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Your Everything Disgusts Me (DC/SI)

Discussion in 'Creative Writing' started by TotalAbsolutism, Jan 6, 2016.

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  1. TotalAbsolutism

    TotalAbsolutism Magnificent Bastard Moderator

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    Correct. It has a way of corrupting your thinking. You tend to not pay much mind to things you don't respect, or care much about the people you don't respect.
    I am happy to accept suggestions for any of the symbols. Especially Puce.
     
  2. Stormbringer117

    Stormbringer117 Soulless

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    I spend like 10 mins on this.
    I'm a business Student, so someone should be able to top this.

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  3. TheOtherSandman

    TheOtherSandman Well worn.

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    Is it just me, or does that look... naughty.
     
  4. Lazurman

    Lazurman That Others May Fap

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    Target this weak-point for massive damage!
     
  5. TotalAbsolutism

    TotalAbsolutism Magnificent Bastard Moderator

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    I'm getting a sort of upraised-middle-finger vibe myself.
     
  6. Stormbringer117

    Stormbringer117 Soulless

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    It's what I was going for.
    The Finger is pretty much the most identifiable contemptuous symbol i could think of.
    I took vibes from Rage and Fear, to lantern-ize it
     
  7. TheOtherSandman

    TheOtherSandman Well worn.

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    If you can see that, awesome. I'm trying everything, head-tilt, squinting, head-tilt and squinting, looking at it quickly, etc. And I can't see anything except a person's lower half. With a target on their groin.

    Which, I suppose, is fitting given that this particular Corps is based on being kind of a dick.

    I just can't see how you get a middle-finger from it.
     
  8. Stormbringer117

    Stormbringer117 Soulless

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    That's art in a nut shell.
     
  9. TheOtherSandman

    TheOtherSandman Well worn.

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    I mean, if you wanted it to be clear, you could just rip-off the Black Lantern's' design and just make a small alteration.
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  10. Malcanthet

    Malcanthet Shy Adorable Arachne

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    One issue: Wrong colour ::::p
     
  11. Stormbringer117

    Stormbringer117 Soulless

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    Oh yeah, I can see that!
     
  12. Higure

    Higure Witch of Faith

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    2nd Issue: Every Lantern Symbol besides White and Black includes a circle, rather than the large triangle.
     
  13. TotalAbsolutism

    TotalAbsolutism Magnificent Bastard Moderator

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    If it had four stripes going down and one going up that would probably de-lewdify it and get the message across quite well.
     
  14. Stormbringer117

    Stormbringer117 Soulless

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    Like this?

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  15. TotalAbsolutism

    TotalAbsolutism Magnificent Bastard Moderator

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    Not quite. Each of the two parallel lines that make a single bands are what I mean by a stripe? So the top as it was, but the bottom with twice the number of... Legs, I guess?

    If my explanation is too unclear I will do a low-effort demonstration when I get home. And probably work on another chapter come to think of it.
     
  16. Stormbringer117

    Stormbringer117 Soulless

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    Attempt 3?

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  17. Trougue100

    Trougue100 Your first time is always over so quickly, isn't it?

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    • Do not necro. This is against Rule 7.
    So much edginess...so much edge.
     
  18. theqwopingone

    theqwopingone Journeyman rationalist wannabe. Gone for Good

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  19. TotalAbsolutism

    TotalAbsolutism Magnificent Bastard Moderator

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    Thank you for your pointless and empty contribution to a story based on self-loathing.
     
  20. bard56

    bard56 Accedental Necromancer

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    i will have much Contempt for you if this story ends abruptly. so Get my Hopes up. Show me your Will. Chase Glory. and write on.
     
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  21. philonten

    philonten In desperate times and dim light...

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    Behold the power of MS paint! This logo design actually took a surprisingly long time to produce, but I have done so for absolutely no discernible reason. Because I felt like it.

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  22. TotalAbsolutism

    TotalAbsolutism Magnificent Bastard Moderator

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    That is much closer to what I pictured in my head.
     
  23. Hye

    Hye Reader of The Long Words

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    Now you just need to fill it up with various shades of... Puce, I think it was? That would be awesome. I would offer to do so, but I have zero artistic tendencies.
     
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  24. vyor

    vyor Oh that's cute

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    Let's not and say we did.

    No one should need to interact with that much puce.
     
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  25. Lockingbane

    Lockingbane Just call me Jumbo Jumba

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    It is a disgusting color.
     
  26. theqwopingone

    theqwopingone Journeyman rationalist wannabe. Gone for Good

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    Then try to fuck up doing it in the most obnoxious way possible; it is the only way it could ever have been fitting.
     
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  27. Zentari2238

    Zentari2238 Versed in the lewd.

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    ...just found this fic. Guy finds a power ring, goes on a rampage on Joker and then... folds like a deck of cards in the breeze while surrendering every advantage he has, because of reasons.

    Stellar characterization there, not railroaded at all.
     
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  28. LaughingProphet

    LaughingProphet Empty Vessel

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    Given this is an SI fic that involves some measure of prior knowledge about the other forces that tend to be at work, yes. Reasons.
     
  29. vyor

    vyor Oh that's cute

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    Ok... I mean, if you think a power ring user can fight and win against the entire justice league more power to you I guess.
     
  30. Lazurman

    Lazurman That Others May Fap

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    I mean, it's not like there's not a precedent. Say you have someone you really, really, really hate, and the power to do something about him. And you kill him. But, as satisfying as it was, what you did was still illegal. There are much bigger fish about to come down on your head, fish that you don't actually want to fight. So you surrender. Your good deed is done, and people who would have died in the future won't. Best cooperate with the heroes because you know you won't win in a fight, and, not to mention, you didn't want to fight them anyway.
     
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