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With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

Discussion in 'Creative Writing' started by Mr Zoat, Jan 27, 2019.

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  1. Onion

    Onion Making the rounds.

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    Well... humm... I... So, if she pukes into the box, is that insult to injury? Just curious.
     
  2. Ciber

    Ciber Know what you're doing yet?

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    I do miss how on SV we could rate things a funny.
    Also, it must disturb my neighbors terribly how I break out into laughter at 2 am every night.
     
  3. RichardWhereat

    RichardWhereat Aia airëa Fëanáro.

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    Clearly you're a mad scientist, just working on some mad scientist things.
     
  4. Darko

    Darko Connoisseur.

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    Ah just like Raul, how romantic.

    Now they just need to brand their hoof prints into her head
     
  5. desolatedsabers

    desolatedsabers Know what you're doing yet?

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    Well that went from 30 to 100 really quick. I'd say zero, but the amount of murderous intent in that room was already at a high number because of thunder girl.
     
  6. Chojin Patriarch

    Chojin Patriarch Veteran Lurker

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    Oh, boy. I foresee some bucking back and forth as they sort out temperaments. Still, They could come out of this best friends...

    <Facehoof> Dammit, filly. Do you have no filter between brain and mouth?

    Oooh, tingly. Good response, too.

    "That's my secret, Cap. I'm always angry..." I guess that explains her mane styling, then.

    Ooof, looks like she needs a little practice handling thunderheads.

    "Dangit, I just got my mane settled down!"

    At least he's sensible enough not to get in-between them.

    Ah, Fan-games...

    How homey. And how telling that Luna's busy at work, while Celestia relaxes...

    Well, time for Celestia to see just how bad her guards are at being anything other than eye-candy and living armour stands.

    Yes, because they're worst at it. Better to cover your weaknesses and let your talent handle your strengths.

    Expert words. I doubt Celestia is enjoying hearing them, given the implications that they want her 'little ponies' to be able to fight.

    Honestly, that's not a good measure. They don't know how to enhance themselves. Yet.

    Besides, don't they have some measure of magical healing? Ponies with talents leaning that way, if nothing else?

    Heh, already doing the wordless conversations.

    It'll just be a matter of how many quit, then... Some almost certainly didn't sign up for actual work.

    Yowch. I read that in her wiki entry, but seeing it? Scary. And her friends' reactions? gah.

    She sounds impressed...

    And Luna's now a lot more concerned for her, I suspect. That kind of experience would leave scars running deep. And not just on the body.

    I see she's making this personal. She's a Good Princess.

    Looking for vengeance, eh? I think Luna will happily assist, but...

    A good soldier. She knows the Ursa will get dealt with, even if it's not her doing it... And she's able to be happy with that.

    "A matter of honour..."

    I should hope so. It's been a few hours, after all.

    Oh, boy. Now that's escalation on Taylor Hebert scales...

    Well... that derails a lot of future issues. And what will Celestia have to say about it, I wonder? God only knows what's happening amongst the changelings now...

    Corrections:
    ...but their training and equipment...
    ...discover that no one...
    Tempest grins cruelly.
    ...and not wait until Our soldiers...
     
  7. Redhawk

    Redhawk Getting out there.

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    Isn’t a severed head really more of a fifth date kind of gift?
     
  8. Old Knife

    Old Knife Not too sore, are you?

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    Me thinks you should have brought back a shackled foe instead of proof of bounty.

    Ponies aren't Jade.
     
  9. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    Thank you, corrected.
    Counterpoint: Discord, Sombra, Tirek.
     
  10. Vanathor

    Vanathor 『Back In Black』

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    Mr Zoat are you sure this is Graven and not the red lantern SI? I thought "bringing the severed head of your enemies' is more his bag.
     
  11. thebishop8

    thebishop8 Umm, ackchyually...

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    Grayven has done this at least once before; he cut off Klarion's head and showed it to a police officer.
     
  12. Sockmonkey

    Sockmonkey I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    Are those minis custom, or do they actually make them?
     
  13. RichardWhereat

    RichardWhereat Aia airëa Fëanáro.

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    Hey, what were the types of portals that OL showed off in London?
     
  14. Bigking321

    Bigking321 Not too sore, are you?

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    Man, it's amazing how the last line of a update can cause such intense mood whiplash.
     
  15. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    Do you mean the Dolmen Gates?
    No, come on. He does flensed skulls, not whole heads.

    Also, the auto dictionary doesn't know 'flensed'.
     
  16. Rebu

    Rebu hey, little Anna, you're the one

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    I have...um, two out of three, is that okay?
     
  17. transhumansage

    transhumansage Versed in the lewd.

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    okay i admit i like this update. especially with presenting the severed head of your girls enemy. but i was really digging the 40k chapters.
     
  18. TheEyes

    TheEyes Well worn.

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    Eh; Luna's already been inside him; Grayven is perfectly justified in thinking she likes to move fast.
     
  19. moralrelativity

    moralrelativity Recovering pendant.

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    Me too!!
     
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  20. Sockmonkey

    Sockmonkey I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    Changelings have an exoskeleton, so for them that's the same thing.
     
  21. RichardWhereat

    RichardWhereat Aia airëa Fëanáro.

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    Thank you, that's what I was after.
    Yeah, it didn't know Cunt at first either. You've got to train it.
     
  22. Chaoswind

    Chaoswind Lord of nonsense

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    This is a bad look UNLESS he beheaded her when she attempted to kidnap and replace Cadance... Because otherwise he just killed the leader of a semi hostile kingdom for no other reason than to demonstrate he could.

    Also poor changelings without a leader... I hope Grayven took some measures to leave someone competent in charge.
     
  23. Agent Orange

    Agent Orange Experienced.

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    That incident (kidnap and replace, Changeling infiltration/invasion) already happened. It was name-dropped in that chapter where he mocked the Palace Guard's ... performance.
     
  24. Chaoswind

    Chaoswind Lord of nonsense

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    Huh then shouldn't queen what's her face be a stone statue or some other shit by now? I was under the impression that after that incident she got nuked and the changelings were left with someone else in charge?
     
  25. Gantradies

    Gantradies Not too sore, are you?

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    Don’t forget that it was formerly ruled by a literal Corporalised Daemon- and it’s religious texts were written by a chaos-worshiper...

    what? It’s bloody obvious that regardless of its origins,Artificial and focused on soemthing other than a single emotion up to 11 or not, the entity that we know as Revelation/the EOMK WAS a daemon-possessed a vulnerable psyker (at birth), showed significant ability to warp/shape change its stolen body like some depictions I’ve seen of a Daemonhost-and given that, with claimed aims of a secular state, it recruited a fucking cult to run its mechanical/electronic infrastructure on the honour system- it’s works were questionable at best from the start, given itd seen countless other tyrants fail at empire building on far smaller scales....

    and even those concerns aside, given the endless litany of self-compounding stupidity that comprises the mil41 imperium, the only thing dumber the SI could have done then trying to seek out the bloody knife-eared murderfuckers (seriously Eldar-the poor galactic core was incapable of consent!)would be to stay in the imperium-
    the fact that he knows how a fucking toaster actually works along paints a massive bullseye On his head, let alone his injection point- throw in the thousands of existential threats brewing even in the currently-peaceful agri worlds....
     
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  26. ForeverShogo

    ForeverShogo Not too sore, are you?

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    No. In the show Chrysalis just returns one day with the Changelings successfully kidnapping the Princesses and the Mane 6. Then some convoluted bullshit happens with some side characters that turns most of the Changelings into the utterly disgusting skittlebugs.

    It took a long, long time for her to get stop being the leader of the Changelings.

    The comics have some fun ideas on what happened in the immediate aftermath of her first appearance, though.

    [​IMG]

    Good job, Shining and Cadance. You inadvertently contributed to the Luvcat extermination.

    There's also a fun moment where she kidnapped the Cutie Mark Crusaders and they were annoying her, so to shut them up she exploded one of those cats right in front of them.

    [​IMG]

    Damn shame that Grayven just went and killed her. Also kind of curious how that confrontation actually went given her bullshit magic nullifying throne.
     
  27. Agent Orange

    Agent Orange Experienced.

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    I can't recall the exact details but she wasn't turned into anything. She was blasted over the horizon. And landed in the middle of some catpeople settlement I think. They nursed her back to health and as a show of gratitude she conquered them. Or smt like that.
     
  28. theaceoffire

    theaceoffire Versed in the lewd.

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    "Aww, and I didn't get you anything in return!"
     
  29. Agent Orange

    Agent Orange Experienced.

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    Oh yeah, real shame. /s
    His success probably had something to do with the fact that he doesn't use magic attacks all that much. There was nothing to nullify. Also I think he mentioned sending out a bunch of drones to map 'Ponyland'. So he probably just snicker-snacked her once the drones located her.
     
  30. WereDragon

    WereDragon Bookwyrm

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    So what we learn here is that Tempest is an idiot. She ran off to the back end of nowhere to be broody and angsty rather than actually seeking help from the people most likely to know how to help.

    Interesting that Dust and Buck defer to her. Guess she does have an aura of command that they lack.

    Hope he didn’t use the sword of reincarnation for the decapitation. Even de-powered she would make trouble.
     
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