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With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

Discussion in 'Creative Writing' started by Mr Zoat, Jan 27, 2019.

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  1. Chojin Patriarch

    Chojin Patriarch Veteran Lurker

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  2. Grosstoad

    Grosstoad Whimsical Paranoid Creeper

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    Uh, a minor question: Why is her being a captive considered objectionable? Or is she being repeatedly tortured?
     
  3. Prince Charon

    Prince Charon Just zis guy, you know?

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    I think he was set in that when they killed his wife. Given her heroics in the comics, maybe Rose Wilson joins the Syndicate on Earth -14.
     
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  4. jaelin910

    jaelin910 habitual lurker

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    Well, yes, she was... but honestly, I'd think 'my ally has been captured by my enemies' is the sort of thing most people would object to regardless.
     
  5. Zig

    Zig Not too sore, are you?

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    You're thinking of the Justice Lords universe. This is the one from Crisis on Two Earths, which diverged long before Justice League. Seeing as the humans in it have different organ configurations, it diverged at least several million years ago. Not sure what the timeline is for Krona and the Guardians but that could be billions.
     
  6. 012345

    012345 Well worn.

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    If this Earth/Universe has so much higher tech level will Paul spend some time to scan/hack random databases/devices to rise his tech level and give himself some new options? It would be a shame to waste oprtunity to make him stronger.
     
  7. Coda

    Coda Versed in the lewd.

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    Here, the Syndicate is being associated with Scotland..

    ... but the rest of it is about Ireland!
     
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  8. Pinklestia

    Pinklestia Well worn.

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    He has even less resources that the Syndicate had to invade another dimension.

    Plus he will be too busy running the country to war with a completely different Earth.
     
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  9. Siskulous

    Siskulous Know what you're doing yet?

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    I'm not so sure about that. A lot of disorganized crime is, at it's root, caused by societal problems. I can't give percentages or anything, but I'd be willing to bet that the vast majority of random thugs would not be thugs at all were it not for poverty. Fix the societal problems and the crime rate drops quickly. Organised crime, on the other hand, is not caused by societal problems. Perhaps not at the very beginning (most organised crime originates with a group banding together for mutual protection) but by the time it gets to be a big problem it's caused by greed. That means that while most crime can be significantly reduced by reducing poverty without ever going after the criminals themselves, organized crime has to be attacked directly if you want to deal with it.

    First, Owlman was insane even by the standards of a bunch of sociopathic narcissistic megalomaniacs. Second, I believe "why a bomb" would have much the same answer as "why a gun" in this comic.

    Wait, DC has a Doctor Strange? Huh. I guess with the way DC and Marvel shamelessly rip each other off I should be more surprised that his first name isn't Steve and he's not a wizard.
     
  10. Vaermina

    Vaermina Well worn.

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    Nope. I know exactly what I was talking about.



    I really don't think you properly understand how much more advanced this particular Earth is compared to the one Paul just came from...
     
  11. PDV

    PDV Revelation That Uncertainty Is Itself An Answer

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    There's a Cluemaster, which might be what you're thinking of
     
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  12. Handlewithcare

    Handlewithcare Versed in the lewd.

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    Pragmatically choosing the least bad option.

    Willing to accept that you will not get what you want.

    Realising that the stories lie, that there isn't always justice delivered with a righteous glare, but that bad guys sometimes get away because it's better that way.

    It separates the kids form the adults.
     
  13. Maxx Crowley

    Maxx Crowley I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    I'm afraid that you are going to have to provide further explanation for this statement.
     
  14. Cuchulin

    Cuchulin Versed in the lewd.

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    Hugo Strange is a doctor.
     
  15. Ganurath

    Ganurath Apologizes For Nothing

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    They're actually talking about assassinating Barda's husband.
     
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  16. Xmaster3000

    Xmaster3000 Know what you're doing yet?

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    Unrelated to the topic, but I think I found Teth Adom's theme.
     
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  17. Handlewithcare

    Handlewithcare Versed in the lewd.

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    Cutting a deal with a criminal for information for instance.
     
  18. Siskulous

    Siskulous Know what you're doing yet?

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    The most common example I know of is cutting a deal for a lenient sentence in return for a guilty plea. The system does that in like 80% of all criminal cases. If they didn't the courts would have a backlog decades long.

    But for an example more like the example in the story, the police will sometimes give up on a high speed chase not because they can't catch the person in question but because continuing the chase is too dangerous to all the innocent bystanders around in the area it's going through.

    Also, I don't know whether it's ever happened in real life or not, but a common trope in fiction is the crime lord who doesn't tolerate unnecessary violence and whom the cops leave alone for fear of getting someone worse. (I THINK the Yakuza might have been that for a while in Japan, but since I'm unfamiliar enough with the real Yakuza that the fictional depictions of them bleed into my knowledge of them pretty severely I would not want to state that as fact. And in any case they cracked down on the real Yakuza a while ago.)
     
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  19. Ganurath

    Ganurath Apologizes For Nothing

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    Teth Adom, at least as depicted in this story, isn't the lightning. The lightning is a call for attention, uncertain in direction, with all the foreboding of a jump scare. Teth Adom is the thunder: anticipated, inevitable, and depending on the context can be intimidating or reassuring. By that merit, an energetic, modern song that lacks a heavy drum is ill-suited to represent the Champion of Khandaq.

    ...I wonder what Earth -14's Teth Adom is like.
     
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  20. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    Nobody knows. Superhero and all round wonderful man Theodore Adam has no plans to ever let him out.
     
  21. Ganurath

    Ganurath Apologizes For Nothing

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    The Batsons tried to murder Mr. Adam in a ritual sacrifice, but through either their own ineptitude or his own heroic ingenuity he turned things around?
     
  22. Lord Ernest

    Lord Ernest At the End...

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    I could see her, at most, as an Anti-Hero; if there's been some divergence from the movie and with Power Ring Blue's influence. She would be trying to stop the escalation war his father is provoking, but in no way associated with the Syndicate. After all, in the movie itself she had to be saved by the Justice League from an assassination attempt... and she also had something weird going on with the Martian Manhunter; can't remember if they even addressed her age in the movie.
     
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  23. PDV

    PDV Revelation That Uncertainty Is Itself An Answer

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    Did he match the "empowered by Oggar, eventually rebelled against him for personal reasons" template we'd expect from the mirror?
     
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  24. Stsword

    Stsword Versed in the lewd.

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    DC actually has two Dr Stranges, Adam Strange as far as I know isn't one.

    In the comics he's an archeologist and since he's never been referred to as Dr I would assume he's got his masters instead, in YJ he's a STAR Labs scientist who works on the Erdel teleportation system.

    Hugo Strange, already mentioned, is an evil psychiatrist.

    From the ABC imprint they have Dr Thomas Hugo Strange, a reimagining of a golden age public domain superhero as an alternate version of the Doc Savage esque Tom Strong. He's a scientist who developed a serum of "Gimme the powers of superman!" basically. Odd thing about Dr Thomas Strange and Tom Strong, his doppelganger, is that they exist in the same universe, that universe just has two Earths in it.
     
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  25. Mquz

    Mquz Versed in the lewd.

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    Even better: the rebellion would be forming something like the Justice Syndicate, with the Atlantan Queen being an anti-hero. His rebellion would be in trying to control crime and chaos with the pseudo-Syndicate and thereby lessening the amount that actually happens.
     
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  26. Simonbob

    Simonbob Really? You don't say.

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    Some of the stuff I've seen suggests it's not poverty as such, but poor childhoods and broken homes.

    There are a lot of people with little money, who never commit much crime. There are plenty of people with a lot of money, who do horrible things.
     
  27. Pinklestia

    Pinklestia Well worn.

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    Not really, Young Justice has the same level of tech or better is just not shared around because Mad Docs are idiots.

    Plus, good Luthor is smart and he does know he can't both make the USA great again and win a war with an Alternate Earth.

    And because is historic, I should mention the USA government made deals with the US Mafia during WWII to keep nazis away from the US ports. And there is also operation Paperclip.

    So the USA government making desls woth criminals has happened before in reality if the motivation and or need was strong enough, so why not in fiction?
     
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  28. Simonbob

    Simonbob Really? You don't say.

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    Given the "Close" alliance between the US and Saudi Arabia, and how long that's lasted, the US Gov will work with almost anybody.
     
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  29. Mquz

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    This is getting close to modern politics.
     
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  30. Simonbob

    Simonbob Really? You don't say.

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    ...... Agreed.

    I'll watch it.
     
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