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Your Everything Disgusts Me (DC/SI)

Discussion in 'Creative Writing' started by TotalAbsolutism, Jan 6, 2016.

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  1. RichardWhereat

    RichardWhereat Aia airëa Fëanáro.

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    It's why you kill him in Gotham and ask for a jury trial.
     
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  2. TotalAbsolutism

    TotalAbsolutism Magnificent Bastard Moderator

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    Somewhat missing nuance in that description, I feel.

    Good to know that I'm bad at characterising myself, though.
     
  3. BC1

    BC1 Know what you're doing yet?

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    If I'm remembering right someone already did that and the people of Gotham rioted in protest of the Joker's death.
     
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  4. RichardWhereat

    RichardWhereat Aia airëa Fëanáro.

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    I would be interested to read that one, but I'm reasonably certain that they didn't, it's that paid thugs were killing people in his name.
     
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  5. Guile

    Guile Clothes That Kill Virgins

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    ... Gothamites too stupid to live, noted.
     
  6. january1may

    january1may Versed in the lewd.

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    I don't really expect this to update again, but watched just in case anyway.
     
  7. Galeiam

    Galeiam Optimistically Asexual.

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    ....

    Damnit I started reading this story cause it was on the first page of CW, instead it looks dead.

    I'd make a joke about my utter disdain for such a thing, but It'd probably be wasted.
     
  8. .IronSun.

    .IronSun. Verified Legitimate Business Man

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    Yes, let the puce flow through you.
     
  9. Zeushobbit

    Zeushobbit I use my mind and yours doesn't matter.

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    Holy shit. I thought the black power ring SI I read was messed up. This is actually worse.

    Kudos for realistically portraying some serious self-loathing over-correction here.

    I both want more of this story and don't want you to be in a headspace that makes writing this easier.
     
  10. RichardWhereat

    RichardWhereat Aia airëa Fëanáro.

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    Was that black power ring story by aCameron ? Because his is awesome.
     
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  11. vyor

    vyor Oh that's cute

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    This post restored my faith in humanity a bit.
     
  12. TotalAbsolutism

    TotalAbsolutism Magnificent Bastard Moderator

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    I have half an update that, hilariously, I am not in the least bit happy with. Mostly because I forgot about Kaldur. Gotta rewrite it from scratch. But I work on it; usually when work's been a bitch and a half.
     
  13. Stormbringer117

    Stormbringer117 Soulless

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    Take your time dude. Nothing can spoil a good time more than rushing it.
     
  14. lunasmeow

    lunasmeow Verified Dragon Deity, Roller of Ever-Winning Dice

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    Uhhh what about Kingdom Come? The series where someone killed criminals instead and the heroes all ended up splitting over it because the public loved that the criminal was dead and the idiot heroes still argued that killing was a step too far?
     
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  15. Galeiam

    Galeiam Optimistically Asexual.

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    Wouldn't it be better to continue writing from the point where you realized that you had forgotten about Kaldur.
    It would be in character for you to finish the Chapter out of hate for it's conception.

    Or would it be more in character to completely Erase and scrap everything when something goes wrong.
    o_O
     
  16. vyor

    vyor Oh that's cute

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    No, as in, in universe he didn't exist in the chapter.
     
  17. Galeiam

    Galeiam Optimistically Asexual.

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    I got what you meant.

    I was sorta making a joke that you should continue writing the chapter from that point where Kaldur Existed but was completely and utterly ignored by the SI who disliked him for some small thing he noticed.

    And at some point in the chapter Kaldur fixed the issue and SI started noticing him.

    Edit:

    Damnit it died.
     
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  18. TotalAbsolutism

    TotalAbsolutism Magnificent Bastard Moderator

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    Shit, that's actually pretty clever.
     
  19. LightninMan1

    LightninMan1 Getting sticky.

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    • Rule 7 - Don't Necro
    More? I enjoyed it quite a lot.
     
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  20. ShadowFireZelda

    ShadowFireZelda Know what you're doing yet?

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    I see that your account is new~ish so I am gonna assume you haven't read the rules yet, but there is a rule against replying to a thread after it has been inactive this long. It is called necroing and is something that if done repeatedly can get you banned. Mods should just give you a warning this time, but don't do it again.
     
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  21. TotalAbsolutism

    TotalAbsolutism Magnificent Bastard Moderator

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    Boy howdy, reviving an almost three year old thread, belonging to a mod no less, was not your ace game here, bud. Go read our rules closely, particularly #7, and don't do it again.

    Thread is locked until OP, me, requests it be unlocked again.

    As for you; posting after a necro just makes it worse. Report the post and move on, don't try to do our job for us or it'll probably end up burning you in the long run.
     
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