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The Skittering Chaos (Worm/Hazbin Hotel)

Discussion in 'Creative Writing' started by Thread Necromancer, Aug 7, 2020.

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  1. ElegiacCrown

    ElegiacCrown Neither grandly nor intoxicatingly innocent.

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    Except she's winning? Despite literally being ambushed by a massive mob she's walking away with barely a head wound, no lost team-mates, and a power-up. She's doing fine and at this rate she'll be more than equipped to deal with Valentino when she gets to him.
     
  2. VisV

    VisV Feedback Addicted Writer

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    I do Hope Taylor goes native (Or reverts back to her skitter state) a bit while down here.

    It's hell, no one cares about the feel good "Puppies and Butterflies and kids with cancer" kinda PR, what you need is fear and displays of power.

    Besides since no one can die here she is free to ramp up the torture of people who offend her!
     
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  3. mperalta

    mperalta Not too sore, are you?

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    the problem is that this setting is full of elderich-tier assholes that could make a good impression of pretending to be eidolon.

    the head wound feels really forced, she should have died right there, but since that would mean losing a bunch of her magic the author probably didn't do that. that doesn't mean she is doing great.

    pre-undersiders taylor, no experience, could have taken all this guys easily.

    i am not shitting on the story at all, it's just that this setting is way stronger than worm so she actually needs to be more


    while this is probably true, that is not happening before getting raped/mastered since that's his thing.
     
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  4. Thread Necromancer

    Thread Necromancer Amateur Taylor Torturer

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    The way I see it, Taylor only really did that PR stuff to please those that held her leash. In hell however, there is little point to this as it is a waste of time generally, and it actively damages your public reputation.

    Her avoiding being killed there despite a sniper having an easy bead on here is me attempting to show that despite losing a bunch of her power she is still both smart and experienced enough to prevent herself from getting sniped. I actually had a bunch of notes on what would happen and even an idea of the scene I wanted for the next chapter if the caliber of rifle Snipes had was higher and Skitter's plan to save herself didn't work.

    Skitter would have ended up in a clinic, brought there by the merchants, and while she would have lost power it wouldn't be the main problem. Rather the problem would be the massive debt that would have been incurred from the clinic caring for her and such.
     
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  5. ElegiacCrown

    ElegiacCrown Neither grandly nor intoxicatingly innocent.

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    It definitely is happening before that because that's the conceit of the story.
     
  6. Thread Necromancer

    Thread Necromancer Amateur Taylor Torturer

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    I will probably make a lewd of that happening though, kind of a side story thing. Maybe have her and Angel work together on a porno set or something.

    Edit: Like a what if and all that.
     
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    VisV Feedback Addicted Writer

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    Nothing we have seen of the setting so far paints it as stronger than Worm.

    Like we've literally only seen Alastor and got some WoG on vox, both of them are strong sure, but they ain't no Sleeper or Scion or Eidolon.

    Least not from what we've seen.
     
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    VisV Feedback Addicted Writer

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    Why not just write her appearing in some of her own porn after she takes over?

    I mean she's been a on dry spell for the past two years, and unlike Valentino No one would fuck with skitter after she becomes overlord if she decides she want's to get some dick and make a profit at the same time.

    She's gonna need to find a way to relax anyway once she's back as a warlord, and she probably would prefer being a nymphomaniac over being a drug addict
     
  9. Thread Necromancer

    Thread Necromancer Amateur Taylor Torturer

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    Loses a bet with Angel maybe? Has to play the part of the poor innocent maid being seduced by the evil and horribly seductive succubus?

    She will likely also have to deal with Valentino's friends and the encroachment on her territory by gangs and other overlords. The only one that she will likely not have to worry about is Lucy and Lilith since they are off doing their own thing.
     
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    Ideally she wouldn't need to lose a bet for the first time. (Besides it doesn't seem IC for her to make a bet like that before shes okay with the idea of being in a porno, Don't write checks you don't want to cash and all that.)

    Her thirst for D I C C is probably gonna overflow out of the mind vault she's been repressing it in eventually, probably all the deeply hidden Bisexuality too.

    Just have this happen after she's already become the owner of hell's sex industry by right of conquest, the rest of the pieces will fall into place all on their own.
     
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    That's just more things that cause her to need to destress!
     
  12. ElegiacCrown

    ElegiacCrown Neither grandly nor intoxicatingly innocent.

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    I certainly don't mind bad end side-stories.

    I blame Alec for this. I'm not entirely sure how but it's probably his fault.

    edit: The only thing that kept Earth Bet safe from Taylor's ravenous but repressed libido was the fact that Brian just isn't that good at sex.
     
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    VisV Feedback Addicted Writer

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    I do, Bad ends are sad and depressing, i'm not here for sad and depressing.

    I could just watch the news if i wanted that.

    Lewds are good though, as long as they are happy lewds. (Or consist of bad people getting their comeuppance.)
     
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    ElegiacCrown Neither grandly nor intoxicatingly innocent.

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    Well sure, but that's why they're bad ends, and that's why their just side-stories. What if's to help remind us of what's good. I also think their interesting explorations of alternate routes, but I very much agree that they're generally both sad and depressing and shouldn't be part of the main story.

    Like, a hero seeing a prophecy of what could happen if they fail can be interesting to explore, but I never want it to be the canon ending of a work.
     
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  15. Jeff Roy

    Jeff Roy Not too Sora, are you?

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    Got a feeling that the rush she gets, is either her absorbing all the magic power of who she kills, or Queenie is absorbing it to try and either wake up or reconnect with Skitter.
     
  16. Thread Necromancer

    Thread Necromancer Amateur Taylor Torturer

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    To be fair, considering how Angel worked out despite basically being a sex slave, Taylor would probably find a way out, either through acting as a spy for some other overlord or getting the backing of Charlie or something like that.
     
  17. ElegiacCrown

    ElegiacCrown Neither grandly nor intoxicatingly innocent.

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    "Skitter and Angel Dust stage a breakout" has a nice ring to it.
     
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    Eh, it just sits wrong, She'd never actually get into a position to become a sex slave to begin with.

    Her will is too strong, and she would just kill her way out.
     
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    Thread Necromancer Amateur Taylor Torturer

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    Definitely not a fully mind broken one of course but all one needs to do to be considered a sex slave is to be considered property, and for your primary slave duty to have something to do with sex. Have that and your basically a sex slave. Plus there are a bunch of ways of controlling people. Drugs, Mind control, coersion, force, mind control drugs from Colombia, induced nymphomania combined with chastity that they control the key too, rewards, pavlovian training over a long period of time etc...
     
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    Will too strong.

    She'd bite off their dicks.

    Anyways, on to happier topics!

    True demon forms! What up with that!

    What is Taylor's?
     
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    ElegiacCrown Neither grandly nor intoxicatingly innocent.

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    i like that first one... not sure if demonic enough though.
     
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    ElegiacCrown Neither grandly nor intoxicatingly innocent.

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    VisV Feedback Addicted Writer

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    I mean the HH angels look like demonic terminators designed to mockingly evoke angels

    I'm like 60% sure that the big twist of HH is gonna be that they aren't actually angels, but magic kill bots created by lucifer for something or another.

    Also on this note.

    [​IMG]

    Sans boobs of course.
     
  25. Thread Necromancer

    Thread Necromancer Amateur Taylor Torturer

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    Fairly close yes. Maybe with a little less fuzz on the limbs as well. with five digits of course on each hand.

    Edit: and her antennae are more upwards than on the side.
     
  26. VisV

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    Finally... the most important Question of all.

    Does Taylor now crave L A M P?

    Once she becomes overlord will she form a grand collection of cute demons that happen to glow in the dark?
     
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    ElegiacCrown Neither grandly nor intoxicatingly innocent.

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    [​IMG]
    His name is Collin and he is, in fact, real.

    Ah yes, the bio-luminescent kink. You know, according to the Addict music video, Angeldust can do that.
     
  28. VisV

    VisV Feedback Addicted Writer

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    okay yeah, then the HH angels almost certainly aren't real angels.
     
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    Thread Necromancer Amateur Taylor Torturer

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    Or there are multiple types of angels, like in the Bibble. Or they are robots made by Heaven to go do their dirty work in Hell. Not that I'm opposed to the angels being Lucy's. I actually was thinking something like that might be the case.
     
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    ElegiacCrown Neither grandly nor intoxicatingly innocent.

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    I actually wonder about that. Both have visiual designs reminiscent of
    sheep
    after-all. The exterminators are just covered in armor, and Collin is a cherub. Maybe the exterminators are higher/lower ranking angels.
     
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