With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

[Mr Zoat]

... and what was the fake name the person in the literal DC comicsverse gave, which will almost certainly point to their real identity because things work like that here?

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Noel Mann.

 

[Bolo]

I'll start by saying I don't have the knowledge for a better solution but Anarky needs to be put down. He's stating that he's Not going to stop and Will continue down the path he's walking. Yeah No something needs to be Done because what's happening Now isn't working. So people more knowledgeable than me find a solution cause if not….

 

[CrazyNoVa]

I'll start by saying I don't have the knowledge for a better solution but Anarky needs to be put down. He's stating that he's Not going to stop and Will continue down the path he's walking. Yeah No something needs to be Done because what's happening Now isn't working. So people more knowledgeable than me find a solution cause if not….

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Dude, come on. We're not executing or lobotomizing a 10-year-old. Besides, even with all Anarky has done, he's still not nearly as psychotic or homicidal as his father.

 

[Vaermina]

Yes, and before he said that he still had experience in running a company.

It's also a chocolate company. If it fails it isn't going to destroy the planet.

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No, it was a general distribution company at that point.

Ahh, yes.

The plant queen that does not mind control people, is a benevolent ruler, and was in the process of getting attacked by a fascist empire that enslaved people.

Don't forget the race of metal people that tried to blow up the sun and commit multiple genocides that she was also fighting.

Yes, stopping a bunch of genocides and the resurgence of a fascist empire is a waste of time.

Paul should just stick to getting kittens out of trees.

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It was literally confirmed in story that she uses biological mind control.

And Paul giving her all that stuff was the cause of the radiation people being conquered and forced to activate their MADD contingency.

And no, he didn't stop a genocide, he caused it, as without his constant intervention the whole situation would have sat static.

 

[Signaller]

A few more legacy corrections.

"The difference is: he can go home. I come from a parallel universe. I have no way to go back. I suppose I could.. build a habitat on the moon or something." That could actually be an interesting anyway.

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Remove "an", or expand the sentence.

I hold the card Eris gave me out to her. "Can you tell me what this says? The rings are getting stuck."

She studies it for a moment. "For a good time, call Eris on-." I snatch it back and slide it into a pouch. "It seems that she's quite taken with you.

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Need to find the chapter, but worth adding a line post-anti life when OL is trying to reach Eris and gets a pie in the face, and add a reference to this card and why it doesn't work. I think it included him screaming that "ERIS HAS A FAT ARSE" or something like that?

"True. I'm not completely sure I could beat you." I'm really not. Given his visible frustration when he lost the ability to make me soil myself I'm going to assume that he wasn't faking, but that took everything I could.

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Replace "could" with "had".

 

[Darko]

No, it was a general distribution company at that point

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Which he would still not be able to run since he doesn't have the skills for that job.

It was literally confirmed in story that she uses biological mind control

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It was confirmed that she can do it, not that she does.

Provide an example where she takes over someone's will without their consent, or drop it.

And Paul giving her all that stuff was the cause of the radiation people being conquered and forced to activate their MADD contingency.

And no, he didn't stop a genocide, he caused it, as without his constant intervention the whole situation would have sat static

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Yeah, because the constant warfare was just so great.

 

[Lord Ernest]

And this is just a pretty accurate example of why I hate Anarky as a character. All that holier-than-thou attitude combined with what feels like undeserved intelligence just makes me wish for him to go meet Truck-kun, but without the isekai part.

I do want to give Hunter the benefit of the doubt. It feels like someone took advantage of a stupid decision he made to do all of this. And maybe until now nothing has made him double guess his frankly absurd use of magic? Because if I understood correctly, it sounds like he is not actually making contact with fae creatures "striking small deals", he is just reality warping based on belief and doesn't understand there might be consequences or that it is happening.