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With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

Discussion in 'Creative Writing' started by Mr Zoat, Jan 27, 2019.

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  1. Ngamer11

    Ngamer11 Experienced.

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    This may be an expansion of how several governments interact with Paul. Although he isn't a member of the Justice League, they know he has some pull with them, especially since they know Accomplished Perfect Position got in thanks to Paul's recommendation. As such, the gods go to Paul because they know he has an in with the new King of Olympus.
     
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  2. Tzeentch

    Tzeentch I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    Now, considering how much of a opportunistic schemer Odin is, is Tyr being genuine, or is he an agent of the All-Father sent in to provide Asgard intel as to what improvements Hephaestaean is making so that the Aesir/Vanir can do likewise and hopefully avoid Ragnarok?
     
  3. Darko

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    Remember that Paul is also the Agent of the Serpent of Avarice, so he's very far from a normal mortal.

    If it's like the situation in the comics then Odin may potentially be looking for a refuge for his pantheon when Ragnarok happens and Tyr could probably put in a good word.

    Or Odin is looking to acquire weapons from the New Olympus.
     
  4. Bud-E

    Bud-E Stand up so I can push you down!

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    I just realized those Desire goddess must hate Paul now that he put Hephestean in charge. He'll make them actually have work now.
     
  5. Bramble Thorn

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    How about an 'aura' of Depth that literally allows him to create some/all of the conditions of the Depths? Like he could create an omnidirectional crushing aura around things, all the way from 'just underwater' to 'very bottom of the Mariana Trench' or darken the surroundings, as the light seems further and farther away? make people loose contact with the ground beneath them as they start drift as if submerged in water?

    Remember Heph talking about how Jesus's character wasn't as relevant to his religion as you'd think, since he considered his church to be the creation of Paul? They could see OL as the Paul of the Restructured Olympian Mysteries; the one laying the foundations for whatever comes after.

    Going to that person at the very beginning (before policies you may disagree with get entrenched), and lobbying for the ideology and doctrine to be inside the shared space of the Venn Diagram circles of 'things you want' and 'things OL wants' sounds like a really god idea.

    I mean it sounded like just about no one really wanted Zeus as King. But nothing changed. Then someone went and convinced OL that Zeus needed to go and lo and behold, he stopped being King shortly thereafter. (Zeus being the person that did the convincing being rather ironic.) But now you have a demonstrated situation where people know that if you can make a sufficiently strong case to OL, can get him invested in something you care about...
     
  6. Stsword

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    Never established, but it may be a poetic way to say resistance to injury, just as somehow the courage of Achilles grants invulnerability and courage.

    I mean what do you call minor injuries? Shallow wounds.

    So perhaps with the Depth of Neptune, all wounds are shallow.

    Unless it was something that would actually pierce to the bottom of the ocean.

    I may of course be giving it more thought than the writer was.

    Or if one wants to use even more word play, depth can also be a reference to intensity. "Deep knowledge, depth of despair." In which case it could be a general modifier like back in the day Superman could just do anything by using super as a prefix. "Super hypnotism. Super ventriloquy. Super typing. Super underwater basket weaving."
     
  7. Mastigos2

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    I have a (probably terrible) idea for how Heph could hand the Persephone situation. Basically, put the problem to Hades himself ... but not as Hades, husband of Persephone. No, let the Judge of the Dead cast his best judgement. Basically pit Hades' own devotion to evenhanded dour judgment against his emotional attachment.
     
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  8. 0zymandias

    0zymandias Making the rounds.

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    My response to this would be that if the Shinto are so willing to help what were they doing when Oceanus was having his moment? The wave he sent towards North America would have destroyed the statue of Liberty and America as whole.
     
  9. Old Knife

    Old Knife Not too sore, are you?

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    ......... Okay now I'm just wondering how long it will take the church of superman to get their hands on a Theology-magic specialist and convert their object of reverence into a god against his will.
    It's not like he'll stop saving people and him not tapping into that power is just begging Lex to steal it.

    Lex as superman's devil sounds like a terrible recipe. He should get warded to avoid that.
     
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    Lex is a secret supervillain in YJ, so I doubt that enough people know about him to instill any sort of anti-divinity into him.

    Make me wonder who people think of as Superman's archnemesis in YJ. Match seems to be the Bizarro equivalent, Darkseid isn't publicly known, Lex is supposed to be a billionaire philanthropist, Brainiac hasn't visited Earth yet...Metallo maybe? Parasite?
     
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  11. Prince Charon

    Prince Charon Just zis guy, you know?

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    I'm guessing you mean Persephone, and got hit by autocorrupt (or is that an alternate name for her that I missed)? That might be a good way to handle it.
     
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    Mr Zoat

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    "…which is when Odin started laughing." He waves his right forearm dismissively. "I learned a valuable lesson about not taking loyalty for granted that day."

    Hephaestaean nods, his fully repaired mechadendrites working their way through Tyr's truly impressive stack of references. Apparently, his most recent occupation was working in a bar in Reykjavík, which… Well, as he said, it's a people-orientated occupation.

    Hephaestaean is occupying the position at the 'head' of the oval, with Metis on his right and the pile of papers and scrolls on his left. I'm not sure how they've been preserved; velum can last 1500 years but some of those are far older.

    I'm sitting on the mid-right part of the oval, opposite our Shinto guests. Tyr looks happy enough to deliver his speech from the middle of the floor, and it's been a learning experience. I had no idea that he used to be the head of their pantheon. Or that Odin was supposed to release Fenrir, but decided that getting his boss crippled was a better idea.

    "Do you think it will cause you difficulty in interacting with him in the future?"

    "We haven't spoken for twelve hundred years. He is fixated with avoiding his own death at Ragnarok, I decided that a band of backstabbers weren't worth my time. I won't say that I wouldn't kick him in the balls if I had a clear shot, but I won't make revenge the focus of my life."

    "And what about Fenrir?"

    "I don't think he's going to give me my hand back. And I don't think I'd want it; he's probably drooled all over it."

    "Is the feud between you ongoing?"

    "He was my dog, you know? I think he regretted taking my hand the moment he saw how shocked I was." Tyr looks aside for a moment. "No, there's no grudge there. If I saw him again I'd offer him dinner, and I think he'd go after Odin rather than me."

    "And what about Garmr?"

    "He's supposed to kill me at the end of the world. I've never even seen him. If it happens, then it happens. I'm not going to worry about something that may never happen, and that I couldn't stop if it does end up happening."

    "How are your relations with the other Æsir?"

    "Freyja sends me a letter every year, and I send one back in return. Other than that, I don't have much to do with them."

    "Have you spoken to Jon Haraldson?"

    "I appear to him in his dreams sometimes and give him uplifting omens. He is Odin's man, and his wife is Odin's servant, and Odin already hates him. I don't want to make his life harder."

    Hephaestaean nods. "Do you have any relationships with members of my pantheon that I don't know about?"

    "I think Orange Lantern once suggested that I marry Athena, but I think-" Hephaestaean's tentacles stop for a moment, then go back to reading paperwork. "-that he was telling a joke. I have never even met her. Though I hear that she's a good god. I look forward to working with her."

    "Very well. Now, what plans do you have for the domain of war?"

    "I believe that my focus should be the soldiers and their guidance. There are good reasons to go to war, good reasons to kill intelligent beings. Usually, soldiers do not think about them when they go to fight. I would change that. I would help them understand what the good reasons to fight are. I want to teach them how to come to terms with their destructive urges and harness them. I wish to teach them the value of suffering and hardship and resolution."

    "And why have you not done so before now?"

    "I had no support amongst the Æsir. To change a people, you have to change their worldview. The whole pattern of thoughts they use to understand the world. I could not do that on my own. You can find a few hundred examples of my attempts to change men's hearts in my references. But I could not change everyone. Now, in this time, human civilisation is ready to change. And I want to be part of that."

    "With the gods of the Hellenes?"

    "I do not think that you will limit yourselves to the Hellenes."

    "No, but I might start there."

    Tyr nods. "It might be good to start with a smaller group of people. I have not been a god as part of a pantheon for a long time. Being able to travel where I want is nice, but I have reached the point in my life where I ache for the presence of peers. It will be better than working at Ikea, which is what I was going to do before Kratos telephoned me."

    "Do you have plans on how to begin?"

    "Yes. I have a few worshippers who could act as priests, and I will need to speak to the Amazons to see if some of them are willing. I know enough about rune magic that I think I can get their attention. The advantage of modern communications technology is that it is possible to share lessons with a great many people and have them shared accurately. I cannot plan for everything, but that is how I will start."

    "Can you fight?"

    "So long as I don't stick my sword hand in my enemy's mouth before the fight starts. It took me a long time to learn to fight left handed, but I prefer it to strapping a blade to my stump."

    "Have you ever fought an angel?"

    "Very briefly, during the invasion. Will we be fighting the Silver City?"

    "I do not want to, but they may decide that they do not want other religions to be revived."

    "Then we fight. I can defend against their magic, and their fire does little to me."

    Hephaestaean nods. "I will need to follow up on your references, but I like what I have heard. You will have my decision within nine days. Do you have somewhere to stay, or do you require lodgings?"

    "I have a tent on the slopes. Whether I go to Olympus or Sweden, I'd like to spend the rest of my free time in the natural world."

    "Then I thank you for coming here, and give you leave to depart."

    Tyr comes to attention facing Hephaestaean, gives him a formal bow, then turns and strides out of the deliberative chamber.

    He's not even out of the room before Hephaestaean starts taking pieces of metal out of subspace and begins working on them, plasma cuttings stencilling the solid pieces as the structure begins to come together.

    "A new right hand for your new right hand man?"

    "Yes. He sounds perfect, and the references are good. This hand will symbolise our bond, as well as making it easier for him to hold things."

    I nod. "Now that that's settled, I should visit Brazil. Do you want to speak to Euanthe here?"

    "Yes. She has a base of worshippers and a clear role. If she will not come, get permission for us to build temples in her new land."

    "Will do. Any other orders?"

    The fingers of the hand flex as the plasma cuttings begin inscribing the runes that will grant it phyresis.

    "No. Go with my blessing."

    I nod, standing up-. Ah. "Lady Liberty, did you ever consider recruiting Uncle Sam?"

    "Sure did, but Uncle Sam has not been seen in the Heartlands or in the material world for decades."

    I frown. "Yes he has. He's been hanging around Washington for months."

    She looks at me quizzically.

    "Orange Lantern, I've known Uncle Sam for longer than anyone. I don't know who that person in Washington is, but they aren't Uncle Sam."
     
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  13. Prince Charon

    Prince Charon Just zis guy, you know?

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    ... um, well that's interesting. Also worrisome and unexpected. Something to check up on after talking to Euanthe.

    Another distraction from looking for Constantine?
     
  14. Cuchulin

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    If that belle named Liberty says the Uncle Sam in DC isn't the real one than something super sus is up.
     
  15. hance1986

    hance1986 A pitiful excuse for a man.

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    Is this a similar situation to how Lucky Hans was turned into Captain Nazi?
     
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    took my a -> took me a
     
  17. Prince Charon

    Prince Charon Just zis guy, you know?

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    Had not considered that (since I'd forgotten that plot point, and now I'm wondering when it was brought up in the fic, though I do recall that it was), but it seems possible.
     
  18. Dur'id the Druid

    Dur'id the Druid Know what you're doing yet?

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    Abridged Red Tornado: Because magic, you fucking potato!

    I didn't either.

    I first discoveredthat little bit in a video analysis of an American Gods episode where it was pointed out that in some of the older myths, Tyr was head honcho.

    Your hand may no longer be in Fenrir.

    Though it may be...mushy.

    Yeah, a joke.

    "was going to do before"

    At least in small amounts.

    Ahh, nine, such a symbolic number for the Norse.

    "far longer"

    Huh, I remember that in the Z.E.R.O. episode Truggs and Circe talked and then a third person showed up and their face was compared to their of a recruitment poster or something.

    I remember someone suggested Uncle Sam, so it looks like they may have been partially right.
     
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    It was back when the Team was investigating the Hitler Clone in Brazil. Wolf Krieger and Captain Nazi died at the end of that arc and Paul first claimed the Spear of Destiny. Sephitan freaked out because the Spear was too OP. It was also revealed that the Nazis captured the old 18th century national representation of Germany, Lucky Hans, and ritually killed him to create Captain Nazi, the ubermensch the Party needed. There was a line about how until Captain Nazi was killed he still had some kind of spiritual link to the German national character which is why modern Germany was still hung up on Nazi Germany in some ways in this fic.
     
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    I forgot all about that. Is it possible that Truggs recruited an evil Uncle Sam from an alternate universe?
     
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    Thank you, corrected.
    No, that's correct.
     
  23. goricnac

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    Am calling it now, the Uncle Sam in Washington is John Constantine in disguise trying to learn about Order and Chaos and how to harmonize them from the complete mess that is Washington DC.
     
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    Boy that was fast...
    But even I'm impressed with the sheer amount of retconning Mr Zoat had to do with Tyr here...

    Like, that is 100% Mr Zoat made up shit that has no foundation in either the real life Mythos or the DC mythos.

    And he did it all because for some dumb reason he wants to make the Olympians the Author Insert power houses of the setting.
     
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    I was wondering how Hephaestian and Euanthe would interact.
    What with him being technology, and many of her worshippers being ecological primitivists/luddites.

    There's probably a way to compromise there.
    Between the Sheeda's destruction, and the mix of the tribes and Euanthe being radically pro-rainforest, but Danner probably trying to moderate things where it would cause unnecessary suffering, there are probably a bunch of people who refused to move out in the wake of the attacks and rainforest expansion, but who also recognize that they're outmatched in power and dependent on the tribal Danner enhanciles and Euanthe's magic for defense.
    If Danner was given the opportunity to recruit for Hephastean's cult, it could provide an outlet for those people to seek power without disrupting the country, probably stabilizing it actually by giving him more powerful groups committed to the idea of a central government and varying in culture compared to those already existing, except for a common agreement on loyalty to his office.
    There's also the advantage that Hephastean is committed to working through a whole pantheon. If his own cult doesn't flourish in Brazil that's no reason why his pantheon can't still do so.
     
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    Is the Heartlands a place from the comics? I presume it's like the American metaphysical equivalent of Olympus or something.

    Have people already discussed in the thread about the interpretatio romanus that went in Roman imperial history on where Tyr was equated with Mars (and thus possibly Ares too)? It's poetic that he's the candidate in that sense- Tuesday (Tyr's Day) is directly analogous to Mars's Day in Latin and Romance languages.

    If Odin took over from Tyr after backstabbing him, is the creation account we have of Norse mythology about Odin killing Ymir and fashioning the first humans with the help of his later-forgotten brothers accurate? Tyr in mythology is also the son of a Jotun I believe (even if that's more of a cultural difference than a 'species/race' difference between them and the Aesir), so it might have been worth asking what connections he has to them. Jotun are often quite primordial compared to the Aesir so I'm unsure if there are any connections between them and the Titans. I assume getting benevolent Jotun on board would be too much of a provocation to Odin though, so best to avoid that until New Olympus is better established.
     
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    They very well might go for some form of Techno Primitivism, that is a "primitive" life style enabled by advanced technology. To put it simply, the tech is there but it's not obvious or intrusive enough for the average person to notice it in every day life, or maybe doesn't even know about it.

    The Joutun are thought to represent the primal forces of nature, especially winter. So they probably are much like the Greek Titans.
     
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    And probably not short of conflict, if only him smacking surly drunks and hauling them outside. Which would be extra embarrassing, to get manhandled by a one-handed man. Good to see he's been keeping his eye in... Unlike Odin. :p

    The joy of getting most of our modern information from sources garbled by those writing them down trying to couch them in terms friendly to their own religion.

    I have to wonder how the rest of the Norse Gods feel about the scheming. Surely some of them have accepted their Doom, and plan to have one last good fight before they go.

    <snerk> A war god with a sense of humour. That promises to make for an amusing time later.

    Yeah, Fenrir did get done dirty, thanks to old one-eye.

    Garmr, for reference. At least if Tyr's working with the Olympians, he'll have backup for the fight.

    To be fair, Freyja (Not Frigga, wife of Odin) is one of the better gods. And a good example of deities playing musical pantheon, being born of the Vanir rather than the Æsir, having relocated as part of a peace treaty or similar.

    Yeah, not hard to make things worse for him.

    At least he won't push where he's not wanted. Unless it turns into love at first sight for both of them. Narrative Causality and all that.

    Turning the mad bloodlust that Ares promoted into manly determination and hot-blooded courage. Sounds good.

    True enough. Battles are tending to be fought by smaller groups on behalf of larger organisations, and as the technology improves, the soldiers need to improve with it.

    True, he has his eyes on growth markets...

    I still find it amusing that they know each other. I guess Tyr visited the gym while he was wandering, or some such.

    Spreading his word through Youtube! ...Or whatever the DC Universe equivalent is.

    Don't be surprised if that changes, old fellow. There are perks to joining Hephaestaean's renewed pantheon.

    ...Try not to sound too eager now, though.

    Quite a step up from Ares, then?

    Well, looks like he's hired. I expect the delay is to allow other prospects to emerge.

    At least he seems to be respectful of his soon-to-be-fellows.

    Not wasting any time, I see. I suspect Phaeste would have made him the hand even if he didn't get the job, though. Like OL, such imperfections seem to offend him.

    Since she technically is still under the auspices of the Olympians, being a Dryad.

    ...Requests, OL. You don't formally work for him, after all. Except as a worshipper. Though to be fair, when a member of your pantheon says jump, it's probably a good idea to nod and maybe ask 'how high?'

    I assume that means it'll feel and move like living flesh, rather than simple metal.

    ...Wait, what?

    ...Well, that's not good. Might want to look into that after finishing with Euanthe.

    Oh, this is going to turn out to be the plotline of U.S., isn't it? Where the real Sam is wandering the country as a 'homeless crazy man' while a cockier, more Jingoistic incarnation has been pushing the country into conflict after conflict? In which case, hell yeah. But first, that little chat with the radiant plant-girl of Brazil, and perhaps Hugo Danner will show up...


    ...but I have reached the point in my life...
     
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    I mean, in-story Orange Lantern did visit an alien civilization which produced their technology by growing it as plants.

    I've been wondering when Euanthe was going to get that powerup for a while now.
     
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    Senevri Not too sore, are you?

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    Isn't she a Vanir tho? Tyr would care about the difference.
     
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