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With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

Discussion in 'Creative Writing' started by Mr Zoat, Jan 27, 2019.

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  1. BlueMangoAdea

    BlueMangoAdea Alive. For now.

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    As repeatedly stated, his soul is too different from a normal human's to use any of the available traditions of magic. Presumably, he can still learn to cast magic in a way that would be exclusive to him, but it is too difficult to invent a spellcasting tradition from scratch.
     
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  2. Otokonoko Culture

    Otokonoko Culture {Unverified Trap} {Verified Cake}

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    Thats especially relevant to me regarding poison!
     
  3. theaceoffire

    theaceoffire Versed in the lewd.

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    Soul issues, I think. Though that may be addressed by his many tattoo additions.
     
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  4. Prognostic Hannya

    Prognostic Hannya Knight of the Yuri Crusade

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    Didn't he use some Avarice magic on Nyx in the Underworld to restore her good looks? He's invented a few tricks in his own "magic tradition", but nothing serious iirc. I don't think it's any more different than Atlantean Magic vs Martian Magic, for example.
     
  5. Darko

    Darko Connoisseur.

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    I think that was more advanced ring use rather than magic.
     
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  6. Darko

    Darko Connoisseur.

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    'shoulder'

    Unless Canis doesn't know how to spell their name then it should be 'Sivanna'

    'choose'

    Nice to see her take Raquel-senseis lessons to heart.
     
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  7. moralrelativity

    moralrelativity Recovering pendant.

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    Ah, that team interaction was enjoyable. It's been so long since we saw them together. I laughed at the klepto lantern comment. That's got to be foreshadowing. Any guesses what OL might acquire?
     
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  8. Tzeentch

    Tzeentch I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    Yeah, finding out that the OSI is apparently WHY so many super scientists haven't "changed the world" with their discoveries was certainly an eye-opener for me when I found out, though in retrospect it probably shouldn't have surprised me.

    Given how much of a stickler Hunter is though, he'd likely refuse the offer point blank, calling it a "F@#$ing Faustian Bargain", and then try to shoot OL for the perceived insult.

    PAUL: ....You know I'm basically bulletproof, right?

    HUNTER: Of course I did, you SMUG limey bastard! I just wanted to see HOW bulletproof you are! And I needed to blow off some f@#$ing steam cause you pissed me off!
     
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  9. BlueMangoAdea

    BlueMangoAdea Alive. For now.

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    I think the two kind of blur at high enough levels, anyways. Either way, if Paragon is going to gain magic, it probably won't be by creating a custom magic tradition with theory, but more like learning to interact with magic using his rings, as he is doing right now. (like that "eat magic" trick)
     
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  10. Darko

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    HUNTER: You're trying to get me to sell my soul and telling me your price is cheap!

    Along with that bit of plant control he can do, as well as that rune thing he set up to drain the Star Conquerors magic.
     
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  11. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    Thank you, corrected.
    And what's the ASL sign for 'Sivana'?
     
  12. Chojin Patriarch

    Chojin Patriarch Veteran Lurker

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    Yeah, it's not like the future Elf-adjacent psychotic raiders will bother to make an appointment for their next trip down-time.

    First question: Will it be a planet Wally can survive on? Conditions close to Earth's own and all that, no exotic atmospheric elements?

    I know they say 'don't look the gift horse in the mouth', but when it's someone like Canis offering, always check the fine print, so to speak.

    Would the locals be able to tell that at first sight? Apokaliptians are basically close to human, with few exceptions..

    No, no, girl, more forceful! You disgrace the Tsundere way!

    Almost, but not quite. Maybe try throwing something at him?

    Her nature... As a former or lapsed National Socialist? Canis is weird sometimes.

    Ah, young... No, not love. I doubt Canis can feel that... Amused respect?

    Quite the development. You should be proud of the changes you've wrought. Even if you don't know you have.

    So she's fine with potentially missing several months of school if the portal shuts on them?

    Yeah, good luck with that. There's nothing more rigid than an overprotective father.

    Also, I don't think the Guardians will approve a mission with the possibility of taking her away from her sector for some time...

    Sensible lad. Wisdom of Zehuti not needed there.

    Understandable. They basically are satanists. and Leonid's choice is probably orders from home.

    Could a Boom Tube actually cross that dimensional gap, especially if they have full sensor readings and coordinates? I suppose it's a good idea.

    Hoping to not have to serve with the hot chick, Garth?

    Hopefully together, what with the risk of a long-term stay. with any luck, the local water doesn't have a bad effect on them.

    Very sensible. If something goes wrong, they'll need him here to assist the league in coordinating a rescue mission, if need be.

    What with up to half the team away, of course the rest will take up the slack.

    A good idea, honestly. Even if it proves harder to use on Earth proper, just the knowledge and study of it can be useful. Who knows, they might even discover Magni's little passenger (which Renegade did, but Paragon has not.)

    Huh, Robin actually using a word right? Kind of. I notice he hasn't been pulling that gag very often.

    Yeah, don't piss off the hosts because someone you trade with decides you short-changed him...

    A literal obligation in this case, eh?

    Maybe when he has a few free years, somewhere down the line, he can create a branch of Orange-light magic he can use...

    Well, the interesting part of the meetings over.

    Ah, the preparations montage begins. Wonder what the final squad composition will be. Bets on who's actually going, folks? And bets on what will go wrong, because we all know something will...
     
  13. Ngamer11

    Ngamer11 Experienced.

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    She doesn't go to school anymore. When Paul met up with her after Vega she said she had everything she wanted to learn downloaded by G-Gnomes.
     
  14. PDV

    PDV Revelation That Uncertainty Is Itself An Answer

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    Three options exist: Fingerspelling if brevity isn't an issue. Sieve-(A+N)-(spin the A+N handshapes around in place to indicate "more of that"); puns, including puns that only properly make sense if you know how the words sound, are common in ASL, especially for proper nouns. Lastly,a name-sign, which traditionally may only be given by a deaf person. I'd ad-hoc the name sign "Sivana" as the right hand signing Crazy with an S handshape, and the left hand doing Scientist.
     
  15. Darko

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    I get the feeling that something like this can show up in a Terry Pratchett book.

    That being elves that schedule raids on their future victims.

    Give her time, she's still learning.

    New Gods seem to care greatly about their natures.

    Like Ngamer11 said, she had Genomorphs download her entire curriculum in her head.

    No they're necromancers, who use such magics on a regular basis with the Grundymen.

    Angels apparently don't like necromancers all that much.

    Renegades MotherBox managed to open a Boom tube from Equestria to Earth, so it's possible that other Boxes can also do it.

    Though renegades Boxes both belonged to brilliant scientists so they may have some more advanced features that an ordinary Box may lack.

    Paragon Magni actually killed that cloud thing when OL went to Venus and seeing as his family has been prepping to fight the Sheeda it is highly likely that they detected something else, like those neck things, and got rid of it.

    We haven't been seeing much of him to be honest.

     
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  16. Mastigos2

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    Actually, come to think of it, he has a FAR more concerning problem: lacking a spellcasting cultural tradition appropriate to his soul structure means he doesn't know what NOT to do. We've already seen multiple examples of people unknowingly invoking magic, with things like alchemy, and Paul's unusual soul structure means that even things that have always been safe for other people might invoke DUCK OF DOOM summoning when he does it.
     
  17. zerofarad

    zerofarad Know what you're doing yet?

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    The subject here disagrees any way I can try it. "Will your contacts share our discoveries with them?" "Will your contacts wish to share our discoveries with them?"

    If I'm understanding the meaning correctly, you might try something like

    "And will your 'contacts' wish to accompany us? Or that we share our discoveries with them?"

    or like

    "And will your 'contacts' wish to accompany us? Or share in our discoveries(--)?"

    I tried to come up with an alternative using "...wish us to...", so as to be able to use the second sentence unaltered. But I couldn't see any way to do it that way without substantial reconstruction.


    Which of course brings me to the other possibility: it could be a perfectly ordinary "mistake" of speech, accurately recorded as it was spoken. Quite plausible given the need to jam those two idioms together and the likelihood of being understood regardless.
     
  18. w34v3r

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    Isn't OL's 'all things strive' move orange light magic?

    I think he's kind of side stepped his way into non-standard magic.
     
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  19. Darko

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    Yeah it's a trick he learned from that plant green lantern.

    He used it to beat Killowog and summon the dryad.

    Currently I think he can just do a few small spells.
     
  20. Stsword

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    Pity that Zoat went the way he did there, I think the way it seems to work in the comics is more interesting in general, and for this story in specific.

    In the comics, Frankenstein was revealed to be a Grundyman because he was made with a drop of Melmoth's ichor, after he replaced his blood with the water of life from a New God artifact, the cauldron of rebirth, to become immortal.

    Which then would mean that is what makes the grundymen- water of life contamination.

    Which means that their necromancers don't raise anyone, they simply take advantage of the undead created by burial in water of life tainted soil.

    So like Pet Cemetary if a necromancer claimed that area as his territory for free minions.

    So grundymen would be an alchemical transformation, yes?

    It would be an alchemical formula that raises the dead which would mean that comparing it to the water of a lazarus pit might lead to breakthroughs.

    It's also a chemical formula that gives superhuman strength, resistance to injury, and a healing factor like the Donner formula, which would be another formula that comparing it to could lead to breakthroughs.

    Just seems like a missed opportunity, is all....
     
  21. Darko

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    He might still do this as we haven't seen all that much of Witch World or Melmoth.

    Or he may go with a different explanation because he either considers it to make more sense than what was presented in the comics.
     
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    I am still confused why Canis sticks with them.

    Gothams newest weird superhero! The Klepto-Maniac who basically runs a private Arkham slash Museum!
     
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  23. Mr Zoat

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    Thank you, corrected.
    Because they're interesting, and because Barda hit him until he stopped trying to leave.
     
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    Dominance displays go a long way with Apakoliptians.
     
  25. Chaoswind

    Chaoswind Lord of nonsense

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    Mr Zoat any reason Robert didn't say a word through the entire briefing... Or maybe he isn't there ATM, like Megan.

    Unless Rob is Robert and not Robin in with case we are still missing a few people like Squire, Megan and power armor young Roy (arsenal).
     
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  26. Darko

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    Cornwall still goes to school and Roy was there and chose to go.
     
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  27. OrigamiPhoenix

    OrigamiPhoenix Getting sticky.

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    What is an "authodoxy?" Can't find a definition for it. From various contexts I'm assuming it means something like "de facto cultural tradition."
     
  28. Darko

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    Maybe 'orthodoxy'
     
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    doxy refers to teaching, autho refers to originator or promoter, so "promoted teaching" here.

    Seems to be fancy way of saying the same thing as orthodoxy in this instance- Alchemy isn't promoted for teaching, so barring the occasional oddball, you won't find alchemists in Atlantis.

    Which is ironic since the Atlanteans were transformed by a serum in Atlantis Chronicles.

    Which since Zoat hat that habit of making things chemical alchemy, would make the Atlantean transformation alchemy.
     
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  30. Darko

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    In this story the Atlanteans transformed themselves through magical grafting to give themselves the ability to breathe and survive underwater.

    So far the only things Zoat has made into alchemy are the Danner and Garrick formulas and the gas Sandman used. At least that's what I remember.

    Even if the Atlanteans used alchemy in their transformation the aquatic environment may have made it difficult to practice and after some time people just lost interest in it.
     
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