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Pink Blossom Quest IIIrd Strike

Omake / Non Canon Post

Shironi said:
So I wrote an omake thing. It runs mostly on Rule of Cool. Enjoy. Replacing almost all of Sakura's pronouns with THAT GIRL was a pain in the ass and I feel it detracts from the omake somewhat, but what can you do, it's written from Sasuke's PoV after all. Hope you get better soon Biigoh!
Sasuke was on the ropes. He had already known that THAT GIRL was a Taijutsu monster from that "friendly spar" when he was back in the academy. Thus he had tried the Ninjutsu route instead. THAT GIRL had somehow blocked most of his ninjutsu and weapon strikes with nothing but her body. THAT GIRL had still yet to demonstrate anything but a passing familiarity with Ninjutsu or Genjutsu, and THAT GIRL still had him on the ropes thanks to THAT GIRL's monstrous Taijustu skill.

Oh he'd done some damage, if the the wounds and burns covering THAT GIRL's body were any indication, but nothing that wouldn't heal with time. THAT GIRL had even blocked the Chidori! A-Rank instant kill justu his ass Kakashi! Still, THAT GIRL yelped in pain when THAT GIRL blocked it and THAT GIRL's aura had gone down noticably and it had been music to his ears.

Still, he was throwing his best and even with the Sharingan it wasn't enough. THAT GIRL was doing something weird with THAT GIRL's Chakra. Where as he was burning prodigious amounts of chakra dodging and parrying THAT GIRL's blows, he'd learned by this point not to out right block them, not to mention the chakra needed to fuel his ninjutsu, THAT GIRL didn't seem to be tiring at all. THAT GIRL's Chakra had maintained a steady level through out the entire fight. Oh, he'd noticed this before but he'd never lasted long enough to really give it any thought. It wasn't, well, human to maintain that level of chakra while expending as much as THAT GIRL did. THAT GIRL just laughed as usual as she swept aside his brutal onslaught.

Right then, taijutsu's a lost cause, ninjutsu and ninja tools not working, Sharingan not enough, THAT GIRL plowed through his traps like they weren't there, stamina running low. Time to break out his hidden Trump Card. He didn't want to use his Trump Card this early but-oh who was he kidding. He was going to enjoy this. Sasuke grinned.

Sasuke dropped a smoke bomb and heard movement as THAT GIRL retreated. He focused his chakra on his eyes and felt them change. Oh yes. He was going to enjoy this, probably far, far more than he should. And he could do it again and again so long as he didn't kill THAT GIRL right away, he could prolong THAT GIRL's suffering much like THAT GIRL did to him so very long ago. Licking his lips he could almost hear THAT GIRL's screams for mercy now. No mercy. Not now, not ever.

The smoke dissapated and revealed his hidden trump card, gained when he thought Naruto had died during the mission to wave. Something he'd hidden even from his Clan. Something he'd researched by himself, under the cover of darkness. Something he'd trained solely for use against THAT GIRL that was standing now before him in shock, staring at his eyes, just like he wanted. The Mangekyou Sharingan with its most fearsome skill, "Tsukuyomi!" he shouted in triumph as the world suddenly inverted in color.

THAT GIRL looked around in fear and not a little bit of wonder as Sasuke gloated, savouring his victory. "In here, I control everything, the sky, the land, the very world itself. Here three days will pass while only a second or so will pass in the real world and I. Control. Everything." THAT GIRL was suddenly chained to a cross, nails driven through THAT GIRL's wrists and ankles, chains wrapping THAT GIRL's body and he, he had a sword in his hands while THAT GIRL still looked shocked.

"Hurts doesn't it? Those nails through your flesh. Well, we're just getting started. I thought about killing you here you know. Three days of torture then a merciful death. But then I remembered that you didn't grant me any mercy. Oh no, I'm going to trap you here, again and again, over and over everytime I can get the chance until you beg me to kill you. And I, I will look down upon you and I shall whisper 'no.' Only once I have taken everything from you like you did to me will I let you finally die. Not with a bang, but with a whimper. Ah, but I'm getting ahead my myself a little. Let's just enjoy the time we have shall we?" Sasuke raised his sword, ready to plunge it into THAT GIRL's stomach. Yes, a nice gut wound to start. Then maybe he should go for the other organs, but not to the point of death, oh no. Hmm perhaps the limbs next? Maybe-

"Oh cool! I didn't know you knew the Heart of Maya as well Sasuke-Kun," Sasuke's mind ground to a halt. What. Why wasn't THAT GIRL scared? No, why wasn't THAT GIRL in pain? No, what the hell was Heart of Maya? No, how by the grace of the Sage of the Six Paths is THAT GIRL not on the cross anymore and is now examining a sword in her hands?! THAT GIRL was still talking, "...only ever saw Big Sis Yuyu use this skill aside from me you know? Does this have something to do with your even freakier eyes? I wonder how Spider managed that? Oh! Can we go somewhere nicer than this to fight in? I know just the place! Hold on a second Sasuke-Kun!"

Dumbfounded, Sasuke could only watch as THAT GIRL chanted some poem about fists and paths and unlimited something or other as the entire world shifted into an endless field of sunflowers beneath a blue sunny sky dotted with fluffly clouds. How. How could THAT GIRL do this? This was the strongest Genjustu to exist and it was linked to the Sharingan, the strongest bloodline! It didn't make sense! What was THAT GIRL? A reincarnation of a Demon or a Kami from The Old World or something? Saskue's mind rebelled at the very possibility of that being true.

Still looking at the vast field of flowers, that was when he felt it. Killing Intent. Lots of it. Oh sure he'd felt some strong Killing Intent before. There was Zabuza, THAT GIRL, Kakashi, some of his elder clan mates and whatever Naruto did at the bridge but this, this eclipsed all he'd felt before by at least an order of magnitude. Death. Unspeakable Death and Pain and Suffering and Misery on and on andonandonandonandon for Eternity Foreverandeverandeverand- His eyes snapped to THAT GIRL. She wasn't laughing anymore.

"You know, Sasuke-Kun, I once swore to myself never to use this particular illusion unless it was for a fight to the death. I had hoped that it's first use would be something to remember, a true fight to the death where two fighters expend their everything just to survive, each pushing the other to greater and greater heights until one can climb no more and is slain. But I see the depths of your hatred and now realize that I cannot just ignore it any longer," THAT GIRL began to go through a series of warm ups. It was then that Saskue realized that THAT GIRL was fully healed, even her clothes were repaired. It was also then that Saskue realized that he himself felt fine as well. THAT GIRL continued to talk while doing her warm ups.

"Men who kill with hatred in their hearts become like dragons, undefeatable on the battlefield. But soon they forget to speak the the language of men and become like demons killing all they come across and ruling like a tyrant. It is man's solem duty to slay dragons where ever they appear," THAT GIRL cracked her knuckles "Time to slay a dragon."

THAT GIRL was finally serious. Sasuke gave himself one final checkover. Somehow THAT GIRL had even restocked his Ninja Tools. Sasuke sighed and looked, really looked at Sakura's face for the first time, "Sorry Big Bro, looks like I might not be seeing you again after all." With that Sasuke charged into the battle for his life.
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Shironi said:
Behold! I have written another thing! From the same people who brought you that last stuff I present to you....more of the same! Took some liberties in the maturity of Sakura here, as well as having a greater emphasis on Kasugano being an actual voice in her head. I blame Yog's essays for this, he wrote a very smart and mature Sakura where as the one depicted in the quest seems to run on Moe. Still, Sakura is very, very smart and can be mature if she needs to be. That 4.0 int isn't there just for show.
[You know, Sasuke's gotten a lot better since you last fought him,] remarked Kasugano [Smarter too, he's not trying to overpower you anymore, he's even learned not to block your attacks head on. That makes him smarter than some of the people I've fought at least. And then there's the fact that he's relying on this 'Ninjutsu' thing...]

Kasugano kept a running account of the fight in her head as Sakura...played...with Sasuke. Kasugano was right, he'd gotten smater and stronger, just not strong enough to beat her. Still, at least he was always fun to 'play' with. He always had something new to show her after all. Ah, nothing could really compare to being in a good solid no holds barred fight, even against such a weak opponent as Sasuke. Fighting was always fun. Holding back and keeping a tight reign on her killing intent was a pain over long periods of time though. Still, it was good training on control if nothing else. Perhaps she should see about getting Lily to train Sasuke? Or maybe take him on a trip to the Forest of Death for a nice relaxing camping trip? Or-Oh, a smoke bomb better retreat for now.

[...And how about that Lightning Thrust he did, 'Chidori' was it? That seems like overkill for just a friendly spar. I won't even talk about all those traps you evaded. Sakura, I think he's actually trying to kill you, and by extention, me.]

'Oh that's ridiculous Kasugano, you don't get stronger by training with people weaker than you. He's made real progress against me, why in a few years I might be able to go full throttle against him! Have a real fight with him! Finally have someone my age that can really connect with me you know? Besides, why would he want to kill me, what have I done to him that deserves that and wait, what's with his eyes?'

"Tsukuyomi!"

[Tsuku-wha?]

All the colors of the world inverted upon Sasuke's triumphant decleration. Sakura's mind spun. Genjutsu? She pulsed her chakra to no effect. Ok, this had officially gone too far to be a spar anymore. She listened to Sasuke explain his technique, control everything? time dilation? That sounded like what Big Sis Yuyu did. The Heart of Maya. How did Sasuke know that technique? Did it have something to do with how his eyes changed from the regular Sharingan to-Pain. Lots of Pain. She was...on a cross with nails through her wrists and ankles. It hurt, a lot more than she thought it would. Sasuke was holding a sword in his hands and looked slightly crazy, in fact he looked a lot like Lily that one time...

[Sakura! It's time to take off the kid gloves! He's seriously going to kill us if you don't! Whatever this is it's gone way to far to be considered a spar or even a no holds barred fight. It's now a fight to the death!]

Yes. Yes it was. Sasuke was going to kill her if she didn't do something and fast. Maybe not today, maybe not tomorrow but he would, and he wouldn't care about any collateral damage he'd cause either. His ranting had slowly risen to a fevered pitch and his sword had been slowly drawn back. She needed to unravel this genjutsu before things got ugly for her. She needed time to concentrate and she couldn't do that impaled by an illusionary sword. The nails in her ankles and wrists were just at the edge of what she could endure. She needed a distraction.

"Oh cool! I didn't know you knew the Heart of Maya as well Sasuke-Kun," Sakura chirped with false enthusiasm bright enough to eclpise the sun. It seemed to surprise Sasuke. Good. More. "At first I thought this was just a regular enhanced genjutsu or something you know? Inverting the colors of the world is kind of obvious but then I heard you explain your technique and I was like 'wow, this seems a lot like the Heart of Maya' so I decided to congratulate you on getting it to this level! I mean I've been working at it for years and I'm only so far you know? Where'd you learn this technique anyway?"

[Keep steady girl. Ignore the feeling of the nails through your ankles and wrists, ignore the creeping feelings of blood loss. It's. Not. Real.]

'I know, I'm almost done. Whatever this is it's not a regular genjutsu, it's too strong. The chakra matrix also isn't the Heart of Maya. It's similar but not the same...Got it, I have assumed direct control!'

Sakura kept talking with enough false cheer to melt a small planetoid made entirely of ice, "This is the first, well technically second, time I've seen anything like this. I only ever saw Big Sis Yuyu use this skill aside from me you know?" Sakura willed herself free of the cross and undid the damage and blood loss from the impaling, "Does this have something to do with your even freakier eyes? I wonder how Spider managed that?" She examined a replica of the sword held in the hand of the still frozen Sasuke. Fine steel, if a bit plain, "Oh! Can we go somewhere nicer than this to fight in? I know just the place! Hold on a second Sasuke-Kun!" With that Sakura started her chant.

[It's time to end this Sakura. What a shame, with his drive he could have been great. Maybe even greater than you given enough time.]

'I know, it's an almost criminal waste of talent. I'd really hoped for a much stronger opponent to see this first. Is this how you felt Kasugano, killing those weaker than you to prevent greater tragedy down the line? Sacrificing one or ten to save a hundred? Walking the Path of the Shura?'

[...You're far too young to be asking these kinds of questions Sakura.]
'Hey, I've got your memories don't I? That makes me older than you are!'

[Heh, you've got a point,] Kasugano chuckled as the scenery suddenly shifts into an endless field of sunflowers underneath a blue sky filled with fluffy white clouds and both her and Sasuke's injuries were healed and stamina replenished. [This really is quite beautful. I know what it means to you, and why you don't use it, but I just don't see beauty captured like this often enough. Well. Time to get your game face on Sakura. Be Brave.]

Sakura released her full Killing Intent, it flooded out of her like water from a broken dam. 'I will. I take no pleasure in this but Sasuke has left me no choice. He has made his intentions quite clear. I'll try and make it quick for him, and pray that everyone is understanding about this.'

"You know, Sasuke-Kun, I once swore to myself never to use this particular illusion unless it was for a fight to the death," Sakura began as she started her warm up routine anew. "I had hoped that it's first use would be something to remember, a true fight to the death where two fighters expend their everything just to survive, each pushing the other to greater and greater heights until one can climb no more and is slain. But I see the depths of your hatred and now realize that I cannot just ignore it any longer."

Finished with her warm ups she looked him straight in his eyes, willing him to listen to her words, "Men who kill with hatred in their hearts become like dragons, undefeatable on the battlefield. But soon they forget to speak the the language of men and become like demons killing all they come across and ruling like a tyrant. It is man's solem duty to slay dragons where ever they appear," she cracked her knuckles "Time to slay a dragon."

Sakura watched as Sasuke gave himself a once over, let out a sigh, and then mumble something beneath his breath too softly for her to hear. Then he charged her. She smirked, good, at least he wasn't going to take the coward's way out.
 
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Sauce is Danbooru - /posts/1055522

[X]Show your parents now.

Surrounded by radiant sunflowers that rustled, you are comforted by the basking and reflection of killing intent from you by the sunflowers.

The sensation of killing intent saturating everything... it gave you tingles and this urge to smile... and just smile.

It felt relaxing in a way.

And you knew that if someone were to harm even the least of the sunflowers here... you would just have to HURT them, so that they would understand how hurt you were by their harming the poor helpless sunflowers.

Never mind that they weren't real.

All that mattered was that they were yours, and those who would trample upon them, trampled upon your dreams.

That just left practicing it so that you can do this properly to show off to your parents.

....

....

....

It took a long time for you to manifest the Heart of Maya. At least, if you wanted to do it properly.

You had to sigh at some of the results you got when you attempted to make it manifest faster than the hour it currently took you to recreate your garden of sunflowers.

It is something you work on, even in Shimura-sensei's leadership class, which is a folly as he did teach the most interesting of classes. He was no Kasumi-sensei... but where you enjoyed that ..... presence of Kasumi-sensei, you loved the thinking that you had to do in his class.

"It is said that out there,
beyond the notion of right and wrong,
there is a field.

In this field,
ninja meet and bare their souls to each other.

In this meeting,
are the purest of friendships forged.
Words are no longer needed."

You blink and focused on the elderly shinobi who had closed the book he had been reading from. "Now, this is a metaphor for what we do. Meeting and baring our souls are just a polite fiction for the battles that we engage in with enemy forces, and yet... it is paradoxically at the same time where we forge our bonds with our allies and peers."

He smiled. "I would like an essay over the weekend about this, and miss Haruno, I would like a word with you after class."
- - -​
After classes, you find your self alone in the class with Shimura-sensei as he finished grading the previous batch of essays.

Placing his brush down, he looked up at where you stood before him with a blink. "No need to be so formal, please sit sit..."

His one handed gesture indicated that you could and should move one of the chairs up by his desk. It wasn't that onerous of a task, and thus you do as invited.

"I haven't had much a chance to talk to you since your selection of the medical class elective as your focus. In a way, I'm glad that you picked the physio-science class, and not the medical-science," He paused as if unsure of how to proced, or at least to proceed with tact. "There are groups, you understand, even within Konoha, who are... extremely patriotic, and feel that Konoha is falling behind certain other villages."

"Groups, individuals, who would do anything... to advance Konoha even if it were to return everyone back to the good old days of the shinobi war," He paused once more, this time in recollection. "I would highly recommend that if you find yourself getting invitations to the medical research departments after graduation or even before, to turn them down. Snakes dwell amongst the roots of the tree that is Konoha. And while their fangs thirst for the flesh of enemies, some times, they get careless and bit that that they shouldn't."

Wait...

What?

Was he implying that there were ultra-patriotic elements within Konoha that might not be entirely loyal to the Hokage or... you would need to think on this.

You nod at Shimura-sensei who was now grading... those looked like a variant of the ninja rules essay that you had to do years ago.
- - -​
That evening, after dinner with your parents...

You coughed and looked at your parents who waited indulgently for you to demonstrate your technique.

Spinning forth your chakra to layer it upon the room wasn't difficult, it was after all necessary to determine the area you were going to affect with your genjutsu.

You had to frown at the tension of having additional people in the technique, you had only practiced it by yourself.

With your attention focused entirely, on maintaining and creating the infinite world of sunflowers, you missed on seeing your parents' eyebrows rise as the world formed around them piece by piece.

You smile at your parents as the three of you stood in the center of the field with its rustling sunflowers, trees and mountains in the distance while above puffy white clouds sailed amidst a blue heavens.

"It's beautiful," Your mother smiled and nodded as she looked around.

Your father's eyes are more critical. "A nice first attempt. And despite their slow formation, the elements of the heart are nicely done. The setting is still a bit unstable, I would not recommend stress testing this in a genjutsu battle against anyone with chakra at this stage."

"The only advice I can give you at this point is practice practice practice. That's the only way, your technique will be usable faster and be more stable," He nodded approvingly.

This... this was when the killing intent flared upon the three of you as your mother lightly stroked the petal of a sunflower. From the bead of sweat on your mother's face, it's clear she wasn't used to this degree of killing intent. At least not by an endless field of sunflowers.

That's when you ended the technique.

"That's an interesting thing you had there," Your father's voice blandly noted. "I hadn't known you had managed to work out how to embed situational triggers, well done."

And so, the days pasted and you studied hard at class, trying to work out what Shimura-sensei had said. And enjoyed the presence of Kasumi-sensei. Played with your classmates, or at least... tutored some of them during breaks...

Life flowed slowly by.

And then one day, a most dreadful thing happened as you were practicing your Heart of Maya in the safety of your room.

You felt someone lightly rubbed your cheeks from behind as if... as if...

There is that faintly familiar and nostalgic sensation of DANGER and DOOM. "Such soft cheeks, you have..."

The technique collapse around as you spin about and hugged with the dreadful speed of a cat-spider or something... "Big Sis Yuyu!"

Right, it's a week before your birthday, wasn't it?

It... it only made sense that your grandparents would visit.


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Pink Blossom Quest - Year 10 Snakes and Flowers

What Do?
[X] Write In.


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So... lag tiem in SB...


Reserved for Tally~ to scope
- SolipsistSerpen
[X] Talk to bit Sis Yuyu
- - [X] Show off Heart of Maya.

- Lifelink
[X] Show Big Sis Yuyu your budding Heart of Maya

- Adyen, 95spartans
[X] Show Big Sis Yuyu your budding Heart of Maya
- - [X] Maybe she could give you some tips! (And maybe you can get a nice hat out of it!)

- Guile
[X] There is totally nothing to be suspicious about Big Sis coming right after you showed dad your Heart of Maya. Celebrate!
[X] Did Grandpa and Merry bell and the delightfully-soft Youmu come too?
[X] Oh man, there's so much stuff I wanna show you guys! Naruko and our favorite teachers and Sasuke-chan and Gai-sensei and-

- Felius, Nightblade
[X] There is totally nothing to be suspicious about Big Sis coming right after you showed dad your Heart of Maya. Celebrate!
[X] Did Grandpa and Merry bell and the delightfully-soft Youmu come too?
[X] Oh man, there's so much stuff I wanna show you guys! Naruko and our favorite teachers and Sasuke-chan and Gai-sensei and- Oh, wait, Big Sis, I want to show you something first:
[X] Show Big Sis Yuyu your budding Heart of Maya
- - [X] Maybe she could give you some tips! (And maybe you can get a nice hat out of it!)

- scope
[X] Find Youmu. Enjoy how soft she is.
 
[X] There is totally nothing to be suspicious about Big Sis coming right after you showed dad your Heart of Maya. Celebrate!
[X] Did Grandpa and Merry bell and the delightfully-soft Youmu come too?
[X] Oh man, there's so much stuff I wanna show you guys! Naruko and our favorite teachers and Sasuke-chan and Gai-sensei and- Oh, wait, Big Sis, I want to show you something first:
[X] Show Big Sis Yuyu your budding Heart of Maya
- - [X] Maybe she could give you some tips! (And maybe you can get a nice hat out of it!)
 
[X] There is totally nothing to be suspicious about Big Sis coming right after you showed dad your Heart of Maya. Celebrate!
[X] Did Grandpa and Merry bell and the delightfully-soft Youmu come too?
[X] Oh man, there's so much stuff I wanna show you guys! Naruko and our favorite teachers and Sasuke-chan and Gai-sensei and- Oh, wait, Big Sis, I want to show you something first:
[X] Show Big Sis Yuyu your budding Heart of Maya
- [X] Maybe she could give you some tips! (And maybe you can get a nice hat out of it!)
 
[X] There is totally nothing to be suspicious about Big Sis coming right after you showed dad your Heart of Maya. Celebrate!
[X] Did Grandpa and Merry bell and the delightfully-soft Youmu come too?
[X] Oh man, there's so much stuff I wanna show you guys! Naruko and our favorite teachers and Sasuke-chan and Gai-sensei and- Oh, wait, Big Sis, I want to show you something first:
[X] Show Big Sis Yuyu your budding Heart of Maya
- [X] Maybe she could give you some tips! (And maybe you can get a nice hat out of it!)
 
[X] There is totally nothing to be suspicious about Big Sis coming right after you showed dad your Heart of Maya. Celebrate!
[X] Did Grandpa and Merry bell and the delightfully-soft Youmu come too?
[X] Oh man, there's so much stuff I wanna show you guys! Naruko and our favorite teachers and Sasuke-chan and Gai-sensei and- Oh, wait, Big Sis, I want to show you something first:
[X] Show Big Sis Yuyu your budding Heart of Maya
- - [X] Maybe she could give you some tips! (And maybe you can get a nice hat out of it!)
 
[X] There is totally nothing to be suspicious about Big Sis coming right after you showed dad your Heart of Maya. Celebrate!
[X] Did Grandpa and Merry bell and the delightfully-soft Youmu come too?
[X] Oh man, there's so much stuff I wanna show you guys! Naruko and our favorite teachers and Sasuke-chan and Gai-sensei and- Oh, wait, Big Sis, I want to show you something first:
[X] Show Big Sis Yuyu your budding Heart of Maya
- - [X] Maybe she could give you some tips! (And maybe you can get a nice hat out of it!)
 
[X] There is totally nothing to be suspicious about Big Sis coming right after you showed dad your Heart of Maya. Celebrate!
[X] Did Grandpa and Merry bell and the delightfully-soft Youmu come too?
[X] Oh man, there's so much stuff I wanna show you guys! Naruko and our favorite teachers and Sasuke-chan and Gai-sensei and- Oh, wait, Big Sis, I want to show you something first:
[X] Show Big Sis Yuyu your budding Heart of Maya
- - [X] Maybe she could give you some tips! (And maybe you can get a nice hat out of it!)
 
[X] There is totally nothing to be suspicious about Big Sis coming right after you showed dad your Heart of Maya. Celebrate!
[X] Did Grandpa and Merry bell and the delightfully-soft Youmu come too?
[X] Oh man, there's so much stuff I wanna show you guys! Naruko and our favorite teachers and Sasuke-chan and Gai-sensei and- Oh, wait, Big Sis, I want to show you something first:
[X] Show Big Sis Yuyu your budding Heart of Maya
- - [X] Maybe she could give you some tips! (And maybe you can get a nice hat out of it!)
 
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Sauce is Danbooru /posts/1346631

[X] Big sis Yuyu!!!!

Your big sis Yuyu proves to not possess the ability to withstand your tackling hug! and she is soon fell by you and your weight. Not that you're heavy or anything... just energetic.

"Big sis Yuyu! It's been so long!" You lie on top of her content with capturing and monopolizing your grandmother. But wait! If she was here, that meant...

You smile at her and resist the urge to retaliate for the pinch to your cheeks with a pinch to her cheeks!

"I've been working on the heart of maya thing..." You proclaim proudly.

She nods in response and pats your head. "I've heard."

"It still takes forever to get it up and running properly," You sigh and enjoy the head pats before letting her back up.

"Well... the best way for you is to practice being accurate and just gain the speed with practice," she smiled and adjusted her dress. "There are other ways to give you speed with shortcuts, but they're not good in that they'll only slow down your growth."

You nod solemnly. It made sense, given your experience with other things, to do it accurately before quickly.

Still...

"I guess I could show you it? If big sis Yuyu wants to see," You smile shyly at your big sis Yuyu, you felt yourself blushing at this. It was rare for you to want to show off. To demonstrate your skills.

Well... it wasn't rare, it's just that you didn't consider it worth it to show off your skills at beating up people, it wasn't a skill... it simply was.

Genjutsu and such things like the Heart of Maya, they were skills that you had to work at. Had to study and practice. There was something to be proud of.

At her nod, you breath in and then out, letting your chakra fill the room before you used it as your canvass.

You "painted" on that canvass that was your soul and spiritual might an eternal sky with its clouds, an endless plain bordered by trees and an endless sea of sunflowers that gazed upon you and your big sis Yuyu.

"Excellent ambiance," Your grandmother nodded as she examined the environment, uncaring of the killing intent that pervaded the very air. "And you could do with improvements on speed. But that comes with experience."

It felt awkward to be graded. Was this how your classmates felt when you pointed out what they did wrong or could do better?

"The reflexive usage of killing intent, creative. I'm guessing it wasn't intentional. But just something that occurred?" You had to nod at her assessment. "All in all, simplistic but lovely attempt."

did... did she just insult your world with a backhanded compliment? You're not sure you like this grading. You pouted before glaring at her now.

"Still, it's definitely on par with what I made on my first attempt. And much better than what your father made," She noted idly. This was a good thing? You're not quite sure.

"Can I?" she looked at you, as if asking for permission. Oh! She wanted to show off something.

You nodded back at her, and watched... as she grasped the air and pulled... you get a sensation of the... world around being seized and things changed....

And you stand in a room. A square room with no obvious source of lighting.

A room that was four and a half tatami mat in size, the tatami was laid out for a tea room. You are standing at the center of the room upon the half mat.

The shouji walls and doors with their shadows implied lamps behind them, and more... it implied space. You look at big sis Yuyu, who smiled back and gestured as if welcoming you to try things out.

You opened one of the doors and found yourself looking at an identical room. Trans-versing that room, you open the door...

And...

Another identical room.

"Infinity in the span of a tea room. A cube within a cube, within a cube, and so on. Nine upon nine such cubes," your grandmother's voice didn't quite purr. "But it is like your sunflower field, infinite in all directions. A trap that is an an endless maze."

You swallowed drily and return to your grandmother. "This is... this is... or was the first thing you made with the Heart?"

She smiled and nodded. "Indeed... unlike your killing field, mine was an endless maze. Your father's... well... I won't say what it is, you'll have to ask him."

"And it doesn't loop back to here?" You had to ask.

She shook her head. "Not unless I want it to."

"Huh..." You paused and thought about it. An endless maze of empty rooms, one after another with lights and shadows that implied movement... you could see how maddening that could be.

"Can I play?" your question came naturally to you.

She gestured and created a bench to sit upon, as a resplendent noble, before smiling indulgently at you. "Go on and have your fun."

With permission given, you rampage across endless rooms, trying techniques that were taught to you by your mother and which the other you had shown you.


- - -
Pink Blossom Quest - Year 10 Maze

What Do?
[X] Ask big sis Yuyu for tips?
[X] Go see big sis Merry Bell?
[X] Go see Grandpa, who was talking with your father about something?
[X] Wait... your cousin was here. Time to play~
[X] Is that... is that Naruto in a really nice dress?!?
[X] Write In...
 
Tally to Spectrum

[X] Ask big sis Yuyu for tips?
-

[X] Go see big sis Merry Bell?
- uju32, earth-destroyer, katreus

[X] Go see Grandpa, who was talking with your father about something?
- HymnOfRagnarok, Candesce

[X] Wait... your cousin was here. Time to play~
- Lifelink, Filraen, Aaron Peori, Guile, Serous, scope, Shura12305

[X] Is that... is that Naruto in a really nice dress?!?
- Scya, undead frog

[X] Write In...
- nightblade (QQ), Jiven (QQ), Khaos, Scya, Spectrum
[X] Is that... is that Naruto in a really nice dress?!?
- - [X] With your cousin?!?

- Adyen
[X] Wait... your cousin was here. Time to play~
- - [X] We should try to drop her in our Heart of Maya sometime just show off to see how she reacts!

- Tetsurou, hunter09
[X] Wait... your cousin was here. Time to play~
- - [X] Is that... is that Naruto in a really nice dress?!?

- Chargone, Verthantine
[X] Wait... your cousin was here. Time to play~
- - [X] Introduce her to your friends.
- - - - [X] Is that... is that Naruto in a really nice dress?!? (in girl form i hope, though the story behind the alternative is likely to be more amusing...)

- cokerpilot
[X] Sakura! Do everything!
 

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[X] Wait... your cousin was here. Time to play~
- - [X] Is that... is that Naruto in a really nice dress?!?


You rampaged across the infinity of Big Sis' maze.

Fists and feet burning with chakra [ki] as you exploded your way down floors and up ceiling. The flickering pink radiance of your Nekketsu Hadouken and the blue flares of Gadouken.

It felt good to just cut loose.

Still, eventually, one's fun must end... and it was Big Sis Yuyu who redirected you back to the room where she reclined on the bench watching you.

"It's time to stop, your cousin is here. I suspect because dinner is ready," her smile as the world around shattered into so many glass fragments had you blinking.

You turn to look at where your cousin stood in the doorway. "But... how? I mean you can't just know she was there... can you?"

"When you can look left and right at the same time, the answer will be obvious to you," She replied with a calm nod. "You bear my blood... two heads are better than one."

Another riddle, you had to frown at this. And thus, you don't resist being guided out of your room by your grandmother. This was a tricky one. [Very tricky,] the inner you nodded in agreement.

Dinner was a boisterous event, with your extended family present and family friends. You're rather surprised to see Fis... no... that wasn't the proper name now, it was Naruto along with a few of her relatives... including that red haired harridan that you suspect was the reincarnation of That Annoying Blonde.

You are also pleased to see Lily and her family, including Sasuke-chan. This along with your classmates and their families made it lively as the adults talked, and the younger classmates and relatives chitchatted.

Admittedly, it did make the dinner a bit of a crowded affair with that many people. Still, that was why your parents had the dinner be more of a buffet and barbeque affair than a dinner at a table.

The meal went by relatively quickly, it was what came after that was a surprise. You're not certain how... but somewhere while complimenting, you end up insulting your cousin's skill or said something that she took offense to.

A challenge was issued....


- - -
Pink Blossom Quest - Year 10 Challenges

What do?
[X] Accept the challenge
- - [X] Full Power! Maximum Destruction!
- - [X] Start out slow and test your cousin's limits and skills!
- - [X] You don't need any SPECIAL techniques, let's keep it chakra [ki] free.
[X] Decline the challenge.
[X] Write In.
 
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>"When you can look left and right at the same time, the answer will be obvious to you," She replied with a calm nod. "You bear my blood... two heads are better than one."

Obviously we need to go to Orochimaru with this. Ukon and Sakon tell us he knows how to beat this riddle.

[X] Yes, Youmu. Show me your moves.
-[X] Full Power (minus scary Hado moves that might destroy her soul), at least to start. Getting chumped because we didn't take things seriously is what happens to serial villains, not cute little Sakura-chan.
 
[X] Accept the challenge
- - [X] Start out slow and test your cousin's limits and skills!

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X] Accept the challenge
- [X] Start out slow and test your cousin's limits and skills!
- - [X] But in no way should we be holding back.


Our last fight with Youmu was immediately followed by fighting Grampa. I wouldn't doubt that she has leveled up since then, probably with crazy training montages and burning ambition.
 
Tally

SB - horus, Larekko12, Adyen, +2 (and variations)
[X] Full Power! Maximum Destruction!

QQ - Selias, Vindictus, Fallenblades643
SB - Serous, hunter09 + 16 (and variations)
[X] Start out slow and test your cousin's limits and skills!

[X] You don't need any SPECIAL techniques, let's keep it chakra [ki] free.

Write Ins

- Guile (QQ),
[X] Yes, Youmu. Show me your moves.
- - [X] Full Power (minus scary Hado moves that might destroy her soul), at least to start. Getting chumped because we didn't take things seriously is what happens to serial villains, not cute little Sakura-chan.

- Jans (QQ),
X] Accept the challenge
- - [X] Start out slow and test your cousin's limits and skills!
- - - - [X] But in no way should we be holding back.

- Tiypo, Arcman
[X] Start out slow and test your cousin's limits and skills!
- - [X] Don't let your testing of her limits allow her to take you by surprise. She's surly been training since you last met, expect her to be very VERY strong.

- ........, 95spartans, Aaron Peori, Nightblade, Mignonette, Chargone, Cytokinesis, SolipsistSerpen, Ephemeral Dreamer, ZiPeppe
[X] Start out slow, test her limits and skills
- - [X] Don't underestimate her; she's been training, just like you have.

- Filraen, earth-destroyer, macdjord
[X] Start out slow, test her limits and skills
- - [X] Don't underestimate her; she's been training, just like you have.
- - - - [X] After the fight ask about what she took offense and apologize, no matter the fight outcome.

- LordsFire
[X] Start out strong, figure she's twice as powerful as last time we fought, and act accordingly.
- - [X] From there, ramp up power until victory is attained, or someone stops the fight.

- katreus,
[X] Fighting requires us to fight our best! To do less is to dishonor our opponent and the fight! FULL SPEED AHEAD! ZENRYOKU ZENKAI!
 
Guile said:
>"When you can look left and right at the same time, the answer will be obvious to you," She replied with a calm nod. "You bear my blood... two heads are better than one."

Obviously we need to go to Orochimaru with this. Ukon and Sakon tell us he knows how to beat this riddle.

[X] Yes, Youmu. Show me your moves.
-[X] Full Power (minus scary Hado moves that might destroy her soul), at least to start. Getting chumped because we didn't take things seriously is what happens to serial villains, not cute little Sakura-chan.
I think it's just a hint to awareness, lateral thinking , and the use of perireal vision.

We were in a Genjutsu. The world is fake and illusion. So she just focused on seeing what she made and reality at the same time.
 
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Larekko12 said:
I think it's just a hint to awareness, lateral thinking , and the use of perireal vision.

We were in a Genjutsu. The world is fake and illusion. So she just focused on seeing what she made and reality at the same time.
That or the answer is Kage Bunshin like it was when Naruto was trying to make the Rasenshuriken.
 
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Or the answer is to Literally be able to look in two directions at once. When the Illusion we craft can become Us as much as we can become It, Then things will become awesome.

Seriously. When we can see through the petals of every single one of our Flowers, when the Garden Truly becomes One with us, Then we will have mastered the Heart of Maya.

Of course, we still need to create a Mugenkan, to go with our Garden of the Sun. Only then, will we have Truly lived up to our spiritual predecessor.
 

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