now realizes that there are umas out there that are relatively calm and analytical. If he does end up becoming a trainer, I think the trainee he'd have the most success with is probably Symboli Kris S. He'd be less intimidated by Kris' height and straightforward behavior.

On the outside again? Unfortunate track conditions again? Unreasonably tough lineup again? Shiro really can't catch a break... like ever huh?

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Shirogane is not exactly the league's favorite runner at the moment.

Had Shirogane been a horse IRL, every racing family with particularly fragile legs (you know who you are) would be scrambling and on their knees to get her blood into their families.

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Yeah, there'd likely be a bidding war to foal her, and there would also be a lot of people confused on why the owners aren't retiring her to broodmare duties when they could be making so much more money that way.

Edit: It's funny how Shiro also hits the checkboxes for the more eccentric ones like Stay Gold who likes petite, creepy umas. Shirogane is more like a small Point Flag who isn't yandere.

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Does she? I thought Stay Gold irl like Oriental Art more, and she was a larger mare, from what I recall.

How many races did Shiro run this chapter?

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Three. She won an open dirt race in January, then she placed second after El Condor Pasa at the Kyodo News Hai in early February, while also winning the Wakagoma Stakes at Kyoto in the latter half of February.

 

[TheSmallSauce]

Does she? I thought Stay Gold irl like Oriental Art more, and she was a larger mare, from what I recall.

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I kinda get the idea Stay Gold wasn't being paired with many smaller mares since he was already so undersized, any offspring between him and such a mare would have been perhaps too small to be worth training, so perhaps he just never met that many small mares. Also it's been noted that once he was being taken on a walk and he came across a pasture with some ponies and he got excited, apparently from seeing some horses the same size as him.

 

[Tiypo]

While there is no chance she'll win more than one or two of the triple races, I do agree it's a shame there are so many strong racers. The weaker members of the golden generation could have dominated if they weren't racing against their peers.

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I know they're strong, but watching her play second fiddle to the rest kinda sucks ass, to put it bluntly. I don't think there's any particular issue with the writing at a per-chapter level, but it is a frustrating direction for the story to go; I'm here to see Shiro as the main character after all. I don't think a by-the-book retelling of The Golden Generation of horse racing from the point of view of a person twice isakai'd, whom only exists as a Sword of Damocles, is really a good use of that character.

It's like we're playing Nice Nature's career and it's going just like real life, a whole bunch of 3rds. But because Shiro/Tanya isn't the sort of character to have emotional moments, so it's also missing all the feel good points of Nature bonding with her floppy-trophy making trainer which balance out that frustration.

 

[Lyrista]

I know they're strong, but watching her play second fiddle to the rest kinda sucks ass, to put it bluntly. I don't think there's any particular issue with the writing at a per-chapter level, but it is a frustrating direction for the story to go; I'm here to see Shiro as the main character after all. I don't think a by-the-book retelling of The Golden Generation of horse racing from the point of view of a person twice isakai'd, whom only exists as a Sword of Damocles, is really a good use of that character.

It's like we're playing Nice Nature's career and it's going just like real life, a whole bunch of 3rds. But because Shiro/Tanya isn't the sort of character to have emotional moments, so it's also missing all the feel good points of Nature bonding with her floppy-trophy making trainer which balance out that frustration.

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So what you're expressing is you're disappointed with the tangible character development of Shirogane as a racer. She's been going through her career about a year now but you're feeling a missed opportunity with how little she's changed and is basically the same as she started, no drive just a student who treats racing as a job she's employed for to bring home a paycheck for her parents. You want something to happen to push some sort of paradigm shift in her thinking to push some sort of change beyond just Shirogane showing up for her "shift at work."

 

[Dopplerdee]

Yep, Shirogane's debut race was a victory for her.

As for her constant second places, Long distance races are going to start showing up on the roster soon, these are probably where most of Shirogane's wins will come from.

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Truly, she shall be The Demon of Distance.

 

[Tiypo]

So what you're expressing is you're disappointed with the tangible character development of Shirogane as a racer. She's been going through her career about a year now but you're feeling a missed opportunity with how little she's changed and is basically the same as she started, no drive just a student who treats racing as a job she's employed for to bring home a paycheck for her parents. You want something to happen to push some sort of paradigm shift in her thinking to push some sort of change beyond just Shirogane showing up for her "shift at work."

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That's a good way of putting it.

And I fully acknowledge that she's setup to be very strong at further distances, but we're over 120k words in and just getting to the time where G1's are featured. I can only imagine we're looking at another 100k before we get to see her actually get to the races where she can shine. And in the meantime, the way she's written, she'll be perfectly content with that result. At the very least it feels like Nice Nature shares the frustration you feel with her results and wants to change.

 

[Euphemism]

Really enjoying this story. I love Tanya crossovers, but this one feels unique by starting off as a nice slice of life and then swapping into a sports drama, and overall this feels like Tanya basically died in life 2 and went to heaven.

Got a nice cushy retirement with parents who love her, then a fun career that provides her with lots of money and people she can get along with, and after she retires from that she can probably just play the stocks and relax (and then maybe discover that she gets bored too easily and needs more excitement).

 

[Walberino69]

I know they're strong, but watching her play second fiddle to the rest kinda sucks ass, to put it bluntly. I don't think there's any particular issue with the writing at a per-chapter level, but it is a frustrating direction for the story to go; I'm here to see Shiro as the main character after all. I don't think a by-the-book retelling of The Golden Generation of horse racing from the point of view of a person twice isakai'd, whom only exists as a Sword of Damocles, is really a good use of that character.

It's like we're playing Nice Nature's career and it's going just like real life, a whole bunch of 3rds. But because Shiro/Tanya isn't the sort of character to have emotional moments, so it's also missing all the feel good points of Nature bonding with her floppy-trophy making trainer which balance out that frustration.

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Then this story might not be for you right now. It has already been made clear that Shirogane isn't a Tanya-esque figure desperate to prove something; she is someone living the dream of a peaceful, stable life. As many have already noted, she is essentially a "grandma in a young girl's body."

On the other hand, it is also clear that her strength doesn't lie in the "short" races common in Japan; she would fare much better in long-distance races abroad, and her attitude is unlikely to change anytime soon.

There is still a possibility that she might change and give more than 100%, but that would require some external stimulus—whether negative (a desperate need to win) or positive (giving her all out of respect for someone else's dedication).

Tanya is happy with her results, and unlike in her first life, she can appreciate the merit of being at the top without the pressure of needing to be number one.

It seems like you're looking for a *shonen* sports series, but the author has made it clear since Chapter 1 that this story is primarily a slice-of-life.

The best way to view this story is to think of it as a spin-off like *Emiya-san Chi no Kyō no Gohan*—one that shows the day-to-day life of the *Fate* series without the Servant battles, focusing instead on mundane matters. It's like watching the lives of the villagers from Luffy's hometown: the story you're looking for is happening in the background, but it isn't the focus of the narrative.

 

[Winged One]

stable life

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[Lyrista]

I mean almost never finishing under second place is still an objectively impressive resume and gets her attention and recognition and a reasonable number of fans too. The occasional first place finishes sprinkled in will keep her fans coming back for more to see whether or not she can pull off a first place finish again.

Infamy also gains her attention too, fans want to see if their own favorites can beat the Silver Eagle challenge and watching other Umas push themselves to their limits to overcome the stamina monster that is Shirogane must be exciting to watch in Universe.

El Condor Pasa, a very powerful racer of her generation clearly had to substantially push herself to win this race and she still just barely managed it.

First place or Second place, it seems like Shirogane puts on a show that's worth watching.

 

[Tiypo]

Then this story might not be for you right now. It has already been made clear that Shirogane isn't a Tanya-esque figure desperate to prove something; she is someone living the dream of a peaceful, stable life. As many have already noted, she is essentially a "grandma in a young girl's body."

On the other hand, it is also clear that her strength doesn't lie in the "short" races common in Japan; she would fare much better in long-distance races abroad, and her attitude is unlikely to change anytime soon.

There is still a possibility that she might change and give more than 100%, but that would require some external stimulus—whether negative (a desperate need to win) or positive (giving her all out of respect for someone else's dedication).

Tanya is happy with her results, and unlike in her first life, she can appreciate the merit of being at the top without the pressure of needing to be number one.

It seems like you're looking for a *shonen* sports series, but the author has made it clear since Chapter 1 that this story is primarily a slice-of-life.

The best way to view this story is to think of it as a spin-off like *Emiya-san Chi no Kyō no Gohan*—one that shows the day-to-day life of the *Fate* series without the Servant battles, focusing instead on mundane matters. It's like watching the lives of the villagers from Luffy's hometown: the story you're looking for is happening in the background, but it isn't the focus of the narrative.

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Slice-of-life doesn't mean the characters are stagnant, the protagonist should have some motivations and challenges, especially when they're directly involved in something obviously competitive. Why is it her racing when she could instead be running food deliveries to all the different uma as some sort of Tracen "S-Rank Asphalt Aptitude" cryptid?

The issue in my mind is that Shiro is written and treated as a Sword of Damocles. Everyone she's racing against acknowledges her as a threat and treats her as such; from their perspective they are in that "shonen" sports series and she's a part of it. The entire story is focused on that sword; every race she's in is like a camera shot of her competitor on a throne with the threat of HER dangling over them, threatening to fall. But if it never falls, did it really represent a threat to begin with or was it just a set piece? How many times can that same camera shot be repeated before the sword has no value as a part of the story?

And maybe these thoughts are pre-mature and things will happen soon, but Shiro's position as that sword certainly has been fed to us a lot and yet at the same time it feels we keep being whispered "the sword isn't THAT big a deal", which loops back to the point of why have said sword then?

 

[Liar]

To be honest, I thought the First Year was just a setup for the Classic Year, where the famous races occur. I didn't expect much character development until the competition for the Triple Crown and Triple Tiara began. The author carefully established Shirogane's reputation, and understanding her standing among racing fans and other Umamusume helps us engage with the stakes of the Classic Year races.

 

[Impstar]

Slice-of-life doesn't mean the characters are stagnant, the protagonist should have some motivations and challenges, especially when they're directly involved in something obviously competitive. Why is it her racing when she could instead be running food deliveries to all the different uma as some sort of Tracen "S-Rank Asphalt Aptitude" cryptid?

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Well the Watsonian reason she's not running food deliveries is that racing pays better. The Doyalist reason is that umamusume is a setting focused on horse racing. So far her motivation is to return what she sees as her debt to her parents by helping them financially. And that's perfectly okay for a starting motivation. I admit this story is a very very slow burn, but I think it is going somewhere with Shiro's character. If the burn is too slow for you, that's unfortunate, but the pacing of the story has been established.

The issue in my mind is that Shiro is written and treated as a Sword of Damocles. Everyone she's racing against acknowledges her as a threat and treats her as such; from their perspective they are in that "shonen" sports series and she's a part of it. The entire story is focused on that sword; every race she's in is a like a camera shot of her competitor on a throne with the threat of HER dangling over them, threatening to fall. But if it never falls, did it really represent a threat to begin with or was it just a set piece? How many times can that same camera shot be repeated before the sword has no value as a part of the story?

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That's not really my take on it though? She's acknowledged as being extremely intense to the point of causing discomfort to other umas racing against her, which is noteworthy. Her consistency is also noteworthy; if you don't bring your A-game and pay close attention while racing her, she may very well take the win. But that's it. She's not a sword of damocles, unless you mean it in a "if she does this well in shorter races, what will she be like in longer ones" way. She's not a sword of damocles anymore than Grass Wonder or El Condo is really; less so, because they are consistently favored to win (and do so). Shiro's tendency to get second instead of first is noted in story. The story is not hyping her up more than she deserves to be at this point in time.

 

[Walberino69]

Slice-of-life doesn't mean the characters are stagnant, the protagonist should have some motivations and challenges, especially when they're directly involved in something obviously competitive.

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I think you're confusing story genres; while some stories with slice-of-life elements do feature a "plot" and character development, the vast majority of pure slice-of-life works have none of that. They are simply a light, idealized version of a relatively quiet daily routine, devoid of major developments.
They can be humorous—showing comedic gags from students' daily lives, for instance—
or, like the example I mentioned earlier, focus on the meals a family prepares each day.
In most cases, the plot serves merely as a pretext for relaxing scenes, and the finale tends to play out like any other episode, albeit with a concluding theme—such as graduation in a school-based series or the end of the year in others. Most commonly, there is little to no character change throughout the entire story.

So far, it strikes me as a good story of that genre; it could shift and develop a cohesive long-term plot—much like *Gintama*, which started as a comedic slice-of-life and evolved into a *shonen* series with comedic elements—or the story could continue right up to adulthood without ever changing its core motivation, remaining a slice-of-life tale throughout.

 

[Tiypo]

@WrandmWaffles I hope you don't take my speal of criticisms negatively, I do think you've written a great story so far. I just hope that my honest feedback and debate can be useful to you in some way.

That's not really my take on it though? She's acknowledged as being extremely intense to the point of causing discomfort to other umas racing against her, which is noteworthy. Her consistency is also noteworthy; if you don't bring your A-game and pay close attention while racing her, she may very well take the win. But that's it. She's not a sword of damocles, unless you mean it in a "if she does this well in shorter races, what will she be like in longer ones" way. She's not a sword of damocles anymore than Grass Wonder or El Condo is really; less so, because they are consistently favored to win (and do so). Shiro's tendency to get second instead of first is noted in story. The story is not hyping her up more than she deserves to be at this point in time.

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But isn't that exactly what a sword of damocles is? That discomfort to other umas, that consistency, it's an implied threat that any mistake will lead to the other racers downfall. And honestly, Shiro aside, I think the story of the Golden Generation is best told when every other racers IS written a sword of damocles. It's such a hyper competitive generation, every one of them is almost certainly feeling an absolutely crushing amount of pressure to perform better than the others. Seiun Sky's career is a great example; by the late game her laidback persona is completely breaking down and she's absolutely exausted from trying to find ways to keep outscheming the rest of them for her wins since she knows she can't keep up physically.

I think you're confusing story genres; while some stories with slice-of-life elements do feature a "plot" and character development, the vast majority of pure slice-of-life works have none of that. They are simply a light, idealized version of a relatively quiet daily routine, devoid of major developments.
They can be humorous—showing comedic gags from students' daily lives, for instance—
or, like the example I mentioned earlier, focus on the meals a family prepares each day.
In most cases, the plot serves merely as a pretext for relaxing scenes, and the finale tends to play out like any other episode, albeit with a concluding theme—such as graduation in a school-based series or the end of the year in others. Most commonly, there is little to no character change throughout the entire story.

So far, it strikes me as a good story of that genre; it could shift and develop a cohesive long-term plot—much like *Gintama*, which started as a comedic slice-of-life and evolved into a *shonen* series with comedic elements—or the story could continue right up to adulthood without ever changing its core motivation, remaining a slice-of-life tale throughout.

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I'm not saying they need to be high stakes, but even slice-of-life characters grow over time as they pursue little things in their life. Be it making new friends, working a job, going somewhere they've never been before, trying out a hobby, those all lead to growth. You'll see that even in a story as laid back and whimsical as Yotsuba&. At least at the moment, it seems as if that "little thing" should be racing for Shiro, but it doesn't feel like she's progressed much from when she arrived at Tracen, instead we keep seeing other characters reacting to her. It doesn't even necessasarily need to be her winning, but with the focus being on racing, if all she ever does is place 2nd, it's going to be really hard to see any changes ever happen to her unless said happening is something off the track.

 

[arky4444]

"Wait…am I reading this right? Her record is fourteen-four-ten-zero?! She's run four races this year already?!"

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This is noteworthy to the sportscasters, in that she's run four races when her peers have run no more than two.

How many races did Shiro run this chapter? It was one 1st place in Tensei's pov, 2nd when she and El Condor Pasa raced and now she will run a third race against her fellow Tracers in the last part of the chapter.

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Three. She won an open dirt race in January, then she placed second after El Condor Pasa at the Kyodo News Hai in early February, while also winning the Wakagoma Stakes at Kyoto in the latter half of February.

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Time to update the standings!

At this time (pre Yayoi Sho), the Class A standings are:
Shirogane Orzel - 4 wins / 14 starts, 14-4-10-0; previous races + G3 Radio Tampa Hai Sansai Stakes (12/20/97, Ch. 20, lost to Mori Survival), G3 Keisei Hai (1/11/98, Ch. 21, lost to Meiner Love), unspecified dirt OP (Ch. 22, 1st place), GS Kyodo News Service Hai (2/15/98, Ch. 22, lost to El Condor Pasa), OP Wakagoma Stakes (2/22/98, Ch. 22, 1st place); estimated winnings: 90.97 (previous sum) + 13.15 (2nd place G3) + 16.12 (2nd place G3) + 19.23? (1st place OP) + 17.12 (2nd place GS) + 19.26 (1st place OP) = 175.85 million yen.
Grass Wonder - 4 wins / 4 starts; winnings = 114.69 million yen; NO CHANGE SINCE ASAHI HAI.
King Halo - 3 wins / 4 starts, 4-3-0-1; previous races + G3 Radio Tampa Hai Sansai Stakes (12/20/97, Ch. 20, 3rd place); winnings = 48.75 (previous sum) + 8.08 (3rd place G3) = 56.83 million yen.
El Condor Pasa - 3 wins / 3 starts, previous race + 4yo ALW(1 Win) (1/11/98, Ch, 21), GS Kyodo News Service Hai (2/15/98, Ch. 22); winnings = 6.00 (previous) + 7.00 (1st place ALW) + 42.41 (1st place GS) = 55.41 million yen.
Special Week - 2 wins / 3 starts, 3-2-1-0, previous race + ALW Shiraume Sho (1/6/98, Ch. 21, 2nd place) + G3 Kisaragi Sho (2/8/98, 1st place); winnings = 6.00 (previous) + 4.13 (2nd place ALW) + 42.66 (1st place G3) = 52.79 million yen.
Seiun Sky - 2 wins / 2 starts; Debut (1/8/98, Ch. 21) + OP Junior Cup (1/25/98); winnings = 6.00 (1st place Debut) + 19.27 (1st place OP) = 25.27 million yen.
Tsurumaru Tsuyoshi - yet to debut; 0 yen.

Compared to the IRL standings, King Halo is the only one who has changed standing so far, due to finishing 3rd at the G3 Radio Tampa Hai instead of 2nd.

Grass Wonder and Shirogane's participation in the Yayoi Sho can lead to a great divergence, with potential butterfly effects as Umas who were safe IRL now sign up for other trial races as they try to secure a spot in the Satsuki Sho... or maybe the Three Goddesses strike down Grass Wonder with a leg fracture in a nod to her previous fate.

Also, where is El Condor Pasa?

"None of you will be able to defeat me at these trial races!"

"El, is your trainer even scheduling you to run in them?"

"O-Of course he is? Why wouldn't he?"

"Would be kinda funny if after all that big talk you just flop out because your trainer's kinda sloppy at paperwork."

"Ack! Noooo!"

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While it would be funny if her trainer really did forget to enter her, it's more likely that he did the smart thing and signed her up for one of the other trial or step races, instead of running in the heavily-contested Yayoi Sho. Plus, she is probably still recovering from the GS Kyodo News Service Hai that she ran three weeks prior.

"Also, if you count up the berths from the trial races," Nakashima-sensei added in, "That is only eight, which means that the other ten participants are selected based on other criteria, such as their record and previous performances, so the trial races are not the only way to get into the Classics."

But for Shirogane herself, she would likely have to clinch a trial race berth in both circuits, otherwise there was no chance she'd be selected as a participant in either of the first legs. Her record so far was decent, but it was not particularly impressive, and with Grass Wonder's victory at the Asahi Hai, her chestnut haired classmate earned more winnings in total despite Shirogane having run more races up until that point.

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This is funny because it shows that Shirogane really doesn't follow the racing industry, and has no idea what "normal" is. IRL, Bold Emperor was the top-ranked entrant in the 1998 Satsuki Sho out of those who got in on points, with a 10-2-2-1 record and 77.58 million yen in winnings, and the weakest entrant, K.S. Good One, got in with a 5-2-1-0 record and 15.8 million yen in winnings. Shirogane's already beaten Bold Emperor's qualifying ranking before the year's even started.

Going back to El Condor Pasa, her trainer definitely knows what's "normal" for getting into the Satsuki Sho on points. He is probably confident that El Condor Pasa can get into the Satsuki Sho, even without winning an automatic berth, which is yet another reason for her not to run in the Yayoi Sho.

"If you have doubts I can keep up that pace, I could run a few lower stakes races weekly," Shirogane continued, taking her silence for doubt rather than exasperation. "It will not simulate the intensity completely, but it would at least demonstrate that I can keep up with the mandatory rest period rules."

"We shouldn't start off too intensely, otherwise I will have some unfriendly questions thrown my way by the league," Hana sighed, again feeling herself dragged along by her trainees' eccentricities. "Only one set of consecutive races, like you would see if you actually manage to get into both circuits."

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This has finally happened, with Shirogane running the GS Kyodo News Service Hai and the OP Wakagoma Stakes within a week of each other and doing well in both.

 

[TheSmallSauce]

Time to update the standings!

At this time (pre Yayoi Sho), the Class A standings are:
Shirogane Orzel - 4 wins / 14 starts, 14-4-10-0; previous races + G3 Radio Tampa Hai Sansai Stakes (12/20/97, Ch. 20, lost to Mori Survival), G3 Keisei Hai (1/11/98, Ch. 21, lost to Meiner Love), unspecified dirt OP (Ch. 22, 1st place), GS Kyodo News Service Hai (2/15/98, Ch. 22, lost to El Condor Pasa), OP Wakagoma Stakes (2/22/98, Ch. 22, 1st place); estimated winnings: 90.97 (previous sum) + 13.15 (2nd place G3) + 16.12 (2nd place G3) + 19.23? (1st place OP) + 17.12 (2nd place GS) + 19.26 (1st place OP) = 175.85 million yen.
Grass Wonder - 4 wins / 4 starts; winnings = 114.69 million yen; NO CHANGE SINCE ASAHI HAI.
King Halo - 3 wins / 4 starts, 4-3-0-1; previous races + G3 Radio Tampa Hai Sansai Stakes (12/20/97, Ch. 20, 3rd place); winnings = 48.75 (previous sum) + 8.08 (3rd place G3) = 56.83 million yen.
El Condor Pasa - 3 wins / 3 starts, previous race + 4yo ALW(1 Win) (1/11/98, Ch, 21), GS Kyodo News Service Hai (2/15/98, Ch. 22); winnings = 6.00 (previous) + 7.00 (1st place ALW) + 42.41 (1st place GS) = 55.41 million yen.
Special Week - 2 wins / 3 starts, 3-2-1-0, previous race + ALW Shiraume Sho (1/6/98, Ch. 21, 2nd place) + G3 Kisaragi Sho (2/8/98, 1st place); winnings = 6.00 (previous) + 4.13 (2nd place ALW) + 42.66 (1st place G3) = 52.79 million yen.
Seiun Sky - 2 wins / 2 starts; Debut (1/8/98, Ch. 21) + OP Junior Cup (1/25/98); winnings = 6.00 (1st place Debut) + 19.27 (1st place OP) = 25.27 million yen.
Tsurumaru Tsuyoshi - yet to debut; 0 yen.

Compared to the IRL standings, King Halo is the only one who has changed standing so far, due to finishing 3rd at the G3 Radio Tampa Hai instead of 2nd.

Grass Wonder and Shirogane's participation in the Yayoi Sho can lead to a great divergence, with potential butterfly effects as Umas who were safe IRL now sign up for other trial races as they try to secure a spot in the Satsuki Sho... or maybe the Three Goddesses strike down Grass Wonder with a leg fracture in a nod to her previous fate.

Also, where is El Condor Pasa?

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Seeing this, I feel like it'd be cool to see an Umaverse netkeiba omake, where various users are discussing the ongoing careers of the Golden Gen. Also goddamn, ¥175 million already? If we only count domestic earnings (because those Saudi prize pools are seriously incomparable...) Kitasan Black is the top earner with ¥1.87 billion after 20 races over 3 years. Shirogane might well surpass her for total earnings, though perhaps over a much longer period of time. The top earner's list might well look like:

1. Kitasan Black - ¥1,876,843,000
2. Shirogane Orzeru - ¥175,850,000 + Future Earnings TBD
3. TM Opera O - ¥1,835,189,000

This is baseless speculation, of course. I haven't gone and looked up the prize purses for each race, or their changes over the years like Arky has. And it also has to be said that winning just one or two big races has already almost brought Grass Wonder up to Shiro's total earnings already. On the other hand, Shiro is already at about a fourth of Grass' career total of ¥691,646,000, and it's only the start of her classic year.

 

[Crispy Taco Shell]

Hot damn, 175.85 million yen? Is that before or after Tracen and the government takes their share?

Either way, Shiro is making some serious money as a freshman in highschool.

She could easily multiply that fortune with some clever investing using her future knowledge from her first incarnation, too!

 

[Jadalier Rune]

… hey do you think Shiro would become a trainer if she didn't had her family restaurant to think about?

I'm just thinking about it due to the Boot Camp when she was Tanya. I would find it hilarious in that alternate timeline

 

[Liar]

… hey do you think Shiro would become a trainer if she didn't had her family restaurant to think about?

I'm just thinking about it due to the Boot Camp when she was Tanya. I would find it hilarious in that alternate timeline

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She might. She enjoys managing people, and beneath her calm exterior, she's secretly a thrill-seeker. Becoming a Trainer would be an intriguing career choice for her if this were her first life as the Salaryman.

 

[Mentos]

… hey do you think Shiro would become a trainer if she didn't had her family restaurant to think about?

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Nah, she wasn't really interested in racing before getting scouted, and she only got scouted because she had the restaurant, so both the 'trainer instead of racer' and the 'racer->trainer' pipeline scenarios are iffy.

I can still see Drill Sergeant mode appearing, though. It's easy enough to imagine her filling in for a trainer as a favor for a short time.

 

[Zweibach]

Mercy be upon any junior that Shiro thinks she needs to be A Good Senpai for. Because the silver eagle has none.

 

[Crispy Taco Shell]

I can still see Drill Sergeant mode appearing, though. It's easy enough to imagine her filling in for a trainer as a favor for a short time.

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Racing umas will probably respond very poorly to drill instructor style training methods, though. They're too free-spirited and would just revolt and walk away from instructors like that.

War umas, on the other hand, would thrive in it.

It's all conjecture but I'd say umamusme of warhorse heritage instinctively are more predisposed to a hierarchical mindset with rigid boss/subordinate relationships. Shirogane, Tanya, and the Salaryman have that mindset in all their reincarnations. Here, Shiro sees her parents as the boss and instinctively has to support them by helping in the restaurant or studying even from a young age. Not being able to support them actively causes her to be depressed. She's very much a workhorse like that. She has to work instinctively and not working is actually a form of torture to her.

The perfect salaryman. lol