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With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

Discussion in 'Creative Writing' started by Mr Zoat, Jan 27, 2019.

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  1. Ngamer11

    Ngamer11 Experienced.

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    Atlantis is left alone because Hitler declared that Atlanteans are descended from Aryans. Atlanteans don't have much to do with the surface world because they hate it.
     
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  2. goricnac

    goricnac I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    Paul now has the legitimate capacity to claim that banning all magic is literally a Nazi policy in any argument he gets into about it.
     
  3. Doc Sithicus

    Doc Sithicus Not too sore, are you?

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    Can Paul mention that he met a clone of Hitler that married a black woman and had kids with her? I would like to see how they would react.
     
  4. Darko

    Darko Connoisseur.

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    Yeah I think Zoat just mentioned it in a post, not in a chapter of the story.

    Though it was apparently conquered, but they're mostly left alone due to both believing they are somehow related to them and because controlling an underwater kingdom may be too difficult.

    That would be funny but it may also anger them and alienate them and unfortunately he needs their help right now.

    Maybe after everything is finished he can reveal it to them as a way to unsettle them.
     
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  5. Galler

    Galler Not too sore, are you?

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    I rarely keep up with the chat in the thread anymore but I will have a look and see what i can find.
     
  6. Lazurman

    Lazurman That Others May Fap

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    Speaking as an ex-Mormon, I'd take the missionaries and SJWs over an actual Nazi any fucking day of the week. Mormons are just aggressively cheerful and helpful, and SJWs campaign for gender equality. Nazis are just plain evil.
     
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  7. Radix

    Radix I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    I defonitely doubted Overman's opinion that their "unified" world wasnt all it was cracked up to be. This just confirmed it.

    They are pretty anti-science and anti-magic being carried by Alien tech. Any advantages they are experiencing has little to do imo from subjugating and genociding the earth and entirely to do with Kryptonian tech.
     
  8. Khornelius

    Khornelius Overlord of the Underworld

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    To quote the Emperor of Mankind, “As one of the ten thousand you could possibly be my biggest failure and you are living proof that eugenics does not work.”
    The conversation with the doctor is giving me the urge to turn every last national socialist on Earth 10 into mindless chaos spawns. That way the planets general intelligence quotient would SKYROCKET!

    On a slightly related note, their ‘World Ice Theory’ was by far the strangest and most nonsensical Universal Creation story I’ve ever read. At least for Norse, Aztecs, Egyptian, Celtic, and Cherokee make a fantasy narrative amount of sense.
     
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  9. Darko

    Darko Connoisseur.

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    Karl did say that while there are a lot of problems with how his society thinks and behaves, uniformity may still be a good thing.

    At least if it's applied correctly.
     
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  10. hance1986

    hance1986 A pitiful excuse for a man.

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    Ask any of these next generation Nazis to define the word 'degenerate' and it would be something without falling into old Nazi talking points that run in circles.

    This mix of human copies of Kryptonian tech combined with further marinating in the Nazi ideology...

    The tone of this doctor is of someone who's done this kind of thing before. Done harmful things medically to a prisoner because they were all subhumans of one type or another. Maybe that didn't matter before because Germany was always stronger with their Overman and tech so even if a potentially valuable prisoner died, it probably wouldn't matter.

    National socialist culture is stagnant. And no amount of New Statesmen or anyone else will be able to stop that.
     
  11. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    Those wacky mass murderers.
     
  12. Bud-E

    Bud-E Stand up so I can push you down!

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    Earlier I mentioned it would be interesting to see Paul/JL try to help Overman fix Nazi earth while I'm still interested in that potential scenario I doubt any of them will say it's worth it to actually try to help these people.
     
  13. Darko

    Darko Connoisseur.

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    I think most if them would say that it's worth it, since they'd be changing a society into something better, but they may not do it since it would probably take more time and resources than they have.

    They already have enough trouble trying to protect their world, both from outside threats and inner ones. They may not want more trouble.
     
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  14. Coda

    Coda Versed in the lewd.

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    If you want to keep the comma, then it would be "and she was assuming". Removing the comma lets you reuse the subject from the first part.

    Handwriting analysis IS good evidence. But as is often the case, good evidence can be used in bad ways. It can't be treated as proof in and of itself, only as a measure of statistical likeliness. This is an issue with many kinds of evidence that require expert interpretation. And pseudoscience like trying to read state of mind or even personality traits out of someone's handwriting is bunk.
     
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  15. Radix

    Radix I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    Uniformity is not a good thing. It reduces diversity of viewpoint for one, which stifles progress. Especially given the "official" position is anti-science in numerous ways.

    Their assesment of "other races" as subhuman are objectively false.
     
  16. Darko

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    True, as I said, Karl may not have a problem with uniformity, provided that it isn't uniformity to bad ideas, like the Nazis ideas.

    Diversity of thought is a good thing but it can also lead to people holding viewpoints that are incorrect or downright stupid, and that can also lead to progress being stifled.

    Karl has traveled to multiple universes and has seen societies that lack uniformity, and while he may think that while the defeat of the Nazis was a good thing there, the lack of order or uniformity is less appealing.

    Not saying that he's right, just that this is probably why he likes uniformity as a concept.
     
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  17. Cuchulin

    Cuchulin Versed in the lewd.

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    I can sympathize with Overman on that, some more uniformity in general would be nice. That said if Overman has had a few meals on a more standard DC Earth, he is probably against uniformity when it comes to food culture as I doubt his Earth has Pizza, Hamburgers, American Chinese food, Mexican food and such.
     
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  18. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    Pizza has existed for a thousand years. It's still around on Earth 10, though not exactly popular in Germany. Similarly, the beef burger in a bun is an evolution of a 19th century German food. Mexican food exists, and I'm going to say that German soldiers attacking the southern US brought it back with them.

    Chinese American food is gone.
     
  19. Stsword

    Stsword Versed in the lewd.

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    He literally did that. He tried to make Positive Christianity the official state religion. It was the Christians of Nazi Germany not being willing to change denomination that made Nazis give up on a integrating Christianity.

    Sadly the sect Positive Christianity exists to this day.
     
  20. nick012000

    nick012000 Gone for Good

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    Comparing his opponents to literal Nazis might help convince some people, but others would just call him out on the ad hominem fallacy and point out that not all of the Nazi policies were bad (e.g. their environmental policies), so calling a policy bad because alternate universe Nazis support it is fallacious.
     
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  21. AmericanNumbers

    AmericanNumbers Not too sore, are you?

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    Cool beans that the Nazis pretended Overman's origin was basically The Red Son superman's actual origin.
     
  22. Michael Vonica

    Michael Vonica Know what you're doing yet?

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    I've been thinking about how Nazi Earth can be fixed... and I remembered that we've already seen such a thing happen before. Xalitan Xor did it. Although his world was slightly better. Coutara did it. Paul did it for Vega. Although that was worse. Paul is planning on doing it to the Reach. I don't see why Paul wouldn't arrange for a similar event to go down here. He prefers the slow and careful approach when he can, but that will not work here. The civilization is designed to resist change. The only reasons for why Paul hasn't considered doing it all ready is because, first, he doesn't care all that much about alternative Nazi Earth. And secondly, he does care a little about Angelica and Overman, and doesn't want to step on their toes.
     
  23. hance1986

    hance1986 A pitiful excuse for a man.

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    No it's not. It's only the beginning of the alt-Nazis mixing in Nazi mental illness with real life for them. The Bat told Paul in that same conversation that even though it was later said to the public Overman is an alien, because Hitler threw out the time traveling Aryan story first, some people in their present still believe Overman was a time traveler and Krypton was a future Aryan colony that sent Karl back.

    This mix is everywhere. Paul noticed in the medical bay advanced human versions of Kryptonian technology but there's a eugenics tool to measure head size as a valid metric for subhuman status that has a place. Plus the Reich doctor was legitimately fine with injuring the prisoner with drugs because the prisoner met the subhuman standard.

    Victory and advanced alien derived technology and a Kryptonian as their national icon have not made the Nazis right or given them wisdom. All it's done is made them a cancer that will not go away.
     
  24. Ngamer11

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    Mr Zoat, I was rereading and found an error. That should be spelled as 'Lawrence'.
     
  25. hance1986

    hance1986 A pitiful excuse for a man.

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    shouldn't this be ' wit ' as in intelligence or knack? The Nazi doctor is saying primitive people don't have the wit for technology since alien technology helped Germany win the war and the world. And with The Bat saying there are magic tribal shamans in African reservations, what magic that is native to Earth-10 cannot overwhelm the Nazi technical advantage.
     
  26. Ngamer11

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    This link is dead.
     
  27. Cuchulin

    Cuchulin Versed in the lewd.

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    Yes, but they only achieved their current form and became widespread in post WWII USA. On Overman's Earth Pizza would be very different and much more limited, Hamberger's would be somewhat different and harder to get as well as being served different toppings or no toppings, Also, while most East Asian dishes would be basically impossible to find Curry and other types of Indian food would likely still available in England at least.
    That said given how culturally chauvinistic the Nazi's tended to be I have a hard time imagining German food not being the dominant cuisine because higher ranking Nazi's have insisted on it.
     
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  28. ForeverShogo

    ForeverShogo Not too sore, are you?

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    So, just because it did get mentioned, the Nazis kind of did try to claim Jesus as an Aryan warrior-priest. It was part of the Nazi attempt to establish "Positive Christianity".

    Adherents of positive Christianity argued that traditional Christianity emphasized the passive rather than the active aspects of Christ's life, stressing his miraculous birth, his suffering, his sacrifice on the cross and other-worldly redemption. They wanted to replace this doctrine with a "positive" emphasis on Christ as an active preacher, organizer and fighter who opposed the institutionalized Judaism of his day. At various points in the Nazi regime, attempts were made to replace conventional Christianity with its "positive" alternative.

    Positive Christianity differed from mainstream Christianity in that positive Christianity:
    • Rejected the Jewish-written parts of the Bible (including the entire Old Testament)
    • Claimed "Aryanhood" and non-Jewishness for Christ
    • Promoted the political objective of national unity, to overcome confessional differences, to eliminate Catholicism, and unite Protestantism into a single unitary positive Christian church
    • Also encouraged followers to support the creation of an Aryan Homeland
    The New Testament was also altered; by removing the genealogies of Jesus that showed his Davidic descent, Jewish names and places were removed, quotations from the Old Testament were removed unless they showed Jews in a bad light, references to fulfilled Old Testament prophecies were removed, and Jesus was reworked into a militaristic, heroic figure fighting the Jews using Nazified language.

    There were figured who wanted to take things a lot further. One such figure being Alfred Rosenberg, who wanted Positive Christianity to be a "transitional faith" that would get people used to a Nazi Religion before going full speed towards replacing Christianity altogether. But Hitler was never really willing to go that far, being more in favor of just making a Nazified Christianity.
     
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    Mr Zoat

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    Rainbow Dash flaps lazily, holding herself in the air roughly level with my head as she looks me over.

    "So that's what you really look like, huh?"

    I shrug. "Define 'really'."

    "You know, when the mirror doesn't change you into a pony."

    "It's my current default, yes, but this isn't the first shape that I've had, and it may well not be the last." I shoulder aside-.

    I stop and remind myself who I am.

    I reach out with both arms, grip the trunk of the tree that is standing between me and the Castle, and heave. Despite my strength this is harder than you might think, as my grip strength tends to make trees shatter or strips the bark from the trunk. But with a little help

    There's a burst of flying soil, then the tree and most of its roots pull free from the ground.

    Miss Dash backs off slightly. "Whow."

    I toss the tree away from us, deeper into the woodland. "So the trees in the Everfree Forest actually move?"

    "Ah… I dunno. Sometimes I think they do, but that might just be because they all look the same."

    "Because that wasn't there when I made this path." I look back the way we came. I left most of it as-is because I wanted the restoration of the Castle to be a surprise for Luna, but if the path I made through the forest is going to close up that quickly then I'm bricking the darn place over and getting Sunset to put wards on the path.

    "It's the Everfree. If you don't want weird stuff to happen, you're in the wrong place dude."

    "Your definition of 'weird' and mine are very different." Nodding in satisfaction, I walk the rest of the way up the hill and stop at the gorge acting as the Castle's moat.

    "Yeah." Dash frowns. "I don't get how your whole world has wild weather."

    "Nearly all of your whole world has wild weather. And as Equestria industrialises, your job will get more difficult."

    "It will?" She thinks for a moment. "Right, because of the chimneys. Stuff gets burned and creates heat, and all the smoke in the air messes with the air temperature and humidity. Took me a while to work out where the weird line of wrong temperature air was coming from when the railway reached Ponyville."

    "Not just that. As more ground gets paved, it stops absorbing water. Which causes run off rates to accelerate, causing brief but sudden swelling in the streams and rivers."

    Miss Dash frowns. "Aw, man! Ponies are gunna get even more fussy about the rain schedule! Totally uncool."

    "You could hire diamond dogs to dig storm drains. The land here is vertiginous enough that you could manage it without pumps."

    "That's even worse. Ponyville's all zoned as agricultural land! You got any idea how much paperwork I'll need to fill in if the water table changes?"

    "No. As you said, my world has wild weather. How much is it?"

    "I don't even know!" She throws up her forehooves. "Lots, probably. And whoever's Ponyville's Weather Manager is gunna have to work out how all that extra surface water affects air humidity, and then work their feathers off shifting it all. But that's not gunna happen for a while, right?"

    "Luna and I were talking about shifting the main railway hub from Canterlot to Ponyville. The lines are already heading this way, but we'll need to build another big train yard, and then… Things will probably accelerate."

    "Bottom line it for me. How long 'till things start getting all screwy?"

    "Couple of years for the trains? Then it depends on how fast other things build up."

    "Okay. Guess I'll just have to make sure I'm in the Wonderbolts by then." She flies a little way ahead. "So are you actually going to go down there?"

    "I'm a little.. nervous about it. I'm not used to trees having the capacity for judgement, and the power to follow through."

    She rolls her eyes. "It's fine. Is that why you never went down there when you were rebuilding the Castle?"

    "I didn't do much of the rebuilding personally. And I know to leave powerful magic artefacts alone when I don’t know how they work."

    I follow her down the steps. The genomorphs enlarged the steps into something an alicorn could walk down and added a handrail-. Ah, guard rail, so it's a little safer now than when Pinkie Pie first fell down it. Miss Dash hovers over the path, though I'm not sure if that's just to be sociable or because the air currents make it awkward to fly directly.

    "So how come you're coming here?"

    I tap Mother Box.

    "I believe that Sunset is correct about the nature of Wilson's magic. But what I don't think she's fully appreciated is that magic isn't a passive thing. Existing focuses of magic may well act against someone trying to change things. I need to know where the Tree stands."

    "What if it doesn't like you?"

    "That's why I'm in bipedal shape. If it lashes out, I can duck behind you."

    "Hey!"

    "What? It likes you. Maybe it'll give you rainbow power again. Then you'll be rainbow Rainbow Dash."

    "Nah, that was just for fighting Tirek. All the magic went into building Twilight's castle."

    "Huh. That sucks. You given any thought to becoming an alicorn?"

    She screws up her face. "Kinda? I mean, it's pretty cool, but I wouldn't fit in with the other Wonderbolts. And Twilight's started growing again after she became an alicorn, so I'd have to relearn all my tricks. It could be years before I'd be good enough!"

    "But you'd have years."

    "And thanks to you, I'd have to spend them fighting humidity and zoning laws!"

    I snort with laughter.

    "Yeah, fair enough. You been up to anything interesting lately?"

    She grins. "I got to meet my favorite author, A.K. Yearling! Only it turns out that she's actually Daring Do, the famous adventure archaeologist!"

    I nod. "Nifty."

    "We fought Caballeron, who was working for Ahuizotl, who was trying to use this magic ring to take control of the sun and unleash eight hundred-"

    Wait. Wait. What?

    "-years of sweltering heat!"

    I smile. "Yeah, okay."

    "What?" Miss Dash shakes herself out of her memories, frowning at me. "What do you mean 'yeah, okay'?"

    I sigh. "Miss Dash, I realise that you've only lived in Equestria for your entire life… But in the capital city -Canterlot, it's the one on top of the Canterhorn Mountains- there's this big white pony. Her name is Celestia, and her job is controlling the sun: making it rise in the morning and set in the evening."

    "That-. What?"

    "I know, I know, I didn't believe it when I first heard about it either, but we tested it and it turns out that it's true."

    "Bh-? Well, yeah, but-."

    "I mean, she can literally make it tick around the sky like the hands of a clock. So.. I doubt that some random magic… Ring? Would do anything she couldn't override with a little effort, resulting in an immediate attack by the Equestrian military on anyone stupid enough to try and undo the control she's had for a thousand years."

    I smile at her.

    "But I'm glad you had a good time."

    I step off the bottom of the steps and walk towards the Tree's cave.

    "Hey! Get back here! I'll show you!"
     
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  30. hance1986

    hance1986 A pitiful excuse for a man.

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    God dammit. There's a certain flow that gets interrupted with this My Little Pony stuff. It's just not my scene.
     
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